Posted: 17 June 2010 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princessyogitha
Awesome lovely fabulous superb Thanks yogi !!!
Finally Rahul ko sab kuch pata chalgaya... thanks to dear shalini...when he was accusing naina"tumne mujhe dhokha diya"...maine bhi wahi socha jo naina ne kaha...usne naina ko bolne ka mauka hi kab diya...naina ne kitni baar batane ki koshish ki lekin wo to kuch sunne ko tayyar hi nahin tha...good usse ye baat pata hain apne bachpan ki bimari ke bare main....and phir usne naina ko ye bhi kaha to go n stop raj...good he said that. U R satisfied na??? Chalo fir good hai ji!!
Alekh ne Raj ki kya class li...raj ko naina ki engagement ke piche jo raaz hain wo bhi pata chala n raj is feeling sad for hurting naina...wahape raj is feeling bad n huda is enjoying seeing his expressions .akhir main alekh ne raj ko warning bhi dedi...loved to see alekhs concern for his behan naina
Misson Manaofy Naina started..alekh n huda ne kya kya ideas di...huda is saying gaana gaayiye for naina..but alekh to kehraha tha..sab bhaag jayenge...nahin alekh koi nahin bhagage..we all love to hear rajs sweet voice..yahape ye log planning main busy the n kuch tikh se plan bhi nahin bana...itne main naina wahape aagayi..alekh n huda to bahut samjhdar hain they left the room..mujhe wo scene bahut accha laga how naina started hitting raj on his chest aur usse poochrahi thi aap mujhe chodhke jaayenga...n raj saying maaf kardo aur kabhi usse chodhke nahin jaayega...how they both hugged ...n their kiss...kya scene tha yaar..u have written it so beautifully. Thanks a ton dear !
mujhe ye bhi bahut accha laga when raj went to nainas house uska hath maangane ..the way he said all so fastly...ab usko koi experience nahin hai na..to bechara aise hi bolega na..aur wo kitna cute lagraha hoga...naina ki parents to jhat se maangaye for their shaadi....
Naina is sooooooooo lucky hain yaar ..raj se uski shaadi jo hogayi... the marriage scene also u described so beautifully
Raj ko ladhki chahiye..n usne pehle se naam bhi sochke rakha...Raina..lovely name...par rana ki aankhen sirf naina ko honi chahiye..baaki sab raj jaisa....
Raj is Major now...Rianas surprise gift for rajs birthday is so nice...kitna happy n cute family haina...raj ko perfect gift di naina ne on his birthday.
I am glad u liked it !
Mana really its a lovely ..beautiful.wonderful ..n fantastic fic...ha tumne rulaya raj ko bahut aur uske saath saath hum sab ko bhi but wo sab maaf for this perfect n beautiful ending..u have portrayed all the charachters so nicely..but u know i am feeling sooooooooo sad because this is the last update..main hamesha chahthi thi jaldi sab kuch tikh hojaye... what i want to see happened uske saath ye khubsurat fic bhi end hogaya.. Reaaallllllllllyyyyy??? Chalo !! Now even am happy and relieved !
Mana thank u soooo much for writting this fabulous fic n i really hope to have more beautiful fics from u dear You are most welcome sweetheart !