Fan Fictions

   

Luv happens only once(RN)-last part,pg63(14/02) (Page 65)

Post Reply New Post

Page 65 of 68

Sweet-Lioness

IF-Rockerz

Sweet-Lioness

Joined: 03 September 2008

Posts: 9009

Posted: 17 February 2010 at 12:17am | IP Logged
Ab aate hain...is fic k ud par...
 
Awesome...fab...superb...too gud...mindbolwing...aur kuch yaad nahi aa raha hai... samajh le...kuch dil se feel kiya hai...par bol nahi pa rahi hun...Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap
 
hum hamesha khane k baad sweet khate hain...toh isiliye main apne sweet ko last ka liye rakhti hun...!!! pahle asusall sabji par aate hain...!!! 'french bean' (mujhe bilkul bhi achha nahi lagta)... i mean rahul... kitna achha insaan tha... i mean hai...apni tarif...apni hi zuban se karr raha hai...!!!LOL LOL  LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
 
itne serious scene par bhi main hass rahi thi...jab naina ne kaha ki 'rahul apne samne kisi ko bolne nahi deta...'...bilkul sahi kaha...aur bina kisi nautanki k rahul bhi samajh gaya...ki sari galatiyaan us ki thi...!!! LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
 
vaise rahul k liye bura toh laga...par isiliye nahi ki naina use chod kar chali gayi...bal ki isiliye ki... bichara aaya toh tha dulha bann ne...par...sahra kisi aur k sarr chadh gaya...aur is ka hath khali rah gaya...!!! ab yeh galati bhi toh usi ki hai na...LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
 
alekh aur huda ka plan...kamiyaab ho gaya...!!! pahle main thoda confused thi ki alekh aur huda aise kaise baat kar sakte hain apne teacher se...matlab agar serial ko dimag me rakh karr socha jaye toh...!!! par plan toh akhir plan tha...raj ko sabb pata chal gaya...voh sabb kuch samajh bhi gaya...par alekh me toh real bro ki aatma ghush gayi thi...ek baar jo voh suru hua toh us k dail khatam hi nahi ho rahe the...!!! raj help k liye HUDA ki aur dekh raha tha...jo hamesha sabb ko sirf problems hi deta hai... LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
 
raj ne sahi kaha ki 'saale ki kami mahsus nahi hogi'...!!! bichara Raj...huda aur alekh se idea le raha tha...main kya marr gayi thi...!!! do aise logon se idea le raha tha...huda...jiss k dimag me sirf gobar bhara hua hai...aur alekh...jiss k dimag me sirf DARU k alawa kuch ghushta hi nahi...!!!Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile
 
khair kisi idea ki jarurat padi hi nahi...naina aayi...aur apna gussa raj par nikala...voh scene sach me baht sweet tha...raj k on screen reaction ko imagine karr k main mushkura rahi thi...yeh mera fav scene tha...Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile
 
phir raj ka naina k parents k samne naina se shadi ki baat karna...!!! he he he...ab itna nervous toh voh hoga hi na...akhir sasur jee hain us k...!!! par naina tabb se hi raj ka sath de rahi thi...!!! raj ka SATABDDI TRAIN ki tarah bolna...Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue
 
Now abt...Raina Singh Shekhawat...!!! sahi kaha raj ne ki us ki beti us se itna pyar karti hai ki jaldi  bahar aa gayi...!!! vaise raj ne jabb raina ko apne hath se uthaya tha na...toh mujhe yaad aaya jabb naina ko 'ulti duniya' ki saja mili thi aur raj ne use bachaya tha...!!! par un ki beti un se char kadamm aage hain...use kisi ki help nahi chahiye thi...us ne apne aap ko khud bacha liya...!!! ab jiss k parents raj aur naina ho...un ki beti kaisi hogi...voh toh sirf imagine hi kiya ja sakta hai...Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue
 
parr mujhe pata hai...raj ko apna yeh b'day gift kisi bhi gift se jyada achha lag ga...Big smile Big smile  Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile
 
cont soon...he he he......LOL LOL  LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
 
 

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

RevolutionbreezSumi_162710

Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "Luv happens only once(RN)-last part,pg63(14/02) (Page 65)" in Fan Fictions forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!

Sweet-Lioness

IF-Rockerz

Sweet-Lioness

Joined: 03 September 2008

Posts: 9009

Posted: 17 February 2010 at 12:17am | IP Logged
                                                    -:ABT D FIC:-
 
pahle teri khinchai karti hun...baad me is ud k bare me "kuch" likhugi...!!! sirf 'kuch'...hun...jyada xpect mat karna....LOL LOL  LOL LOL LOL LOL
 
tumhe pata hai tum bilkul bhi achhi nahi ho...as a doc achhi ho...kyoun ki TN me tum ne Naina ko jaldi dis-charge kar diya...par...yahan tum bilkul bhi achhi nahi ho...!!! pata hai kyoun...is fic k start se tum ne humain kitna rulaya...aur ab jabb is fic ko le kar main addicted ho gayi toh tum ne is par 'the end' ka board laga diya...!!! Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue
 
vaise bhi har ek chiz ka ek anth toh hota hi hai...badi baat yeh hai ki anth khushiyon k sath hua...!!! aur 'LHOO' ka yeh safar ghum k sath sath khushiyon k mayne bhi samjha gaya...!!!ek aur baat ka ehsaas bhi dilaya ki ghum chahe kitna bhi bada kyoun na ho...dil agar sachha ho aur iraade majbut...toh khoyi hui khushi bhi mil jati hai...!!!Big smile Big smile  Big smile Big smileBig smileBig smile
 
naina...jo Raj ko kabhi bhul nahi payi...use akhir me apna pyar mila...Big smile
 
us k parents... jo as usall parents ki tarah apne bachhon ko emotional blackmail karte rahte hain...unhe bhi naina k pyar ko accept karna hi pada...LOL
 
RAJ...baht kuch khone k baad use us ki puri zindagi kuch yun mili...ki voh sayad...hi kabhi gujare hue kal k dukhon ko yaad kare...!!! ofcourse naveen ko toh yaad karega hi...ab voh toh chala gaya hai...par us ki sar-phiri bahn... ko us k liye chod gaya hai...!!! raj ka char...me hamesha sirf sacrifice dikhaya jata tha...par voh bhi toh ek insaan hai...tum ne us me possesiveness...add ki...jealous...gussa...sab dikhya...jo ki kisi bhi insaan me aam baat hai... ki dard se taklif hota hai...aur us ka reaction bhi hota hai...Big smile
 
aur alekh n Huda...LRL me Huda ka charachter hamesha negative dikhya gaya...par use agar +ve charachter bhi dete toh voh bhi achha hi karta...i hope...
khair...par Alekh n Huda ne apni dosti nibhayi...!!! alekh ne naina ko le kar apne bhai ka farz nibhaya...jo sayad naveen zinda hota toh yahi karta...!!! par point yeh hai ki naveen zinda hota toh yeh sabb hota hi nahi...matrlab naina KMA aati hi nahi...voh toh CAT k chakkar me kahin aur chali jati...aur Raj k gale me khujliwali powder matlab Dr Mishra hi padti...!!! isiliye achha hua naveen chala gaya...!!! mera matlab toh samajh hi rahi ho na...Wink
 
Okkkk...itne bade BHAASHAN ka TATTPARYA...yeh hai ki is fic ne humain rulaya...par hashaya nahi...bal k chehre par ek khushi ki jhalak mil jati thi...jab bhi is fic pe Raj aur Naina sath ho jate the...aur aaj kal ki duniya me toh khushi bhi baht mahngi ho gayi hai...hai na...!!! toh is "MAHANGI KHUSHI' ko humain dene k liye...main THANXX kahnewali thi...par hamari deal ko yaad karte hue...nahi kaha...!!! Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap
 
 
 
love uHug Hug Hug Hug Hug Hug Hug
urs
PriBig smile


Edited by Lion_Priya - 17 February 2010 at 2:05am

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

RevolutionbreezSumi_162710

Sweet-Lioness

IF-Rockerz

Sweet-Lioness

Joined: 03 September 2008

Posts: 9009

Posted: 17 February 2010 at 2:26am | IP Logged
sorry...mere dono posts ulta post ho gaye...jise pahle post karna tha...voh second aa gaya aur jise second karna tha voh first...!!! doc...plzzz help...mera dimag bhi ab mere PM box ki tarah khali ho raha haiLOL

The following 3 member(s) liked the above post:

Revolutionbreezesha143Sumi_162710

Revolutionbreez

IF-Dazzler

Revolutionbreez

Joined: 08 March 2009

Posts: 3926

Posted: 17 February 2010 at 5:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dhara_s

 
 
 
So sry Mana...mujhe pata hai ke mai bahot late edit kar rahi hun but I m just not able to find time....!!!!!  Last baar maaf kar de, next time se jaldi jaldi comment kar dungi...!!! Mad or what dhara??? Sorries from frenz are not accepted here, okay??? Tongue It's okay dear....no probs !!! Smile
 
 


Anyways....

Jab ek cheez me gadbad ho toh gadbadiyon ki line lag jaati hai....aise hi hua na yahan pe...!!! Know what?? this is the best description of the Update ! LOL LOL LOL

 


Waise yeh Rahul kitna irritate karta hai...???? Kuch bolne hi nahi deta...!!!! Bachpan ki bimaari hai ! Tongue

 
 
 
The song was soooo sad...!!! Log agar kisi ko bolne ka mauka denge toh aise songs gaane ki naubat nahi aaegi...!! Sahi mein!!! Par apne Captain Shekhawat ko kaun samjhaye??? Confused
 
 


Lekin yeh Raj ne toh hadh hi kar di...Naina se dur jaana chahta hai...!!!

Jab itna emotional atyachar hho raha tah..you had to write... ( Kiskisko PURANA Raj waapis chahiye tha?? Tongue Wink LOL LOL LOL)....!!!

 
Tu kya hai yaar...pata nahi apne patients ko kaise treat karti hogi...??? Yeh aise ulti seedhi baatein karke unko hasake hi thik kar deti hogi...????? Shshshsh !!! don't leak out my secret ! Wink And anyways...matlab toh patients thik honese hai.... kyun??? TongueLOL LOL
 
 

 
 

Naina pagal hai kya...??? yeh kya soch rahi hai...??? Woh kuch bhi soche! Uske sochne se kya hota hai???Iss fic mein  Wahi hoga jo manjoore mana hoga ! LOL
 
 


So ab Shalini Rahul ko sab kuch bataegi..!!! Great...!!! Right person to leak out the secrets ...isn't it? Wink Waise bhi bechari ko do hi kaam hote hai...Guessing and help RN expressing ! LOL

 
 

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Sumi_162710

danish1

Senior Member

danish1

Joined: 04 October 2008

Posts: 365

Posted: 20 February 2010 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
superb ,fantastic ,mindblowing.
lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyy ending.Dancing
couldn't ask for more............Hug
thanks for this beautiful story
god bless!ClapClapClap

-serenity-

Goldie

-serenity-

Joined: 02 October 2009

Posts: 2159

Posted: 22 February 2010 at 5:18am | IP Logged
Awesome Clap  Clap   Clap   Clap  lovely  Clap   Clap   Clap  Clap fabulous Clap  Clap   Clap  Clap superb  Clap   Clap   Clap    Clap 
Finally Rahul ko sab kuch pata chalgaya... thanks to dear shalini...when he was accusing naina"tumne mujhe dhokha diya"...maine bhi wahi socha  jo naina ne kaha...usne naina ko bolne ka mauka hi kab diya...naina ne kitni baar batane ki koshish ki lekin wo to kuch sunne ko tayyar hi nahin tha...good usse ye baat pata hain   apne bachpan ki bimari ke bare main....and phir usne naina ko ye bhi  kaha to go n stop raj...good he said that
Alekh ne Raj ki kya class li...raj ko naina ki engagement ke piche jo raaz hain wo bhi pata chala n raj is feeling sad for hurting naina...wahape raj is feeling bad n huda is enjoying  seeing his expressions .akhir main alekh ne raj ko warning bhi dedi...loved to see alekhs concern for his behan naina
Misson Manaofy Naina started..alekh n huda ne kya kya ideas di...huda is saying gaana gaayiye for naina..but alekh to kehraha tha..sab bhaag jayenge...nahin alekh koi nahin bhagage..we all love to hear rajs sweet voice..yahape ye log planning main busy the n kuch tikh se plan bhi nahin bana...itne main naina wahape aagayi..alekh n huda to bahut samjhdar hain they left the room..mujhe wo scene bahut accha laga how naina   started hitting raj on his chest aur usse poochrahi thi aap mujhe chodhke jaayenga...n raj saying maaf kardo aur kabhi usse chodhke nahin jaayega...how they both hugged ...n their kiss...kya scene tha yaar..u have written it so beautifully
mujhe ye bhi bahut accha laga when raj went to nainas house uska hath maangane ..the way he said all so fastly...ab usko koi experience nahin hai na..to bechara aise hi bolega na..aur wo kitna cute lagraha hoga...naina ki parents to jhat se maangaye for their shaadi....
Naina is sooooooooo lucky hain yaar ..raj se uski shaadi jo hogayi...  the marriage scene also u described so  beautifully
Raj ko ladhki chahiye..n usne pehle se naam bhi sochke rakha...Raina..lovely name...par rana ki  aankhen sirf naina ko honi chahiye..baaki sab raj jaisa....
Raj is Major now...Rianas surprise gift  for rajs birthday is so nice...kitna happy n cute family haina...raj ko perfect gift di naina ne on his birthday.
 
Mana really its a lovely ..beautiful.wonderful ..n fantastic fic...ha  tumne rulaya  raj ko bahut  aur uske saath saath hum sab ko bhi but wo sab maaf for this perfect n beautiful ending..u have portrayed  all the charachters so nicely..but u know i am feeling sooooooooo sad because this is the last update..main hamesha chahthi thi jaldi sab kuch tikh hojaye... what i want to see happened uske saath ye khubsurat fic bhi end hogaya.. 
 
Mana thank u soooo much for writting this fabulous fic Hug  Hug   Hug    Hug    Hug  n i really hope to have more  beautiful fics from u dear
 
love
yogitha
 
 

PrincessFlavia

IF-Dazzler

PrincessFlavia

Joined: 28 December 2006

Posts: 3008

Posted: 04 March 2010 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Well... so the fic is completed... Happy Ending!!!

It has really been a tearful journey for all of us... seeing naina and Raj bearing pain and sadness that life gave them. But finally they decided not to take things lying down...

Let me start chronologically...

Rahul finally realised the truth and Naina also said the right thing... that he never gave here a chance to speak and didn't even want to know about her past... and he was blaming her for no reason at all... I'm happy that he freed her and asked her to stop raj from going. And he said the dialogue that "Love happens only once." Well... as much as u say rahul was not bad... I seriously cannot  sympathise with him. So I am just leaving it there.

Aalekh did the best job... he carried the day... stole the show or whatever you may say... Fantastic dialogues... Poor Raj!!! Aalekh didn't even give him a chance to reply. Raj said ki "Uski shaadi me saale ki kami nahi hogi". Well... someone had to drill sense into Raj's screwed up brain and Aalekh did it perfectly... Cheers to Aalekh...

Then started the mission manaofy Naina and Aalekh and Huda slipped back to their cadets mode. I was laughing throughout their charade... And Naina came in just then. Huda's gave a perfect dialogue... "Naina ka naam usne Phoolan aise hi nahi rakha."

Now Naina did most of the job... hitting him.. complaining... crying... and finally hugging him. Ahhhh!!! It was the much awaited part...

The way Raj said to Naina's parents about their marriage was so funny... So finally Raj and Naina are married and they become the proud parents of the little angel RAINA SINGH SHEKHAWAT... I loved that child - MASTER PRANKSTER... Raj and Naina make a happy family along with their daughter...

And thus we had a HAPPY ENDING!!! Beautiful story Mana... And you deserve all the praise that you have got...

Love
Guglu


Edited by guglu088 - 04 March 2010 at 9:10am

poojabi

Senior Member

poojabi

Joined: 09 June 2010

Posts: 679

Posted: 10 June 2010 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
hey  its lovely only one of its kind.i have read so many fics on rn bt urs is d best.you described all the emotions so clearly and beautifully!its just like i can feel all the emotions.i just loved itpls ek naya fic start karona.nehito mai tumhara writing ko bohot miss karoongi.bye.

Post Reply New Post

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Topic Starter Replies Views Last Post
A LOT LIKE LOVE#2-part 40 pg 128(LAST PART)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 149 150

barkha_90 1198 450534 05 May 2012 at 3:10am
By TANVI_SEXY
may be(mayur ff)part last part-page 27

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 29 30

adi_gupta 233 75066 06 September 2009 at 5:26am
By Yoshita0411
LOVE - AA ff PART - part 9 updt pg8

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

*~sneha~* 76 23083 30 August 2008 at 8:34am
By teenorchid
Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 27 28

zinny.xo 216 25814 06 June 2007 at 3:06pm
By zinny.xo
Bewafa-LAST PART(pg.44)2nd to last(pg.43)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 55 56

simplyconfused 441 107598 07 February 2006 at 9:12pm
By nabz8888

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category

Active Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Limit search to this Forum only.

 

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.