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Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 17 February 2010 at 12:17am | IP Logged

Ab aate hain...is fic k ud par...

Awesome...fab...superb...too gud...mindbolwing...aur kuch yaad nahi aa raha hai... samajh le...kuch dil se feel kiya hai...par bol nahi pa rahi hun...

hum hamesha khane k baad sweet khate hain...toh isiliye main apne sweet ko last ka liye rakhti hun...!!! pahle asusall sabji par aate hain...!!! 'french bean' (mujhe bilkul bhi achha nahi lagta)... i mean rahul... kitna achha insaan tha... i mean hai...apni tarif...apni hi zuban se karr raha hai...!!!

itne serious scene par bhi main hass rahi thi...jab naina ne kaha ki 'rahul apne samne kisi ko bolne nahi deta...'...bilkul sahi kaha...aur bina kisi nautanki k rahul bhi samajh gaya...ki sari galatiyaan us ki thi...!!!

vaise rahul k liye bura toh laga...par isiliye nahi ki naina use chod kar chali gayi...bal ki isiliye ki... bichara aaya toh tha dulha bann ne...par...sahra kisi aur k sarr chadh gaya...aur is ka hath khali rah gaya...!!! ab yeh galati bhi toh usi ki hai na...

alekh aur huda ka plan...kamiyaab ho gaya...!!! pahle main thoda confused thi ki alekh aur huda aise kaise baat kar sakte hain apne teacher se...matlab agar serial ko dimag me rakh karr socha jaye toh...!!! par plan toh akhir plan tha...raj ko sabb pata chal gaya...voh sabb kuch samajh bhi gaya...par alekh me toh real bro ki aatma ghush gayi thi...ek baar jo voh suru hua toh us k dail khatam hi nahi ho rahe the...!!! raj help k liye HUDA ki aur dekh raha tha...jo hamesha sabb ko sirf problems hi deta hai...

raj ne sahi kaha ki 'saale ki kami mahsus nahi hogi'...!!! bichara Raj...huda aur alekh se idea le raha tha...main kya marr gayi thi...!!! do aise logon se idea le raha tha...huda...jiss k dimag me sirf gobar bhara hua hai...aur alekh...jiss k dimag me sirf DARU k alawa kuch ghushta hi nahi...!!!

khair kisi idea ki jarurat padi hi nahi...naina aayi...aur apna gussa raj par nikala...voh scene sach me baht sweet tha...raj k on screen reaction ko imagine karr k main mushkura rahi thi...yeh mera fav scene tha...

phir raj ka naina k parents k samne naina se shadi ki baat karna...!!! he he he...ab itna nervous toh voh hoga hi na...akhir sasur jee hain us k...!!! par naina tabb se hi raj ka sath de rahi thi...!!! raj ka SATABDDI TRAIN ki tarah bolna...

Now abt...Raina Singh Shekhawat...!!! sahi kaha raj ne ki us ki beti us se itna pyar karti hai ki jaldi bahar aa gayi...!!! vaise raj ne jabb raina ko apne hath se uthaya tha na...toh mujhe yaad aaya jabb naina ko 'ulti duniya' ki saja mili thi aur raj ne use bachaya tha...!!! par un ki beti un se char kadamm aage hain...use kisi ki help nahi chahiye thi...us ne apne aap ko khud bacha liya...!!! ab jiss k parents raj aur naina ho...un ki beti kaisi hogi...voh toh sirf imagine hi kiya ja sakta hai...

parr mujhe pata hai...raj ko apna yeh b'day gift kisi bhi gift se jyada achha lag ga...

cont soon...he he he......

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Sweet-Lioness

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-:ABT D FIC:-

pahle teri khinchai karti hun...baad me is ud k bare me "kuch" likhugi...!!! sirf 'kuch'...hun...jyada xpect mat karna....

tumhe pata hai tum bilkul bhi achhi nahi ho...as a doc achhi ho...kyoun ki TN me tum ne Naina ko jaldi dis-charge kar diya...par...yahan tum bilkul bhi achhi nahi ho...!!! pata hai kyoun...is fic k start se tum ne humain kitna rulaya...aur ab jabb is fic ko le kar main addicted ho gayi toh tum ne is par 'the end' ka board laga diya...!!!

vaise bhi har ek chiz ka ek anth toh hota hi hai...badi baat yeh hai ki anth khushiyon k sath hua...!!! aur 'LHOO' ka yeh safar ghum k sath sath khushiyon k mayne bhi samjha gaya...!!!ek aur baat ka ehsaas bhi dilaya ki ghum chahe kitna bhi bada kyoun na ho...dil agar sachha ho aur iraade majbut...toh khoyi hui khushi bhi mil jati hai...!!!

naina...jo Raj ko kabhi bhul nahi payi...use akhir me apna pyar mila...

us k parents... jo as usall parents ki tarah apne bachhon ko emotional blackmail karte rahte hain...unhe bhi naina k pyar ko accept karna hi pada...

RAJ...baht kuch khone k baad use us ki puri zindagi kuch yun mili...ki voh sayad...hi kabhi gujare hue kal k dukhon ko yaad kare...!!! ofcourse naveen ko toh yaad karega hi...ab voh toh chala gaya hai...par us ki sar-phiri bahn... ko us k liye chod gaya hai...!!! raj ka char...me hamesha sirf sacrifice dikhaya jata tha...par voh bhi toh ek insaan hai...tum ne us me possesiveness...add ki...jealous...gussa...sab dikhya...jo ki kisi bhi insaan me aam baat hai... ki dard se taklif hota hai...aur us ka reaction bhi hota hai...

aur alekh n Huda...LRL me Huda ka charachter hamesha negative dikhya gaya...par use agar +ve charachter bhi dete toh voh bhi achha hi karta...i hope...

khair...par Alekh n Huda ne apni dosti nibhayi...!!! alekh ne naina ko le kar apne bhai ka farz nibhaya...jo sayad naveen zinda hota toh yahi karta...!!! par point yeh hai ki naveen zinda hota toh yeh sabb hota hi nahi...matrlab naina KMA aati hi nahi...voh toh CAT k chakkar me kahin aur chali jati...aur Raj k gale me khujliwali powder matlab Dr Mishra hi padti...!!! isiliye achha hua naveen chala gaya...!!! mera matlab toh samajh hi rahi ho na...

Okkkk...itne bade BHAASHAN ka TATTPARYA...yeh hai ki is fic ne humain rulaya...par hashaya nahi...bal k chehre par ek khushi ki jhalak mil jati thi...jab bhi is fic pe Raj aur Naina sath ho jate the...aur aaj kal ki duniya me toh khushi bhi baht mahngi ho gayi hai...hai na...!!! toh is "MAHANGI KHUSHI' ko humain dene k liye...main THANXX kahnewali thi...par hamari deal ko yaad karte hue...nahi kaha...!!!

love u

urs

Pri

Edited by Lion_Priya - 17 February 2010 at 2:05am

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Sweet-Lioness

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sorry...mere dono posts ulta post ho gaye...jise pahle post karna tha...voh second aa gaya aur jise second karna tha voh first...!!! doc...plzzz help...mera dimag bhi ab mere PM box ki tarah khali ho raha hai

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Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 17 February 2010 at 5:29am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Dhara_s

So sry Mana...mujhe pata hai ke mai bahot late edit kar rahi hun but I m just not able to find time....!!!!! Last baar maaf kar de, next time se jaldi jaldi comment kar dungi...!!! Mad or what dhara??? Sorries from frenz are not accepted here, okay??? It's okay dear....no probs !!!

Anyways....

Jab ek cheez me gadbad ho toh gadbadiyon ki line lag jaati hai....aise hi hua na yahan pe...!!! Know what?? this is the best description of the Update !

Waise yeh Rahul kitna irritate karta hai...???? Kuch bolne hi nahi deta...!!!! Bachpan ki bimaari hai !

The song was soooo sad...!!! Log agar kisi ko bolne ka mauka denge toh aise songs gaane ki naubat nahi aaegi...!! Sahi mein!!! Par apne Captain Shekhawat ko kaun samjhaye??? Confused

Lekin yeh Raj ne toh hadh hi kar di...Naina se dur jaana chahta hai...!!!

Jab itna emotional atyachar hho raha tah..you had to write... ( Kiskisko PURANA Raj waapis chahiye tha?? )....!!!

Tu kya hai yaar...pata nahi apne patients ko kaise treat karti hogi...??? Yeh aise ulti seedhi baatein karke unko hasake hi thik kar deti hogi...????? Shshshsh !!! don't leak out my secret ! And anyways...matlab toh patients thik honese hai.... kyun???

Naina pagal hai kya...??? yeh kya soch rahi hai...??? Woh kuch bhi soche! Uske sochne se kya hota hai???Iss fic mein Wahi hoga jo manjoore mana hoga !

So ab Shalini Rahul ko sab kuch bataegi..!!! Great...!!! Right person to leak out the secrets ...isn't it? Waise bhi bechari ko do hi kaam hote hai...Guessing and help RN expressing !

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superb ,fantastic ,mindblowing.

lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyy ending. Dancing

couldn't ask for more............ Hug

thanks for this beautiful story

god bless! Clap

-serenity-

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Posted: 22 February 2010 at 5:18am | IP Logged

Awesome lovely fabulous superb

Finally Rahul ko sab kuch pata chalgaya... thanks to dear shalini...when he was accusing naina"tumne mujhe dhokha diya"...maine bhi wahi socha jo naina ne kaha...usne naina ko bolne ka mauka hi kab diya...naina ne kitni baar batane ki koshish ki lekin wo to kuch sunne ko tayyar hi nahin tha...good usse ye baat pata hain apne bachpan ki bimari ke bare main....and phir usne naina ko ye bhi kaha to go n stop raj...good he said that

Alekh ne Raj ki kya class li...raj ko naina ki engagement ke piche jo raaz hain wo bhi pata chala n raj is feeling sad for hurting naina...wahape raj is feeling bad n huda is enjoying seeing his expressions .akhir main alekh ne raj ko warning bhi dedi...loved to see alekhs concern for his behan naina

Misson Manaofy Naina started..alekh n huda ne kya kya ideas di...huda is saying gaana gaayiye for naina..but alekh to kehraha tha..sab bhaag jayenge...nahin alekh koi nahin bhagage..we all love to hear rajs sweet voice..yahape ye log planning main busy the n kuch tikh se plan bhi nahin bana...itne main naina wahape aagayi..alekh n huda to bahut samjhdar hain they left the room..mujhe wo scene bahut accha laga how naina started hitting raj on his chest aur usse poochrahi thi aap mujhe chodhke jaayenga...n raj saying maaf kardo aur kabhi usse chodhke nahin jaayega...how they both hugged ...n their kiss...kya scene tha yaar..u have written it so beautifully

mujhe ye bhi bahut accha laga when raj went to nainas house uska hath maangane ..the way he said all so fastly...ab usko koi experience nahin hai na..to bechara aise hi bolega na..aur wo kitna cute lagraha hoga...naina ki parents to jhat se maangaye for their shaadi....

Naina is sooooooooo lucky hain yaar ..raj se uski shaadi jo hogayi... the marriage scene also u described so beautifully

Raj ko ladhki chahiye..n usne pehle se naam bhi sochke rakha...Raina..lovely name...par rana ki aankhen sirf naina ko honi chahiye..baaki sab raj jaisa....

Raj is Major now...Rianas surprise gift for rajs birthday is so nice...kitna happy n cute family haina...raj ko perfect gift di naina ne on his birthday.

Mana really its a lovely ..beautiful.wonderful ..n fantastic fic...ha tumne rulaya raj ko bahut aur uske saath saath hum sab ko bhi but wo sab maaf for this perfect n beautiful ending..u have portrayed all the charachters so nicely..but u know i am feeling sooooooooo sad because this is the last update..main hamesha chahthi thi jaldi sab kuch tikh hojaye... what i want to see happened uske saath ye khubsurat fic bhi end hogaya..

Mana thank u soooo much for writting this fabulous fic Hug

n i really hope to have more beautiful fics from u dear

love

yogitha

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Well... so the fic is completed... Happy Ending!!!

It has really been a tearful journey for all of us... seeing naina and Raj bearing pain and sadness that life gave them. But finally they decided not to take things lying down...

Let me start chronologically...

Rahul finally realised the truth and Naina also said the right thing... that he never gave here a chance to speak and didn't even want to know about her past... and he was blaming her for no reason at all... I'm happy that he freed her and asked her to stop raj from going. And he said the dialogue that "Love happens only once." Well... as much as u say rahul was not bad... I seriously cannot sympathise with him. So I am just leaving it there.

Aalekh did the best job... he carried the day... stole the show or whatever you may say... Fantastic dialogues... Poor Raj!!! Aalekh didn't even give him a chance to reply. Raj said ki "Uski shaadi me saale ki kami nahi hogi". Well... someone had to drill sense into Raj's screwed up brain and Aalekh did it perfectly... Cheers to Aalekh...

Then started the mission manaofy Naina and Aalekh and Huda slipped back to their cadets mode. I was laughing throughout their charade... And Naina came in just then. Huda's gave a perfect dialogue... "Naina ka naam usne Phoolan aise hi nahi rakha."

Now Naina did most of the job... hitting him.. complaining... crying... and finally hugging him. Ahhhh!!! It was the much awaited part...

The way Raj said to Naina's parents about their marriage was so funny... So finally Raj and Naina are married and they become the proud parents of the little angel RAINA SINGH SHEKHAWAT... I loved that child - MASTER PRANKSTER... Raj and Naina make a happy family along with their daughter...

And thus we had a HAPPY ENDING!!! Beautiful story Mana... And you deserve all the praise that you have got...

Love
Guglu

Edited by guglu088 - 04 March 2010 at 9:10am

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hey its lovely only one of its kind.i have read so many fics on rn bt urs is d best.you described all the emotions so clearly and beautifully!its just like i can feel all the emotions.i just loved itpls ek naya fic start karona.nehito mai tumhara writing ko bohot miss karoongi.bye.

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