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Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 12:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by danish1

lovely part.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 12:51am | IP Logged
 Hi guys !!!
 
 first of all a very happy Valentines day to you all !!
 
Maine socha tha ki main last part aaj UD karungi and will UD epilogue next time...
par maine aaj kuch itne amazing one shots padhe ki i'm all charged up and boosted to post looooooooooonnnnngessssssssssssssst part of my journey as a writer...
 
I know I havent answered to comments....but agar woh abhi karu toh kahi aaj ka din na nikal jaaye! Aur mujhe RN ko aaj hi milana hai ! Big smile
 
Plus abhi tak bahotse logone apna reservation nahi khatam kiya aur MOST IMPORTANT....They are all scaryOuch  and full of dhamkis !!!  LOL
 
Toh main pehle UD karti hoon and then I'll reply....
 
chalega na????
 
 
 

PART SIXTEEN :

 

Next day Rahul went to shalini'

"Shalini , I want to know something about this.", he showed the photo.

She hesitated for a moment and said "Andar aaiye, captain"

 

*******************************************


Naina was teaching in her classroom, when she received a SMS which said ' Meet me in my room, NOW 'Rahul'

" Isko kya hua abhi????", she thought.

Hurriedly she went to his room .

 

Rahul was standing in a corner holding something which seemed to her like a parchment'..

"Rahul????" she asked him curiously'

"Dhoka diya Naina tumne mujhe."

 

And he threw the photograph on the floor''it had the photo of Naina and Raj at pt 1857'

Naina was shocked.

"Main, tumhe sab kuch batane wali thi ... par"

"Par ??par kya? Tumne kaha tha main tumhara dost hu, phir bhi Naina?"

"Trust me , Rahul, Main tumhe'.."

" Main tumhe kya?? You know what, you've hurt me a lot....Naina how can you do that????"

 

"Rahul....."

 

" Tumne mujhe tumhari dosti ke bhi kaabil nahi samjha?"

 

"Yehi...yehi wajah thi...." , she shouted , " Tum kabhi doosre ko kuch bolne hi nahi dete..."

And She started crying, she fell on the floor, that accusation was too much for her'..

 

" I'm Sorry Naina... " , he said quickly realising his mistake, " I know main kisiko kuch bolne hi nahi deta....Bachpan ki problem hai... !! Parr, Mere kehne ka woh matlab nahi tha...."

 

"Toh kya matlab tha?", she shouted back, " kya keh rahe the tum? maine dhokha diya? mere past ke baare mein tum kuch jaan na nahi chahte the....maine tumhe kai baar kehne ki koshish ki apne past ke baare mein..... Aur abhi jab tum aaye ho, tabse ek baar bhi mauka nahi diya mujhe bolne ka...."

"Ab rote aur mujhpar chillati rahogi , ya usse jake rokogi?????"

 

" Kya??"

 

" He is leaving today itself. Maine information nikalwaayi hai. Captain Shekhawat aaj hi ja rahe hai."


Naina was startled by these words''.

 

she was unable to believe her ears''is that what she heard?

 

Rahul nodded.

 

She started to leave,but stopped again,

 

" Rahul, I...i mean...you...I didnt ....I mean..."

 

" Kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Tumhe kya lagta hai Naina? Ki maine yeh baat notice nahi ki ke tumhare haath mein aaj bhi wohi watch hai? yeh watch tumhe Rajveer ne hi di hai naa? yaa maine Rajveer ke laut te hi tumhare chehre ki lauti hui raunak notice nahi ki? yaa maine tumhare aur Rajveer ki aankho mein ek doosre ke liye pyaar aur tadap notice nahi ki?"

 

As she looked at him, " Maanta hoon ki main 'tubelight' hoon...but it's not because I have less brains. It's because of ' Attention deficit disorder' I'm suffering from, since I met you. Parr...khair !! Der se hi sahi...dimaag ki batti toh jali ! I guess, I should have eaten MENTOS much earlier, what say?"

 

Naina just stared at him.....

 

" Stop staring at me. Agar aise dekhogi toh mujhe phirse tumse pyaar ho jayega, aur baadmein main tumhe jaane nahi dunga."

"Rahul''."

"Jaao IDIOT !!! He will be leaving soon.", he nudged her forward , " Hamare accounts baadmein clear karlenge ! Aur phir mujhe Captain Shekhawat ko condolences bhi toh dene hain, ab unhe tumhe zindagi bhar jo jhelna padega !"

And her happiness knew no bounds'..she moved'..

"Suno''meri ring" , he called her .

 

She hit her head for forgetting it and gave him her ring .

 

He continued , " Ab kisi achchi ladki ko yeh ring pehnaunga'..tumhari jaisi boring type ko nahi."

she smiled and him, she approached him and kissed him on his cheek'.

"Thanks for being there'.." , and she added, "I will miss you and your PJ's"

 

she looked at him for the last time and quickly ran to Raj's room''

 

Rahul shedded a tear from his eyes and looked at the ring.

 

' It belonged only to you Naina. love happens only once ,Naina"

 

 

*************************************************

 

Huda and Aalekh entered Rajveer's room.

 

Raj saw them and tried to smile.

 

" Aalekh....Huda....main tumhe bulaane hi waala tha. Main abhi kuch hi der mein nikal raha hoon. Pata nahi phir kab mulaqat hogi ??? Hogi bhi yaa nahi ??" , he tried to keep sadness out of his voice, " Humesha khush rehena aur ek bahot hi kaabil officer banana....Itne kaabil, ki sab mujhe tumhara teacher hone ke naate jaane ! Aur...."

 

"Aur....???" , Aalekh asked.

 

Raj glanced at him and placed palm on his shoulder.....

 

"Aur Naina ka khayal rakhana...."

 

"Sir...kya aap phoolan ko bhool payenge?"

 

Raj shut his eyes tightly at this while tears rolled down his cheeks.

 

Before he could reply, Aalekh answered,

 

"Haan Huda, Sir yeh jaroor kar payenge. Unkeliye Naina ko bhoolna itna bhi mushkil nahi."

 

Raj's eyes jerked open and he looked at Aalekh in shock.

 

But he paid no heed to it.

 

" Oye jatt tu jaanta nahi hai kya ? Rajveer sir ke liye kuch mushkil nahi hai.... Woh toh yeh maante hai...woh kya kehta hai Yudi angrezi mein?? haan !! Impossible itself says, I'M POSSIBLE ! Issliye, Sir ko toh koi locha nahi hoga sab kuch peeche chodne mein....." , he said sarcastically.

 

He walked and came to stand infront of Raj.

 

" Ek baat kahu Sir?"

 

Raj looked at him and he took it for yes.

 

" Apun ko na aapke bheje ka setting kuch samajh mein nahi aata ! Seedha raasta saamne hote huye bhi yeh tedhe mein kyun ghuste ho, pata nahi !", Aalekh shrugged his shoulder, " Khair....bade logo ki baatein apunke jaise qaidi ke samajhmein toh aanese rahi ! Kya aap apun ko samjha sakte ho?"

 

Raj turned away from him, trying to control his emotions.

 

" Aap kyun samjhaoge?? Problem aapko thodehi hogi?? Problem toh apun ki Naina ko hogi na?? Bechari....ek jhatke se sambhalti nahi hai, tabtak aur ek bijli aakar uspe girti hai !" , despite being Aalekh, tears rolled down his cheeks, but he wiped it quickly.

 

Raj too was trying to control his tears.

 

" Pata hai Sir, apunko lagta tha, woh badha chadha kar apunki taariff karti hai ! Parr aaj yakeen hogaya ! Ki usko samajhne waale sirf do log hai.....ek Naveen aur dusra main. Aur koi nahi samajhta usko !! "

 

Raj couldnt bear this and he looked back at Aalekh. This accusation was too much for him. He didnt understand his Naina???

 

" Aalekh....", he started to reply, but....

 

" Parr aapki koi galati nahi hai! Jaha uske maa baap usse nahi samajh paaye, toh aap toh...."

 

" Parr Sirjee, kahi na kahi mujhe umeed thi ki aap Phoolan ko samjhoge.... Main yeh samajhne laga tha, ki agar usse sabse jyaada koi samajh sakta hai, toh woh aap ho.Parr...", Huda intervened.

 

Aalekh smirked, " Jaante hai Sir, aapke jaane ke baad ghut ghut ke jee rahi thi woh...... maut ke intezaar mein. Agar Naveen ko nirdosh saabit nahi karna hota toh...."

 

" Aa...Aalekh tum...Naina ke mom dad ke baaremein kya...???", Raj asked instead.

 

Aalekh shook his head frustratedly, " Naina ki zindagi mein khushi laane ki khwaish mein uski zindagi maut se battar bana rahe the...Aur usse har baar ki tarah ek baar phir haar maan ni padi..."

 

"Ma...matlab??"

 

" Jaante hai Sir, woh sab se lad jaati hai! Par...apni kismat ke saamne usse har baar ghutne tekne padte hai..", Aalekh said.

 

" Qaidi ka matlab hai ki....", Huda told him the story behind Naina's engagement.

 

Raj turned towards Aalekh in shock .

 

" Aap tension mat lo sir ! Aap araamse jaao !", Aalekh said , " Waise bhi Isse kya farak padhta hai agar uski zindagi aapse shuru hoti hai aur aape khatam..... ???"

 

He looked at Raj,

 

" Toh kya hua agar uske zindagi ka matlab hi aap ho? Iss baat se aapko fark pade, jaroori toh nahi? Hai na Sir? Waise Sir, aap usski maut par aansu bahane toh aaoge na??"

 

" AALEKH!!! " , Raj slapped him hard across his face and then clenched his fists.

 

Aalekh smiled sadly," Kya hua?? bura laga?? Woh aisa hi kuch plan kar rahi hai...."

 

" Aalekh???" , it was a mere whisper, out of shock !

 

And Aalekh went on and on and on....While.....

 

Rajveer was getting restless and feeling more and more guilty for behaving like that with Naina....

 

He knew he has to make up for his mistake and manaofy Naina as soon as possible before matters become worse but Aalekh was unstoppable.

 

Huda had a hard time controlling his laughter seeing Raj's expressions...... Qaidi was doing his job wonderful ! as usual !

 

while Aalekh continued.....

 

" Usne bhale hi aajtak Rahul ko ek dost se jyaada aur kuch nahi maana....Parr isse kya hota hai??? Toh kya hua agar Rahul ke zindadili se Naina ko apna mission poora karne ke liye himmat mili ? woh mission jo ussne aapko promise kiya tha ki woh poora karegi...Toh kya hua agar woh zinda thi toh bas issi mission ko poora karne.....??"

 

Rajveer gave a helpless look to Huda, pleading for help !

 

Huda chuckled and walked towards Aalekh...

 

"Oye bass kar Qaidi....", Huda interrupted placing his hand on his shoulder , " Sir samajh gaye.." , and he winked.

 

" Saala Nautanki...", Aalekh shouted at him ," Tujhe yeh sab mazaak lagta hai? Udhar apun ki behen ke jaan par ban aayi hai..."

 

"Aur aap...", turning to Raj this time ," Achcha hai ki aap samajh gaye. Lekin ek aur baat samajh leejiye. Naina apun ki dost hi nahi , apun ki behen hai, family hai , apun ka sabkuch hai. Jo bhi usski aakhon mein aasoon laayega naa, apun usski waat laga dega."

 

Huda whispered , " Oye Qaidi , kya kar raha hai? Captain sir ko hool de raha hai...???"

 

Aalekh came back to reality....

 

He was feeling guilty for what all harsh words he said, especially in the end.

 

He was not able to face Raj and he looked down.

 

Raj broke into smile.....

He walked over to Aalekh.....

Placing his hands on his shoulder he said,

 

"Bole toh....Apun ki Shaadi mein Saale ki kami nahi hogi..."

 

Aalekh looked up with tears in his eyes and hugged him tightly.

 

Raj patted him on his back, " Thanks Aalekh ! And I assure you , mera bheja ab kabhi tedhe mein nahi jaayega !" , he said mischeivously.

 

Aalekh looked down embarassedly.

 

" Woh...boletoh Sorry Sir....apunka woh matlab nahi tha."

 

Raj raised his eyebrows.

 

" Kya Sir? Ab apunki ek galati bhi aap maaf nahi karoge kya?"

 

Raj laughed and ruffled his hair, signifying he is already forgiven.

 

"Guyz..", Raj said , " Now help me in this mission."

 

"MISSION???", they both asked in unison.

 

" Haan... Mission Manaofy Naina...!!" , he said in a low tone.

 

"Sirjee, jo kuch kiya aapne kiya. Ab aap hi manao usse...", Huda raised his hands !

 

"Cadet Huda...idea toh de hi sakte ho na....??"

 

" Idea??? Main??? aapko???"

 

" please???"

 

" Sir ek baat poochu?" , Huda asked, " Jab bhi baat Phoolan ki hoti hai,aapka dimaag ....."

 

But stopped abruptly seeing the look on Raj's face and said , " Sorry !"

 

" Bole toh sir aap usko koi gift kyu nahi dete , woh.. 'sorry' ke saath!" , Aalekh suggested.

 

"Koi faayda nahi Qaidi....Phoolan usse khidki se bahar phenk degi..."

 

"Teri toh..", Aalekh fumed as Huda rejected his idea.

 

"Oye thand rakh Qaidi....!!! Maine aise hi usska naam Phoolan nahi rakha hai..."

 

" Toh tu bol naa idea...!! khali phili dimaag ka dahi kyu bana raha hai...! ", Aalekh said.

 

" Oye mujhe lagta hai, captain sir ko naa Naina ke liye gaana gana chahiye.... kudi zaroor maan jaayegi..." , Huda suggested.

 

" Haan... taaki Sir ka gaana sunke Naina ke saath saath poori academy bhi gate ke bahar bhaag jaaye aur Sir akele hi gaate rahe..." , Aalekh replied immediately.

 

" Oye Qaidi teri toh..."

 

And then began their charade of coming up with one idea after the another and dumping each other's ideas, totally ignoring Raj's presence in his room.

 

Rajveer who was sitting with his head in his hands shouted atlast....

 

" SHUT UP !!!!"

 

Aalekh and Huda immediately stopped.

 

"Shut up guyz....help me out, please?" , Raj said.

 

" Kyun Sir? taare Gardish mein ?" , Huda repeated the dialogue Raj has once told him at the fresher's ball....He was having wonderful time teasing his Captain sir.

 

While they were discussing this.....


Naina reached his room and forced the door to open and Raj was shocked for a while looking at her''.

 

Aalekh and Huda quickly left the room.

 

She came near him and started hitting on his chest''

"Mujhe chodke jayenge aap'haan ...jawaab do.." , she asked raising her voice.

 

"Naina ...woh...woh ...main...."

 

While continuing hitting him and walking forward while Raj kept moving back.

" Phirse chodke jaoge ?"she shouted.

 

He shook his head quickly.....


She continued to cry while Raj kept looking at her'.

 

"Aapne soch bhi kaise liya ki main aapke bagair jee paaungi? Ki main aapko chod dungi???......kaise jaoge aap..haan? Bolo...."

She continued hitting his chest, finally he bumped into the wall''..

And Naina hugged him tightly.

 

"Phirse aisa kabhi maat karna Raj''Aisa kabhi mat kehna....mar jaungi main!!"

He hugged her back with equal anticipation'..

 

"Kabhi nahi jaunga. I'm sorry ! I am an Idiot Naina ! Please...please forgive me !" he could say only those words'..

 

While she kept crying in his embrace.

 

" Tumhe kabhi apne aapse alag nahi hone doonga..... kabhi nahi....ek pal ke liye bhi nahi.....", He said after gaining a bit composure.

 

While they continued to hug tightly....

" Why did you say those things?" , Naina looked up at him like a small kid asking for an explanation.

 

" I...I..thought tumne apne marzi se engagement ki hai and now i was acting hindrance in your way...so...", he said in low voice.

 

She looked at him in disbelief !

 

" Par tumne bhi mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya?" , he complained.

 

She stared at him and he looked down, understanding his fault.

 

" Woh I don't know how? I always mess up things....! Sorry !", he said sheepishly.

 

Naina couldnt control her laughter hearing that and Raj gazed at her intently.

 

" Hmmmm.....", she said giving a slight push to his head, " Mujhe ab pata chala hai that u always mess up things! Parr ab pata chalke kya faida?? Too late ! "

 

" Hey !! Maine pehle hi tumhe warn kiya tha ? Yaad hai hamara mentorship camp?? Woh toh tum hi paagal ho jo mujh jaise complicated insaan se pyaar kar baithi!", he replied while kissing on her forehead.

 

" uhhunn ! Even today my answer is the same." , she said looking straight in his eyes.

 

" What??" , he asked, though he knew the answer.

 

" That I'm not mad, but the luckiest girl !"

 

" I love you, Naina !", he said with tears in his eyes.

 

She wiped them, " I love you too, Raj !"

 

He leaned forward to kiss her, while bringing her face closer at the same time.

 

Their lips were about to meet when Raj suddenly pulled back and asked,


" Arey ! Par tumhare Capt. Rahul ka kya hoga????" he teased her.

"Kaho toh vapas chali jau????" she played along.

As soon as she said this , he forced his lips on hers, kissing her hard and crazily. His passion knew no bounds as Naina too responded with equal fervor.

 

They wouldn't have stopped if everyone would not have been there''

"Shaadi kab karni hai???" everyone asked shouting including Aalekh, shalini, Huda,sureejee, and Rahul''..



"Anytime , SOON!" they both replied and hugged each other tightly''

 

EPILOGUE :

 

Raj and Naina left for Nainitaal the very next day to meet her parents. They greeted them with pleasure.

 

Everything was going on fine but Raj was really nervous....

 

He was sitting on a chair right in front of her parents as if he was being interrogated.

 

" Beta aap kuch kehna chahte ho? ", Naina's dad asked.

 

" Ji..woh main..woh..."

 

"Haan bolo...yeh woh main kya hai?"

 

Raj closed his eyes, taking a deep breath spoke superfast in one breath, " Jee woh main Naina se bahot pyaar karta hoon. Aur woh bhi mujhse bahot pyaar karti hai. Hum dono shaadi karna chahte hain. Main waada karta hoon main usse khush rakhoonga."

 

Both Naina and her parents were staring at him open mouthed...

 

And within a minute Huda, Aalekh, Pooja, Ali, Yudi and Abhimanyu along with Nandini( his wife) and Dr. shalini appeared from a room yelling, " SURPRISE !!! " and rolling in laughter at Raj's way of proposal.

 

" Wah sir... Kya haath manga hai aapne! ekdum shatabdi express ki speed mein !", Huda again teased.

 

" HUDA !! " , this was Naina taking Raj's side, " Ab bass. Aur taang kheechai ki naa tune Raj ki toh.."

 

" Oye phoolan... sorry yaar... main toh bhool hi gaya tha.... Ab jab ke tu sir ke saath hai, toh kisi kya majaal ki sir ko kuch kahe."

 

" Bilkul thik kaha aapne Huda.", Abhi said coming forward and he hugged Raj.

 

Naina's parents said 'Yes' and blesssed them.

There wasn't any reason they would deny their marraige as they have already forgiven Raj for shooting Naveen and Naina was finally going to be happy.

 

They cut the cake to celebrate the occasion while Naina's mother beamed at her 'Son-in-law ' who was more like a ' Son ' to her. Raj was also overwhelmed with the love showered by Naina's family, which was very much His family now!

Naina's parents want to hold a huge engagement and wedding for them, but Raj flat out refused as what mattered to him was Naina finally becoming his....

He didnt want to waste anymore time...
 
He was more than happy and contented to marry her alone !
 
 And so the presence of their family and friends was more than enough for him !
 
And as always Naina was on his side....

Her parents finally gave in.

 
And so...three days later,on an auspicious day, Naina and Raj very quietly get married in a temple, surrounded by those that they love the most.
 
 
The happiness and bliss of marrying the Love of her life and the glow on her face made her the most beautiful bride, even if she is dressed simply in a beautiful saree with minimal jewellery...
 
 
And anyways...for Raj, who can barely take his eyes off her, her beauty was always there in her simplicity !
 
 
When Naina's dad placed her hand in his, he holds it tightly, making a promise to himself that he'll never allow them to be separated again and Mr. Ahluwalia couldnt help but notice that....though that gave him more satisfaction than anything else...
 
 
When Raj tied the mangalsutra around Naina's neck and put the sindoor in her hair, a feeling of completeness settled over both of them.
 
 
If it wasn't for all their friends and family watching, he would've kissed her right then !!!
 
 
Together, they were ready to face the chalenges life will threw their way...


As Naina and Raj accept the congratulations of their family and friends, Naina too looks at her life partner....her soulmate.

Gazing into Raj's eyes, Naina knows that she's exactly where she's meant to be, with exactly the right person.

 
Hand in hand they gaze up in the sky....together...
 
 
Naveen was smiling at them from up there !!!!
 
 

 Two years later:

 

Naina was running her fingers through her hair, waiting for Raj, when he came from behind and kissed her on her cheek. While she leaned over resting her head on his chest, he ran his hand over her tummy.

 

Yes....Naina was pregnant!

 

He sat down on knees , kissed her tummy and said , " Hey princess ! Ab aabhi jaao naa.... apne Dadda ko kitna intezaar karwaogi??"

 

Naina chuckled as this was his routine !

"Raj.... aapko kaise pata ladki hai? agar ladka hua toh? "

 

" Nahi... Ladki hi hogi.....", he said stubbornly.

 

"Achcha ?"

 

"Haan.... maine toh uska naam bhi socha hai....RAINA....."

 

" Raina....", Naina repeated the name, " you mean hum donoke naam ka..."

 

Raj nodded smiling at her , " Hmmm....Raina ! Hamara Ansh....The symbol of our love !! "

 

Naina was overwhelmed.

Raj was in his own world....

" Uski aankhe bilkul tumhari tarah hogi.... large and beautiful ! Aur baaki sab apne dadda jaisa! ", Raj said.

 

" Aisa kyun ? ", Naina complained.

 

" Arre baba.... ek Naina ko jhelta hu, kaafi nahi hai kya?"

 

"Raaaajjjj...!!! " , and he earned a whack in return!

 

Five years later :

 

Raj was getting ready in his uniform for duty when.....

 

" Cadet Raina Singh Shekhavat Reporting , Sir ! "

 

Three years old Raina shouted coming into the room and added a 'stylish Salute'!

 

She had seen her dadda's and maa's cadets doing this whenever she accompanied them to their duty at KMA....

 

RAINA.....A cute little angel who brought happiness into the lives of Raj and Naina.........

She was a pre-mature delivery !

Raj claims that his Raina couldnt stay much long without her father...so she was in a hurry to come to this world and boasted that Raina is a very obedient daughter, as she listened to him and came sooner than later.

And thus, it LOGICALLY proves that Raina loves him(her father) so much!!........

Raina too, always said " Dadda", as and when she was asked whether she loved her mamma more or dadda !

And Raj every time used to jump with joy!!..

 

 

Raj fondly looked at his little princess and he swelled with pride on seeing her in uniform.

 

He broke into huge smile.....and spread his hands out for her...

 

Raina came running to him, hugging his legs when he took her up in his arms....

 

" Happy Birthday Dadda!" , she kissed him on his cheek and as he kissed her back,

" Dadda ! did you like my surprise?"

 

"Thanks Hun...and the surprise is Awesome! just like you!"

 

She grinned cheekily, when...

 

" Well..... we do have a gift for you !", Naina said entering with a neatly wrapped box.

 

She kissed Raj on cheek and wished him Birthday.

Raj opened the wrapper to find a wooden box.

 

He handed over Raina to Naina and began to open the box.

 

As soon as he opened the box, A Punch ( Boking glove) , came out in jerk and hit Raj's face!

 

While, Naina and Raina burst out laughing.......

 

" Naina...Raina...ruko...chodunga nahi tum dono ko....''

 

and what began was Tom and Jerry chase, and finally Raj caught Raina and hung her upside down by holding her legs.

 

" Aaah dadda !! chodo !! Mamma !! help !!!" , she began screaming.

 

" Raina ki bachchi ! Ab kya hua?? ab kyun chilla rahi ho??", he asked.

 

" Kya dadda aap bhi?? Main Raina ki nahi Naina ki bachchi hoon !", she replied pat and Raj screamed,

 

" Shut up !!"

 

While Naina was laughing away to glory.

 

" Please dadda ! Sorry na !"

 

" Nopes!!!"

 

Raina saw that he was holding her over the bed...

And before Raj could understand, She gave a sudden jerk to his hand holding her legs. As Raj's grip over her legs was gone, she ,with a back leap landed properly on the bed on her legs!

Raj was shocked and was staring at Raina and his hand which held her legs a few secs back, alternately.

 

Naina was laughing hard at his state when,

" Howazzat Major?" , Raina winked and ran away from the room laughing loudly, before he could catch her again.

 

Naina too was quickly following her daughter outside when, Raj caught Naina's hand and held it tightly.

 

" Raj chodo ! "

 

" Kabhie nahiiiii" , and he pulled her closer.

 

" Mera b'day gift?", he asked.

 

" B'day gift? Abhi abhi toh diya.... aur ek chahiye kyaa?", and she again burst out laughing remembering his expressions after the 'punch' hit him.

 

" Naina, stop laughing...."

 

But she just couldn't control herself....

 

" Naina, I said stop ! "

 

She stopped instantly but was still boiling to burst with laughter any second....and again started laughing as she remebered his shocked expression after Raina showed him that 'Stunt' ....

 

" Not fair !! Ek to aap hame gift nahi deti ...... Uparse meri beti ko bhi apne saath le liya mera mazaak udaane mein.... aur ab aap mujhpe hass rahi hai Capt. Shekhavat ? ", he complained.

 

" Major Shekhavat, pehle toh yeh idea 'Aapki' Beti ka tha", at which Raj raised his eyebrows in shock.

 

" Shocked ? Simran (pooja's daughter........ Pooja was still smitten by shahrukh and DDLJ !) aur Jai ( Alekh's Son ) ke saath baith ke yehi sab shaitaaniya plan karti hai.... pata nahi kispe gayi hai..... Master prankster !"

 

He loved it when she complained him about her.... it just reminded him of old days when she used to rush to him complaining about something or other.....

 

" The Question still remains unanswered biwi.... Mera B'day Gift? ", He said indicating he wanted a kiss.

 

" Woh toh tumhe raat ko 12 baje hi mil chuka hai....", She said trying to go away.

 

" Hey...", stopping her ,"Parr abhi yeh prank karke tumne accounts nil kar diya hai... come on ! ek hi toh pyaara pati hai tumhara....ab usse bhi B'day Gift nahi dogi kya?", He said with glint in his eyes...

 

" hmmmm..", Naina took his hand and put it on her tummy....

 

 

He looked at his hand on her tummy and back to her ..... realisation dawning on him....

 

 

" So ?you liked ur Gift hubby?", she asked shyly.

 

" Ofcourse.... ! ab return gift toh banta hai...."

 

She looked at him....smiling shyly.

 

He pulled her by her waist very close such that she could feel his breaths on her face....

 

He slowly placed his lips on hers leading to a passionate kiss.....

 

While we see a Pic on the bed side table..... it has Raj on sofa hugging Naina closely, with Raina on his lap..... HAPPY FAMILY !!!!

 

 
 
 
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DONE !!!!! Big smile Big smile Big smile 

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Hieeeeeee friends!!! Big smile 

It was a wonderful journey( For me !! Wink and ofcourse, however sad I feel to say it but....it was tearful Tongue for you guys !) writing luv happens only once !!

 
And mind you, i could say it only because of unending and staunch support of you guys and the appreciation you showered on me wholeheartedly......though I feel I was undeserving...Smile
 

A big SORRRRYYYY for giving emotional updates almost evrytime and as I read from your comments, making you cry most of the times!Ouch

 
I think I overdone it, OuchTongue
 

coz Yogitha was planning a shopping spree just to buy tissues, LOL

 
Priya has said ki itna rulane ke baad ab hasne ki baari aayi toh main fic end kar rahi hoon...aur mujhe HOWRA bridge se neeche phenkne ki dhamki bhi di ! Shocked LOL
 
 
Aur Sumi, jo ki sweet bolne waali achchi bachchi hai, Raj ko itna rulaane keliye dheere dheere VIOLENT ho rahi hai ! LOL LOL
 
 
Dhara toh mujhse itni naraaz hai ki abhi tak apna reservation khatam nahi kiya !Tongue
 

Aur guglu...well uski baat nahi kartein....usse yeh samajh nahi aa raha ki woh mera kya kare??? LOL

 
Baaki sab ke reactions bhi kuch alag nahi hai...
 
 
But end aap sab bolte ho ki aapko UD achcha laga, toh mera darr kam hojata hai ! Big smile
 
 

Yeh fic ek bahot risky venture tha mere liye kyunki mujhe SOAP QUEEN ka title milte milte rehgaya ! Tongue

 
My take over this is that...
 
Life is not so simple...atleast for Naina.
 
 
Her parents though wanted her happiness, unknowingly were pushing her towards immense grief...though she agreed at first to sacrifice , she soon realised it's just impossible for her to attach anyone else's name other than Raj...
 
 
Now about Raj....
 
 
I wanted him to act human and not SAINT....
 
 
Possessiveness, insecurity, jealousy....are sometimes attributes of one who is deeply in love...
 
 
But along with that he was true to his basic nature....always the one who is sacrificing and one who has a belief that he has lost his right over any happiness, since Naveen's death...
 
 
And how can I forget Aalekh???!!! My most fav after Raj !
 
So he has to have importance in my fic! Wink
 

And true to his character, he was the one along with Shalini and Huda ofcourse, to make everything right !

 
And last but not the least....the most controversial and cursed character of the Fic.....Rahul ! LOL LOL LOL

Well pals...after every foolish thing he did, in the end you must have realised that, HE ISN'T THAT BAD !!! Tongue Wink

 
Thank you all for your support and love,
 
 
Cheers to RN,

Mana. Big smile

 
 
 
 
 
 

 

 



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damn cool
superb
great ending
loved it

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simply mind blowing....Clap

luved d way emotions wer portrayed....njoyed aalekh and huda and rajveer convo and d dialogues der....Clap

den naina and rajveer as always tooo good.....ClapClapClap

den d part wer two 've become threesome...luved d gift der and raina is too smart....Clap

amazing fic and totally beautifully presented....Clap

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first, mein thora sad hoon iye itni acchi ff complte hogaya ,

second happy for,raj and naina ka mil hogaya  and they lived happily together.
ok let's come to the update now,
it's superb mindblowing update. just perfect gift for valetines day.loved it.
toh rahul jee sab jaan gaye. good.ha bahut bolta ahin, realsie kia atleast, he is nice person but  naina sirf raj ka hain....
loved their sweet conversation....
loved the s cene between raj ,alekh and huda.
Alekh did wonderful job, raj ko bhi pata chal gaya,, u really beautifully described the feeling of raj, alekh and huda.loved it.
but when raj un dono se idea manga toh both them are just too .. itna busy hogaye ke bhool hi   gaye raj uha hain.....
loved the scene between raj and naina. too good.
lov ed the epilogue part.
loved the part when raj gaya naina ke ghar and   uske parents ke saamne aapna baat bola....
bu ti lov ed more huda's comment, shatabdi express .. sach mein...LOL
finally they married to each other good.
wow, raj and naina became proud parents of raina.
loved her.she is too cute,sweet and naughty.
loved the father daughter scene and their conversation....
too good update.loved it.
tu jaldi aur ek  rn pe ff likh.
 


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