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Posted: 13 February 2010 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 12:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preet09

Hiiii Mana Tongue
How r u?

dekho is baar mein bilkul late nahin hui comment karne ke liye

The update was superb Clap  Clap  Star

Raj's is so shattered, how can someone imagine his love with anyone? Dats y the news of Naina's engazement has done such a worse effect on Raj. Cry  Cry  Cry Cry

But y is saying all this to Naina, he must have listen to her. She was forced by her parents Angry  Angry  Angry  Angry

Huda bhi na bas hamesha pagal hi rahega, kya zarurat thi Rahul ka naam lene ki..uff  bhagwan jab akal bhant raha tha to yeh apni bhains ke saath gappe maar raha hoga.m sure for that LOL  LOL  LOL

ye Rahul ka bhi dimaag nahin hai jo usko Raj aur Naina ki aankhon me pyaar nahin dekh sakta, aur aalekh aur huda ne bhi kitne hint diya usse, kya yeh bhi us time pe huda ke saath tha aur usse apne PJ's suna raha hoga. LOL  LOL  LOL

Wow....Naveen has been proved innocent  Smile  Smile  Smile m so happy for this. Yeh Raj aur Naina assan cheezon ko complicate banane se kabhi nahin sudhrenge na, kitna asan hai yeh prob solve karna par nahin Raj aur Naina ko to ani kismat ko kosna hai na aur naina ab suicide karne ki to nahin soch rahi na. par soch bhi rahi ho to kya, tum aisa hone to nahin dogi na Wink Wink Wink

The lines r so gud.......those were suiting the scene so much, I was imaging all that Day Dreaming  
Day Dreaming   Day Dreaming  Day Dreaming  Day Dreaming  Day Dreaming Just loved it.

Rahul nepic uthayi, I know yeh raj aur naina ki hi pic hogi aur ab wo shalini se sab pochega aur shalini ek achi bachi ki tarah usse sab sach sach bata degi aur phir sab theek ho hayega Wink  Wink Is baar emri umeedon par pani mat pherna, mujhe aur rona nahin hai, ab bas raj aur naina ko khush dekh kar khush hona hai.

Continue soon, ab zyada wait mat karwana
Luv Preet Hug
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 12:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina woke up in the infirmary and smiled seeing Raj sleeping peacefully!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileHow cute!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

She stroked his hair affectionately and softly kissed his forehead!!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

When Naina is waiting for Rahul, he is so late!!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Jab Naina isse dur rehna toh hamesha uske paas rehta tha!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Aur aaj jab Naina usse milna chahti hai to solve the matter as early as possible then he is not coming!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Rahul is in his own world as usual and is not listening to anything that Naina is trying to tell him!!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Raj ko wahan se jaana hai and Shalini is trying not to laugh as she knew how much he hated hospitals!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

If only Huda had kept his mouth closed then Raj would not have seen Rahul and Naina together!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

He is emotionally shattered and this breaks him even more and he couldn't stop tears from falling!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

But this time Raj maintains his composure and tries to act normal!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

The song is very nice!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

I loved it how on seeing Raj awake Naina rushed towards Raj's room without glancing at Rahul!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj is now acting aloof and his words are causing Naina a lot of pain!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch

Raj gave such a melodramatic speech to Naina!!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Naina said she loves him but is shattered when Raj said pyaar phirse ho jayega!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

Finally we have the dialogue of the story and Naina said love happens only once!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Poor Naina!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry CryShe said ki woh jisse pyaar karti hai woh usse dur ho jaata hai and there is no happiness written in her destiny!!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch

Raj is thinking why is God so unfair to him aur uski zindagi mein na dost ka pyaar tha na Naina ka hai!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

Raj is now assuming that he is coming between Naina and Rahul!!!!!!!D'oh D'oh D'oh D'oh

He didn't want to impose himself on Naina and so he decided to get out of the way of Naina and her fiance!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

O God!!!!!D'oh D'oh D'oh D'ohI definately do not want the old sacrificing Raj back!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Aalekh ne sahi kaha ke Huda ko apna saand jaisa muh kholne ko kisne bola tha!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryWoh chup nahi reh sakta tha??Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

I am happy to know that Navin will be proven innocent soon as Raj has got all the proofs!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Naina now wants to tell everything to Rahul aur yeh sab jald se jald khatam karna chahti hai!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile

Naina keh rahi hai ke ab uski zindagi ke saare maksad khatam ho gaye hai!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch

Naina is probably thinking of killing herself!!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked

Yeh Raj aur Naina simple cheezon ko complicated banane se kabhi baaz nahi aayenge!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Yeh Rahul ke paas dimag naam ki cheez toh hai hi nahi!!!!!Dead Dead Dead Dead

Na toh usse Raj aur Naina ki ankhon mein ek dusre ke liye pyaar nazar aata hai aur nahi Aalekh aur Huda ke hints samajh mein aa rahe hai!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Finally Navin has been proven innocent and all the culprits had been arrested including Lalaji!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap

Naina's happiness knew no bounds as her brother has got justice at last and it was because of Rajveer!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Naina is determined that now only death would keep her away from Raj!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

Raj has completed the biggest mission of his life!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Naina hugged him but he didn't reciprocate and then she thanked him!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Hug Hug Hug Hug

Atleast this time Rahul noticed the annoyance on her face!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

Yeh Rahul ko bolne ki bimaari hai kya??Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryNaina usse sab kuch batane ki koshish kar rahi thi but Rahul didn't let her speak!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Now Naina is scared of Rahul's reaction!!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyHow can Naina think that Rahul will react like Raj??Confused Confused Confused Confused

Naina ko Raj jitna pyaar karta hai utna pyaar koi nahi kar sakta!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Raj yahan se jaa raha hai and he doesn't want Naina to know ke woh kal hi jaa raha hai!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Unable to see him going all over again, Naina rushed to her room sobbing!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

Rahul finally noticed something and he managed to get Raj and Naina's photo!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

Now he has gone to Shalini who is the best person to tell him the truth!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile

Waiting for things to clear up between Raj and Naina and for them to unite forever!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed


 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 12:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princessyogitha

Awesome part Mana.....lekin tune phirse bahut ruladiya mujhe Cry  Cry  Cry Cry

The scene in the infirmary is so beautiful...bechari naina kitna time se us rahul ka wait kar rahi thi and why that rahul is so late...when no one is thinking about him that time he will definetly call to make every one feel his presence...now  when naina want him to come soon to solve the matter as early as possible he is not coming.........jab aaya to naina ko bolne ka mauka tak nahin deraha hain...utna hi nahin he is insisting naina to say that she missed him
mujhe wo scene bahut accha laga how naina rushed towards rajs room without glancing rahul when she saw raj standing  at his window
 
Raj kitna sad hain Cry  Cry  Cry...isiliye he was talking with naina like that....alekh ne sahi kaha huda ko ...saandh jaisa muh .kholne ki kya jarrorat Angry Angry  Angry....poor naina  she is so hurt....aur wo soch kya rahi hain???....kahin suscide karne ke bare main to nahin
ye rahul kaisa captain hain yaar....huda aur alekh ne itne hints diye phir bhi wo nahin samjha....idiot
 
Naveen innocent prove hogaya...n naina is so happy n she  hugged raj ...lekin raj reciprocate nahin kiya n now raj academy chodhke jaaraha hain 
 
rahul got the photo aur wo bilkul sahi insaan ke pass gaya to know some thing about the photo...chalo finally kuch to notice kiya....warna mujhe to doubt horaha tha  ki ye sach main captain hain ya nahin
 
totally superb yaar ....u described really beautifully  the pain  n the feelings of raj n naina
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 12:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suhana_dixit

Hi Manali
How r u??
 
I dont want Raj to b like dat..He is behaving like a typical old film hero...Yes I remember 1 in Sangam..Angry..He sacrificed his love for his best friend..But why is Raj in  such a sullen devdas mode??
Why r dese guys so impossible???
Naina wanted to explain something to Rahul but he was making his own stupid assumptions(guys love to assume)..Even Raj was not far behind in dis..
He saw something n believed dat he is coming in between Naina n Rahul..Stupid fellow!!
Then he gave a melodramatic speech to Naina..Who does he think he is??Poor Naina!! she was completely shattered n den he has the guts to congratulate her on her engagement..
 
This song fits in dis situation completely
"Bejaan Dil Ko
Bejaan Dil Ko
Bejaan Dil Ko Tere Ishq Ne Zinda Kiya
Phir Tere Ishq Ne Hi Is Dil Ko Tabah Kiya

Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai
Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye
To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai
Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye
To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai
Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye
To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai
Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye
To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

Ajab Hai Ishq Yaara
Pal Do Pal Ki Khushiyaan
Gam Ke Khazaane Milte Hain
Milti Hai Tanhaiyaan
Kabhi Aansoon Kabhi Aahein
Kabhi Shikve Kabhi Naalein
Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye
Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye Mujhe Din Ke Ujaalon Mein
Teri Yaadein Tadpayein
Teri Yaadein Tadpayein Raaton Ke Andheron Mein
Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye
Machal Machalke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai
Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye
To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

Agar Mile Khuda To
Poochhoonga Khudaya
Jism Mujhe Deke Mitti Ka
Sheeshay Sa Dil Kyon Banaya
Aur Us Pe Diya Fitrat
Ke Woh Karta Hai Mohabbat
Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat
Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat Us Pe De Diya Kismat
Kabhi Hai Milan Kabhi Furqat
Kabhi Hai Milan Kabhi Furqat Hai Yehi Kya Vo Mohabbat
Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat
Sisak Sisakke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai
Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye
To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai
Mujhko Saza Di pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye
To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein" 
 
 
Wat will Naina do now???
Huda n Alekh tried to drop some hints but Rahul didn't got it..Confused
Rahul finally did some gud work..He got a pic of Raj n Naina n he went to Shalini to get his answers..She is the perfect 1 in this situation..
 
Continue soon
Bye
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 12:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

superb update.loved it....

u described the raj's condition's very well. and     this  very true, koi kaise aapne pyaar ko kisi aur ke sath dekhna toh dur soch sakt ahain aur raj ko dekhna par raha hain...
aur iye rahul baat bahut jda karta hain,sunta tohnehi itna bolta kyuon hain,thori der agar chup reheth toh kia jata,naina bol sakti thi usse sab kuch raj ke baarein mein....
aur iye huda iska kuch nehi hoga, kabhi bhi kuchnehi hoga....
raj ko naina ka baat sunna chiyatha, ek baar hi sahi ,
naveen innoce prove hogaya, this is great news, but i doubt about naina's intention.kia karne ka soch rehi hain..oh
iye kiska pic paaya hain rahul  ,hope naina aur raj ka ho and soon he know about them...
anyway, total  update is superb .loved it.
jaldi update kar...mujhe next part parni hain,jaldi jaldi....
 

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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 12:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rituka7

damn cool
awesome
superb
mind blowing
update soon
 

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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 12:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sania_58

nice update
interesting part
plz continue soon
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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