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Luv happens only once(RN)-last part,pg63(14/02) (Page 4)

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Posted: 11 July 2009 at 10:09am | IP Logged
very nyc yaar...Clap
 
aur apne first fic mein hi tumne kamal ka likh hai...Clap
 
naina k emotions baht hi achhe tarik se describe kiya hai tum ne...Clap
 
every line ...each word... just perfect...yaar...Clap
 
hope ki naina aur raj bhi jaldi mil jayen...
 
waiting for d next one...
 
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Posted: 12 July 2009 at 7:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by strawberrychip

very nice update!!!
hope naina and raj meet soon...
 
thanks for informing..
 Thnx a lot for liking it dear....
Raj and Naina will meet or not is what is that this fic has...Wink
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Posted: 12 July 2009 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by guglu088

Grt update. You have described Naina's emtions very well.ClapClapClap

Hope ki Raj ki dhamakedar entry ho. Waiting for the two lovers to meet.Wink
 
Thnx for informing me.
Update the next part soon.
Bye!!!!!!!!
Thnx a lot dear....
Hmmm...ab apne Raj ki entry dhamakedaar hoti hai yaa nahi pata nahi but jaha apna Raj hota hai waha DHAMAKE hote rehte hai..!Wink
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Posted: 12 July 2009 at 7:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sumaiya wahid

Cool part. U hav portrayed very well how Raj's demise has affected Naina. I specially liked the line: She found him everywhere, but she found him nowhere. And the heartbeat line was also beautiful.

Now dat she has got her first posting letter, I hope it is gonna be sumthing gud 4 her n us as well. Pls continue soon n Thnx 4 the PM.
 Thnx a ton...Smile your appreciation means a lot...!
Yeah...Hope it's good...Don't know how many sorrows future held for her....
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Posted: 12 July 2009 at 7:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sania_58

cool update

plz continue soon
Thanks...Smile
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Posted: 12 July 2009 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prerna1

that was really good
but is it going to be a sad fic
plz continue soon
Thanks dear...Smile
Ab agar Raj nahi hai toh sab kuch sad sad hi hoga naa...
Aakhir se hi toh Naina ki khushiyaan hai...! 
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Posted: 12 July 2009 at 7:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mahak Sinha

Oye hoye first part to bahut hi changa tha jee Tongue Tongue Tongue aur tum ne jitne acche se Naina ki haalat aur us ki feelings likhi hain Cry Cry Cry Raj k jaane k baad that were awesome.Clap Clap Clap Raj ko vapas le k aayegi Naina i am sure about it.Big smile Big smile Big smile Aur Naina ne un logon ko saza bhi dila di, i am happy. Smile Smile Smile
ab jaldi se aage likho.
Thanks !!! u know this means a lot to me!! thanks 4 liking it !
Aur haan Naina ko hamare vishwaas ki zaroorat hai apna mission complete karne ke liye toh keep faith in her , bhale hi kitne bhi mod aaye..
will update soon..Smile
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Posted: 12 July 2009 at 7:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by srojaleen

very nyc yaar...Clap
 
aur apne first fic mein hi tumne kamal ka likh hai...Clap
 
naina k emotions baht hi achhe tarik se describe kiya hai tum ne...Clap
 
every line ...each word... just perfect...yaar...Clap
 
hope ki naina aur raj bhi jaldi mil jayen...
 
waiting for d next one...
 
Thanks a ton priya !!
Ur appreciation means a lot to me....coz i was really not sure how you people are gonna take this....
And likte waqt to kuch nahi but post karne ke baad aise lag raha tha shayad mujhe ek baar check karna chahiye tha coz i wasn't sure if it was apt or not...
Naina and Raj ka milna is Destiny...! Ab kab miltey hai woh meri marziWinkLOLLOL 

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