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Luv happens only once(RN)-last part,pg63(14/02) (Page 3)

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Grt update. You have described Naina's emtions very well.ClapClapClap

Hope ki Raj ki dhamakedar entry ho. Waiting for the two lovers to meet.Wink
 
Thnx for informing me.
Update the next part soon.
Bye!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 July 2009 at 8:46pm | IP Logged
Cool part. U hav portrayed very well how Raj's demise has affected Naina. I specially liked the line: She found him everywhere, but she found him nowhere. And the heartbeat line was also beautiful.

Now dat she has got her first posting letter, I hope it is gonna be sumthing gud 4 her n us as well. Pls continue soon n Thnx 4 the PM.
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cool update

plz continue soon
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Too good!!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

You have portrayed very well how Raj's death has affected Naina!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap

Tumne jaise Naina ki feelings aur uski haalat likhi hai that was awesome!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Clap Clap Clap Clap

I am happy that she has stopped calling him Rajveer Sir and shifted to Rajveer!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

The song was very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

I loved this line that she found him everywhere and she found him nowhere!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap

She felt his heartbeats in the tic-tic of the watch he had gifted her!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

Naina Raj ko wapas zaroor le aayegi I am sure of that!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

She has received her posting letter!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile SmileI am sure it somewhere where it will help her in her mission!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile


 



Edited by Shaina_b - 12 July 2009 at 6:02pm
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Posted: 11 July 2009 at 5:56am | IP Logged
that was really good
but is it going to be a sad fic
plz continue soon
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Oye hoye first part to bahut hi changa tha jee Tongue Tongue Tongue aur tum ne jitne acche se Naina ki haalat aur us ki feelings likhi hain Cry Cry Cry Raj k jaane k baad that were awesome.Clap Clap Clap Raj ko vapas le k aayegi Naina i am sure about it.Big smile Big smile Big smile Aur Naina ne un logon ko saza bhi dila di, i am happy. Smile Smile Smile
ab jaldi se aage likho.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 11 July 2009 at 6:07am
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Posted: 11 July 2009 at 6:09am | IP Logged
are haan mai to batana hi bhool gayi ki prologue kaafi accha tha story ka.

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