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Where did I go wrong?KaSh Mini - COMPLETE (Page 7)

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Posted: 07 July 2009 at 7:04pm | IP Logged
LOLLOL ive edited ma comment Wink

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Posted: 07 July 2009 at 8:46pm | IP Logged
hey really interesting concept...love the first chapter.....really interesting and cant wait to read more..so pm me whenever u update....keep up the great work..
HeartMONA

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Posted: 07 July 2009 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
hey really nice update do pm me if u can thanx- misha =]

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Posted: 07 July 2009 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
hii steffi!
dis is sanjana.....remember me??
though i wasn't able to read ur first ff......but i am surely not giving dis a miss at least.....!!
just caught up wid dis now.....and i must say its just out of the world....!!
i loved loads....too gud!!
very well written....don't be so nervous.....d story is fantatic and the introduction was mindblowing!
dis is going to be an awesome ff.....and i have full hope on u to make dis a big success.....!!
now coming back to the intro-
initially it was quite confusing....but den after a while i was able to understand everything clearly....
so dis means ur ff is going to switch between the flashback and the present....hmm..interesting!
so its started wid AR suhaagraat....
and den we went into the present....where riddhima was feeding the baby wid d bottle....and den her conversation wid neha, her aunt..it was quite confusing..perhaps because we need to know what all happened in the past...and den we cn link it well wid d present.....!
and den d conversation of armaan and his mum....she wants her son to get married to a girl...and armaan is reluctant...and he realizes dat she should have trusted riddhima.....and den he did something wrong dat she left him.....and now he wants her back...aww!! i rily want to know what had happened in the past..!!
d title is quite captivating...and now i guess i am hooked to dis ff.....!!
i rily want to read more.....!
eagerly waiting for the next part.....!!
ur doing a gr8 job!
keep it up!!
 
and plzz add me to ur pm list.....!!
and update asap!!
 
-love sanjana

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Posted: 08 July 2009 at 12:44am | IP Logged

Can you please continue hon?

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Posted: 08 July 2009 at 1:41am | IP Logged
Hey Steff!!
                        That was a awesome first part!!! Loved it!! eagerly waiting to see how the story unfolds...Do continue soon dear!!! pls add me to ur pm list...
  luv yaHug

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Posted: 08 July 2009 at 1:48am | IP Logged
I'm realy So sorrry ... I'm increasng your work load ... i.e., of sending me PM's whenever you update ....I'ts really intresting .... all- saas bahu drama's ... I'm being addicted to IF !! Gawwwd .... Help me ... Anyways do PM me when you update !!

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Posted: 08 July 2009 at 2:22am | IP Logged
beautiful work dear....simply loved it.....i loved the line "bless her with all that she has lost, Atleast for Ahana, she's too young to loose everything"....its beautiful dear....plssss whenever u update PM me dear....thanks in advance

 

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