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TUJHE PE DIL QURBAN:Epilogue PG:107 (Page 5)

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Posted: 10 July 2009 at 10:40am | IP Logged
It is a beautiful sunny day. Kashish was busy preparing breakfast 4 herself & her father. They were the only 2 people living in the house. Also she was getting late 4 her job interview.

KASHISH: Papa plz hurry up. I am getting late.

Prof: coming beta. R u ready.

KASHISH: I will be.

Prof: best of luck 4 the interview.

KASHISH: thanks papa.

 After having the breakfast Kashish leaves 4 her interview. Her interview doesn't turn out well so she heads back home. On her way she remembers that she has to draw out some money from the bank 4 paying certain bills. She never had problem 4 money. When her brother had died she had been compensated for it by the company he was working 4 ? at least the world thought that.


At the bank:

Managers(Man) cabin:

Man: sir r u sure it is him. A mean it will not be good 4 our reputation if the info is false.

Voice: v would not be here if v had any doubt about it. Let my men do the job.

He went out side to look what was happening.

(Thinking): 2 men outside? 2 at the cash counter?. Cameras everywhere? new faces every where?. Some even beautiful?. I think so he will not escape from me.

He goes to the girl at the counter.

Voice: is everything alright here?

Girl: yes sir.

Guy: if u need any help just tell me. I am always there 4 hot chicks like u.

Girl: yes sir.


ANGAD: I was not flirting just helping her out. U know she is a new recruit Kripa.

KRIPA: I know u very well Angad.

ANGAD: that I know. But quit it now other wise every1 will know what v r up to.

KRIPA: no 1 is here beside this is a private line so drop it.

ANGAD: as u say love.

KRIPA: I will keep u informed. I am in the van outside.

ANGAD: I will keep a watch inside.

At this point Kashish reached the entrance of  the bank. As she was about to enter an old man bumped into her & she fell down. With out caring 4 her he went inside.

K (thinking):  how rude. He seems too strong 4 a old man. So be it. I better make it fast.

She went in as usual & began talking to the cashier.

KASHISH:  there seem too many new faces today.

Cashier: yes new recruits.

She saw the old man who had bumped into her go to the managers cabin.

Old Man: I want as access to my locker but ur people r not allowing me inside. May I ask y?

Manager(in his mind): because the cbi r fixing a camera there. (Loudly) sorry 4 the inconvenience sir but some work is going on there it will be done in a few min. u will have to wait 4 sometime sir.

At this time Kashish entered the cabin.

KASHISH: how rude of u Mr. u made me fall down & u didn't even apologize to me.

Old Man: u should be careful when u walk child. See when u r walking.

KASHISH: I was. U were the 1 to be a problem.

In order to avenge the fall she pushed him. He was near the table, he tipped over the chair & fell.

During this period lot of commotion had aroused & Angad also entered the cabin.

When the old man fell the gun hidden in his bag came in to view. Angad was quick to notice this. He quickly removed his gun out & signaled his men to tell the people to evacuate the bank. But before this the old man caught hold of Kashish & put her on gun point. Kashish was totally shocked at this development.

Old Man: no body moves. Give me a safe passage & nobody will get hurt.

ANGAD: let her go & I will keep u alive.

Old Man: LET HER GO? r u joking? She is the ticket 4 my safe passage.

ANGAD: leave her.

Old Man: no way. Get me 1 crore from the locker then I will think about it.

ANGAD: ok.

Angad signals his men to follow. They bring in fake currencies & give it to old man. He asks Kashish to take the money & they proceed to the entrance.

At this time Kashish decides to try her skills against him. She elbows him strongly & ducks to safety. This gives the cop a chance to shoot him. He gets shot in the hand but runs away in the waiting car.

The girls give Kashish a seat & water to drink.

ANGAD: r u ok?

KASHISH: I think so?

ANGAD: good. Now ans my question.

KASHISH: what questions?

ANGAD: firstly r u mad?


ANGAD: yes because only a mad girl will do such a thing.

KASHISH: firstly I am not mad. Second thing who r u to tell me all this?

ANGAD: I am a cop & was here to catch this guy who has escaped because of u.

KASHISH: the u r wrong. I didn't help him.

ANGAD: he has a record not to leave his victims. Then how come u have survived.

KASHISH: because I am a black belt & have been trained to protect myself from such people.

Saying this she left the place.

She didn't tell about this incidence to any 1. She was also surprised that there was nothing about it in the news paper or even T.V.

hey guys,

so here's the next part...hope u enjoy it...

do leave ur comments.



Edited by sujalangad_rock - 22 July 2009 at 4:15am

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MS-meghasharma IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 July 2009 at 10:58am | IP Logged
nice concept
waitin for sujal's and kripa's entry
unknowndesires. IF-Stunnerz

BollyCurry Buzzer
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Posted: 10 July 2009 at 11:00am | IP Logged
Hey lovely part!! Waitin for Kripas entry! Do continue soon! Thnks for the PM!
shayona18 Groupbie

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Posted: 10 July 2009 at 11:28am | IP Logged
awesome part..............
Thanks for the pm.........
waiting for Sujal and Kripa's entry....................
togepe30 IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 31409

Posted: 10 July 2009 at 11:30am | IP Logged
I hope Kashish is not working against the police in order to avenge her brother's death .....I hope she is not under sum misunderstanding !!
Missed Sujal in the part !!
Lovely part.....Cant wait to
Continue soon !!
spvd IF-Addictz

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Posts: 51615

Posted: 10 July 2009 at 11:31am | IP Logged
hey nice start..............but in the beginning angad said kripa when he was flirting with the gal working there but it seems like its kashish....check that dear................or am i wrong? cont soon...........

Edited by spvd - 10 July 2009 at 11:32am
Supernatural_10 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 10 July 2009 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Amazing Part
Kashish is surely brave buh da old man escaped oh well doesnt mata
Cont Soon
j44a IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 2760

Posted: 10 July 2009 at 8:07pm | IP Logged

Nice start Adi....

Thanks foa the pm...
Continue soon.. Waitign foa otherz entry !!

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