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Posted: 08 July 2009 at 8:05pm | IP Logged
hey Esha....love ur post yaar really gud...it was really great....more gud thn i expected....wow really gud job LUV UR FF>>>IT WAS AWESOME....BRILIANT...luv ur work...keep it up...n plz keep PM me whenever u update ur next part....n yeah just cant wait for next part...ClapClapWink
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Posted: 08 July 2009 at 8:37pm | IP Logged
it is so amazingg
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Posted: 08 July 2009 at 8:44pm | IP Logged
nice part continue soon
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Posted: 08 July 2009 at 8:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by frndship_trust

Originally posted by angelwingz04

Originally posted by -Esha_423-

Originally posted by angelwingz04

heyyy i am a twilighter tooo ... i am in complete love wid dat book !! lol
and nice storyline.. plz continue soon !!
BTW i am from US too ... =)
addme on ur pm list and
TC :)

oohh, u like twilight too, and u live in us?!?!..... common
thanks, and ill add u to the pm list!

yep i am in US ... lmfaoo yeahhh pretty much common  WinkWink
well just cant for november 20.. if u kw wat i mean lol WinkBig smileEmbarrassed







lolz yeah i knw wat u mean...yaar i love twilight too....its ROCKING....yeah i cant wait to watch next movie NEW MOON....november 20...wow its far away still 4 months to go...just cant wait.....



yeahh hey u r in US too ?? niceeee lolzz and i kw its like 4 moths awayyy i hope this time they din cut all da scenes like they did in twilight ... caz i thought the book was way better than moviee... hehehehe Embarrassed
and  dis tie i am kinda gonna miss edward thou ... but oh well Jacob  lukss sooo HOT in da trailer ... lol but serioulsy he luks sooo cutee now .. Smile wat abt u ?? who do u like ??? well i love both of them <33 hehe and wats ur name ???
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Posted: 08 July 2009 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
Esha Jacob Black? You're going to have to fight me for him. *grins*

As for the part, it was awesome. Very interesting. One thing though, could you colour different people's dialogues in different colours? Because I got a bit confused over whose dialogue was whose for some bits. Just a suggestion. The story is going off to a great start, just the formatting you may want to change a bit?

Sorry for the comment, you may not like the frankness, but it'd be easier on your readers? Because you've got a captivating style of writing.

Love,
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Posted: 08 July 2009 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
thats so cool
jst loved the intro !!!...too good
thanx for pm
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