Esha Jacob Black? You're going to have to fight me for him. *grins* Oh no, no, no, we've been married for ever! though we could share half n half, but i get full taylor, lolz😆
As for the part, it was awesome. Very
interesting. One thing though, could you colour different people's
dialogues in different colours? Because I got a bit confused over whose
dialogue was whose for some bits. Just a suggestion. The story is going
off to a great start, just the formatting you may want to change a bit?
Thanks, oh, and i was thinking of colouring each people's diaologue in a different colour. Ill do it from next time!
Thankyou!
Sorry for the comment, you may not like the
frankness, but it'd be easier on your readers? Because you've got a
captivating style of writing.
No, dont be sorry, i like comments like this, helps me write better, in a way. Thanks a lot!
Love, Radz
love
Esha Jacob Black
Esha Taylor Lautner