FF: l Jaane Dil Mein Kab Se Hai Tu l Chapter1page6 - Page 7

Posted: 14 years ago
It's really very good...continue soon....
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by Anhdara13


Esha Jacob Black? You're going to have to fight me for him. *grins*
Oh no, no, no, we've been married for ever! though we could share half  n half, but i get full taylor, lolz😆

As for the part, it was awesome. Very interesting. One thing though, could you colour different people's dialogues in different colours? Because I got a bit confused over whose dialogue was whose for some bits. Just a suggestion. The story is going off to a great start, just the formatting you may want to change a bit?

Thanks, oh, and i was thinking of colouring each people's diaologue in a different colour. Ill do it from next time!
Thankyou!


Sorry for the comment, you may not like the frankness, but it'd be easier on your readers? Because you've got a captivating style of writing.
No, dont be sorry,  i like comments like this, helps me write better, in a way. Thanks a lot!

Love,
Radz
love
Esha Jacob Black
Esha Taylor Lautner

Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by ruchimayur


thats so cool
jst loved the intro !!!...too good
thanx for pm

thanks a lot!
glad u liked it!
and no prob for the PM
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by sweety4jaan


it was amazing dear! loved it! i must ur writing skill is really really good!

loved ur update! it was awesome!

thanks!
 aww, glad u like my writing skills, i think it sucks😆
thanks a lot!
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by tehzeeb25


amazing part yaar . nicely ritten . update next part sooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzz

thanks so much!
ill try my best to update the next part soon!
thanks again!
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by Lipsa_mjht


Hey esha
luved your story especially that convo beween sam n gunji
thnks for the pm

Hey!
Thanks dear, and glad u liked the convo !
And np for the PM!
-Love Esha😳
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by _Monu_


HEY ESHA!!
WAS AMAZING PART!!
JUST LOVED IT!!
GREAT JOB U DID!!
CONT SOON PLS
TAKE UR TIME
SEE YAA
LOVE UUU
*hugs*

hey!
aww thanks a lot!
glad u liked it!
🤗
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by srish.mayank


amazing!!!!!!! loved it!

thanks so much!!!
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by zumra03


It's really very good...continue soon....

thanks a lot Zumra!!
Posted: 14 years ago
omg it's really good.... i could see the whole scene in my head!! loved it...pls update soon :)

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