I never got much of a chance to interact with you. I did comment on one of your parts in thread #2 , atleast thats wat i believe and think, my memory sometimes ditches me
. like amir's in ghajini ..but more on daily basis
readers always complain that sometimes they never get to see reply to their comments ,certianly not pointing to you , i think i wud make for the worst reader and writer. I never get chance to reply to comments and then feeling embarrased to even update ..thinking abt my readers ... u know the filmsy type" kis mooh se update karu "
. Im a unique example of a reader who cudnt make it to read the reply by the writer .
To begin with , Gosh im so poor with my rhetorics
, ( i already beginned
).... 10 e^1000 thanks to you and writers like you who introduce me to english literature . In technical terms as per my proffessor , im not litterate enough
..... with absence of english literature from my life .. if only you and NJ werent there to try and put some of it to my good for nothing head
And what made me to comment after this long ? I have an assignment due tonite for which im supposed to write a narrative essay. And the first thought that struck my mind was you and this ff ( dont worry i wont ask u to write it for me
, im not mean
) . Your writings are going to be such a great help for me . the good part in me told me to atleast thank you for that, thats the least i can do
And yes i feel so proud to be commenting second time , just coz i beat Lubna in that matters
, though she was the one to suggest this ff to me .
Coming to serve the real purpose of this post, i wil first point out what i didnt like today .
I didnt like the footnote
, that u think we wudnt like the part .
I loved the part and with the sensibility ridhima handled the situation half of the credit goes to anjali for not letting her tell the truth.
I would see that from a positive perspective . Anjali coming down to ridhima to tell her fears rather than turning to her good friends , atul or ankit or armaan. I felt in her words her sense of understanding and realization of the fact that ridhima is a sensible person to understand her feeling without mocking them. And certainly that she is the one who needs to know and not make it a source of entertainment for others or a talk of the group.
Ridhima with her sensibility and maturity and sorted head of whats her priorities and relations, she didnt consider to share the feel of guilt with rahul , may be she knew he wud side her rather than giving an unbiased opinion.
And loved the last part, where they exchanged their ffears indirectly and provided the assurance asked by th time and situation with maturity and sense . And oh my God what an understanding partner , when he said he will wiat till she trusts him enuff to tell him the truth . which on usual situations some ppl might lose their trust on other or get irritated when something that fearing is not shared.
Truly Said " Some things are better unsaid . "
Great work once again .
Thanks for this part and rest of the 2 threads .
Edited by KehanT - 05 July 2009 at 5:46pm