My Mayur FF..Updtd Chp 12 Pg 42 - Page 3

Posted: 14 years ago
oh wow!!!!!!!!!!!!......this part ws sooooo awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....nupsi is so caing
Posted: 14 years ago
very nice dear continue as soon as possible.waiting eagerly for the next part.
Posted: 14 years ago
ohh wow...i'm kept smiling throughout reading it!!
awwww...they still love each other sooo much even after 2 years of marriage!
the way he was trying to manao her....complimenting her designing of the sherwani and being all romantic....!
and nupur....so very caring! i could just imagine it....it was lovely!!
but uffff...you ended at that moment!!
 
Another scene i want to mention was the mayank and gunjan one...it was so adorable!! i loved how you showed their relationship!!
great part! update soon!
thanks for the PM...
Edited by hgrhr - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago

Hey it was tooo good!! PM me when you write the next part :)

Posted: 14 years ago
hey yaar....it was so briliant...awesome....really gud...touchy...yaar i have no more words to describe it..i was imagining it while reading....damn yaar it was so sweet n cute...loved it cant wait for the next 1....plz pm me when u update next part....cant wait to read it...
Posted: 14 years ago
IT WAS VERY NICE. PLZZZZ UPDATE SOON.N PM ME. IT IS VERY GOOD TO IMAGINE MAYUR GOT MARRIED N ARGUING LIKE HUSBAND -WIFE. PLZZZZZ UPDATE SOON.
Posted: 14 years ago
hey jaya i really like the concept...............and ur ff plzz pm me when u ll update it
Posted: 14 years ago
plz continue! it was awesome update! plz pm me when u update!
Posted: 14 years ago
Awesomeeeeeeeeee too gudd
IT WAS SOOO CUTEEEEEEEEE
PLZ PM ME DA UPDATES
AND PLZ PLZ PLZ CONTINUE SOON !!!
? IT !!! <33
tc
Posted: 14 years ago
omg soooooooooo cute!! waiting anxiously for the next part....

i love it cuz it's so realistic.... add me to ur pm list :)

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