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Posted: 09 July 2009 at 7:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by guglu088

Absolutely wonderful start. And especially if the fic is based on KMA then it gets more closer to the heart. Really lovely.SmileSmileSmileThanxxx guglu 
 
The way you have described the emotions of Raj and Naina is simply superb. ClapThanxxx again
 
Mai toh saat janmon me bhi aisa description nahi de paungi.Wink. That's why you are the writer.ClapClapClapnahhh...itni acche se main nahin likh pati hun yaar...!!! yahan toh aur bhi kai RN fics k writers hain...un k samne toh meri koi aukat hi nahin hai...
 
What is more you know how to hold the readers attention. You have stopped it at the most interesting point. arre yaar aisa nahin karungi toh mera fic koun padega aur galiyan koun dega...!!!LOL
 
I'm looking forward for the next part and also for RN meeting. SmilePlease continue soon. main bhi wait kar rahi hun RN k meeting ka...LOL
 
And don't you drop a bombshell on us saying that you too dont want to continue with the fanfic and so have planned to stop midway. It hurts.Ouchsahi kaha...par...Confused!!! mujhe bhi nahin pata hai ki main apne fics ko kahan tak likh payungi...Cry!!! kyoun ki mujhe bhi nahin pata hai ki main kab tak IF me rahungi...Ouch
Waiting eagrly for the next part. Plzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon.SmileSmileSmile


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10 th July baht hi spl day hai...!!! Kyoun...??? Kyoun ki kal hai LRL ki anniversary...!!! 10th of july 2006 ko yeh show suru hua tha...!!! Jise hum sab ne baht hi mamuli show samjha tha...!!! Par jo aage chal kar hum sab ki zindagi me ek ahem jagah bana gaya...hamesha hamesha k liye...!!!

 
Aaj ka ud spl hai...hum sab k fav show LRL k liye...!!! LRL ...jo sirf Rajveer aur Naina ki nahin balki baht sare charachters k liye bhi ahem tha...aur jo ki hum sab k fav bhi the...!!! Jaise...Alekh,Neelu, Huda,Yudi,Ali aur mobile ki dukaan Pooja , Shalini ma'am, Sorry ji...(Suri ji), aur come again-Lolita maam... Gunny...aise hi bat sare kirdaar...jo ki hum sab k liye baht aham ban gaye the...!!!
 
Yeh ud hum sab k fav LRL team k liye......
 
                                           
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Tamil nadu......
 
Chennai......
 
Lft Amardeep Huda...(Played by Vikash Mankatla)...
 
Present Mental Strength......
 
Vo apne batch-mate Naina se baht pyar karta tha...aur sayad abhi bhi...??? Lekin use dhakka tab laga...jab Naina ne us k samne confess kiya ki voh Capt Rajveer se pyar karti hai.
 
Capt Rajveer k gayab ho jane k baad bhi Huda ne Naina ki ankhon me bas apne mentor Capt Rajveer k liye hi pyar dekhi...be-intahaan...be-panah mohabbat...dekhi...ek naa khatam honewali tadap dekhi...!!!
 
Huda achhi tarh se samajh chuka tha ki Naina use na kabhi pyar karti hai aur sayad na hi kabhi kar payegi...!!! Lekin voh apni dosti khona nahin chahta tha...!!!
 
Aaj voh naina k best frnds me se ek hai. Har week vo kam se kam ek baar naina ko phone kar k use itne sadhe hue jokes sunata hai ki Naina irritate ho kar akhir apna phone cut kar hi leti hai.
 
Lekin Huda janta hai ki phone cut kar ne k baad bhi Naina us k jokes par jarur hassi hogi...!!!
 
Present Situation......
 
Lt Huda subah 4 baje uthe jogging karne k liye...!!! Ek ghante tak daud ne k baad voh jab footbal ground k paas pahunche...toh unhe dikhai di ek khubsurat si ladki...jo suraj ko dekh kar yoga kar rahi thi.
 
Apne Lt Huda ne dil hi dil me socha ki koi guest hogi...!!! Vaise bhi aaj kal kafi reporters aa rahe hain...army life k upar articles likhne k liye...yeh bhi unhi me se ek hogi. Toh Lf Huda ne apne hathon se apne baalon ko thoda sawara...aur chal pade...apne naye mission par...jise ki hum saaf tarik se yeh kah sakte hain ki 'line marna'...
 
Lt Huda sidhe ja kar khade ho gaye us ladki k samne...voh ladki hairani se dekhne lagi...Lt Huda ko...!!!
 
Lt Huda:- "Hello ji... myself...Lt Amardeep Huda...aur aap k liye sirf Huda...!!! Meri mummy ji kahnti hai ki 'jai jawan toh jai kisaan'...!!! Main bhi pahle ek kisan hi tha...lekin apni mummy ji ka sapna pura karne k liyi fauji ban gaya...!!! Last week jo dedh darzan terrorist mare gaye the na...voh meri wajah se thi...!!! Sara plan...mera tha...jis ki wajah se voh sare maare gaye...!!!"
 
Dat lady:- "Lekin maine toh suna tha ki use plan kisi lady army officer Capt Pallavi Subhas ne banaya tha...!!!"
 
Huda:- "Haan...kaam hum sab karte hain...aur credits le jate hain hamare seniors...!!! Ab is me hum kya kar sakte hain...!!! Vaise aap ko yahan par mujh se jyada behtar banda nahin milega...army life k bare me detail batane  k liye...!!! Toh...aaj shaam ko aap kya kar rahi hain...???"
 
Dat lady:- "Hmmm....aaj sham toh main busy hun...!!! Meeting hai meri apne seniors k sath...!!! News mili hai ki LTTE k log hamare seema me ghusne wale hain...toh is par ek meeting honewali hai...taki hum apna next plan bana sakain...!!! Hiiiii....i m Capt. Pallavi Subhash..."
 
Goa......
 
Lt Yaduvansh Sahani aka Yudi (played by Kunal kapoor)
 
Present mental strength......
 
Ek yakeen...!!! Jo Lt Yudi apne ander paida karna chahte the...jo voh apne parents k dil me paida karna chahte the...ek daar jise vih apne dil se hamnesha k liye bhulna chahte the...ki voh jo hain sirf apne dad ki wajah se...!!! Aaj log un k dad ko Lt Yudi k father k hisaab se bhi jante hain...jis baat se Lt Yudi baht khus hote hain...!!!
 
Aaj voh apne upar grav mehsus karta hai...aaj us k parents us k bare me dushre logon se shaan se baat karte hain...grav mehsus karte hain ki un ka beta ek sipahi hai...jo apne haar ek duty ko baht hi imandaari se pura karta hai.
 
Present Situation......
 
4:00 a.m
 
Lt sahani... uthe apni jogging k liye...!!! Jogging karte hue pahunche... beach me...!!! Samandar subah subah baht shant nazar aa raha tha...!!!
 
Lt Sahani...samander k baht kareeb khade the......unhe yaad aaya...ek baar Doc Shalini ne kaha tha......
 
"Tumhe pata hai...yudi...mujhe samander baht pasand hai. Us ka neela rang...us ki bhaari awaz...us k lahar...!!!"
 
Lt Sahani...ko yaad aaya...un dono ka voh akhiri mulakaat...!!! Doc Shalini ne kaha tha ki voh kabhi bhi yudi ko bhul nahin payengi...!!!!
 
Vo last hug...jab voh Doc Shalini se bichadne k ghum ko apni bahon me chupate hua vahaan se chala aaya tha...ta ki voh Doc Shalini k ankhon me dekh kar kahin apne anshunyon ko bahne se na rok paye....
 
Tabhi achanak se ek badi si lahar aayi aur Lt Yudi ko bhiga kar chali gayi...!!! Lt Yudi ko us  baat ka dubara ehsaas hua...jaise Doc Shalini ne use phir se hug kiya ho...!!!
 
Lt Yudi:- " I really luv u......Shalini ma'am...!!!"
 
Aasaam......
 
Present mental strength......
 
Lt Ali Baig...aka...Usool bhai for his batch-mate...par Lt Pooja k liye 'unromantic ring tone'...Played by Harshad Chopra......
 
Lt Ali Baig...!!! Aaj voh army k ek pfficer hain. aaj voh apne abbu aur dada jaan ki khwahishon ko pura kar chuke hain. Jab bhi voh apne ghar aate hain...toh un ki ammi baar baar un ki balayain leti rahti hain. Grav se un k abbu ka seena chauda ho jata hai. Un ki bahenain apne bhai k bare me aas-padosh me baatain karti rahti hain.
 
Present Situation......
 
4:00 a.m
 
Lt Ali baig ...Pooja k baht kareeb the. bed par gulab k phulon k pankhudiyan bikhri hui thi...!!! Pooja ne Ali ko apne itne kareeb dekh kar apni ankhen band kar di...ali aage badha...!!! Aaj koi rok tok nahin tha...kyoun ki Pooja aaj un ki Dulhan thi...bas voh Pooja ko kiss karne hi wale the ki...ek zor se awaz aayi...!!! Voh daar kar chaunke...toh un balanced ho kar zammen par gire...!!!
 
Ab ja kar unhe hosh aaya k...yeh awaz alaram ki thi...jise ki unhone lagaya hua tha. Unhe abhi jogging k liye jana hai.
 
Lt Ali baig ne khud se kaha:- "aaj tak thik se hum pooja se yeh nahin kah paye hain ki hum un se kitna pyar karte hain...par haan...roz raat ko un k kareeb jane ka sapne jarur dekh lete hain...!!!"
 
West Bengal......
 
Lt Pooja Ghai...aka...mobile ki dukaan...played by Ghazal Rai...
 
Present mental strength......
 
Aaj Lt Pooja Ghai ka dil sirf aur sirf dhadkta hai Lt Ali Baig k liye..!!! Rohit k bare me jab bhi unhe yaad aata hai toh...voh apni pasand par sahrmindagi mehsus karti hain. Lekin Rohit ko le kar ek baat se voh khush hoti hain ki usi k bahane se hi sahi voh K.M.A me aayi aur use Ali jaisa pyar karnewala mila...Naina jaisi best frnd mili...Huda, Alekh, Yudi jaise dost mile...Capt Rajveer jaise teacher mile...jinhe voh kabhi bhi nahin bhulk sakti.
 
Lekin aaj voh khus hai...khush kyoun na ho......us ki engagement ho chuki hai Lt Ali k sath. Lekin shaadi k liye abhi waqt hai. Ali ne us se req ki thi ki jab tak us ki ek behen ki shaadi na ho jaye tab tak voh dono shaadi nahin karenge...!!! Aur is baat se Pooja khusi khusi raaji ho gayi...!!!
 
Present situation......
 
Alaram ki tez awaz se chidh kar uthi Lt Pooja Ghai...!!! Bad-bad karte hue alaram ko zor se band kiya aur kaha:- "Hai...rabbaa...is muyaain alaram ko bhi abhi hi bajna tha...!!! Main apne ranjha k sath kitne naye romantic ringtone share kar rahi thi...aur yeh muyaan abhi baj gaya...!!! Mere aur Ali k char bachhe...kinne sone lag rahe the...!!! Ek ka naam tha...Nokia... dushra Motorola...tishra Samshung...aur chautha Sony Erricssion baas bhag kar meri goad me aa hi raha tha ki yeh muyaan alaram baj gaya...mera sara signal zam karwa diya...!!!
 
Vishakhapatnam......
 
Lt Alekh Sharma...aka...Kaidi for his frnds...(played by Arjun Bijlani)
 
Present mental strength......
 
Neelu k bacche ko naam dene k liye us ne Neelu se shaadi toh kar li thi...par dono hi kabhi khush nahin rah paye. Neelu hamesha yahi sochti rahi ki us ne Alekh k zindagi me sirf ek sacrifice ban kar aayi hai...!!! Jab ki Alekh us se dil se pyar karta tha...!!! Is baat ko aaj tak Neelu kabhi samajh hi nahin payi...!!! Tension me rahne ki wajah se Neelu ka mis-carrage ho gay...!!! Us k baad voh aur bhi jyada badal gayi...!!! Baht kam bolti thi...aur jab bhi jarurat padti thi tabhi bolti thi...!!! Alekh ne use baht samjhane ki koshish ki...par voh use badal nahin paya...!!!
 
Present situation......
 
4:00 am
 
Alekh apne bed se utha...taiyar hua...jogging k liye...!!! Neelu k paas aa kar dekha toh voh so rahi thi...!!! Usne blanket se achhe se wrap kiya Neelu ko aur us k fore head ko kiss kar k chala gaya...jogging karne k liye...!!!
 
Neelu ne apni ankhen kholi...us k ankhon me anshun...saaf saaf jhalak rahe the...!!!
 
Sikkim.......
 
Lt Naina Singh Ahaluwalia......aka...Naina Ahh Singh for her Rajveer sir...Phulan for Huda...aur sirf Naina...Ali, Alekh, Pooja k liye...!!! (Played be ME....heLOL he LOLhe.LOL..ab is charachter ka bhi naam batana padega kya...???)
 
Naina:- "Haar baar mujhe hi kyoun khona padta hai...??? Har baar main hi kypoun looser banti hun...??? Haar baar koi mera apna hi kyoun kho jata hai...???"
 
Naina us pahadi k upar baithi hui thi...voh apne hathon se apne chehre ko chupa kar rone lagi......
 
Koi piche se us k kandhon par hath rakha...!!! Naina ne turn kar k dekha......
 
Naina ne hairani se kaha:- "Sir...aap...???"
 
Dat person:- "Hmmm......!!! Tumhe itni subah subah camp se bahar aate hue dekha toh tumhare piche chala aaya...!!! Socha tha ki agar rashte me koi tumhe chedega...toh main hero ban kar tumhari help karunga...!!! Par afssos...aisa kuch bhi nahin hua...!!!"
 
Itna kah kar Capt Gunraj Randhawa ne apni hanky nukal kar Naina ko diya...!!! Naina ne apne anshun pooche...aur thoda mushkurai...Capt Ghunny ki baat sun kar...!!!
 
Naina:- "Aap sabhi ladkiyoun se aise hi baat karte hain kya...???"
 
Capt Ghunny:- "Nahin sab se toh nahin...!!! Jin se main personnaly impress hota hun...un se jarur aise baat kar leta hun...!!!"
 
Naina aur Ghunny sath me hassne lage.....
 
Ghunny:- "Naina...yeh naam tumhe bilkul suit karta hai...!!! Pata hai kyoun...??? Kyoun ki tumhari ankhen bayaan kar deti hai ki tum kab khus hoti ho aur kab dukhi...!!! Tumhari ankhon me ek bishwas hai har halat me ladne k liye...!!!"
 
Naina:- "Mera naam bhaiya ne diya tha. Voh bhi hamesha mujh se yahi kaha karte the...jab bhi main xams k baad apne result ko le kar tensed ho jati thi toh...!!! Par abhi......
 
Ghunny:- "Abhi bhi tum akeli nahin ho Naina...!!! Koi hai jo hamesha tumhara sath dega ek bhai ban kar hamesha tumhare piche khada rahega."
 
Naina k ankhon me anshun jhilmila gaye......
 
Ghunny ne mushkurate hue kaha:- "Lekin ek sharat hai...!!! Jab bhi hum dono akele ho na...toh tum mujhe bhai bula lena...!!! Par sab k samne nahin...!!! Arre...reputation ka sawal hai yaar...!!!"
 
Naina hassi zor se......
 
Ali, Pooja, Alekh, Huda, Ghunny,Yudi aur Naina...sabhi ka transfore ho gaya hai J&K me...!!! Kishmat phir se sabhi ko sath mila rahi hai...dekhna yeh hai ki aage kya likha hua hai phir se in sab ki zindagi me...!!!
 
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New Dellhi......
 
Sahar ka ek baht hi purana ilaka......
 
Ek gande se basti k ek ghar me ek aadmi khada hua tha...!!! Us k samne ek 20-21 saal ki ladki zammen par padi hui thi...!!! Us ladki k chehre par khun laga hua tha...!!! Sayad abhi abhi kisi ne use baht buri tarah se mara tha...!!!
 
Voh aadmi:- "Toh tu gaddari karegi hum se...??? Army walon k sath mil kar apne parivaar ka badla legi hum sab se...??? Jaise hi tere bhai aur tere abbu ammi ko mara tha na...us se bhayanak maut milegi tujhe... samjhi...!!!"
 
Us aadmi ka pair utha us ladki par...phir se maarne k liye...!!! Tabhi piche se kisi ne ek zor se laat mari us k pairon par...!!! Us aadmi ko laga..jaise us ka pura pair hi tut gaya hai...!!! Us ne turn kiya... thoda andhera tha...isiliye us ajnabi ka chehra thik se dikhai nahin de raha tha...!!!
 
uU ajnabi k chehre par ek mushkurahat aayi...!!! Us ne us aadmi k gardaan par hath rakha...aur khinch kar le gaya ...us ladki ki taraf...!!! jo zameen se uthne ki koshish kar rahi thi...!!!
 
Us ajnabi ne apna hath badhaya us ladki ki taraf...us ladki ne us ajnabi ka hath pahkad kar khadi hui...use abhi bhi taklif ho rahi thi...!!! Apne dupaate se us ne pahle apna chehre se khun saaf kiya...!!! Phir thuka us aadmi k chehre par...kaha:- "Jeet hamesha sachhai k sath dene walon ki hoti hai...!!!"
 
Tabhi us ka ek aur aadmi aa kar us ladki k saar par gun rakh diya...aur kaha:- "Lekin yahan par jeet humari hogi...!!! Aur haar tum sab ki... tumhare sarkaar ki...tumhare desh ki...!!!"
 
Voh ajnabi :- "Ladki ko chod do...!!!"
 
Voh aadmi:- "Pahle...mere bhai ko chod...
 
Us ajnabi ne us aadmi ko chod diya...toh dushri taraf se voh aadmi us ladki ko apne kareeb aur khinch raha tha...!!! Us ajnabi k ankhon me gussa saaf nazar aa raha tha...!!!
 
Us ajnabi ne achanak side mara us aadmi ko jise us ne pakad rakha tha...!!! Voh aadmi gira us k bhai k upar...!!! Dushre aadmi k gun se goli chali...!!! Us se pahle us ajnabi ne us ladki ko khinch kar apni bahon me le aaya ...!!! Goli chali aur lagi us pahle aadmi k saar par...!!!
 
Us ajnabi achanak hamla kar diya aur us k hathon se voh gun cheen li...!!! Aur mushkurate hue us gun ko us ladki ko dete hue kaha:- "Naaz...tera ek muzrim tere samne pada hua hai...!!! Saza de is ko...!!!!"
 
Naaz k hath kaamp rahe the...ankhon se anshun bah rahe the...pahli baar us ne gun pakda tha ...aur pahli baar voh kisi ko marne ja rahi thi...!!!
 
Voh ajnabi:- "Tere hath kyoun kaamp rahe hain Naaz...!!! Maj Rajveer Singh Sekhawat ki behan hai tu...!!! Daar mat goli maar...!!!"
 
Naaz:- "Bhaiya...main nahin kar payungi...!!!"
 
Rajveer:- "Tu kar payegi...!!! Bhul mat ki yeh unhi me se ek hai jis ki wajah se aaj teri yeh halat hai...!!!"
 
Bahar army jeeps aane ki awaz aa rahi thi...!!!
 
Rajveer:- "Jaldi kar Naaz...!!!"
 
Naaz rote hue kahne lagi:- "Mujh se nahin hoga...!!!"
 
Rajveer ne use turn kar k apne seene se laga liya...!!! Voh ladki Rajveer ko hug kar k ro rahi thi...!!!
 
Rajveer ne apne gun ko us aadmi k upar point kiya...!!!!
 
Do goli chalne ki awaz aayi aur us ghar me andhera chaa gaya......
 
End of dis episode..............
 
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dat's all...!!! aur nahin likh sakti aaj main...!!! pata hai ki yeh ud sirf intro tha sare charachters ka...lekin yeh bhi imp tha...!!! story aage badhegi next ud se......!!!
 
plz criticise as much as u can...Tongue & den do commentsSmileor press d LIKE botton.


Edited by srojaleen - 09 July 2009 at 10:23am

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Sooooo sorry frnds aap sab naraz honge ki maine abhi 'TERE NAINA'  ko ud nahin kiya hai...!!! par main ek-do din me use ud kar dungi .
 
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Posted: 09 July 2009 at 11:13am | IP Logged
yipee me the first one to comment...
hi dear...
how ru...
well it was just the intro of the characters...
but the way u wrote .. was just mindblowing...
and good to know that raj is also their from the 1st part...
waiting to see all of the them in J & k....
do ud soon...
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Edited by kads_8302 - 09 July 2009 at 11:14am

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hmm, it was the introduction part
just awsome yaar
mindblowing
too good
plz continue soon

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Hey nice update yaar! maana ke sirf intro tha but yaa it was imp.
bhaai pata toh chalna chahiye naa kiski life mein kyaa ho raha hai...!
Ab bas hamare beechde premiyo ko milaado yaar...
pata hai har fic mein bechaare itne baar bichadte hai aur milne ke baad bhi itna time llagate hai confess karne mein ki i alwayyz imagine them getting married when they r celebrating b'day wid 60 candles on it!!!LOLLOLLOL
I hope tum aisa sitam inpar nahi karogi!
update soon dear!


Edited by manatated - 09 July 2009 at 11:31am

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Posted: 09 July 2009 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
that was mindblowing ud
how everytime and in every fic u write so well
tum apne saare fics ke emotions itne acchi trah kaise pakadti ho
love the way u introduced each character and there situations
love the Naina Gunny scene
plz continue soon

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Posted: 09 July 2009 at 3:54pm | IP Logged
Ah Pallavi Subhash .... I hope this Character is Played by the Actress Embarrassed because she's my Favourite ofcourse along with our Dear Pri !!

anyways glad to Know that None of our Cadets have changed Huda Vohi ka Vohi Flirt ... aur phek tha bhi hain LOL

Yudi, has became the Man he wanted to be, good to know that his Parents our proud of his aswell ..

Pooja and Ali, Mashalla !! they are so cute ... Ali bhi apni hone wali patni ka sapne dekhna shuru kardiya, and humari Punjabi Kri aur uski Mobile Lingo, uska koi kya kahe ... waah!!

Aur coming to Naina, *Sigh* really Man her Name seems so incomplete without Rajveer so just make them meet Asap

but till then she's got her friends and her Gunny "Baiyya" LOL Gunny seems to be a Jovial Character on this

aur Our Kaidi Alekh, i feel sorry for ... he's got married to his Love, but they don't have that Relationship .. I know Neelu's feeling Guilty, but can't she see the Love He's got for her ... and i can't believe the Babys dead Ouch Cry

Now our Hero ... Hai kya entry Maari !! Mwaah Mwaah ... it seemed like a scene out of a Film, i wish i had popcorn with me LOL LOL


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