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English-3,5,8

Hindi-11,12

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English... 10, 12, 13, 19...
Hindi... 9, 11...
Clap to all poets...
 

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nice post
loved each poetry
glad  to see brilliant works 
All the best for all writers
my choice wil be
1,10, 12,14,25
sorry i am not gud in hindi so no comments


Edited by mehanandita - 07 July 2009 at 7:20am

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English:12,    13,   17,    25

Hindi:   11  , 12



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Entry # 3

Alone

In this endless world...

you come across many persons...

some are good to you and some are not...

and some with a character,which you haven't ever dreamt of...!

Everybody with a desire...

but everybody with a need...

if you could fulfill or are worth it...

then,you survive,otherwise,there aint any use of your disguise!

In this endless world...

on this endless roads...

you hardly find anyone with a true heart!

They say something...

and you believe that...

Just a smile on your face...

But ultimately a feeling of disgrace...

Starting from friends till your close ones!

At the time of need...they all leave you ALONE!

Bitter...yet true...

your life is a mess which has got no clue...

deal with it alone...face it alone...

its the irony of life...with your self respect due!

Life's everything...but a sad path

A mystery...you gotta solve...being unknown of the aftermeth!

People are good...they can be bad!

But always remember being alone...

you never gotta be sad!

Loneliness is the truth of life...

let it hurt you...

let it affect you...

let it kill you...

but its the only way which makes you learn...

how to SURVIVE!




Entry # 7

Amour.


My heart concedes with every beat,

My soul surrenders with burdened feet.

I wait and watch as you gaze in awe;

At my bloodied hands that touch your brow.

"I love you!" I whisper as I hand you a rose

And you kiss me deep with love that ever grows.





Entry # 11

Heart ARJUN, MY LOVE, MY SWEETHEART....Hug

I thought of a poem especially for my sweet heart,Heart
Describing his qualities i dont know from where do I start,Ermm
He is stylish and hot , handsome and smart,Cool
His KILLER SMILE just took away my heart,Big smile
That voice, those eyes, that talent, those looks,Smile
They drive me crazy and make me forget my books,Wacko
I just feel like pulling his cheeks whenever he smiles,Embarrassed
Just to do that i can even run miles and miles,Wink
I think i love him but is love that simple??Heart
I just dont know coz' i forget everything whenever i see his dimple,
I really wanna tell him how do i feel,Embarrassed
But i guess whenever i'll see him ,my lips will seal,Confused
My heart starts cryingwhen his eyes become moist,Cry
But when he is happy ,my mood becomes light,LOL
His SMILE always takes my breath away,Approve
I just wanna hug him but is there a way??Hug
I adore him , i love him from the depth of my heart,Embarrassed
I didnt know how to write poems,but his eyes also taught me this art,
I wish to meet him one day in my life on a beautiful sight in the evening twilight,Day Dreaming
My ARJUN, MY LOVE, MY SWEETHEART seeing and talking to you would be such a DELIGHT.............Heart

Entry # 12

Waiting ..............
She wore her clothes of dark red

Andwhitelilies adornedher head

She kept ready the soup and bread

As she waited for him near the bed.

Her eyes like a doe's were limpid and brown

Flitted to the door, then up and down

Shyly she looked away, thinking of him

Till the moon shone bright and the stars had dimmed.

She sat by the steps and looked down the way

She'd been waiting for him the whole day

Where was he and why was he late?

She looked expectantly at the garden gate.

The sky was black and the moths flew

The scented breeze gently blew

The crickets played their violins anew

She laid her head back where the creepers grew.

She got weary and her lids fell

When he would return no one could tell

Her head she put on her arms and slept

She didn't know when in he'd stepped.

He looked down at her pretty face,

Her plaited hair with the flowerylace

He prayed that with God's grace

Joy with happiness would keep pace.

Theirs would be a beautiful life
Where happiness would linger and no strife
Day after day there would be contentment
To savour delight and enjoyment.








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2. Category: Hindi/Urdu (TWO poems from this cateogry)



Entry # 4

Kya Hua Agar pyaar rooth gaya ho
Kya hua agar naseeb choot gaya ho
Kya Hua Agar Sukoon Cheen Gaya
Kya Hua Agar Dil Ko Cheer Diya Gaya Ho

Ye Saansein,
Ye Saansein Hamesha Chalti Rahengi..
Unke liye, SIRF Unke liye
Iss Yakeen mein, ke Woh Aayenge, Zaroor aayenge
Kyunki Dilkashi unse hei, Taazgi Bhi Unse Hai



Entry # 11

MAA..

Hai wo mamta ki moorat...
Duniya mein sabse pyaari hai uski soorat...

Khuda ka bheja farishta hai..
Jiske man me sirf mamta hai..

Jaanti hai jo sirf pyaar lutaana..
Jise kehta hai MAA ye sara zamaana..

Jo hume 9 mahine apne khoon se seenchti hai..
Aur hume duniya me laane ke liye dard sehti hai..

Hume apne aanchal mein chhupakar rakhti hai...
Duniya ki burayi se bachakar rakhti hai..

Hamare liye saari duniya se ladti hai..
Haan, ye ek MAA hi kar sakti hai...

Maa ki god mein hum saare dukh bhool jaate hain..
Uske pyaar se hum har gham se jeet jaate hain...

Wo hamare nanhe kadmo ko sahara deti hai...
Hume jeene ki wajah deti hai..

Wo hume jeena sikhati hai...
Hamari zindagi ko raah dikhaati hai...

Jab ek bachha pehla lafz bolta hai
To wo "maa" hi hota hai...

Bachpan ki baaton ko log kitni aasani se bhool jaate hain...
Jawaani tak aate aate "maa" ko peeche chhod aate hain...
Nahi kar paate hum maa ke dard ko mehsoos..
Aur us se door ho jaate hain...

Use humare sahare ki zaroorat hoti hai...
Use humse milne ki tadap hoti hai...
Lekin nahi kar paate log uski ye khwahish bhi poori..

Aur "maa" phir se duniya mein akeli hoti hai...

"Maa" ko hai khuda ka darja haasil..
"Maa" ke bina nahi milta kisi ko saahil..

Hamari laakh galtiyon ke baad bhi uske hothon se dua hi nikalti hai..
Haan,ye ek "maa" hi kar sakti hai...

Dena "maa" ko khushi,hai uss khuda ki ibaadat...
Hamari zindagi hai sirf "maa" ki amaanat...

"Maa" ke bina ye duniya be-jaan hai...
Mera uss "maa" ko dil se salaam hai...




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Enjoy Voting and reading some wonderful poems!!



Mahi & Ghungroo

[/QUOTE] my votings are here wish best one will win

FOR HINDI

Entry 11 and entry 4

For english

entry 7 entry 3entry 11entry 12

Omg Maa poem is really heart touching i dunt no who wrote it bc there name is not mention here but i want 2 say that person i luv ur poem so much hats of 2 uEmbarrassed

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Posted: 07 July 2009 at 7:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mehanandita

nice post
loved each poetry
glad  to see brilliant works 
All the best for all writers
my choice wil be
1,10, 12,14,25
sorry i am not gud in hindi so no comments


Everyone gets only 4 votes in English. You voted for 5.  Unless you remove one, I'll take into account your first 4 votes.

-Mahi

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Posted: 07 July 2009 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
here's mine in the order i like them:

#22
#21
#23
#5

(for english)

Edited by spln - 07 July 2009 at 11:19pm

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