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Naughtynatty

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omg its amazing why dont start a ff yaar
u will rock it seriously !!!!

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awesome ... fabulss do continue....... sooon

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hey guys...thanks sooo much yaar...im so happy you liked it...will deffo write more one shots as i get ideas...
 and @naughtynatty, i have already started one ff...its called love aaj kal. doo check it out

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very nice..Thumbs UpThumbs Up

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Awww Adorablee!!

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hey whats you name man, this was very well narrated and portrayed, i really enjoyed reading it, it had class and the true mayur charm man, great work. Do write more.

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amazing lovely updt!!
loved it!!
toooo goood!!
keep it up!!

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Posted: 03 July 2009 at 1:04am | IP Logged

My second one shot…this is supposed to be a scene after the play.

 

Nupur continued to lean her head on Mayank's shoulder, with Mayank holding her by the waist. Nupur had her eyes closed, thinking about the final scene of the Play. That was the best moment of her life. They had actually confessed their love in front of the whole world, without anyone even realizing it. Nupur was lost into her own thoughts, her DDLJ hug, her Raj, her perfect love story…she was completely unaware of what was going on around here. She was completely lost into her Mayank. Mayank had stopped walking, and turned to look at Nupur, only to see her eyes closed, a sweet smile on her face.

Mayank didn't want to ruin the moment and the continued to stand like that, with Nupur resting her head on Mayank's shoulders and Mayank looking at her. Suddenly Nupur opened her eyes and saw Mayank and blushed a little, and quickly stood properly.

M- Kya hua?

N- k-kuch nahi.

M- To tumne apna sir kyu hata liya?

N- Wo main, tumhe takleef ho rahi hogi na.

M- Tumhari kisi bhi baat se mujhe takleef nahi hoti.

Nupur blushed at this. To avoid eye contact with Mayank, she began looking here and there.

N- Mayank, hum kaha hai?

M- Jannat.

N- Kya?

M- Jab hum dono kisi jagah pe akele hote hai na, wo mere liye jannat se kam nahi hai.

N- Tum bade filmy ho gaye ho.

M- Jaanta hoo.

And Mayank stared into her eyes, and so did Nupur. Suddenly Mayank started walking closer to Nupur, and Nupur kept moving a step backwards, until they reached some sort of dead end. Nupur closed her eyes instantly, as Mayank continued to move closer, closer, closer………until there was hardly any gap between them. Nupur could feel his warm breath on her. Mayank slowly took Nupur's one hand in his, and placed his other hand on her waist, and pulled her towards himself (like the salsa rehearsal scene). Nupur was shocked for a second, but then gazed into mayank's eyes.

M-Nupur, tumne abhi tak kuch kaha kyon nahi?

N- M-matlab?

Nupur stammered due to the closeness.

M- Wahi, jo tumne ab tak nahi kaha?

N- Mayank, gol gol baat karna bandh karo na.

M- Nahi, mujhe tumhe sataane mein bohot mazaa aata hai.

And saying so, he pulled Nupur closer to him.

N- Tum kya sunna chahte ho?

Nupurs voice was a whisper.

M- Tum jaanti ho.

Nupur moved her face slowly towards Mayank's ears, and was about to whisper something, but instead she kissed him on his cheek and ran away from there. Mayank stood stunned for a minute, and then ran after her. Nupur kept running, until Mayank came suddenly from behind and hugged her from behind. Nupur finally gave in.

M- Mein tumhe tab tak nahi chodunga jab tak tum who shabd nahi keh deti.

N-I…..

Mayank waited…

N- Love…..

Mayank continued to wait, his smile becoming wider.

N-you…

Nupur's voice was a low whisper. Mayank loosened the grip.

M- I love you too Nupur.

He then let go off her, but Nupur turned around, and hugged him tightly.

They stood like this for what seemed like forever, neither of them willing to let go off each other. This was surely their best night ever.

 

Hope you liked it guys, please do comment.

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