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Mayur/ArTi one shots-Reel&Real- pg20

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Posted: 30 June 2009 at 4:00am | IP Logged

Okay, so this is my first time at One shot.

It is basically on Mayur, it is after the confession, and Nupur calls Mayank over to her place. She calls him over at 8:00 pm.


At 6pm, Nupur is all confused as to what to wear. She decorates the house in a really pretty manner, and then sets the dining table and everything is just perfectly ready, except herself.

N- By God, kya pehnu mein? (she is busy throwing out all the clothes in her cupboard to find something suitable.) Gunjan comes from behind.

G- Di, tum job hi pehnogi, mayank tumhe sab mein utna hi pasand karega, jitna wo ab karta hai.

N- Tu samajh nahi rahi Gunjan. Mayank Mumbai ka rehne waala hai, yeh to meri khush naseebi hai ki wo bhi mujhse pyaar (she blushed at that) karta hai.

G- Di, tum bhi na.

And then Gunjan goes away from there, leaving Nupur into deep thoughts. She was thinking of the times they fought, the times they became friends again, and the Confession. That was the best day of her Life.

Just then, Nupur passed by Dia's room, and and seeing that no one was in there, she quickly sneaked in and closed the door behind her. She opened Dia's cupboard, searching for something decent enough.

N (to herself)- Dia aise kapde kaise pehen leti hai? Kya Mumbai ke ladko ko aise hi kapde pasand aate hai kya?

Nupur looked thoughtful for a moment and then she got an idea. She picked up one white knee length dress of Dia's,

N- Mayank ko mein white mein pasand hoo na

She smiled to herself. As she was coming out of Dia's room, she saw Gunjan, and quickly hid the dress behind her back.

G- Arey di, tum Dia ke kamre mein kya kar rahi ho?

N- K-kuch nahi. Wo main, uh,'.

G- Khair chodo, Di, hum jaa rahe hai. Aate aate der ho jaayegi. Kash tum bhi part mein chalti.

N- Arey Gunjan, tum Dia aur Uday bhaiyya ke saat jao. Mein thik rahungi. Ab ja!

G- Ha ha, jaa rahi hoo. Tumhe aur Mayank ko akele jo chodna hai.

Nupur just blushed at this.

From down Uday was yelling on top of his voice.

U- Gunjaannnnn, meri favorite behen, jaldi aa jaao.!

G- Aa rahi hoo! She yelled back.

Gunjan then quickly hugged her sister and ran downstairs. Nupur carefully removed the dress from hiding and sighed.

N- Thank god Gunjan ne dekha nahi.

She then went back to her room and began dressing up.

At 8-00 pm, the door bell rang. Nupur looked up at the watch and thought to herself.

N- Ek dum time pe, by god.

The door bell kept ringing. Nupur hurried downstairs, and took a deep breath and then opened the door. She saw Mayank standing there, in a white shirt, but not the formal ones, and he looked exceptionally cute. Nupur just kept staring at him. However, Mayank looked a little surprised.

M- Hi Di'.

N- Kya?

M- I mean, Nupur.

N- Tum mera naam bhi bhul gaye kya?

M- Nahi, waise to aise kapde sirf Dia pehenti hai na, isiliye.

Nupur looked down at herself.

N- To kya mein achchi nahi lag rahi hoo?

M- nahi aisa nahi, par wo'.

N- wo kya?

M- wo, yeh kapde dia pe zyaada jajte hai

N- To jaao tum, Dia ke paas!

Nupur said angrily and turned around. Mayank quickly went inside and came and stood in front of her. Nupur stood still where she was. Mayank started moving closer and closer towards her, but Nupur stood right there. She closed her eyes tightly. Mayank came nearer and nearer'till they were just two three inches away from each other. Mayank put one hand on her shoulder and looked straight into her eyes.

He brought his face closer to Nupur's ears, and his warm breath made her ear tickle. But Nupur didn't object. She loved Mayank. She loved this closeness. She slowly opened her eyes, only to find Mayank closer to her than ever.

M- Tumne ye kapde kyun pehne?

He whispered slowly into her ears

N- W-wo m-main, t-tumhe, im-impress k-karna ch-chahti thi.

Nupur kept stammering because of the increasing closeness.

Mayank cupped Nupur's face in his hands and looked straight into her eyes.

M- Tumhe mujhe impress karni ki koi zaroorat nahi. Nupur, tumhara bholapan, tumhari simplicity, yahi to tumhara charm hai. Tumhari inhi cheezo ke wajah se to mein tumse itna pyaar karta hoo.

Tears were filling up in Nupur's eyes.

M- I love you Nupur.

N- I-I l-love you too.

Nupur whispered softly.

She then hugged him tightly, and Mayank hugged her back, and kissed her softly on her neck. They continued to hug each other for god know show long. Suddenly, Nupur pulled apart, awkwardly looking at Mayank.

N- Main, ch-change karke aati hoo.

Mayank just nodded once.

She was about to leave, when Mayank held her hand from behind.

M- Jaldi aana, kyunki mein tumhe bahar le jaane waala hoo.

Nupur just nodded and didn't even bother to ask where they were going. She went and changed into her white churidaar, and left her hair open. As  she descended down the steps, mayank couldn't stop looking at her. She looked gorgeous.

M- CHale?

N- Chalo.

Nupur then leaned against his shoulder, and Mayank had his hand around her waist. The walked out, closing the door behind them, with Nupur feeling absolutely contented that she had someone who loved her for whom she was. Such is love, where you never expect someone to change, but accept them as who they are.


Hope you liked it. Comments are appreciated.

Edited by utfracks - 20 October 2009 at 7:44am

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Posted: 30 June 2009 at 4:07am | IP Logged


.i just loved the way u described mayur's close....ufffffffffffff....maar dala....  

loved it....  

Edited by falak01 - 30 June 2009 at 4:12am
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Posted: 30 June 2009 at 4:11am | IP Logged

wow     yaar

amazing nups dress thing is so lovely how mayu close to nups yaar
     yaar you write more  one shots
 keep it up

Edited by adi_gupta - 30 June 2009 at 4:42am
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Posted: 30 June 2009 at 4:18am | IP Logged
wow yaar it was sooooooooo sweet ........ gr8 luved it.......
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Posted: 30 June 2009 at 4:20am | IP Logged
very Smile
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Posted: 30 June 2009 at 6:11am | IP Logged
amazing u shud hav also written abt wer he took her nd wat happened der.....dat wud be too amazing....nyway dis one was sooooooooooo gud.......i hope sumthin like dis happens at least.....nyway gud job once again
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Posted: 30 June 2009 at 6:30am | IP Logged

awww...its soo chweet yaar

jjst too good re !!
love itEmbarrassed

Edited by ruchimayur - 30 June 2009 at 7:55am

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