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hinal60 Senior Member
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Posted: 29 June 2009 at 6:13pm | IP Logged
fantastic ud
raj and pooja scene were too good
please UD soon
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Posted: 29 June 2009 at 8:28pm | IP Logged
Gr8 part. I luved it when u portrayed Raj's state of mind seeing his fav cadets becuming soldiers. Sach me usse zyada khush iss baat pe koi nahi ho sakta. After all ye sab ussi ki to den hai.

The convo btwn Raj n Naina's parents was very sad. Raj was being so sweet to then but wo to usse samajh ke bhi samjhna nahi chahte. I hope this coldness gets away sumday.

Aalekh's scene was really funny. And so was Pooja's scene wid Ali n Yudi. Bechara Yudi na khud bol paya na hi Ali ko bolne diya. But then achha hi hua. Coz phir pyare Rajveer Sir ne apni pyaari andaz me Pooja ko samjhaya aur wo jhat se maan gayi. I just luved this scene of Raj n Pooja. This again proves dat Raj is the sweetest n cutest n smartest person of the whoooooooole world.......hehe.

The precap is nice n now I'm very much eager to knw wat gift Raj has given to Naina.

Pls continue soon n Thnx 4 the PM.
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Posted: 29 June 2009 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
thankyou soo much...i m glad that u liked d update...keep reading Smile
Originally posted by hinal60

fantastic ud
raj and pooja scene were too good
please UD soon
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Posted: 29 June 2009 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
thanks for d comment...dnt worry naina's parents will be fine soon...i m sooo happy that u liked raj and pooja's scene....and d gift part....now i m getting worried about it...everyone is waiting for that only....i dont know whether u people will like it or notCry
Originally posted by sumaiya wahid

Gr8 part. I luved it when u portrayed Raj's state of mind seeing his fav cadets becuming soldiers. Sach me usse zyada khush iss baat pe koi nahi ho sakta. After all ye sab ussi ki to den hai.

The convo btwn Raj n Naina's parents was very sad. Raj was being so sweet to then but wo to usse samajh ke bhi samjhna nahi chahte. I hope this coldness gets away sumday.

Aalekh's scene was really funny. And so was Pooja's scene wid Ali n Yudi. Bechara Yudi na khud bol paya na hi Ali ko bolne diya. But then achha hi hua. Coz phir pyare Rajveer Sir ne apni pyaari andaz me Pooja ko samjhaya aur wo jhat se maan gayi. I just luved this scene of Raj n Pooja. This again proves dat Raj is the sweetest n cutest n smartest person of the whoooooooole world.......hehe.

The precap is nice n now I'm very much eager to knw wat gift Raj has given to Naina.

Pls continue soon n Thnx 4 the PM.
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Posted: 29 June 2009 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rajeev fann

thanks for d comment...dnt worry naina's parents will be fine soon...i m sooo happy that u liked raj and pooja's scene....and d gift part....now i m getting worried about it...everyone is waiting for that only....i dont know whether u people will like it or notCry
Originally posted by sumaiya wahid

Gr8 part. I luved it when u portrayed Raj's state of mind seeing his fav cadets becuming soldiers. Sach me usse zyada khush iss baat pe koi nahi ho sakta. After all ye sab ussi ki to den hai.

The convo btwn Raj n Naina's parents was very sad. Raj was being so sweet to then but wo to usse samajh ke bhi samjhna nahi chahte. I hope this coldness gets away sumday.

Aalekh's scene was really funny. And so was Pooja's scene wid Ali n Yudi. Bechara Yudi na khud bol paya na hi Ali ko bolne diya. But then achha hi hua. Coz phir pyare Rajveer Sir ne apni pyaari andaz me Pooja ko samjhaya aur wo jhat se maan gayi. I just luved this scene of Raj n Pooja. This again proves dat Raj is the sweetest n cutest n smartest person of the whoooooooole world.......hehe.

The precap is nice n now I'm very much eager to knw wat gift Raj has given to Naina.

Pls continue soon n Thnx 4 the PM.


Hey dont worry ok. Ab tumne jo bhi likha sab like kiya na to gift part bhi zaroor like karenge. After all u r very gud in writing.
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Posted: 30 June 2009 at 12:09am | IP Logged
sab se pahle....mera sawal....Smile "NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAM...??????" Confused Confused Confused Confused Confused Confused
 
Now abt d ud......Smile
 
too gud se kaam chalega ya awesome bhi kahna padega...!!! Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap
 
vaise kis gadhe ne yeh kaha hai ki tumhara yeh pahla fic hai...Ouch!!! i m 100% sure ki koi bhi insaan apni pahli fic me itni achhe uds nahin de payega...Big smile!!! emotions ko tumne kitne achhe se describe kiya hai...ki mai bata nahin sakti...Big smile!!! just awesome yaar...Clap Clap Clap
 
rajveer k emotions apne fav cadets ko soldiers bante hue dekh ne k baad...just perfect...!!!Clap  Clap  Clap
 
i hope ki ek din sayad naina k parents raj ko samajh payenge... aur use kabul bhi kar lenge...!!!Smile  Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile
 
alekh aur pooja ek sikke k do pahlu...LOL!!! matlab...koi bhi un k kamon ko nahin tok sakta ...LOL!!! jo voh kar rahe hain ya kah rahe hain vohi sahi hai...LOL!!! sirf ek insaan hain....un k fav capt rajveer...voh hi unhe apni baton se badal sakte hain aur koi nahin...!!!LOL  LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
 
rajveer ne bhi apna kaam baht hi intelligent tarike se pooja se karwa liya...!!! Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue
 
by d way...raj ne aisi kya gift di hai...jise dekh kar naina emotional ho gayi...Cry !!! lagta hai next ud thoda senti hona wala hai...!!!Cry
 
par tumne kaha hai na ki yeh ek short fic hai...toh mai ummed karti hun ki baht jald RN ek ho jayenge...aur jo kuch bhi humain LRL me dekhne ko nahin mila tha...voh hum sab ko is fic me dekhne ko milega...i mean padhne ko milega...!!! Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue
 
cont soon...Smile
 
arre mai phir bhul gayi....Tongue!!! tum se ek sawal puchna tha...Tongue"NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAM....????"Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue


Edited by srojaleen - 30 June 2009 at 12:13am
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Posted: 30 June 2009 at 2:10am | IP Logged
thankyou soo much for commentingSmileSmileab tum itni tareef karogi to main nervous ho jaaoongi....gadha kyun kahega main keh rahi hun ki ye meri pehli fic hai and maybe aakhri bhi...main likhne waqt itni confused ho jaati hun ki poocho mat...samjh mein hi nhn aata ki kahan se shuru karun aur kahan khatamCryCryaur tum ko to ye baat nhn kehni chahiye ki koi pehli baar mein acchi ud nhn de sakta....zara apni fics ko khud bhi padhne ka kasht karoWinkWinkWinkto aapka khayaal badal jaayega....i m glad ki tumhein aalekh aur pooja ka scene accha laga...aur jahan tak raj ki baat hai...main hamesha chahti thi lrl mein raj aur pooja ke scenes  dikhaayen..i still remember jab starting mein raj aur pooja ke scenes hote the to vo kitne funny hote the...but baad mein kabhi unke scenes hi nhn aayeCryCryCryto main ab vo khawahish poori kar rahi hunSmileSmileSmile
keep reading and yes commenting too
Originally posted by srojaleen

sab se pahle....mera sawal....Smile "NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAM...??????" Confused Confused Confused Confused Confused Confused
 
Now abt d ud......Smile
 
too gud se kaam chalega ya awesome bhi kahna padega...!!! Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap
 
vaise kis gadhe ne yeh kaha hai ki tumhara yeh pahla fic hai...Ouch!!! i m 100% sure ki koi bhi insaan apni pahli fic me itni achhe uds nahin de payega...Big smile!!! emotions ko tumne kitne achhe se describe kiya hai...ki mai bata nahin sakti...Big smile!!! just awesome yaar...Clap Clap Clap
 
rajveer k emotions apne fav cadets ko soldiers bante hue dekh ne k baad...just perfect...!!!Clap  Clap  Clap
 
i hope ki ek din sayad naina k parents raj ko samajh payenge... aur use kabul bhi kar lenge...!!!Smile  Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile
 
alekh aur pooja ek sikke k do pahlu...LOL!!! matlab...koi bhi un k kamon ko nahin tok sakta ...LOL!!! jo voh kar rahe hain ya kah rahe hain vohi sahi hai...LOL!!! sirf ek insaan hain....un k fav capt rajveer...voh hi unhe apni baton se badal sakte hain aur koi nahin...!!!LOL  LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
 
rajveer ne bhi apna kaam baht hi intelligent tarike se pooja se karwa liya...!!! Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue
 
by d way...raj ne aisi kya gift di hai...jise dekh kar naina emotional ho gayi...Cry !!! lagta hai next ud thoda senti hona wala hai...!!!Cry
 
par tumne kaha hai na ki yeh ek short fic hai...toh mai ummed karti hun ki baht jald RN ek ho jayenge...aur jo kuch bhi humain LRL me dekhne ko nahin mila tha...voh hum sab ko is fic me dekhne ko milega...i mean padhne ko milega...!!! Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue
 
cont soon...Smile
 
arre mai phir bhul gayi....Tongue!!! tum se ek sawal puchna tha...Tongue"NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAM....????"Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue
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Posted: 30 June 2009 at 2:32am | IP Logged

Great update..

Raj feels the proudest when he sees his cadets excel in their work.
 
The conversation between raj and naina's parents is very sad.
Alekh scene was very funny..ab who akele yeh kam kaise karta
 
Raj ke andaz ke samne Pooja kuch keh hi nahi payi aur raj ne use decoration change karne ke liye mana bhi liya,
 
I wish you had not stopped her...i an eager to know what is the gift that raj has given
 
Please continue soon...and thanks for the PM

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