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Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 28 June 2009 at 12:09am | IP Logged

awesome yaar...!!!Clap Clap Clap

pura ud read karne k baad yeh pata chala hai ki raj toh naina se pyar karta hai...Smile!!! par lagta hai k naina abhi is ehsaas se dur hai.Ouch
 
mujhe lagta hai jis se naina phone par baat kar rahi thi...voh us ka voh so called bf hai...jo naina k passing out parade me nahin aa raha hai...Ouch!!! jis se naina raj ko milwana chahti hai...!!! par us se mil kar raj ko baht dukh hoga yaar...Cry
 
ek baat jo sab se jyada achhi lagi voh yeh hai ki...raj aur naina ka takrana...!!! LRL me bhi raj aise hi dial bolta tha...jaisa ki tum ne yahan par likha hai...!!!Big smile Big smile Big smile
 
raj ki posting Delhi me hui hai...!!! pata nahin naina kahan par posted hogi...Confused??? hope ki naina ko jaldi hi ehsaas ho jaye ki voh bhi baht kuch khaas mehsus karti hai raj k liye.Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile
 
aur naina k parents ko bhi raj ko maaf kar dene chahiye...!!! kyoun ki raj ne jo kiya tha...voh hi ek rashta tha naveen ko ek shaheed ki maut dene ka...!!!
 
do ud fast yaar...!!!Smile


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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 28 June 2009 at 12:38am | IP Logged
Nice part. Its gud dat u cleared sum things. Its now quite easy to imagine the things.
 
I am really eager to knw Raj ne Naina ko kya gift diya. And also I'm w8ing 4 the 4th part as u said after 2-3 parts we r going to get a pleasant shock.
 
Pls continue soon.

luvraj4ever

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Posted: 28 June 2009 at 1:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by srojaleen

thanx priya!!!!!!!thankyou soo much for commentingSmilei m soo happy that tumhein raj aur naina ka scene pasand aaya....aur haan naina ko abhi nhn pata ki vo raj ke liye kuch mehsoos karti hai ya nhn....kyunki beech mein vo 3rd person jo haiCrybut dont worry main hoon naLOLbhut jald bhagaa dungi usse.....aur naina ko raj ke saath posting ki koi zaroorat nhn padne waaliWinkab u keep guessing and thnx for ur suggestion...i'll try to improveSmileSmileSmileawesome yaar...!!!Clap Clap Clap

pura ud read karne k baad yeh pata chala hai ki raj toh naina se pyar karta hai...Smile!!! par lagta hai k naina abhi is ehsaas se dur hai.Ouch
 
mujhe lagta hai jis se naina phone par baat kar rahi thi...voh us ka voh so called bf hai...jo naina k passing out parade me nahin aa raha hai...Ouch!!! jis se naina raj ko milwana chahti hai...!!! par us se mil kar raj ko baht dukh hoga yaar...Cry
 
ek baat jo sab se jyada achhi lagi voh yeh hai ki...raj aur naina ka takrana...!!! LRL me bhi raj aise hi dial bolta tha...jaisa ki tum ne yahan par likha hai...!!!Big smile Big smile Big smile
 
raj ki posting Delhi me hui hai...!!! pata nahin naina kahan par posted hogi...Confused??? hope ki naina ko jaldi hi ehsaas ho jaye ki voh bhi baht kuch khaas mehsus karti hai raj k liye.Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile
 
aur naina k parents ko bhi raj ko maaf kar dene chahiye...!!! kyoun ki raj ne jo kiya tha...voh hi ek rashta tha naveen ko ek shaheed ki maut dene ka...!!!
 
do ud fast yaar...!!!Smile

luvraj4ever

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Posted: 28 June 2009 at 1:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sumaiya wahid

Nice part. Its gud dat u cleared sum things. Its now quite easy to imagine the things.
 
I am really eager to knw Raj ne Naina ko kya gift diya. And also I'm w8ing 4 the 4th part as u said after 2-3 parts we r going to get a pleasant shock.
 
Pls continue soon.
thanks dear....i m really happy that u r commenting....yes i m sure u'll get a pleasant shock....and gift...vo to next update mein pata chal hi jaayegaSmile....thnx once again

luvraj4ever

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Posted: 28 June 2009 at 1:21am | IP Logged
only two comments??????Cryplzzzz it's my request that if u r reading dis fic den do lemme know......comment for once atleast...soo that i can decide whether to continue or not

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Posted: 28 June 2009 at 3:58am | IP Logged
jooth bolna is very bad.......

jooth is dat u said dat dis is ur first time writing of ne fic.......

but reading d first part aisa lagta hai dat u r writing from long time......

really awesome...just loved it...Clap.
rn wer brilliant also d convo was amazing....Clap
Clap
too good....

n dont mind for my first two sentences ...dat was just a joke.....

...
lipi

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Posted: 28 June 2009 at 8:37am | IP Logged
awesome yaar!!! liked it !!good itz sumthng new....update soon.........

luvraj4ever

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Posted: 28 June 2009 at 10:26am | IP Logged
thanx dear....i m glad that u liked itSmile....and yes i m writing for d first time and i know i m not good as others but still whatever u said to encourage me will really help me to write even better....thnkyou sooo muchSmile
Originally posted by fanatic 21

jooth bolna is very bad.......

jooth is dat u said dat dis is ur first time writing of ne fic.......

but reading d first part aisa lagta hai dat u r writing from long time......

really awesome...just loved it...Clap.
rn wer brilliant also d convo was amazing....Clap
Clap
too good....

n dont mind for my first two sentences ...dat was just a joke.....

...
lipi

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