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Edited by rajeev fann - 23 May 2010 at 10:21pm

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Posted: 27 June 2009 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Hey, its gud to hav another RN fic writer. Always welcum 4 dat. Though the another guy thing is not so pleasant 4 me but as its RN I'm ok wid it. Pls continue soon wid it. Wud like to read the first part ASAP.

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Posted: 27 June 2009 at 8:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sumaiya wahid

Hey, its gud to hav another RN fic writer. Always welcum 4 dat. Though the another guy thing is not so pleasant 4 me but as its RN I'm ok wid it. Pls continue soon wid it. Wud like to read the first part ASAP.
thnx dear...i m glad that u commented...and dont worry even i m a hard core RN fan.....so that another guy can never come between them...sooo jst chill

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I am eagerly waiting to read the ff.................
so do continue soon...............

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Posted: 27 June 2009 at 9:25am | IP Logged
hey...welcome yaar...Hug!!! vaise bhi hamare RN k baht sare silent readers hote hain...jo ek baar apna scilence khatam kar lete hain...toh kabhi bhi scilence nahin rahte...!!! Smile
 
mujhe hi dekh lo...mai bhi pahle scilent reader hi thi...aur phir RN fics likhne lagi...!!! aur mujhe yahan itna pyar mila ki pucho mat...Big smile!!! don't worry yahan par tumhe baht sare dost bhi milenge...aur baht sara appriciations bhi aur baht sara pyar bhi...Hug!!! kya hai na...hum RN fans baht loving aur caring hote hai...apne rajveer sir ki tarah...right...???Cool
 
by d way story interesting lag rahi hai...Big smile!!! jaldi se first part post karo...!!!Smile

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Posted: 27 June 2009 at 10:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shayona18

I am eagerly waiting to read the ff.................
so do continue soon...............
thnx.....i'll post d first part soon

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Posted: 27 June 2009 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by srojaleen

hey...welcome yaar...Hug!!! vaise bhi hamare RN k baht sare silent readers hote hain...jo ek baar apna scilence khatam kar lete hain...toh kabhi bhi scilence nahin rahte...!!! Smile
 
mujhe hi dekh lo...mai bhi pahle scilent reader hi thi...aur phir RN fics likhne lagi...!!! aur mujhe yahan itna pyar mila ki pucho mat...Big smile!!! don't worry yahan par tumhe baht sare dost bhi milenge...aur baht sara appriciations bhi aur baht sara pyar bhi...Hug!!! kya hai na...hum RN fans baht loving aur caring hote hai...apne rajveer sir ki tarah...right...???Cool
 
by d way story interesting lag rahi hai...Big smile!!! jaldi se first part post karo...!!!Smile
thnx priya.....ab ye mat poochna ki tumhaaara naam kaise pata chala....i read all ur fics and love them tooo.....and i know ki RN fans ek doosre ke bhut close ho jaaate hain vo bhi bhut kam time meinSmile

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hiiii guys....here's d first update of "all for your smile"...hope u all like it.....

the story will be starting from d day jab saare cadets kma se pass out hone waale hain[final pass out parade day].....

pooja and naina's room.....

naina apni cupboard mein rakhi cheezon ko dekh rahi hai....naveen ki photo,fresher's ball ki pics aur aisi hi kai aur pics jis mein naina ki iss academy mein beeti hui yaadein simtti hui hain....tabhi usse orderly bulaane aata hai.....

"cadet singh aapke liye phone hai"...

naina phone ke paas jaakar vo call receive karti hai....

"hello"

"tum????phone kar rahe ho????"

"kahan pahunche???"

"kya tum nhn aa rahe????????"

"par tumne to kaha tha ki....."

"but"

"tum last minute pe aise kaise????"

"main tumhein aaj apne frnds se milwaane waali thi"

"especially rajveer sir se....par tum.......i dont wanna talk to u...."

itna kehkar naina gusse se phone rakhkar jaaane lagti hai aur peeche mudte hi vo kissi se takraati hai.....

"sambhal ke cadet singh"...{yes right that's raj}

"ahhhh i m soooo sorry sir maine dhayaan nhn dia"

"ab vo to maine dekh hi liya ki kuch cheezein kabhi nhn badalti"

"huh"

"i mean cadet naina singh ka gussa aur fir uss gusse mein mujhse takaraana...."-raj joked

"ahh nhn sir....."-naina started

"relax naina main sirf mazaak kar raha hun"

naina just smiled

"kya baat hai....kuch serious baat???????"

"nhn sir vo....kuch nhn bas aise hi"

"theek hai agar tum batana nhn chahti i wont force u...vaise main tumse hi milne aa raha tha....."

"mujhse????kuch kaaam tha sir??????"

"haan tumhein kuch dena tha....saying this raj gave naina a gift

"sir ye????"naina asked surprized completely

"ye tumhaare liye hai aaj tumhaara yahaan aakhri din hai aur mera bhi as meri posting ke orders aa chuke hain jiske baare tum sab to jaaante hi ho....so i'll be leaving for delhi today itself" raj said looking at her

"sir aap aaj hi chale jaayenge?????mujhe aap se kisi ko milwaana tha...i hope aap lunch tak to honge..."naina asked

"milwaana hai????kisse????

"ahhh vo main aap ko baaad mein hi bataungi....kya main ye gift khol ke dekh sakti hun....???????"

"ahh abhi nhn jab main chala jaaunga uske baad..ye tumhein shayad mujhe yaad rakhne mein madad kare.."he said sadly

naina suddenly looked at him"aap aise kyun bol rahe hain sir???? maana ki aaj academy mein hamaraa aakhri din hai but iska matlab ye to nhn hum kabhi nhn milenge..aur mujhe aap ko yaad rakhne ke liye kisi cheez ki madad ki zarooorat nhn hai....main aapko kabhi nhn bhool sakti sir kabhi bhi nhn...kyunki main jaanti hun ki main aaj jo kuch bhi hun apki vajah se hi hun....aapke sath ki vajah se hi hun..."she said getting emotional

"ahhh nhn naina tum aaj jo kuch bhi apni kabliyat ki vajah se ho...iska credit sirf tumein jaaata hai...sirf tumein...isse kabhi kisi se share mat karna...."

isse pehle ki koi baat aur hoti academy ki bell bajti hai.....

"ahh sir mujhe ab jaana hoga"

"hmmm jaanta hun ki tumein jaana hai"raj said looking into her eyes

"sir?"

"abbb mera matlab hai tumhein fauran ground mein report karna chahiye....afterall issi ek pal ke liye to hum aaj tak ladte aaye hain..."

"c u sir"

"bye naina"

itna kehkar naina vahan se chali jaati hai....aur jaate2 apne haath mein pakde hue gift ko dekhti hai....aur mann hi mann sochti hai.."pata nhn kyun aaj kuch bhut alag sa lag raha hai...aisa lag raha hai jaise kuch choot raha hai....par kya...jab aaj mujhe bhut khush hona chahiye...main jo karne aayi thi vo poora ho gaya hai...naveen bhaiya begunah saabit ho gaye hain...aaj oath taking ceremony hai...par kyun itni saari khushiyon ke beech main udaas mehsoos kar rahi hun.??????kya uske naa aane ki wajah se???nhn nhn ye baat hoti to mujhe samjh mein aa jaata...par kuch aur hai jo pata nhn kyun mujhe pareshaan kar raha hai....

cut to raj

"bye naina....aaj finally hamaare raaste alag hone waale hain...maine hamesha sabse ye chupaaya ki main tumse......yahan tak ki khud se bhi.....jaanta hun ye mumkin nhn hai..par aaj bhut dard ho raha hai.....aur iss dard mein bhi pata nhn aisa kyun lagta hai ki ye ant nhn hai....kuch aur hona baaki hai...par kya????????"

end of part1

okkk guys dis was d first part of my very first fic...hope u all liked it....plzzzz do tell me what u all have to say....it's really important for me to know....

and about the story i would like to tell u few things sooo that u all dont get confused....

1-naina has forgiven raj for killing her brother just in d same way it happened in lrl

2-huda doesnt luv naina in dis fic

3-naina's parents knows evrything about raj killing naveen and they kind of understand raj's situation tooo but still they havent forgiven him completely....sooo their behaviour will be a bit cold towards raj.....

4-and about that other guy...dont worry guys just 2-3 more updates and i m sure u all will get a pleasant shockkkkkk

and one thing more although this fic is kind of extension to lrl...i would suggest that plzzz imagine these characters a bit different from what they were in lrl...like at times naina can be a bit delicate types and d same goes for other characters too....and d story doesnt have any missions,academy, action and all....its just about raj and naina who'll be together soon......rest i'll keep on telling u in the upcoming updates........



Edited by rajeev fann - 27 June 2009 at 12:07pm

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