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previous chapter on page-7


Chapter-6

A stout man, fair n tall, a lil fat, in a white kurta-pejama is standing at door.

He enters

Shy: aryn, ye Mishra ji hain.... Secretary of our society... He is d one who called me up.

Mishra extends his hand 2 aru fr shake

Aryn doesn't responds fr a moment. Then luks at stretched hand n shakes.


Mishra: I dnt knw whts going wrong... Ek hi din me building me do-do deaths... I m concerned abt it

Shy: mishra ji, I understand! Bt, we need ur help.... Tell me hw did u discovered his body

Mishra: actually, I didn't!! Sme1 else infrmed me n den I called u

Aryn: n who infrmed u?

M: main usse nahi jaanta. He ws nt frm our society. i guess he came 2 visit dis victim, discovered his body, n Infrmed me abt it. Jab tak maine shina ko call kiya vo ja chuka tha

bxr: aryn, I think we shud find out him

Arn:(thinking fr a moment) thik hai, go n talk wid watchman

Bxr nodds n leaves.


Arn: (luking at mishra) flat lene se pehle he shud hav given his particulars!! Right!! we need dat!!

Mishra: actually, he shifted jst a few days back so abhi tak paper work ho ni paaya tha

Aryn: wht? Hw could a flat be allotted widout registration

Mishra: he said dat he urgently need it, gave advance, n promised dat wil provide al identity proofs n other requirements once he has settled.

Aryn: bt, r u aware, dats illegal

Misra: bt i........

Aryn(lil angry) anyways, atleast iska naam to pta hoga na apko!

Misra: wo, actually......

Aryn:(wid a disgust luk) u knw it or not????Angry

Misra: (luking down) no!!!


Stgn(frm behind) aryn, even no apparent prints found!!

Aryn shakes his head in total disgust n leaves d place. Ajy follows him holding those unpacked bags.

Body was in process of shifting. Shotgn n ppj also leaves d place wid it.


Mishra ji had realized dat he is going to be in trouble now. Tension covered his face.


Shy: misra ji, dnt worry! Kuch nhi hoga! Main hoon na! n.. ummm..... actually, now we wil hav to seal this flat until d proceedings wil go. So......

Misra: yeah sure! N plz try to solve this at ur earliest..

Shy: (smiling) we'l try our best!

Both moved out.



Edited by keep-smiling - 26 July 2009 at 10:41am

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Chapter-7


In d office......

On discussion table......

Zubin is busy fixing crime scene photos on board.

Within few minutes officers reaches there n gets seated

On d right side of Aryn neha ajay n bxr r seated

On his left r shina papaji n stgn

Shy rolling d pencil, ppj busy writing smething


Deepika approaches. Settles down there. Luking at aryn "aryn, carry on"

Aryn almost jumps off his chair

Aryn: ok...., so we hav found a male body.... around 30 years of age .... shot by a bullet.... in his right eye.... lying in kitchen of his house.... which is on 3rd floor.... n a clean house..... no major evidences found.... neither do we knw of his identity (luking at neha) neha, I think nw we'l hav to go fr photo id search...

neha nodds


Dipi: n who discovered d body first?

Aryn: even dat prsn is unidentified. Bt bxr i.......

Bxr: I talked wid watchman. N uska kehna hai ki aj morning se afternun 11 bje tak koi bi outsider building me nahi gya

Aryn: wht?? Bt In dat case ya to wo iss hi building me rehta hoga ya phir misra jhuth bole rahen hain ki kisi ne unhe infrm kiya...

Shy: aryn, I knw misra ji, he jst cant be lying

Arn: may be shina! Bt either of two has to be true. N in both d cases misra is lying.

Shy: whatever, i.....


Stgn: (interrupting shy)n wht abt d frmal dress he ws wearing....

Ajay: simple, ws going out.. n nw here.... we jst hav to find out where..

Stgn: no, luk, my theory is.... he came in frm somewhere n felt thirsty n went near fridge to take water..... n that's why his fridge door ws open

Ajay: bt dat could be d other way around too. .... He ws abt to leave..... Felt thirsty n went to kitchen n.......

papaji ( interrupting ajay) no ajay, his house door ws open, n there wer no forced entry marks, (luks at bxr who nodds) so it can be safely concluded dat he came in

Ajy: kya ppj, aap bi stgn ki side.......


Dipi: one second, why so much of fuss over dis simple thing, check out when his car ws parked or talk to watchman abt it

they felts a jerk, It ws damn simple

bxr:(grinning) yeah, right dipika! According to watchman he entered at 10:30pm, so I guess, stgn's theory fits in....

ajay: bxr tu bi muje akela chod dega......

ppj: ajy, shut up! Commissioner sir ki warning ka koi asar hua hai ya nhi

stgn gives an evil smile to ajayEvil Smile

dipi: arre haan, aryn why commi called u.....

aryn: wil tell u latr....

shy: n yeah...neighbours ka kehna hai ki they didn't heard any bullet sound, so...

aryn n dipi (together) silencer!!

Both share a smile. Shy fastens rolling d pencil....





Ajy: neighbours ka ye bi kehna hai ki he shifted in d flat only 2-3 days back n during dese days usse kuch log n ek girl milne aaye the...

shina: one more thing bothers me, killer shot d victim right on his eye, strange ya, I think it strongly signifies smething.....

dipi: possible!...... Bt May be it doesn't.... bcoz a shot on forehead is common,..... may be the killer ws nt a gud shooter n it sliped a lil.....

Shy: oh realy?? Wel muje to lagta hai intentional shot hai, shows d mentality of killer

Aryn: shina, we r jst analyzing d possibilities. N dipika u may be right Bt that wil be true only if killer shot him frm a distance. so.....

(luking at stgn) analyse d gun powder traces

(luking at ajy) check out those bags

(luking at neha) do photo id search

(luking at zubin) provide her a photo of victim fr search

(luking at bxr) try to find out abt dose ppl n girl frm same watchman

(luking at ppj n dipi) we wil be waiting fr autopsy report

ok guys.... (claps)...... get to work.....


every1 jumps out of their chair n leaves d place, except shina....

may be no 1 noticed.... bt she didn't received any orders frm aryn.....

may be jst bcoz.. right nw.., fr her,... there is nothing to do.....

but does shina too thinks in this way........?????







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Edited by keep-smiling - 26 July 2009 at 10:40am

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oh sorry fr d late reply. actually there ws no electricity here yesterdayOuch

woww nice updates Dii! Shotgun ne kuch to soch samajhkar bolaa finally. n y didnt Aryan give Shaina any duty? kahin aisa to nai k Arya Shai ko hate karne lagaa hai?Cry aur kya boluun? bohot hai bolne ke liye. wo sab to nai likh sakti naa so all in one...

FANTASTICEmbarrassed



Edited by Panchi-fanRamya - 15 July 2009 at 11:17pm

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StarAwesome  update diptiClap
 
wah-wah, kya case hain...tum toh expert nikli...each & every detail is there...
 
case sounds very very intersteing...Tongue kya suspense hain...victim ka koi identification hi nahi haim...na hi body discover karne wala ka...
 
& that stupid buliding secreatry is definately in big trouble...itna illegal kam jo kya hain..Angry
 
Aryan ko itna gussa aa gaya illegal work pe oh ho...Wink
 
kya baat hain shotgun ki theory toh sahi nikli.poor ajay...kisine uska saath nahi diya..Ouch
 
& well done deepika...1 second mein problem solve kar di..Clap
 

Dipi: one second, why so much of fuss over dis simple thing, check out when his car ws parked or talk to watchman abt it

they felts a jerk, It ws damn simple

oie-hoe

aryn n dipi (together) silencer!!

SillySillySilly

everyone seems very very excited with new case..w8ing for more..keep going deepti...it was brilliant update..Thumbs Up

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wow wow dipti awsome update..its wonderful
Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap
u have done such a gr8 job......
Star  Star  Star  Star  Star
every thing is going in so gud its really seems to happen in special squad..hai na?Big smile.....

case intresting but abi tak prime suspect nahi hey koi kyaConfused...criminals k beghair maza nahi atta na SS me or iss k officers ko bhiLOL


Dipi: one second, why so much of fuss over dis simple thing, check out when his car ws parked or talk to watchman abt it

they felts a jerk, It ws damn simple

oh haan its so simple hmare officers se miss ho gya but its deepika hai na guide karne k liyeEmbarrassed


aryn n dipi (together) silencer!!

Both share a smile.
Blushing  
Blushing   Blushing shhoo shhweet

may be no 1 noticed.... bt she didn't received any orders frm aryn.....

she iss gud in her job aryan shudn't miss her...may be he wanted her to stay with himTongue LOL

fabolous update diptiThumbs Up really enjoyed itSmile....
thnx alot for the update and yeh waiting for the next partTongue Wink


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great great great work dearClap Clap Clap ,got full scene of SS case,Shai rolling pencil,Aryan jumping out of the chair,everthing was perfect,great work dude,loved your writingEmbarrassed Clap,suchhi aapne officers bhi naa kabhi kabhi ekdam,itni simple baat ko headache bana diya tha thanks to dipi she solved there prob ,in secondsClap
Aru not giving any work to shai,if he has not giving then something is upto in his mind,shayad yeh case Shai ki building se deal karta hai isliye toh nahi naaTongue case heating up
waiting for more and moreBig smile


Edited by ruha - 15 July 2009 at 11:55am

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Originally posted by saifeena143

StarAwesome  update diptiClap
wah-wah, kya case hain...tum toh expert nikli...each & every detail is there...
case sounds very very intersteing... kya suspense hain...victim ka koi identification hi nahi haim...na hi body discover karne wala ka...
& that stupid buliding secreatry is definately in big trouble...itna illegal kam jo kya hain..
Aryan ko itna gussa aa gaya illegal work pe oh ho...
kya baat hain shotgun ki theory toh sahi nikli.poor ajay...kisine uska saath nahi diya..
well done deepika...1 second mein problem solve kar di..Clap
Dipi: one second, why so much of fuss over dis simple thing, check out when his car ws parked or talk to watchman abt itthey felts a jerk, It ws damn simple
oie-hoe
aryn n dipi (together) silencer!!
SillySillySilly
everyone seems very very excited with new case..w8ing for more..keep going deepti...it was brilliant update..Thumbs Up

wow...  thank u so much... Big smile
yeah... truly said.... dipi is a smart girl... whether its rules, procedures or her job... she knows it perfectly.. Approve

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Posted: 15 July 2009 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Veena..

wow wow dipti awsome update..its wonderful
Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap 
u have done such a gr8 job......
every thing is going in so gud its really seems to happen in special squad..hai na?
case intresting but abi tak prime suspect nahi hey koi kya...criminals k beghair maza nahi atta na SS me or iss k officers ko bhi

Dipi: one second, why so much of fuss over dis simple thing, check out when his car ws parked or talk to watchman abt it
they felts a jerk, It ws damn simple

oh haan its so simple hmare officers se miss ho gya but its deepika hai na guide karne k liye

aryn n dipi (together) silencer!!Both share a smile.
Blushing  
Blushing   Blushing shhoo shhweet
may be no 1 noticed.... bt she didn't received any orders frm aryn.....
she iss gud in her job aryan shudn't miss her...may be he wanted her to stay with him
fabolous update diptiThumbs Up really enjoyed itSmile....
thnx alot for the update and yeh waiting for the next part
Tongue Wink

thnx alot for the update
hey... thanks to you fr such sweet comments... Hug
prime suspect... wil come soon !!!! Smile

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