As usual you added spice in their dialogue. I enjoy their dialogue.πππ
Zn: my face tells abt my family too????
Bxr: era of technology, u see!!
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Are boxer bhai to bahut challu hain. Alredy face π technology use karna shuru kar dia hain'..π
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Case is really interesting, but. . .but. . . . someone's day π³π³ is also going great.
who is that person???
enjoy the part. so waiting for next.../
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previous chapter on page-7
Chapter-6
A stout man, fair n tall, a lil fat, in a white kurta-pejama is standing at door.
He enters
Shy: aryn, ye Mishra ji hain.... Secretary of our society... He is d one who called me up.
Mishra extends his hand 2 aru fr shake
Aryn doesn't responds fr a moment. Then luks at stretched hand n shakes.
Mishra: I dnt knw whts going wrong... Ek hi din me building me do-do deaths... I m concerned abt it
Shy: mishra ji, I understand! Bt, we need ur help.... Tell me hw did u discovered his body
Mishra: actually, I didn't!! Sme1 else infrmed me n den I called u
Aryn: n who infrmed u?
M: main usse nahi jaanta. He ws nt frm our society. i guess he came 2 visit dis victim, discovered his body, n Infrmed me abt it. Jab tak maine shina ko call kiya vo ja chuka tha
bxr: aryn, I think we shud find out him
Arn:(thinking fr a moment) thik hai, go n talk wid watchman
Bxr nodds n leaves.
Arn: (luking at mishra) flat lene se pehle he shud hav given his particulars!! Right!! we need dat!!
Mishra: actually, he shifted jst a few days back so abhi tak paper work ho ni paaya tha
Aryn: wht? Hw could a flat be allotted widout registration
Mishra: he said dat he urgently need it, gave advance, n promised dat wil provide al identity proofs n other requirements once he has settled.
Aryn: bt, r u aware, dats illegal
Misra: bt i........
Aryn(lil angry) anyways, atleast iska naam to pta hoga na apko!
Misra: wo, actually......
Aryn:(wid a disgust luk) u knw it or not????π‘
Misra: (luking down) no!!!
Stgn(frm behind) aryn, even no apparent prints found!!
Aryn shakes his head in total disgust n leaves d place. Ajy follows him holding those unpacked bags.
Body was in process of shifting. Shotgn n ppj also leaves d place wid it.
Mishra ji had realized dat he is going to be in trouble now. Tension covered his face.
Shy: misra ji, dnt worry! Kuch nhi hoga! Main hoon na! n.. ummm..... actually, now we wil hav to seal this flat until d proceedings wil go. So......
Misra: yeah sure! N plz try to solve this at ur earliest..
Shy: (smiling) we'l try our best!
Both moved out.
Edited by keep-smiling - 14 years agoChapter-7
In d office......
On discussion table......
Zubin is busy fixing crime scene photos on board.
Within few minutes officers reaches there n gets seated
On d right side of Aryn neha ajay n bxr r seated
On his left r shina papaji n stgn
Shy rolling d pencil, ppj busy writing smething
Deepika approaches. Settles down there. Luking at aryn "aryn, carry on"
Aryn almost jumps off his chair
Aryn: ok...., so we hav found a male body.... around 30 years of age .... shot by a bullet.... in his right eye.... lying in kitchen of his house.... which is on 3rd floor.... n a clean house..... no major evidences found.... neither do we knw of his identity (luking at neha) neha, I think nw we'l hav to go fr photo id search...
neha nodds
Dipi: n who discovered d body first?
Aryn: even dat prsn is unidentified. Bt bxr i.......
Bxr: I talked wid watchman. N uska kehna hai ki aj morning se afternun 11 bje tak koi bi outsider building me nahi gya
Aryn: wht?? Bt In dat case ya to wo iss hi building me rehta hoga ya phir misra jhuth bole rahen hain ki kisi ne unhe infrm kiya...
Shy: aryn, I knw misra ji, he jst cant be lying
Arn: may be shina! Bt either of two has to be true. N in both d cases misra is lying.
Shy: whatever, i.....
Stgn: (interrupting shy)n wht abt d frmal dress he ws wearing....
Ajay: simple, ws going out.. n nw here.... we jst hav to find out where..
Stgn: no, luk, my theory is.... he came in frm somewhere n felt thirsty n went near fridge to take water..... n that's why his fridge door ws open
Ajay: bt dat could be d other way around too. .... He ws abt to leave..... Felt thirsty n went to kitchen n.......
papaji ( interrupting ajay) no ajay, his house door ws open,
n there wer no forced entry marks, (luks at bxr who nodds) so it can be safely
concluded dat he came in
Ajy: kya ppj, aap bi stgn ki side.......
Dipi: one second, why so much of fuss over dis simple thing, check out when his car ws parked or talk to watchman abt it
they felts a jerk, It ws damn simple
bxr:(grinning) yeah, right dipika! According to watchman he entered at 10:30pm, so I guess, stgn's theory fits in....
ajay: bxr tu bi muje akela chod dega......
ppj: ajy, shut up! Commissioner sir ki warning ka koi asar hua hai ya nhi
stgn gives an evil smile to ajayπ
dipi: arre haan, aryn why commi called u.....
aryn: wil tell u latr....
shy: n yeah...neighbours ka kehna hai ki they didn't heard any bullet
sound, so...
aryn n dipi (together) silencer!!
Both share a smile. Shy fastens rolling d pencil....
Ajy: neighbours ka ye bi kehna hai ki he shifted in d flat only 2-3 days back n during dese days usse kuch log n ek girl milne aaye the...
shina: one more thing bothers me, killer shot d victim right on his eye, strange ya, I think it strongly signifies smething.....
dipi: possible!...... Bt May be it doesn't.... bcoz a shot on forehead is common,..... may be the killer ws nt a gud shooter n it sliped a lil.....
Shy: oh realy?? Wel muje to lagta hai intentional shot hai, shows d mentality of killer
Aryn: shina, we r jst analyzing d possibilities. N dipika u may be right Bt that wil be true only if killer shot him frm a distance. so.....
(luking at stgn) analyse d gun powder traces
(luking at ajy) check out those bags
(luking at neha) do photo id search
(luking at zubin) provide her a photo of victim fr search
(luking at bxr) try to find out abt dose ppl n girl frm same watchman
(luking at ppj n dipi) we wil be waiting fr autopsy report
ok guys.... (claps)...... get to work.....
every1 jumps out of their chair n leaves d place, except shina....
may be no 1 noticed.... bt she didn't received any orders frm aryn.....
may be jst bcoz.. right nw.., fr her,... there is nothing to do.....
but does shina too thinks in this way........?????
oh sorry fr d late reply. actually there ws no electricity here yesterday
woww nice updates Dii! Shotgun ne kuch to soch samajhkar bolaa finally. n y didnt Aryan give Shaina any duty? kahin aisa to nai k Arya Shai ko hate karne lagaa hai?π aur kya boluun? bohot hai bolne ke liye. wo sab to nai likh sakti naa so all in one...
FANTASTICπ³
Edited by Panchi-fanRamya - 14 years agoDipi: one second, why so much of fuss over dis simple thing, check out when his car ws parked or talk to watchman abt it
they felts a jerk, It ws damn simple
aryn n dipi (together) silencer!!
everyone seems very very excited with new case..w8ing for more..keep going deepti...it was brilliant update..ππΌ
Dipi: one second, why so much of fuss over dis simple thing, check out when his car ws parked or talk to watchman abt it
they felts a jerk, It ws damn simple
oh haan its so simple hmare officers se miss ho gya but its deepika hai na guide karne k liyeπ³
aryn n dipi (together) silencer!!
Both share a smile.