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Special Squad FF (pg- 15 secret mission revealed) (Page 5)

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Posted: 25 June 2009 at 6:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruha

wopieeeeeee very very happy to see another FF,will post my views soon after going through it,thanks for starting

 will b waiting!!!Smile


Edited by keep-smiling - 29 July 2009 at 11:26am
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Posted: 26 June 2009 at 5:34am | IP Logged
yayyy! tanx fr d update. wowww Aryan par Sangat ka asar? dont b judgemental? lol. lekin y did he blush? next part mein hai? ok ok :P pls pdate soon Dii! ye story bhi mujhe meri classmate Pallavi ko bataana hai.
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Posted: 26 June 2009 at 8:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Panchi-fanRamya

yayyy! tanx fr d update. wowww Aryan par Sangat ka asar? dont b judgemental? lol. lekin y did he blush? next part mein hai? ok ok :P pls pdate soon Dii! ye story bhi mujhe meri classmate Pallavi ko bataana hai.

oh!wow... is d story worth telling to ur friend!!!! thanksssTongue
wil update soon!!
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Posted: 26 June 2009 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Lovely lovely lovelyClap

ClapGreat startup,nice description,I liked u writing way,with deatails a lotStar

Deepika-Shaina saath saath Aru ki toh chatni baneji acchiWink LOL,ADS always rocks,cleanchit from commy nice,
Aryan par Deepika ka asarsaaf saaf dikh raha hai,that is more intresting,Wink LOL
LOLPapaji return was great but why is he tensed dear,And now who is AVS waiting for more and moreClap


Edited by ruha - 26 June 2009 at 1:19pm
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Posted: 26 June 2009 at 6:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruha

Lovely lovely lovelyClap

ClapGreat startup,nice description,I liked u writing way,with deatails a lotStar

Deepika-Shaina saath saath Aru ki toh chatni baneji acchiWink LOL,ADS always rocks,cleanchit from commy nice,
Aryan par Deepika ka asarsaaf saaf dikh raha hai,that is more intresting,Wink LOL
LOLPapaji return was great but why is he tensed dear,And now who is AVS waiting for more and moreClap

thankssssssssssssssss !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Big smile          Big smile          Big smile              Big smile                Big smile               Big smile                 Big smile    wil update soon!!!!   Hug             Hug              Hug                Hug             Hug           
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Previous ch on page-3

 

Chapter-4


The doors of elevatr opens. They r on d 3rd floor. Stogun standing outside d room no. 45. he's on phone.

The team reaches near.

Ar; yeah stotgun, done wid ur job?

Shgun: (tensed): aryn, zubin havn't came yet!

Ar: wht? Didn't u called him up!Shocked

Shtn: I called him in office itself, askd him to reach straight awy here! He has left frm home, bt nt reachd yet!Confused

 

Papaji; then call him nw, ask him where d hell is he! Its already too late!Angry

Shtgn: m tring, bt its saying dat his number is nt in service!

Bxr: wht? Then how did u called him in office.Confused

Shtgn: oh god! listen! I called on his landline number first, n askd him to reach here! Then me n shina came here.

Nt finding him here I called at his home, his mom said he has already left. N nw I m trying his personal number,bt its nt in service!! I askd her mother again. she denies for being aware of  any such thing.

Ajay: aree tune yahi address diya than na!

Shtgn: offcourse !! except room no. I too didn't knew dis!!Angry

 

Papji: par he shud have been here by nw, its gonna ba an hour!Angry

bxr: uhh! Let me ask dipika, kahi office na chala gya ho.(takes out his phone)Ermm

stgn: I have already done dat, he is nt there!! btw aryan,she ws asking why comm calld u???

aryn: wil tell u later, first tell me, why didn't........ I mean......u shud have called me, hum dekte hue aate!

Stgn: I did, u didn't received!

Ar: oh! Yeah , actually...... Anyway........Nw what??? We cant do anything b4 him!!

ajay: arre yaar, iss case ko start krne me hi itni problems aa ri hai, pata ni solve krenge to kya kya hoga!!Ouch

(may b every1 ws nw realizing the significance of his job n him!! they al even couldn't begin dere work widout him!!)Disapprove

 

Suddenly, aryn phone ring ecos in corrider!!

Some unknown number displayed!

Aryan: yes??

Other side: hey, Aryan aur kitna time lagega tume??Confused

Ar: zubin! Where r u??? Shocked

Zn: near d body! I m done! Waiting fr u!!

Aryn: what?? Bt....Shocked ok, wait  m cming (luking at stgn) wht u r doing!!Angry He is inside!! where s d body??

Ajay: kya hua??Confused

Ar: zubin is near body. Has completd work. Waiting fr us!!

Stgn: in kitchen Confused(starts moving ahead to direct evey1 2wards kitchen)

 

Shy is here. N d Body is lying straight. Gun shot on right eye. OuchBlood scattered. Fridge door is open. Rest everything in its place, nthing wrong, except, zubin nt here!Shocked

ar: (to shy)where's zubin??

Shy turns her face on opposite side ignorin aru.

Ar: shina???Stern Smile

 

smethin strucks ajay's mind, he almost snaches phone frm aru's hand.

Ajay: (on phone) (in a kidish tone)zubin!! hav taken al photos?? Nw come up to third floor of  building u r stnding near!! Room no.45....  aree.... Aree..... Tu aa to jaa...... batata hu......!

Ar: wht ws dat??Stern Smile

Ajay is luking at every1 n giggling!!!LOL

Bxr: awwww......... uhhh............ don't tell me dat he has taken photos of  dat girl suicide down there!!D'oh

Ajay couldn't stop laughing nw!!LOL  LOL

 

After few minutes

Zubin: hey, whts up!! N why every1 is here!!Confused

Ajay shifts a lil 2wards right so dat zubin cn luk at d body.

Zubin: ye kya hai???.......one sec......to wo kya tha???Shocked

Bxr: (moving frwd n resting his hands on zubin shoulders) ye hai "kaam ka"!! Wo tha "khaamkha"!!

Zubin: bt!!! No!!!! I mean.....!!!Confused

 

Papaji:(anger on his face n voice) Havn't u ever seen d yellow ss belt covering d crime scene!! Ws there any such..........Angry

Zn: off course I did notice! Bt I guessd may b I hv reached a lil early dats why....... I mean......Unhappy

Papaji: (height of anger)u guessed??? is dis a joke???? R u in ur senses?? Do u understand d seriousness??? Hav u.....Angry  Angry

Ar: (interrupting him) papaji, its ok! Relax!! Galti sab se ho sakti hai!! No one is perfect!!!

There a pin drop silence. Every1 luking at aru.

 

Ajay: (breaking d silence)  aryn!!! itne nek vichaar!!! Tumhare to ni ho sakte!!Silly

Aru realizes smething, gives a quickest possible luk at shy who's smiling, wich makes him feel embarrassed, starts luking down!!Embarrassed

Bxr: (smiling) I think me n bxr shud start luking around fr evidences! Chalo ajay!!

They leave d scene.


There is a wide smile on shy's face. She luks at aryn then turns her head 2 d other side maintaining d smile. Pushes back her hairs with her fingers.

But Shy being a girl knws every skills to hide her feelings.

Shy: ( controlling herself) aryn, I think I shud go n talk wid neighbours, abt dis dead prsn!!!

Bt aryn being a guy knws nthig of such skills

Aryn blushes.Blushing

Couldn't afford 2 luk up at her face.

But utters " yeah"

Pat.... Pat... Pat... pat....shy's heel!!

She leaves d place, smiling again, utters "stupid"

 

Zubin: aree papaji ur back!! Welcome!!Tongue

Ppj: (angrily)u better start ur work!!Angry

He starts clicking snaps n shotgn assists him in putting up the number cubicles.


Aryn: (luks at papji fr sme moment n then says) papaji!! Come wid me!!

Ppj: wht??Confused

Arn: (repeats) come!!!Smile

They walk out of d kitchen.

Arn: papaji! I hv noticed dat....... I mean......Is there any thing wich u r worried abt? Hav any problem? U cn tel me!

Ppj: n.. no.... a.. aryn there's nthing!

Aryn: papaji! Always remember dat, come wht may, we will b always there besides u! Trust us!!

Ppj: bt.... i....

Aryan: (emphasises)Trust us!!

Ppj thinks fr a moment then luks up, leaves a heavy breadth, smiles n nods!!Smile


next chapter on page-7



Edited by keep-smiling - 26 July 2009 at 10:44am
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Aaryan Shyna!?!?!?!? LOL

Nobody's perfect!!!!!hunh????LOL

Waiting 4 more!!!!!!!!!!!

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great update dipti..
 
ROFL
zubin toh zubin hi rehga,, when he said to aryan:-- hey, Aryan aur kitna time lagega tume??
 
I was  like Shocked zubin regular, sincere, but how???LOL
 
but he is zubin afterall.
 
Zubin: ye kya hai???.......one sec......to wo kya tha???Shocked

Bxr: (moving frwd n resting his hands on zubin shoulders) ye hai "kaam ka"!! Wo tha "khaamkha"!!

ROFL
 
superb, maza aa gaya....but why papaji is so tensed..OuchOuchlagta hain koi problem hain,, i hop aryan solve karde.
 
Ar: (interrupting him) papaji, its ok! Relax!! Galti sab se ho sakti hai!! No one is perfect!!!

There a pin drop silence. Every 1 luking at aru.

 Ajay: (breaking d silence)  aryn!!! itne nek vichaar!!! Tumhare to ni ho sakte!!Silly

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmSilly
 
Bt aryn being a guy knws nthig of such skills

Aryn blushes.Blushing

Wacko
 
now what is this???confusion confusion, confusion..
 
aru kya dono taraf se laddu khane ke mood mein  hain..Ouchkisi ka influence us par ho raha hain, kisi  aur ko dekh ke blush kar raha hain..ConfusedConfused
 
w8ing for this susspence &  love -triangle.. & case & papaji's problem...& zubin's parade..LOL
 
superb...Clappost soon..Tongue

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