Special Squad FF (pg- 15 secret mission revealed) - Page 4

Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by Pooj@


Deepika ke report ne SS ko bacha liya!!!!!!!!!! Hai Ram!!!!!!!!

Shy and Deepika together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

One must now expect FIREWORKS at any moment!!!!!!!!!!!!

Plz plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!


fireworksπŸ˜†   πŸ˜†    πŸ˜†

wil update soon!!!!πŸ˜›
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by ruha


wopieeeeeee very very happy to see another FF,will post my views soon after going through it,thanks for starting

 will b waiting!!!😊
Edited by keep-smiling - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
yayyy! tanx fr d update. wowww Aryan par Sangat ka asar? dont b judgemental? lol. lekin y did he blush? next part mein hai? ok ok :P pls pdate soon Dii! ye story bhi mujhe meri classmate Pallavi ko bataana hai.
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by Panchi-fanRamya


yayyy! tanx fr d update. wowww Aryan par Sangat ka asar? dont b judgemental? lol. lekin y did he blush? next part mein hai? ok ok :P pls pdate soon Dii! ye story bhi mujhe meri classmate Pallavi ko bataana hai.

oh!wow... is d story worth telling to ur friend!!!! thanksssπŸ˜›
wil update soon!!
Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely lovely lovelyπŸ‘

πŸ‘Great startup,nice description,I liked u writing way,with deatails a lot⭐️

Deepika-Shaina saath saath Aru ki toh chatni baneji acchiπŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†,ADS always rocks,cleanchit from commy nice,
Aryan par Deepika ka asarsaaf saaf dikh raha hai,that is more intresting,πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
πŸ˜†Papaji return was great but why is he tensed dear,And now who is AVS waiting for more and moreπŸ‘
Edited by ruha - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by ruha


Lovely lovely lovelyπŸ‘

πŸ‘Great startup,nice description,I liked u writing way,with deatails a lot⭐️

Deepika-Shaina saath saath Aru ki toh chatni baneji acchiπŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†,ADS always rocks,cleanchit from commy nice,
Aryan par Deepika ka asarsaaf saaf dikh raha hai,that is more intresting,πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
πŸ˜†Papaji return was great but why is he tensed dear,And now who is AVS waiting for more and moreπŸ‘

thankssssssssssssssss !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!πŸ˜ƒ          πŸ˜ƒ          πŸ˜ƒ              πŸ˜ƒ                πŸ˜ƒ               πŸ˜ƒ                 πŸ˜ƒ    wil update soon!!!!   πŸ€—             πŸ€—              πŸ€—                πŸ€—             πŸ€—           
Posted: 14 years ago

Previous ch on page-3

 

Chapter-4


The doors of elevatr opens. They r on d 3rd floor. Stogun standing outside d room no. 45. he's on phone.

The team reaches near.

Ar; yeah stotgun, done wid ur job?

Shgun: (tensed): aryn, zubin havn't came yet!

Ar: wht? Didn't u called him up!😲

Shtn: I called him in office itself, askd him to reach straight awy here! He has left frm home, bt nt reachd yet!πŸ˜•

 

Papaji; then call him nw, ask him where d hell is he! Its already too late!😑

Shtgn: m tring, bt its saying dat his number is nt in service!

Bxr: wht? Then how did u called him in office.πŸ˜•

Shtgn: oh god! listen! I called on his landline number first, n askd him to reach here! Then me n shina came here.

Nt finding him here I called at his home, his mom said he has already left. N nw I m trying his personal number,bt its nt in service!! I askd her mother again. she denies for being aware of  any such thing.

Ajay: aree tune yahi address diya than na!

Shtgn: offcourse !! except room no. I too didn't knew dis!!😑

 

Papji: par he shud have been here by nw, its gonna ba an hour!😑

bxr: uhh! Let me ask dipika, kahi office na chala gya ho.(takes out his phone)πŸ€”

stgn: I have already done dat, he is nt there!! btw aryan,she ws asking why comm calld u???

aryn: wil tell u later, first tell me, why didn't........ I mean......u shud have called me, hum dekte hue aate!

Stgn: I did, u didn't received!

Ar: oh! Yeah , actually...... Anyway........Nw what??? We cant do anything b4 him!!

ajay: arre yaar, iss case ko start krne me hi itni problems aa ri hai, pata ni solve krenge to kya kya hoga!!

(may b every1 ws nw realizing the significance of his job n him!! they al even couldn't begin dere work widout him!!)πŸ˜’

 

Suddenly, aryn phone ring ecos in corrider!!

Some unknown number displayed!

Aryan: yes??

Other side: hey, Aryan aur kitna time lagega tume??πŸ˜•

Ar: zubin! Where r u??? 😲

Zn: near d body! I m done! Waiting fr u!!

Aryn: what?? Bt....😲 ok, wait  m cming (luking at stgn) wht u r doing!!😑 He is inside!! where s d body??

Ajay: kya hua??πŸ˜•

Ar: zubin is near body. Has completd work. Waiting fr us!!

Stgn: in kitchen πŸ˜•(starts moving ahead to direct evey1 2wards kitchen)

 

Shy is here. N d Body is lying straight. Gun shot on right eye. Blood scattered. Fridge door is open. Rest everything in its place, nthing wrong, except, zubin nt here!😲

ar: (to shy)where's zubin??

Shy turns her face on opposite side ignorin aru.

Ar: shina???😳

 

smethin strucks ajay's mind, he almost snaches phone frm aru's hand.

Ajay: (on phone) (in a kidish tone)zubin!! hav taken al photos?? Nw come up to third floor of  building u r stnding near!! Room no.45....  aree.... Aree..... Tu aa to jaa...... batata hu......!

Ar: wht ws dat??😳

Ajay is luking at every1 n giggling!!!πŸ˜†

Bxr: awwww......... uhhh............ don't tell me dat he has taken photos of  dat girl suicide down there!!

Ajay couldn't stop laughing nw!!πŸ˜†  πŸ˜†

 

After few minutes

Zubin: hey, whts up!! N why every1 is here!!πŸ˜•

Ajay shifts a lil 2wards right so dat zubin cn luk at d body.

Zubin: ye kya hai???.......one sec......to wo kya tha???😲

Bxr: (moving frwd n resting his hands on zubin shoulders) ye hai "kaam ka"!! Wo tha "khaamkha"!!

Zubin: bt!!! No!!!! I mean.....!!!πŸ˜•

 

Papaji:(anger on his face n voice) Havn't u ever seen d yellow ss belt covering d crime scene!! Ws there any such..........😑

Zn: off course I did notice! Bt I guessd may b I hv reached a lil early dats why....... I mean......πŸ˜”

Papaji: (height of anger)u guessed??? is dis a joke???? R u in ur senses?? Do u understand d seriousness??? Hav u.....😑  😑

Ar: (interrupting him) papaji, its ok! Relax!! Galti sab se ho sakti hai!! No one is perfect!!!

There a pin drop silence. Every1 luking at aru.

 

Ajay: (breaking d silence)  aryn!!! itne nek vichaar!!! Tumhare to ni ho sakte!!πŸ€ͺ

Aru realizes smething, gives a quickest possible luk at shy who's smiling, wich makes him feel embarrassed, starts luking down!!😳

Bxr: (smiling) I think me n bxr shud start luking around fr evidences! Chalo ajay!!

They leave d scene.


There is a wide smile on shy's face. She luks at aryn then turns her head 2 d other side maintaining d smile. Pushes back her hairs with her fingers.

But Shy being a girl knws every skills to hide her feelings.

Shy: ( controlling herself) aryn, I think I shud go n talk wid neighbours, abt dis dead prsn!!!

Bt aryn being a guy knws nthig of such skills

Aryn blushes.☺️

Couldn't afford 2 luk up at her face.

But utters " yeah"

Pat.... Pat... Pat... pat....shy's heel!!

She leaves d place, smiling again, utters "stupid"

 

Zubin: aree papaji ur back!! Welcome!!πŸ˜›

Ppj: (angrily)u better start ur work!!😑

He starts clicking snaps n shotgn assists him in putting up the number cubicles.


Aryn: (luks at papji fr sme moment n then says) papaji!! Come wid me!!

Ppj: wht??πŸ˜•

Arn: (repeats) come!!!😊

They walk out of d kitchen.

Arn: papaji! I hv noticed dat....... I mean......Is there any thing wich u r worried abt? Hav any problem? U cn tel me!

Ppj: n.. no.... a.. aryn there's nthing!

Aryn: papaji! Always remember dat, come wht may, we will b always there besides u! Trust us!!

Ppj: bt.... i....

Aryan: (emphasises)Trust us!!

Ppj thinks fr a moment then luks up, leaves a heavy breadth, smiles n nods!!😊


next chapter on page-7

Edited by keep-smiling - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago

πŸ‘

Aaryan Shyna!?!?!?!? πŸ˜†

Nobody's perfect!!!!!hunh????πŸ˜†

Waiting 4 more!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted: 14 years ago

πŸ‘

great update dipti..
 
🀣
zubin toh zubin hi rehga,, when he said to aryan:-- hey, Aryan aur kitna time lagega tume??
 
I was  like 😲 zubin regular, sincere, but how???πŸ˜†
 
but he is zubin afterall.
 
Zubin: ye kya hai???.......one sec......to wo kya tha???😲

Bxr: (moving frwd n resting his hands on zubin shoulders) ye hai "kaam ka"!! Wo tha "khaamkha"!!

🀣
 
superb, maza aa gaya....but why papaji is so tensed..lagta hain koi problem hain,, i hop aryan solve karde.
 
Ar: (interrupting him) papaji, its ok! Relax!! Galti sab se ho sakti hai!! No one is perfect!!!

There a pin drop silence. Every 1 luking at aru.

 Ajay: (breaking d silence)  aryn!!! itne nek vichaar!!! Tumhare to ni ho sakte!!πŸ€ͺ

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmπŸ€ͺ
 
Bt aryn being a guy knws nthig of such skills

Aryn blushes.☺️

 
now what is this???confusion confusion, confusion..
 
aru kya dono taraf se laddu khane ke mood mein  hain..kisi ka influence us par ho raha hain, kisi  aur ko dekh ke blush kar raha hain..πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
 
w8ing for this susspence &  love -triangle.. & case & papaji's problem...& zubin's parade..πŸ˜†
 
superb...πŸ‘post soon..πŸ˜›
Posted: 14 years ago
πŸ˜† Our team is damn funny yaar... As Aryan said case starting me hi itni confusion! My my... Dipi hoti to bhadak jaati... Lekin Aryan hai to kuch to sambhala... actually that's strange!
 
Boxer's wonderful dialog "Ye Kaam ka... Vo khaamka πŸ˜†" Presence of mind ki daat deni padegi!
 
Waise... Shai ko Aru se itna kyun you know, disagreement.... Shai to straight forward hai.... Hmm... Someone something doing has not taken upto her well I see! πŸ˜•
 
Lekin sab kuch theek ho jayega.... 😊
 
Good to see your update after a long time yaarr.... Waiting for more... But don't make us wait more! 😳

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