None of us needs it!!!!
But still......
Introduction to characters:
Aryan Khanna: chief investigating officer
Deepika Ghosh: acting head-cum-chief forensic expert
Shina Singh: criminal psychologist
Ajay desai: investigatin officer
Neha Nair: computer forensic & electronic expert
Shubrato chaterjee:(Stotgun): lab forensic expert
Abbas ali baig: (Boxer): investigating officer
Zubin Driver: photographer & sketch artistEdited by keep-smiling - 14 years ago
I wil start it frm those days when both shina & deepika were in team!! they had startd taking new cases bt no one of them is intending to leave d team ever!! rest u wil make out!!!😊
chapter-1
Morning 9:56
Aryan typing on laptop in his cabin.
Shina enters.
Sh: gumng Aa.. Aryan!
Aaryan did't notice her
Sh: (again) aaryan.. I said gumng!
Ar: oh! Gumng shina
Shy occupies chair opposite to him n continues her gaze at him with a sharp expression in eyes...
Ar: (noticing her sharp eyes) (without luking up) kya hua?
Sh: aaryan don't u think deepika hamare kaam me ab kuch jyada hi interfere karne lagi hai..
Ar: (still luking down, wid a short smile) subah subah kya ho gya tumhe?
Sh: mujjjjee??? Ya tumhe?.
Aryan luks up to say smethng bt stops n agains starts typing
Sh: (in a scolding voice) I mean.. I nevr saw u taking paper work so seriously...
There is Silence fr a few seconds
Sh: Ohhh!! Nw u too think dat reporting is soo necessary fr crime fighters like us!!
Ar: (immediately closes laptop, still lukin down smiles , then bends a lil frwd 2ward her) shina, its nt abt nessesity, its......
Deepika enters.
De: gumng shina, gumng aaryan!! (Walking towards idols) any discussion going on?
Sh: yeah, n interestingly abt u n ur terms....
Aryan givin shy a questiong luk
De:(completing her prayers) hope, d gud ones!!!
Ar: yeah, like u r always in time.. neithr early nor late! luk its sharp 10:01! nahi shina??
Shina roling her eyes with a sour expressions.. turns her chair n gets up to leave cabin.. bt suddenly shy's & dipi's phone rang simultaneously...
De: haan ma?
Ma: beta pahuch gyi kya.. tum apna laptop to ghar bhul gyi..
De: what.. le me check.. oh yeah... Bt.. Anyways thanks mom.. ok.. bye
Sh: (on phone) ok ok don't worry!! Wil b there? bye....
Luking at puzzled dipi
Sh: what??
Dipi: I forgot ma laptop. Don't knw how..... I mean..
Sh: relax dipika! Galati sabse ho sakti hai!! No one is perfect (lukin at Aryan) nahi aaryan????
Aryan quite confusd & puzzld.😕
Sh: oh yeah, meri hi builng ke 3rd floor me ek 'murder' hua hai. I think v shud rush up..
Dipi: shina, don't conclude !! if its murder or what, thats what we r here 2 investigate...
Sh:wellll!!. we'll see!!! (Quickly turns n leaves..)
Aryan luks at dipi , she nodds , N he rushes out of cabin & starts calling ajay... boxer... shotgun.....
Edited by keep-smiling - 14 years agoChapter-2
Aryn & shina r standin near reception table.
Aryan calls out ajay.... boxer... shotgun............new case!
Within seconds he sees his budies ajay-boxer cming from left. Gives them a smile. N they both respond. Smiles of relief!
It ws first proper new case with dem after a months long spendn on old unsolvd cases..
Evn previous dry cleaners case ws half old half new!!
aryn realizes a sound frm his right "aryn, here!"
without disturbin dat wide smile, he moves his head toward right..
aryn: aree aap! Welcome back!!
The person streches his hand fr shake 2wards Aryan..
Aryan luks down at dat stretched hand...... smiles....
Then aryan immediately hugs him!! Holds fr a moment ..... den depart..
Shina: (her smile cming thru her voice) kaise hai aap papaji?
ppj: ( signs of stress on his face) well.. fine! bt missd u al a lot!
Every1 reaches near & greets him
Ppj: aryn, u said dere's a new case...... to chale?
Ajay: chale??? Kal sham ko hi to mumbai pahuche hain. Abhi se kam shuru?
Ppj: (wid heavy breadth) nahi, lectures le le ke bore ho chukka hu.. wnt a chang..
Aaryan: papaji, u r realy lukin stressd, I think u need 2 relax...... N waise bi......
Ppj: (stopping him) aaryan nthin else can relax me more dan my work.. n u cn understand dat better!!!
Aaryan lukin down, thinks fr a moment dan smiles n nodds!
But Ppj doesn't respond reasonably. Aaryn's smile vanishes.. nw he realizes smething more dan jst fatigue on his face.
Ppj: (turning 2wads exit door..) so... lets move! (Starts movng)
Aaryn: (stoppn him) arre papaji, dipika ko report to kr dijiye!
Shy quickly turn 2wards Aryan..
Ppj: oh yeah.. I jst.....(walks 2wds cabin..)
Aaryn holds his luk on ppj until he realizes shy gagzin at
him.........stretched eyebrows....narrowed eyes...... right part of her lower lips locked
between teeths..... her right hand palm resting on back of her neck.......
Aru: (utters)what???😕
Suddenly his phone rings!!!
He pats on his in upper pocket, takes it out.. reads d name on it.. a ray of alertness strucks him..
Aryan: sir!!!
Commissioner: aaryan, jaldi se aa k mujse milo.. n cm wid ajay n bxr!!
Aryn: any thing urgent sir?? Actually we wer jst abt 2.....
Comisnr: yeah it is!! Try 2 be quick!!
Aryn: I'll b there..
He luks back to find shy not there....
Ajay: (smiling)hmmm.. kya bole??
Aryn: wnts 2 meet urgently..
Ajy: thik hai, tum chale jao!! hm log crime scene par jaate hai.. (lukin at boxer) chalo bxr..
Aryn: no..he hs calld u n bxr too.. (lukin at shtgn) shotgn! u n shina go there fr initial procedure.. tak zubin wid u......bt where is he???
Shtgn : nt yet came.. i'll call him.. dnt wrry
Ppj returns.
Aryn: ppj.. u go wid shtgn on crime scene.. commisnr sir hs called us..
Ppj: oh! Dipika askd 2 submit dese workshop reports directly 2 him... pehle tmhre sath hi chl leta hoon..
Aryn: alright! lets go!!
one may now see a perfect power packed team exiting office!!!!!
next ch on page-3
wowwwwwwwwwww yar👏
its 2 gud⭐️.....update is cool👏..........papa ji returns...hmmmmm thts intresting......and case...abi pata hi nahi chala..........
and thts cuming up seems to be very intresting😉...hopes so k commisioner kuch bura na bole aryan ko....😕
he blushes
Couldn't afford 2 luk up at her face.....
oh ho ab yeh kya hai😳
well now in ur FF there is deepika and shaina both r present soo its a suspense who's this person...dipi or shy?????😛
but jaldi karna wait nahi hota u know na😳
have to wait for ur new update.....hope u will post it soo😃....
but this one is gr8 and waiting for more😉
keep writing.......and plz update soon😛