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Rishtha - bhandan jo kabhi na toote


The story revolves around three people, Aarman Malik, Mukti Khanna and Angad Khanna... the story is about Mukti Khanna the unfortunate girl who has faced absolutly no love in her life. Especially from her family members... Practically being raised as an orphan in her own home she becomes a girl who is seen as a waste of space and a mear expense, in other words the unwanted member of the family. Her only source of love within the family was her grandmother (dadi) who unfortunately died a little after she joined collage. She knew nothing about her mother's side of the family, actually she did not even know her mother and father. Both of them had died in an accident when she was very younge!

The story also involves three other people, Ridhima Guptha, Prem Sharma and Kripa Shasthri. The three of them play very important roles in Mukti's life individually but with out them the story of Mukti Khanna can never be compleat. They are the people who show Mukti things like love, affection and make her understand she is also worth something in life. Prem is the person who plays the biggest part in the development of Mukti... and that is where our story starts.



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Charecters:


Mukthi Khanna the main charecter of this sotry, the girl who was beautyful from both inside out... though most of the time she takes and effort to cover up the beauty. Through out her life she has lived as the person with no one to rely on and pushed to be independent even though at times all she wants to do is be dependent on some one... even if it is just emotionally. Pain was not something new to her, but indeed she was crafted from the pain and turned to a girl who was so beautyful that she could not hide it.

Angad Khanna he is Mukti's elder cosin, as well as the prat of the family who was pampered by his parents. Angad wants, Angad gets... at times even if it means hurting Mukti quiet badly. Although most of the time he does not realise that his actions are causing her the pain he continues to do so... more importantly he is the lover boy of Mumbai. He was so brilliant that he hardly ever got marks in areas like science but was excellent in bussiness and bussiness related studies.

Dhilip Khanna he is Angad's father and a very big bussiness man who loves his wife and children. Though he does not have much respect for his mother he still respects her. He runs a large empier because of his great effort and brillant use of the right people. According to him, bussiness was run by the people you higher and the money you invest. He was married to his bussiness partner Naina Kashap now Naina Khanna for years, being raised as a woman with mordern values she too worked with him in the bussiness as the Managing Director.

Naina (Kashap) Khanna the woman who was Dhillip's right hand in bussiness and the mother of his children. She was a woman who was both powerful and set towards the development of the bussiness, she loved her children but was quiet fair in terms of any judgement though she did pamper Angad. Unlike her husband she never made harsh claims and tried to give the children a balanced life.

Karthick Khanna the elder son of the Khanna's a very responsible man who had a soft cornor towards his brother Angad. He was a person who lived a balanced life with a good calculation of both time and importance work. Trained under Naina and Dhilip he could work hard, play hard and party even harder. At the moment, he was engaged to Mishti Bose his collage friend and fashion desigher. Though no one really understood how thetwo of them could get married, they were very different people.

Anita Khanna the only daughter of the Khanna's she was appart from that nothing speical, though like her parents she was constantly partying, working with friends on some 'project' and got over appriciated for the smallest activities. In fact she was nothing at all! Through out her life she was being compared to her cosin Mukti by her teachers constantly making her feel very jellous!

Dhaya (Janka) Khanna the woman who was known as dadi, some one who was the only person Mukti could call family. She loved the four children dearly and always tried to make things fair, a woman with great love and care she was also some one who was not happy with the life Dhilip and Naina lead but kept silent about it. She was also the only person who saw through Anita's act and how mean she was to Mukti .

This is the Khanna pariwar... please let me know what you think about this story... I'll update soon.

Krishi

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very nice keep update send pm when you updateBig smile


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Hey ur ff is awesome. Plz PM me when u update plzz. Thnks!!1

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Prem Yudi Sharma the man who becomes the biggest support of Mukti through the biggest challange of her life. He starts as her friend but latter becomes her lover who after a point, their relationship is that founded of great pain. He goes by his mother's name as he feels his father is not worth it because of the fact that he raped his mother making her consive him. He was the 'najaz' son of Anurag Basu and Prerna (Sharma) Bajaj, who greatly loved his mother.

Prerna (Sharma) Bajaj she is Prem's mother and a wonderful writer, her short stories are famous among people but she uses a different identity all together. Very few people know of her true identity and that is her family. Though she is from a middle class family she fit into the high class easily she is indeed a wonderful human! She is a rape victim but raises from the incident... it is this strength that attracts Mr. Rishab Bajaj towards her making him marry her. That and her love for his three children.

Rishab Bajaj he is a great bussiness tycoon and the husband of Prerna (Sharma) Bajaj. He has four children two sons and two daughters... actually three children and one step child. Despite this he never let his children feel the difference... he was a wonderful person inside out who was involved in several social activities though he never let it out in the media. He did social service for his heart and not for media. He was among the few people who knew that Prerna was the great writer appart from being her biggest fan.

Tushar Bajaj the eldest son of Prerna Bajaj and the only son of Rishab Bajaj who lost his 'mother' when he was ten but got one again when he was thirteen in the form of Prerna. She loved him greatly and always tried to be the mum he deserved... Tushar was at the moment doing his final year MBA in U.S.A!

Vishaka Bajaj the eldest daughter of Prerna and Rishab Bajaj, she too lost her 'mother' at the age of ten and got one in Prerna when she was thirteen. She was not inclined towards MBA so she went into fashion and ran a fashion house where she would import clothes, jwellery, shoes and what not from all over the world. A girl who was (err the hot babe of Mumbai) who was constantly the eye candy of several Mumbai boys.

Kuki Bajaj the youngest daughter of Prerna and Rishab Bajaj, the final year student of Bussiness Administration in a renound collage, she is inclinde towards the bussiness and is interested joining the family bussiness latter. She is slightly studious and not exactly the hot matterial like Vishaka but a nice girl.

This is the Bajaj Pariwar... I'll bring in the Basu Pariwar in next...

Krishi


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Prem Yudi Sharma the man who becomes the biggest support of Mukti through the biggest challange of her life. He starts as her friend but latter becomes her lover who after a point, their relationship is that founded of great pain. He goes by his mother's name as he feels his father is not worth it because of the fact that he raped his mother making her consive him. He was the 'najaz' son of Anurag Basu and Prerna (Sharma) Bajaj, who greatly loved his mother.

Anurag Basu the father of Prem but he has not seen his son for a long time, agreed he knows about his son's existence but nothing about his development or what he is doing now. This is the punnishment given by Prerna for his crime, raping her, and he continues to regret it even today. He is a great father to the two kids he does have but continues to hope to one day show his love to Premas well. He is married to Sampatha (Dikshith) Basu who was his secretory at one point.

Sampatha (Dikshith) Basu the mother of Anurag's children and his wife. She is from a very poor family and the Basu power is the other extreem for her, she loves Anurag after all these years of marriage and hopes to get Prem and him togehter. She is a house wife and enjoys being the home maker and taking care of Anurag's networks and parties.

Mohini (Tahuja) Basu she is more popular by the lable of 'dadi' and Anurag's mother, she is (to the world) a social worker who works hard in spreading awareness about child sexual abuse, abuses agaisnt women and even certain abuses against men that have been hidden by society. She is very smart but has a tendency to travel constantly in her life and is hardly home. Most of her wardrobe is in her car... since she was married at a very young age thus had children very soon. She was very loving and always affectionate with everyone around her.

Shravan Basu he is the son of late Sham Basu (Anurag's elder brother) and late Tejaswini (Chatterji) Basu who died when they were younge. Shravan is raised by Anurag as his own son and at the moment he aids him in the bussiness with marketing. He loves Anurag like his own father, he does not know about Prem nor about what Anurag did to Prerna all those years ago. He does not remember his father or mother but he sees a mother in Sampatha. He is actually the reason Sam and anurag came together innitially but he does not know about this.

Taniya Basu the daughter of Anurag and Sampatha Basu, she is doing her 10th now and will soon see the boards. She is a very sweet girl who works hard to get the marks and always works through she is unable to get marks in science and maths but she is good at litterature. Thus she takes up economics and computer science so that she can clear her exams. Anurag and Sampatha not being very strict parents give her the oppertunity to do so as she is brilliant other wise. She too does notk now anything about Anurag's past or about Prem.

Ragav Basu the son of Anurag and Sampatha Basu, he is doing his eighth and is the naughty son of the house. He is not that studious but gets the marks, he enjoys his school life anything and lives a life where he has knowladge about the past of his fahter or Prem. He is too much of a kid but quiet responsible when needed!

Next Promo!

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First Promo!

The dark night was filled with clouds and nothing that gave light, in her hand was a small bronz lamp that was lit. She was dressed in a dark brown skirt and blouse a dupatta drapped over her head covering her head. Her walk was strained and carefully measured as the anklets on her feet making the constant noise similar to the sound of the bangles in her hand. The girl's face was hidden in the vail of her duppata, she walked up to a particular spot where a stone cementry lay. She knelt down and placed the lamp near it and closed her eyes in prayer. There it was shining in the light of the lamp a carving of a beautyful woman with the most gentle features of motherhood. Even in the black marble her mark of marraige shone out. The lady sat there looking at the picture with out saying a word for some time before leaving just as the sun rays began comming up.

Krishi

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Awesome promo. wow. Plzzz continue soon with the nxt part!! Thnks for the PM!!

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