DMG 5 years from now #5 UPD PART 83 PAGE 37 :) (Page 5)

wow kiran that was great! so she finally knws the truth! wonder what will happen next! cant wait to read more! hope u continue soon ! and congrats once again on ur fifth thread! =D

hey Kiran di,

awww soo cute...

See why we love you that muchhh??? Just for you to pen down something in 20 minutes because of the overflow of emotions reading all those messages is exactly why we loveee you.....

And what a 20 minutes those must have been... I've told you earlier, I love DMG 5 years because it had been my first ever FF, the first one I had started to read when joining this forum, so it is special in more than one ways... I've told you how much you inspired me to write as well because I loved your FF.... Today, I actually realize that even I don't know how muchh.....

The part reminded mee of soo much.... Just sooo sooo muchh!!... To start with, something I've been missing since pretty a longggg time noww, the characters of AR that I'd fallen in love with the very first time, especially for once, that of Riddhima... You just reminded me how much with this part.... See this is exactly why we don't want you getting over with this sooo sooon>>>..... understand now dumbo?? You've created a beautiful story here, and if you want, can go on for more than this being the last thread.... *fingers crossed~ am hoping it isn't!!!*.....

Two things struck me the most.... The part where it finally drains into Riddima that Armaan had done it all for her, not out of duty, but out of love, and though some may find the kiss and everything pretty cool and romantic, I feel the best part is the one above, where they speak volumes through their eyes, where Riddhima acknowledges the pain he's taken to give her joy... Its undescribable how fine a writer I thought you've turned into when I read, no sorry saw, that part happening in front of my eyes... To the way reality drowns in on Riddhima, to the way Armaan blinks his moisted eyes, I could just seee it happening!!.... Second, is the ArA convo.... Another masterpiece again... Wonderful way to start it, but what an end!! Am sure it was a booster for the AA plot to shape up... But the friendship blossoming again could just be felt above all.... and our Armaan, as forgiving as ever!!.... Loll.....


I won't say sorry for being late.... you know its become a habit.... ;)) Don't you dare wrap this up soon, even if you take 6 months to post a part next time... I'd choose waiting 6 months for a part, rather not having one anyday!!! Understand???.....


You know we love you....
Muahhhhhhhhhhhhh,
Sneha

First of all Congratulations Kiran for completing 4 successful threads of this wonderful story...and I'm sure this 5th one would be completed too soon...!!  

Edited by arvanu - 21 June 2009 at 10:39am

kiran this was superb.... really nice i mean the way ridz understood the situation and the way they can communicate without many words was just incredible and really well described...

yeah yeah yeah...finally a new part...tabse old parts padh ke kaam chala rahi thi! hehe

Hey kiran!!!!!!

Congrats again!!!!

Gr8 part as usual! Loved the whole AR scene. Beautifully written! A nice example of 'actions speak louder than words'. Nice articulation of emotions.

Loved the whole AA scene as well especially the one liner by Armaan about Atul. Guess its time for some development in the Atul – Angie relationship!

Eagerly awaiting the next part!

Love

smriti