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Posted: 19 June 2009 at 7:58am | IP Logged

hey trisha.....cool yaar...congo for a new FFBig smile

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Posted: 19 June 2009 at 8:28am | IP Logged
I know, I know u should be wondering 'what is she doing here?, she hadn't comment on any FFs or even update her FF' but I was  getting bored so thought to write something, so i thought why not give a try here. I will update on my FFs after 28th june. I know the part is very bad but it's the only think I had in mind.


Ridhima looked at Nikki. That's true Ridhima is angry with Armaan but she hadn't thought about this. And when Nikki asked this question, it made her confused, she doesn't know what to reply.

On the other side, Armaan was just standing on the edge of the locker door. He saw Ridhima lowering her head. He felt hurt, his heart twisted, he didn't his one mistake will led him here. Tears leaked from his eyes, he can't imagine his life without Ridhima.

Ridhima's eyes fall on Armaan, who was looking down and she knew he was crying. Before Armaan could look at her, she looked back at Nikki.

Ridhima:Nikki mein usse shaadi karounghi

(Ridhila felt good saying this. And Armaan felt happy listening this.)

Ridhima:Lekin usne mera wishvas todha hai, iske liye mein usse kabhi maaf nahi karoun ghi

(Armaan felt miserable seeing his Ridhima crying.)

Armaan(to himself):Kyon maine kiya aisa? Kyon maine nahi bataya Ridhima? Maine uska wishwas todh diya hai woh kitna vishwas karti thi mujhpar. Maine usse isi liye nahi bataya tha kyon mujhe daar tha usse kho dene kha. Mera wohi daar sach hogaya. Oh god, I should have tell her at the first place. Lekin mujhe abhi kis bhi tarah Ridhima se mafi mangni hogi.

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Abhi saw Nikki leaving, he felt bad seeing Nikki crying but he too was hurt as she always support Armaan. He banged his hand on his desk.

Abhi:Damn it! yeh mere saath hi kyon ho raha hai, kyon mein usse apne dimaag se nahi nikal paa raha?

In frustation, he passed his hand in his hair. His life has messed from the day he came her and more from the day he started in falling in love with Nikki.

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Armaan called someone and when he was done he smiled widely.

Mainwhile, Ridhima came out and saw that Angie has already left.

Ridhima:Yeh di kahan chali gayi?

Armaan:Maine unhe bejh diya basket

She looked at him and she was ready to explode.

Ridhima:How dare u Armaan, tumne unhe kyon bejha, tumhe pata tha ke woh mujhe ghar drop kareinghi

Armaan:Lekin mujhe tumse baat karni thi jaan

Ridhima(angrily):mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni

She started to make her way toward the road but was stopped by Armaan who has held her wrist and made her face him. She was looking everywhere expect Armaan.

Ridhima:Armaan chodo mujhe

Armaan:nahi ridhima, pehle tum meri baat suno, aur waisai bhi tumhara haath chorne ke liye nahi thama tha

She looked in his eyes which caused an eye lock. But as soon as Ridhima realizes what she was doing she broke the eye lock.

Armaan:Ridhima, I am the biggest jerk, the biggest idiot, I am complete duffer.

Listening that Ridhima smiled. Which was a relief to Armaan. He held her hand.

Armaan:I know I should have told you. But I was scared to loose and see what happen, knowing that u r angry on me.

Ridhima:I am not angry on that Armaan, but u should have told me all this the very first day but u keep hidden it. Kiya tum mujh par sirf itna hi barosa karte ho?

Luv u all<333
Kashish

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Aww

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Posted: 19 June 2009 at 9:13am | IP Logged
heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon



love
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Posted: 19 June 2009 at 9:17am | IP Logged
nice parts
 
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deepu :)

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Posted: 19 June 2009 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
Kashish girl i loved your part you should contnue it.This was going in my mind and bingo you penned it down in the perfect manner love you for this...
 
So here i go with the next part
 
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Armaan:Nahi Riddhima muje tumpe pura bharosa tha bus dar lagta tha...Aur jab maine tumhe sab kuch batane ki himaat ki tab tumhara phone us Modi ke paas tha
Riddhima:Mera phone Dr Modi ke pass?
Armaan:Ha pata hai tum Dr Modi ke saath vo assignment karne wali thi..
Riddhima:(remembering)Oh ha mera phone toh Dr Modi..
Armaan:Ha aur phir next day tum agayi aur muje bina vajah jhadga karna pada
Riddhima:Ohh..Isiliye tumne jhadga kia?
Armaan:Ha..varna tum pata nahi kya karti agar tumhe pata chal jata..
Riddhima:Hmm..
Armaan:Aur phir Shubhanker Sir aur Keerti Maam ki engagement par mai pari ko ring usse vapas dene gaya tha.
Riddhima:Lekin Pari tumahre ghar ayi kaise??
Armaan:Aha..vo kya tha jab tum pub se gayi na toh vo pari behosh ho gayi aur pub ke manager ne kaha ki muje usse mere saath le jana hoga kyuki vo mere saath dance kar rahi thi
Riddhima:What??Ye kaisa reason hai?
Armaan:God knows
Riddhima:Chalo ab humare beech koi misunderstand toh nahi hogi..
Armaan:Riddhima mai tumse promise karta hu ki tumse koi baat nahi chupaunga.Har baat tumse kahunga.I promise par please tum ye shaadi mat todna.Mai mar..
Riddhima put her hand on his lips
Riddhima:Aisa nahi kehte..
Armaan:Kabhi nahi kahunga..I promise
Riddhima:Kya??Tum mujse kuch nahi kahoge??(teasing him)
Armaan:Nahi yaar.Mai tumse har baat share karunga
Riddhima:That's like my armaan
Armaan:Ek hug milegi pleaseeeeee
Riddhima:Ok
RIddhima hugs Armaan
Riddhima:Armaan tumhe nahi lagta hume Nikki aur Dr Modi ke beech jo misunderstanding hai vo clear karni chahiye
Armaan:(boiling)Phir se Modi.........
Riddhima:Armaannnnn
Armaan:Kya hai?
Riddhima:Armaan tumne dekha na Nikki kitni upset thi
Armaan:Ha aur sab us Mody ki vajah se
Riddhima:Nahi Armaan..Dr Modi isliye gussa hai kyuki Nikki ne unke support mai kuch nahi kaha aur unka gussa jaize haina...Jab mai admit nahi karti thi ki mai tumse pyaar karti hu tum kitne gusse ho jaya karte the..
Armaan:Lekin
Riddhima:Lekin vekin kuch nahi hum Nikki aur Dr Modi ko ek karenge.Chalo promise karo.
Armaan:No promise
Riddhima:Armaann pleaseee Nikki ki khushi ke liye
Armaan:NO
Riddhima:Theek hai.Maine dekh lia tum Nikki ko rota hi dekhna chahte ho..
Armaan:Aisi baat nahi hai
Riddhima:Aisi hi baat hai
Armaan:OK.Mai tumahari madad karunga
Riddhima:Yupiee...
Armaan:Ek shart pe
Riddhima:Kaunsi shart??
Armaan:Yehi ki tum mujse jald se jald shaadi karogi
Riddhima:Ok(blushing)
Armaan:Oye Hoyye
 
 

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Posted: 19 June 2009 at 1:40pm | IP Logged

@kashishk -nice to see u dear after many days..........really missing ur ffs........n this part is really  a very nice one...

@Trisha...nice part dear .... continue sooooooon.

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Posted: 19 June 2009 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
hey guys
great ff can't wait to read more
continue soonSmile
 
>333 shraddha


Edited by guju_girl1 - 19 June 2009 at 1:56pm

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