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Posted: 19 June 2009 at 6:53am | IP Logged

Hello People..

Yup..I have opened a Open DMG FF..This starts from 18th June Epi of DMG
 
Part 1
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Recap:Nikki-Armaan-Ridz have convo in them locker room.Abhi calls Nikki in his cabin..Riddhima comes to know about Pari staying at Armaan's house for one full night and is very upset with Armaan
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Riddhima:Mera hath chodo armaan
Armaan:RIddhima please ek baar meri baat sun lo pleas
Riddhima:ARMAAN!!LEAVE MY HAND!!
Armaan leaves her hand..Riddhima rushes and goes to the Fire Escape
Riddhima:Kyu Armaan??Kyu??Maine tumpe itna bharosa kia aur tumne mujse jhoot bola??Kya tumhe ek baar bhi guilty feel nahi ayi ki maine usse jhoot bola.Kyu Armaan kyu??
Riddhima hears some one open the door.She wipes her tears and looks back and see's Armaan standing there
Riddhima:Kyu aiye ho tum yaha??Chale jao
Armaan:Riddhima let me explain
Riddhima:Ab explain karne ke liye kya bacha hai Armaan??
Armaan:Bahut kuch please...
Riddhima:Armaan leave me alone..PLEASE!!
Armaan stands there without moving..Seeing Armaan standing like a statue riddhima leaves the FE..
Armaan:Yaar...Kyu kyu??Maine usse nahi bataya...Vo mujpe kitna trust karti hai...I broke her heart...
~~Abhi's Cabin~~
Abhi:Toh Dr Nikkita mil gaya time apko mere cabin mai ane ka??
Nikki:Sorry..
Abhi:Sorry kehne se kuch nahi Dr Nikkita..Kher chodiye ap muje Vishal ki file dekhaiye
Nikki gives the file to Abhi.Abhi reads the file
Abhi:YE KYA HAI DR NIKKITA???APKA DHYAAN KAHA HAI??APNE GALAT DAVAI DE DI..APKO PATA HAI ISKI JAAN JA SAKTI THI??DO YOU EVEN REALISE THAT??OH I AM SORRY APKA DHYAAB TOH APKE "DOST" ARMAAN MAI HAI
Nikki looks at Abhi
Abhi:Apna dhyaan yehi rakhiye Dr Nikkita varna mai apko yaha se nikaal sakta hu..
Nikki:So..rry..sir..Aisi..gal..ti..nah.i..ho..gi(crying slightly)
Nikki leaves
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Locker Room
Ridddhima is sitting in the bench and crying..Armaan is standing at the door looking at her..Atul comes and see's Armaan looking at Riddhima
Atul:Oye??Vaha kya dekh raha hai??Seedha andar ja usse bat karni ho toh..Aise choro ki tarah kyu dekh raha hai
Mean while riddhima wipes her tears and goes to her locker..
Atul:Rids..
Riddhima:Ha atul..
Atul:Ridz?Tum ro rahi thi??
Riddhima:Nahi atul aise koi baat nahi hai bas ankh mai kuch chala gaya tha.
Atul:Ohh..Vaise Anjie kaha hai??
Anjali:Mai yaha hu Atul
Atul:Tum agayi anjali..
Anjali:ATUL!!Meri duty khatam ho gayi hai toh mai yahi ayungi na..(pauses)Kyu muje yaha nahi ana chahiye tha(innocent voice)
Atul:Arey nahi nahi aisi koi baat nahi tum maan chahe asakti ho.Ye toh tumahara hi locker room hai.
Anjali:Yeah Right..Ridzie chale ya phir tum Armaan ke saath arahi ho??
Before Rids could answer Nikki came in crying
Anjali:Nikki??Kya hua??Tum ro kyu rahi ho?
Nikki:Nahi kuch nahi Anjie
Atul:Nikki jhoot mat bolo koi aise rota hai kya??
Armaan:Nikki kya baat hai
Nikki:Maine kaha na KUCH NAHI!!
Atul:Ok Nikki tum itna insist karti ho toh hum nahi puchange..Any way mai toh chala
Atul leaves
Anjie:Take care Nikki..Rids chale??
Riddhima:Ha di bas 2 min
Anjie:Ok
Anjie leaves.Riddhima putting her sadness aside goes to Nikki
Riddhima:Nikki kya baat hai??
Nikki:Maine kaha na..
Riddhima:Jhoot mat bolo Nikki.Tumahri ankhe bata rahi hai...Aur tum abhi Dr Modi ke cabin mai thi na..Kya hua?
Nikki:(breaking down)Vo mujse pyaar nahi karta Riddhima.Meri ek galati ke vajah se muje itni badi saza mil rahi hai..Mai kyu kuch nahi boli riddhima kyu?
Riddhima:Nikki Dr Modi tumse pyaar karte hai bas abhi gussa hai tum unhe mannalo sab theek ho jayega..
Armaan:Kuch theek nahi hoga
Riddhima:Mai tumse baat nahi kar rahi..
Armaan feels hurt and leaves
Nikki:Tumne armaan se aise baat kyu ki??Aur tum..tum ro rahi  thi??
Riddhima:Nahi Nikki
Nikki:JHOOT!
Riddhima:(crying)Armaan ne mujse jhoot bola Nikki..Vo ring pari ki thi..Pari Armaan ke puri raat thi..aur Armaan ne muje bataya bhi nahi..
Nikki:WHAT??Nahi Riddhima aisa nahi ho sakta
Riddhima:Aisa hi hai Nikki maine apne kano se Armaan aur Pari ko baat karte suna
Nikki:Ye sare mard ke jaise hote hai bas hume dard dena chahte aur kuch nahi
Riddhima:You're right Nikki..
Nikki:Riddhima??
Riddhima:Hmm..
Nikki:Kya tum Armaan se shaadi karogi??
 
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If any one wants to continue please do..I will surely continue later..
 
 


Edited by cute_trish - 20 June 2009 at 10:02am

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                         Heart hai Trisha Heart Congrats For The New FF Heart

                                               

Edited by k_anjali12 - 19 June 2009 at 8:36am

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hey nice start TrishaSmile

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plz continue

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@Hima Thanks alot hima

@ bradford Thanks even you can continue it's an open FF
@aliyaha Even you can continue..I know you are such a amazing writer

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heyyy nice
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Hey nice part. Continue soon!!!

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