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Ssshhh phir koi hai (RA, MayUr, SG, AR & AS) [AR FIGHT PG 68] - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow afreen wth a concept really dear ek dum alag very nice keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: tanu.g

wow afreen wth a concept really dear ek dum alag very nice keep it up

thanks tanu for liking it actually i was trying to find a horror ff on IF lekin nahi mili so i thought main hi likh lete hu but now is ff k liye horror scene decide karte karte muje raat me sapne ane lage hai yaar sapno se bohat sari ideas b milti hai
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one but little confusing. thanks for PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 2:
Vijayban returns home.
Pratap: aap ko usse jaanse nahi marna chaheye tha.
Vijay: to aur kya karte hum..agar koi b humare parivar k saat bura kare to..
Pratap: to kya aap uski beti ko b maar denge..
Vijay: nahi jo b ho vo humare bhai k beti hai hum use nahi maar sakte..
Pratap: lekin uska diya hua shaap..
Vi: bas hum us bare mein koi baat nahi karna chahte. (a servant came in).
Servant: maharaj vo rani ma ki haalat bohat kharab hai aap k jane k thodi der baad woh seediyo se gir gayi. (vijaybaan uske kamre me jaata hai Sonia).
So: ma aap hume chodkar nahi jaa sakti.
Mom: jina aur marna to prakrati ka niyam hota hai jo is duniya me aata hai use is duniya se jaana b hota hai,yeh lo (she gives sonia a sun shaped locket) yeh tumare humesha raksha karega (& she dies).
Pratap: maine aap se kaha tha k uske shaap se sabka bura hoga aur agar yeh sach hai to 23 saal ki umar mein rajkumari.
Vi: nahi hum humari beti ko kuch nahi hone denge hum kal hi usse yaha se dur videsh bhej denge (raj was listening all this and was very sad).
Next day Sonia was about to leave & was meeting everybody but raj was hidding behind aur jab usne milne ki sochi to use yaad aaya k Sonia ne kaha tha k woh usse kabi nahi milley gi aur Sonia left & raj was crying and left the payal which he was holding. 15 years leap..
End..Edited by afreenaamna - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow cool part i am looking for next update , thank you for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh thats a sad one 4 Raj n Sonia. The shrap thing is a lil confusing but I'm sure it will get clearer gradually.
 
Anyways, continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice part..............its sad sonai left without meeting raj.......and next is the leap........interesting...cont soon.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
woah dear🤗 its really awesome one⭐️ superb dear😳 nice concept😍but here couples r opposite😕 plz continue it soon😛& thanks for the pm😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
it was realy great part....thnx fr the pm..... plzzz conti soon.... luv aarti..
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Posted: 14 years ago
looking forward to it start soon and pm when you update