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Posted: 17 June 2009 at 7:54pm | IP Logged
Great 1st update yaar!!
it sounds very interesting and i cant wait for the next one!! both manav and preet sound like great characters and i cant wait for their lovestorys to start!!

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that was awesum
i loved the water sceneLOL
loved the precap
can't wait....
thankz for pm


Edited by -Pooji- - 17 June 2009 at 8:28pm

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YAY!! Part 1!!!! *woot woot*
 
Oooooh, i like how you interconnect the stories!! It's really cool!! Shows the contrast not only in their lives, but in the way they were brought up, their personalities and everything else!! *thumbs up*
 
Can't wait for Meher and Archana's entry!!!!
 
Hope you update soon, eagerly waiting for the next part!!!!
 
 

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Next day

 

Manav is about to leave for work when his sister Jyoti comes asking him to take her to the temple and he agrees.

Preet on the other hand take Heer shopping.

Manav is at the temple when someone bumps into him, the guy said sorry and Manav said it is okay. Preet feels the bump and thinks the guys beside him bumped into him and told him to watch where he is walking, Heer takes him from there.

Manav is walking up the stairs and goes to pray, he is telling god that when will he find her, it was the first time he told someone about his dream girl and hope his Aai will find her, he tells his sister he going to wait for him downstairs and leaves from there, while putting on his shoes a girl who drops her taali is about to fall but Manav catches her, her hair is blowing into her face, Manav who is mesmerized by her is just glazing at her, her dupatta goes onto manav's face and she removes it off, after a good five minutes he let got of her, her sister Varsha runs after her asking her if she is okay, Manav's sister comes and recognizes Varsha and they both tell there sister and brother that they go to school together, and both introduce Manav and Archana and both leave different ways, Manav is still standing there looking at Archana is walking but turns around to see Manav when

Khulti fizaein, khulti ghatayein,
Sar pe naya hai aasaman,
Chaaro dishayein, hass ke bulaye,
Yu sab hue hai meharbaan..

Haann..
Hume to yahi rabba,
Kasam se pata hai,
Dil pe nahi, koi zor, koi zor
[Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore, hai rabba
Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore..]- 2 times

Plays

 

A girl wearing western short dress is waiting for someone but no one has arrived, she gets mad, on the other hand heer and preet are still shopping, the girl waits for a little while more and ends up taking cab asking them where the juneja mansion is and he takes her.

Heer realizes she is later and tells preet to hurry up, they reach to the airport to find out that the flight from London has arrived and every passenger has left and both heer and preet think meher has arrived home, heer is worried as she knows meher's anger, preet tells her to relax.

The girl is in the cab when the cab stops, she goes to see what is happening and she see's Manav who is in the middle of the road fixing his bike, and meher gets mad and both meher and manav get at it, meher just walks off, one of manav's friends ask who she was, manav tells him she is a rich spoilt brat and we have noting to do with and he leaves, meher sist in the car telling her self what type of people there are in India.

Archana drops her sister off and goes to work, while walking she drops some files, when her boss comes and helps her he tells her how she is and she tells him she is fine and she leaves and her boss smiles, one of Archana's colleague also a friend tell her about going to the movies but Archana's refuses but they convince her and she agrees.

Meher reaches to the Juneja Mansion, she is walking in when all of the servants are staring at her, she goes into the house and see's Lalit and Gayatri and hugs them both telling them she is Meher, her parents are also there and she hugs them to, Heer reaches hom and see's Meher who is mad at her, Heer explains to her that it wasn't her fault but her devars fault, Meher tells heer she isn't mad at her but at someone else. Some idiots who she met on the streets and hugs her, preet is walking and ends up stumbling on meher luggage's and one of the servants who was walking in with petals of flowers ends up falling to and all of the flowers fall onto meher, preet looks up and she her who is talking to heer and he thinks he has just seen an angel, while looking at her when
                           raaton raat tara koi chand ya sitara koi
                                   gire to utha lena, o suniyon re

tara chamkila hoga chand sharmila hoga nath(nose) mein laga lena) - 2

zara si sawwari hai woh zara si baawri hai woh

woh surme ki tarah meri aankhon mein hi rehti hai..

subah ke khawab se udai hai palkon ke neeche chupai hai

mano na mano tum sote sote khawabon mein bhi khawab dikhati hai

mano na mano tum pari hai woh pari ki kahaniyan sunati hai

(khuda ya khair, khuda ya khair) - 2

 

Heer is asking Meher about who the guy was, Meher is telling Heer that the guy was really rude, preet comes to introduce himself, but meher start to yell at him asking him what is he doing here and preet gets confused. Meher tells heer that this is the guy, but Heer thinks meher has gone nuts and takes her to her room, and meher tells herself that preet was fooling with her she wont forgive him.

Manav is at his garage thinking about Archana, one of his workers are asking him for a tool but he isn't paying attention to him until Manav ends up dropping a tool on his leg. His employee ask him what is he thinking about and Manav tells him noting.

Archana goes to the movies with her colleagues, there car gets stuck half way and Archana starts to cry thinking how will she get home on time, her friends tell her to relax they will get home on time.  Manav who is driving spots the car goes to them asking them if they need any help not seeing Archana until he turns around and see's her, they ask for help and Manav helps them out but tells them that they need to leave the car here and they should come and pick it up tom and drop it at his garage he gives his card, he is about to leave when he hears Archana crying telling her friends how will she get home until Manav offers her a ride, Archana knew she couldn't say no so she went with him.

Archana is hesitating to hold manav and just sits behind him but ends up holding him as she was about to fall, Manav tells her not to be scared as he will make sure she doesn't fall, Manav drops Archana near the galley so no one will see her with a guy, she starts to walk but her dupatta gets stuck, she turns around to see her dupatta is stuck on Manav's watch, she stares at her but also stares at herself as her dupatta has fallen off her, she stands there kind of scared and is crying, Manav takes her dupatta out of his watch goes to her and wraps the dupatta around her, Archana stares at him and so his Manav, Manav tells her not o be sad and to leave and she does and Manav stares at her telling himself what is it that makes him more closer to her.

Preet comes into Meher's room to talk to her but see's she is not around, Meher comes out of the bathroom and Preet hides behind the blinds, Meher comes out in a purple silky long dress, drying her hair, Preet stands behind blinds staring at her, Meher seeing no one is around puts some music on and starts to dance to Zara Zara touch Me from Race, Preet is kind of mesmerized but also feeling really uneasy as he thinks he should leave but cant as he can't take his eyes off her, Meher is still dancing until she see's some feets and thinks it's a theft she is about to scream when Preet covers her mouth telling it is her she gets mad and tells him to get, Preet tells Meher he came in to talk to her, Meher tells him if he is crazy and how long he has been in here for, Preet tells her long enough to see her dance, Meher gets embarrassed but gets mad and kicks him out, and ends up kicking him in the bum and preet runs out, Preet tells himself that today she hates him but he will make sure he will win her.

Precap: Preet and Manav are both at the movies but don't see each other.

Arcahan is trying to find a cab but fails and some car stops in front of her.

Meher is walking and is about to fall when someone catches her and he asks her she should see where she is walking and all you can see is the guys eyes



Edited by jamune - 22 June 2009 at 3:59pm

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hey jamune ....first parts is great .....and also great awesome .........
 
 
mehak ......

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hey
awesum update
loved it
thankz for pm

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Posted: 22 June 2009 at 4:45pm | IP Logged
Nice part yaar! I like how the stories switch back and forth! Like the story so far!
 
Just a suggestion: I think it would be even more enjoyable if there was first person. Like speech instead of just narration. It's just advice, i didn't mean to offend you! I'm extremely sorry if i did!
 
Anyways, good part! Waiting for the next! Smile

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