Knowing you............ArMan...UpDt....Pg4........

 

Hello evryone!............

 

 

Here's my first ArMan one shot.......... 

 

 It begins from where the episode ended on Friday..............

 

 Hope u enjoy it...........This is the first part...............

 

 

Everyone reach back home after the whole drama at Ajeet's wedding?????😕

 

Just as Archana is about to leave for her room..Waheeni stops her saying--- Ruk jaa Archu!................😡

 

She stops midway along with Varshu and vaishu who glare at Waheeni knowing she would start again?.and unfortunately they were right!...............

 

Waheeni walks upto Archu and shouts out---  Shaanti mil gayi..sabkey saamney mere parivaar kii bezatti karaa ke?!...............

 

Archu looks at her pleadingly but Waheeni was in no mood to give up as she says further---- Bahot khushi ho rahi hogi naa?................

 

Varshu is about to say something when Archana stops her and says---- Swati sach keh rahi thi waheeni.main ussey achchi tara jaanti hoon.,?????

 

Waheeni snapa back angrily--- Aur main apney bhai ko bhi achchi tarah jaanti hoon..vo aisa kabhi nahiin kar saktaa??.mujhe pata hai tuney yeh sab kyun kiya????.Meri aayi ne tumhaari aayi ko sachaai kaa saamnaa kya karvaa diyaa?????tumne usska badlaa leney ke liye meri aayi ko sabkey saamney neecha dikhvaaya!...................

 

Waheeni says further---- Teri shaadi kii baat nahiin ban paayi?isliye tuney mere bhai kii shaadi mein yeh drama karvaaya!...............Khud ka ghar nahiin bas sakaa ?????isliye tuney mere bhai ka ghar basney se peheley hi ujaad diya!.............

 

Aayi interrupts saying---- Kitnaa boligii Manjula?..............Main apni Archana ko jaantii hoon????.😡

 

Archana was all tears as she leaves the house crying while Varshu and Vaishu take up charge to argue with Waheeni?????(I just love the way these two girls always stand for their elder sister)?????😭👏

 

There Manav????.who walked along the empty road in the same chawl????.was talking on phone with his friend??????

 

Manav was not listening to what his friend was saying!..........

 

He was in an entirely another world????..he remembered seeing Archana at the store!...............then seeing her help that beggar on the road????..and then seeing her in the train..How he had walked after her.and then just that morning how he stood face to face with her????.watching her ek tak..completely mesmerized by her beauty ??????..

 

His friend says--- Manav tu sun raha hai main kya keh raha hoon?!..............

 

Mana relises he was on phone and fumbles--- Haan?haan sun raha hoon??..bas?kuch sohney lagaa tha!...................

Edited by PremLeoManav - 14 years ago

thanx for the beautiful update...........

Lovelyyyyy...do contiinueeeee👍🏼

Thanx pooh..Can I call u that?..............Glad u enjoyed it...........Next part coming soon.................

Thanx  mou.kundu100 ..Glad u enjoyed it dear.Next part coming soon................

hey ... thats cute..

Manav was not listening to what Varun was saying who soon realizes his friend was not hearing him and he says—Manav tu sun bhi raha hai main kya keh raha hoon?...................

 

Manav realizes he was lost in his own thoughts and he replies--- Haan…sun raha hoon…vo darasal.main kuch soch raha tha…………..

 

Varun says teasing him--- Kuch soch raha tha…….ya kisi ke baarey mein soch raha tha?................

 

Manav replies innocently and matter of factly--- Uss ladki ke baarey mein soch raha tha……………..

 

Varun was taken aback saying---- Kya.abhi tak tu ussi ke baarey mein soch raha hai..vo stor room waali?!..............

 

Manav nods his head and replies---- Haan…Varun main aaj ussey milaa………….

 

Varun was shocked as he says out loudly--- KYA?!...............Lekin…kab kahaan kaise?!...............

 

Manav replies--- Eke k karkey sawaal kar yaar………..

 

Varun asks him--- Achcha bata kahaan milaa………….

 

Manav describes vividly his first face to face meet with Archana…………….as he walks down the empty road!.................

 

Varun then asks him--- Usska naam kya hai?.........

 

Manav replies--- Pata nahiin……..

 

Varrun asks him--- Rehti kahan hai?............

 

Manav replies again that he didn't know…………..

 

Varun replies angrily--- Kya yaar!.............She was right in front of u………….aur tu yeh bhi nahiin pata lagaa sakaa?!…………Manav tera kya hoga?!................

 

Manav replies--- Nahiin yaar mainne usse apna chaata offer kiya tha aur ussney liya bhi……………

 

Varun asks excited ---- Toh ussney waapas karney ke liye tera address nahiiin poochaa?.................

 

Manav replies innocently--- Kya farak padhtaa hai.chaata hii toh hai?...............

 

Varun replies--- Chaatey se nahiin mere bhai…………..chaatey waali se toh farak padhtaa hai………..chal chod………..yeh bataa dikhney mein kaisi thi?..................................

 

There u can see Archana who was all tears was also walking along the same road……………ahead of Manav…………….

 

On one side of screen u see Manav talking on the phone…………and on the other a sad and tired Archana walking away aimlessly!....................Will the two meet this time too?!…………….

 

 Kaisa laga?😊

 

Jaldi batao...............😊

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Everyone reach back home after the whole drama at Ajeet's wedding……………

 

Just as Archana is about to leave for her room..Waheeni stops her saying--- Ruk jaa Archu!................

 

She stops midway along with Varshu and vaishu who glare at Waheeni knowing she would start again….and unfortunately they were right!...............

 

Waheeni walks upto Archu and shouts out---  Shaanti mil gayi..sabkey saamney mere parivaar kii bezatti karaa ke?!...............

 

Archu looks at her pleadingly but Waheeni was in no mood to give up as she says further---- Bahot khushi ho rahi hogi naa?................

 

Varshu is about to say something when Archana stops her and says---- Swati sach keh rahi thi waheeni.main ussey achchi tara jaanti hoon.,……………

 

Waheeni snapa back angrily--- Aur main apney bhai ko bhi achchi tarah jaanti hoon..vo aisa kabhi nahiin kar saktaa…….mujhe pata hai tuney yeh sab kyun kiya………….Meri aayi ne tumhaari aayi ko sachaai kaa saamnaa kya karvaa diyaa……………tumne usska badlaa leney ke liye meri aayi ko sabkey saamney neecha dikhvaaya!...................

 

Waheeni says further---- Teri shaadi kii baat nahiin ban paayi…isliye tuney mere bhai kii shaadi mein yeh drama karvaaya!...............Khud ka ghar nahiin bas sakaa ……………isliye tuney mere bhai ka ghar basney se peheley hi ujaad diya!.............

 

Aayi interrupts saying---- Kitnaa boligii Manjula?..............Main apni Archana ko jaantii hoon………….

 

Archana was all tears as she leaves the house crying while Varshu and Vaishu take up charge to argue with Waheeni……………(I just love the way these two girls always stand for their elder sister)……………

 

There Manav………….who walked along the empty road in the same chawl………….was talking on phone with his friend………………

 

Lovely start dear you really do think like a BT writer the dialogues are just apt....

okay..that so sounds like manav...ur good..

keep it up...n keep it coming

*unreserved*

wow it's very nice
me loved it ( speechless)😳
beautiful
*claps*

Edited by pooji123456789 - 14 years ago