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RM FF:-SOME1 SOMEWHERE IS MADE 4 U upd 2/7/09(END) (Page 8)

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Posted: 23 June 2009 at 1:34am | IP Logged
Awww.......that was such a touching part......beautiful!!!!!Loved the RM scene and the way you potrayed their emotions was fabulous.....great update!!
 
Continue soon and thanks alot for the PM!!!!!!
 
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Posted: 23 June 2009 at 1:41am | IP Logged
VIVAH KA DIALOGUE! Apoorva yaar. Achha chaddo. Eik baat boloon bachha? Leg ki bone smash hojaati hai naa toh artifical limb nahi lagti jaan.
 
when a bone is totally smashed the patient can spend various amounts of time with an external fiaxator; another four months walking on the leg with a can. Possible surgery to insert a plate/metal rod and screws, yet there could still be a fracture line at the tibia / fibia that will not heat. Blood work will have to show good calcium levels as well as everything else.
 
I  know you're probably thinking ki Komal Di is out and about once again with her medical "lectures," lekin I just thought I would let you know for future reference. Artificial limb lagti hai when a patient has gone through amputation or it could be a congenital reason. Disease ya phir bohot zyaada serious accident ki the leg had to cut off(amputated).
 
As for the part, I thought it was very beautiful. I love Rahul.
 
 
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Posted: 23 June 2009 at 2:08am | IP Logged
oh my my ....what did i just read ......when i read the artificial limb part i was like totally shocked ...but then rahul handled the suituation so sweetly and let her feel at ease as if nothing worst had happened ....sweet part dear
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Posted: 23 June 2009 at 2:53am | IP Logged
great part!!  it was beautifully written.. artificial limb?itna bura acciedent tha?  wow    well first song that  came to me when dr said that....... CHAHA HAI TUJHKO.. i love that song.. and i would fit for this partlol

continue soon!
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Posted: 23 June 2009 at 3:38am | IP Logged
yaaaar tune toh muje rolathiya
it was superb
plssss pm me
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Posted: 23 June 2009 at 4:29am | IP Logged
that was very touching part hun but artifical limb ??Shocked  Feeling sooo damn sad for muski...Ouch Ouch  thanks alot for the PM do continue soon i really hope muski gets bettter soooonn Embarrassed like lovey dovey RM agaainnn Embarrassed Embarrassed 
thankss =)
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Posted: 24 June 2009 at 7:11pm | IP Logged
omgggg artificial limb was a shockerShocked..feeel sooo bad for muski...it's AMAZINGLY written and loved how u potrayed  their emotions...rahul is total sweetheart..love him...GREAT PARTClapthank u soo much for the pm...
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Posted: 27 June 2009 at 12:24am | IP Logged

PArt 23:


Muskii is discharged in few days....RM's parents have came...they decided the date of their marriage....

Muskaan tells everything to her mother....

M.M- Puttar tu bahut naseebwakli hai jo tujhe Rahul jaisa pati mila...

M- haan maa..tussi sahi keh rahe ho...maine kitna galat samjhatha usse aur woh kitna acha hai....

M.D- Dekho puttar bithi hui baatein yaad mat karoaagle hafte teri shaadi hai..bas ab aage ki zindagi ke sapne sajao.....

M- Hmm...i love u papaji...(hugs her daad)

MD- Love u too puttarji...

Rahul also tells everything to his parents....

RD- Putaar..i am so proud of u...tu...sahime saacha pyaar karta hia Muskaan se....

R- PApaji...Muskii mere liye bahut jayad imp hai...

RM- Putaarji...sach me hum toh bahut khush hai Muskaan jaisi bahu paa kar ....hume naaz hai tujhope....

Rd- Musibaat ke waqt tune apna pyaar nibhaya iss baat ki hume bahutkhushi hai....

R- Thanks Papaji.....

Next week was decide RM shaadi......

Lots of preparations wre to be completed....

All the realitves were called....RM's parents wanted jaldi shaadi....

Whole week was busy with preparation of the wedding.........

Days paased quickly...RM were not aloowed to meet 4 a whole week.....


*Rahul's place*

R- Yeh galat baat hai...meri shaadi ho rahi hai...aur main hi apni dulhan se nahi mil sakta....

Ar- heee.....duhle raja bade uthwale ho rahe ho....

R- Armaan tu toh chup hi baith...mujhe chidane me bada mazza aata hai na....teri bhi shaadi bhi hogi na saale tab dekhna...

Armaan laughs....

Ar- Dekh Rahul...tu chahe toh main teri help kar sakta hu...mere paas ek plan hai ...

At- KAisa plan???

Ar-Rahul ko Muskaan se milane ka.....

R- SACH???/

At- Nahi..nahi...tu nahi mil,sakta...apshagun hota hai...

Ar- Aisa kuch nahi hota......

At- Hota hai....Dekh Rahul...tu baat maan...usse mat mil..kal hi ho teri shaadi hai......ek raat intezaar kar le na.....

R- Hmmmmmm....shayad tu sahi keh raha hai Atul....bt kya main usse phone pe baat kar sakta hu..woh toh chalega na????

Ar& At- YA thats  a gud idea......

Meanwhile.........

**Muskaan's place**

M- Yaar..mujhe RAhul ki yaad aarahi hai...

Ridz & Anje laugh....

M- isme hasne ki kya baat hai??

Ri- Aree Muskaan tu itni stupid baatein kar rahi hai.....

M- Mujhe sach me Rahul ki bahut yaad aarahi hai...pure week na main usse mili na maine uski awaaz sunni..........

Ridz & Anje laugh....

m- Tum dono sirf haaso aur kuch mat karo....

An- Ok fine...tumhe Rahul se milna hai????

M- AHan.......

Ri- No.......apshagun hota hai...

An- Come on Ridzi..aisa kuch nahi hota...

M- Nahi...agar apshagun hogaya toh?//

An- Ok...toh tum usse phone kar lo..ab Ridzi phone pe baat kar hi sakte hai na??/

Ri- AY....U call him....

Both RM smile.......

Their friends leave & both pick up the ph at the same time & call eah other at the same time....

Both get the same reply..."The number u have dialeed is currently busy plzz try again later thank u"

R- Shit..yeh Muskii kisse baat kar rahi hai??/

M- yeh stupid rahul ka phon  kyun nahi lag raha....

Both wait 4 the same time & then call again at the same time....
same reply....

R- Shit......

M- Rahul.....

This hapepns 3-4 time & RM give up....Both sit on their beds & look at each other pic ...& smile....

Paraleel scnes

R- Kal humari shaadi hai Muskii...

M- Mujhe kal takk ka intezaar nahi hota....

R- Maine yeh hafta kaise bitaya yeh main nahi bata sakta...

M- Tere bina kuch bhi aacha nahi lagta...

R- Tujhe bahut jyada miss kar rahahu...

M- Tere bina sab khali khali lag raha hai.....

Pal pal pal pal har pal har pal..
kaise katega pal har pal har pal..
dil dil dil me machi hai machi machi hai hulchul
Kaise kate ga pal har pal har pal.............

Both RM smile at their memeories...& thier wedding tommorow.........

 
Hope u like it.....do comment.....

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