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lovebapu18

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Posted: 16 June 2009 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
awesome part!!
 
do continue soon!!

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Posted: 17 June 2009 at 12:22am | IP Logged
very good ud.

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Posted: 17 June 2009 at 1:19am | IP Logged
WOW yaar rocking as always...
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Full on RM and i loved itEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

It was just amazing and sweet! Rahul is such a sweetheart... btw what song was that??? neva heard it but sounds good!

Neways thanks for the rocking update and keep it upThumbs Up

Update soooooonDay Dreaming im waitinWink

Luv
NadzEmbarrassed

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Posted: 17 June 2009 at 3:26am | IP Logged
BEUATIFUL! Achha I didn't even notice you made a new topic! Yaar, tum ainwaiyee upset ho rahi thi ki tum mera birthday bhool gayee. check the date u updated. June 16th naa. Bas toh  maine samajh liya ke yeh part tumne mere liye meri birthday par likha. Okay?
 
 
Bautiful part! I'm so happy!
 
 
love u hamesha
 
Komal Di

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Posted: 17 June 2009 at 6:08am | IP Logged
awesome part!!!!!!!!!

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PART 21:


Next day Muskiii wakes up & ses she is in her room in her bed...she wonders ..main toh Rahul ke saath thi & phir..........

She smiles Rahul tu kitna aach ahi hai..hum baatein kar rahe the aur main soo gayi ? stupid Muskaan....kahin woh mujhse naaraz toh nahi hai an??

her thoughts r interrupted by the ringing of her cell...
Rahul calling........

M(smiles)- Rahul......

R- Gud morning jaana........

M- Rahul I am sorry...

R-Kyun??

M- RAhul hum saath the phir main soo gayi...tu mujhse baat kar raha tha aur maine teri koi baat bhi nahi sunni!

R- Aree Muskii tu yahan zindagi wahan...baaki kuch maniye nahi rakhta..........

M- par RAhul maine ...

R- Muskii..agar tu sootui nahi toh mujhe tujhe apni bahoon me utha ne ka mauka kahan milta.......

M(blushes)- Rahul.....tu bhi na...........

R- Muskii tujhse ek baat puchu??????

M- Haan puch na.........

R- Why do u love me???

M- Kya??? Yeh kaisa sawaal hai Rahul??????

R- Muskii plzz bol na...tujhe meri kaunsi quality pasand hai.......

M- OOOOOOO toh janab subhe subhe apni tariff sunna chahte hai....

R- Haan....

M- Ok.......Rahul tu duniya ka sabse aacha ladka hai..bahut caring hai...sweet hai...hmm good looking bhi hai ..aur....ab....

R- Tujhe words nahi mil rahe ??? Itna bura hu kya???

M- Tujhme sabse badi khubi kya hai pata hai??

R- Kya???

M- Tu mujhse bahut bahut jyada pyaar karta hai....

R- Muskii???

M- RAhul...ek ladki hamesha aisa humsafar chahti hai jo usse dewaano ki tarah pyaar kare...woh yeh nahi chati ki uska saathi usse chand tare tod ke lane wale waade kare  bas yehi chahti hai ki zindagi ki har dagar pe chahe khushi ho ya gam uska saathi uska saath nibhaye...bas....

R(tears forming)- Muskii tu...tu...

M(smiles)- Rahul....tu hai itna acha ki mujhe koi tension hi nahi hai....

R- Tu mujhpe itna bharosa kaise kar sakti hai??? Tune apni zindgai mere naam kar di..tujhe daar nahi laga??

M- Daar?? Tere hote hue?? nahi..kabhi nahi...

R- Yeh jaante hue ki maine tujhe kitna hurt kia hai...

M- Hurt?? Nahi toh..tune mujhe kahan hurt klia hai???

R- Muskii..tu itne jaldi kaise maaf kar deti hai???

M(confused)- Tu kya bol raha hai RAhul?? Mujhe kuch samaj nahi aaraha....

R- Tu mujhse Kasauli se pyaar karti thi na???

M- Rahul??

R- Maine tera dil dhukaya..teri feelings ko maine nahi samjha...tu hamesha mere saath thi ...meri har pareshaani me meri madat ki aur maine?? MAine kya kia?? Tujhe kitnba hurt kia..meri wajahse tera pyaar par se vishwas kamjor hua tha..maine...

M- Tune meri book dekhi???

R- Hmm.....plzz tu gussa mat hona bt main.......

M- Rahul tujhe pata hai na mujhe bilkul aacha nahi lagta ki meri book.....

R- Woh kya hai na Muskii mujhe na badi curiousity thi actuaally bachpan se thi jab bhi tu uss book me kuch likhti thi mujh hamesha oh padhan tha bt----

M- Rahul..tu na...

R- Kash maine pehle pad liya hota toh main tujhe kabhi hurt nahi karta...

M- Rahul...aisa kuch nahi hai..jo hota hai hamesha ache ke liye hi hota hai....har cheez ka ek sahi waqt hota hai...hame uska intezaar karna chahiye....

R- Muskii..i love u...main tere bina reh nahi painga....

M- Tujhe mere bina rehna bhi nahi padega buddu....

R- Matlab???

M- Ab dekh kalo tak tu chahe toh mujhse dur jaa sakta tha bt ab jab tune-------- (blushed not knowing how 2 say that he propsed her)

R(smiles thinking of her face blushed bt loves teasing her)- Haan bol na..kal tak kya???

M- Rahul..tujhe sab pata hai phir bhi.........

R- Aree..mujhe kya pata tu kya kehna chaiti hai hai???

M- Woh .....

R- Hai.......Muskii tu itni kaise sharmati hai ....seddhe sehde bol de na kal maine ujhe propse kia toh ab main apne waade se nahi mukar sakta .... rite???

M- Hmm...

R- OGOd!!!!!!!! Muskii teri issi blush karne ki addat pe main fida hu....

M- Rahul???

R- Tujhe ek baat bato???

M_ haan bol...

R- JAb bhi tu mera naam sunke blush hoti hai ya mujhe aaspaas dekh ke chupke se smile karti hai ya jab main tujhe chuta hu tu ek dum se shiver karti hai ...mujhe bada aacha lagta hai...main tere zindagi me speial hu yeh jaanke mujhe bahut jyada aacha lagta hai....

M_ RAhul..tu kya.....

R- Main bahut luckyu hu Muskii ki tu meri life me hai...meri hum safar banegi....

M- I love u Rahul!!!!!!!!!

R- I love u too Jaana.....

M- Main ek baat bolu......Jabhi tu mujhe ''Muskii'' kehta haui na mujhe bada aacha lagta hai..mujhe pehle bahut gussa aata tha jab tu mujhe Muskii boltaa ha..mujhe lagta tha ki mere ma- papa ne kinna sona naam rakha hai "Muskaan" aur tu hai ki.....Bt phir mujhe bada aacha lagne laga..maine tere alava kissiko bhi yeh haq nahi dia ki woh mujhe Muskii bulaye...

R- That reaaly sweet....

M- Agar main maar gayi toh ----

R- Shut up yaar..kaise bakwas kar rahi hai.....

M- ANhi main toh sirf...

R- I said Shut up.........

M- Ok......

R- Thats good.........

M- RAhul tujhe ek baat bato???

R-HMm.......

M- Tu jab gussa karta hai bada hi cute lagta hai....

R(smiels)- Really???

M- AHannn..teri nose red ho jati hai aur bada hi cute lagta hai

R- Muskii i love u tu mere liye bahut jayda special hai...

m- rahul...tujhe pata hai ki hum pehle ek ghante se phone pe baat kar rahe hai...

R- Shit...maine tujhe jo batane ke liye phone kia tha woh toh main bhul gaya tha....

M- Kya ????

R- Mujhe half a hour me CCD me milo.....

M- HAlf hr???

R- ahan kyun???

M- Rahul main abhi uthi hu mujhe ready hona hai aur  ainne haklf an me kaise puhungi???

R- Mujhe yeh nahi pata....

M- Rahul tu na ekdum

R- See u in half an hour....

M- Bt RAhul....

R- Ab kya hua??? AAj hospital se bhi toh humari chutti hai....

M- HAan...okay fine.....

R- Thats like my love!!!!!!!!!

Cuts he phone.....

Muskii sits in her bed & looka at the pic of Rahul on her bed...she smiles looking atit.....

I love u Rahul....

OMG!!!1 i need to get ready warna Rahul naaraz ho jayega......

She got ready....looked at her 23 times in mirror....

Took a rick & rushed to CCD.....

On her way....

Ridz caaling......

M- Haan Ridz bolo....

Ri- Muskaan main lonavala se aayi hu wapas...Sanjeevani me hu....

M- Aree abhi ghar ja araam kar na...

Ri- Hitler ke hote hue ARRAAM>>>>????

M- Ya actually.........

Both laugh.......

Ri- Ab hum jo camp pe gaye the na uske detail likh ke Dr.Shanshank ko dene hai...toh mujhe rukhna hoga....

M- ok.........

Ri- Chal bye...milte hai then...

M- ok.......

Ricksaw stops...

M- Kya hua???

Driver- AAgaya...

M- Looks around..kahan hai???

D- Madam ji woh dekho...cross karke jao....

M- Kyun?? Tum turn leleo na....

D- Ji yahan U-turn nahi hai....

M-HUH??? Tum na..itn atraffic hai..main kaise jao????

D- Ab main kya karu madamji???

M- Khota...ye lo paise......

Muskii gets down....looks on the opposite side of the road.....Rahul is standing there smiling.......

Muskii waves & smiles back....Muskii runs to croos the road bt a car comes & she runs back..

Rahul looks at her stupdiity & calls her...

r- Kya kar rahi hai???

M- Nahi woh main sirf

R- Shut up...tere ko itni badi gaadi nahi dikhtio...ruk ja..main tujhe kene aata hu...

M- Oye Rahul...main koi schooljamewali bachi hu jo tu mujhe cross karna sikhyega....

R- Nahi..bt yahann traffic bahut hai....ok..main aaraha hu..

M- Rahul.chill maar..main aati hu..


she cuts the phone & runs to cross the road ....... a car comes in her direction &

RAhul screams MUSKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN

Hope u like it.....do comment............

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Posted: 19 June 2009 at 2:11am | IP Logged
omg! Climax.... phirse! Hey bhaggu! I hope nothing happens to her!!!!!
 
 
 
komal di

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Posted: 19 June 2009 at 3:30am | IP Logged
OMG the whole part was so sweet, there tel convo was soooo cutteeeEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Shockedbut Muski ka accidentCryCryCry oh no ab kya hogaCryCry

Cant wait for the next part, update sooooooooooooooonSmile

Love
NadzEmbarrassed



Edited by nadz_J - 19 June 2009 at 3:31am

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