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IshqDewaani

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Posted: 10 June 2009 at 10:28pm | IP Logged

PArt 19:

**AR**
Next day:

ridz is attending a new paitent.....He is a college going boy who had an accident on bike....he fell 4 Ridz the moment he saw her.....

Ri(applying abtiseptic)- Haath do Nikhil.....

N- No Doc.....mujhe isse nahi lagana.....

Ri- Nikhil.........

N- Hey doc...tum dost ho na meri.......

Ri- Haan...

N- Friends call me NIk.........

Ri- Ok Nik...ab hum yeh lagaye....

N(looks ta it)- Hmm/.....ok....

Ridz puts the antiseptic & it burns..Nik close his eyes shut & holds Ridz hand in pain....

Ridz is taken aback bt looking at cute expression on Nik's face she smiles......

Ri- ho gaya...Nik....

N- Achaa....thanks doc........

Ri- Dard toh nahi hua???

N- Oh No..not at all..mard ko dard nahi hota....

Ri(laughs)-really???

N- Ya doc.......waise i can call u Ridz like ur friends do...coz ab hum bhi dost hai na???

Ri- Hmm..ab....

N- Ofcourse!!!!

Nik takes her hand & kisses it showing his perfect gentleman attitude...Ridz is taken abacck not knowing what to do....

Armaan standing at a distance sees all this....he is getting angry........no.actually jealous....ya jealous!!!!!!!!!


Ar- Mard ko nah hota..saale dekh ab main kya karta hu....

Ar- Gud morning Nikhil...how do u feel???

N(himself)- yeh kahan se aagaya kabba me hadi....

Ar- Kuch kaha tumne???

N-No..i am fine........... (looks at Ridz) Much better....

Ar(looking at Nikhil)- thats gud toh hum kal hi tumhe discharge kar sakte hai kyun???

Ridz looked at Armaan surprisingly...

Ri-Armaan..hum isse....

Ar- Ridhimmaa.....he is okay...(turning to Nik)- Rite dude??

N(not knowning what 2 say)- Well main itna bhi aacha fel nahi kar raha....

Ar- O ya...seedhe seedhe kaho ki mere finaacee ke saath flri karna hai tumhe....

Ridz & Nik look at Armaan SHOCKED- FINACEE??????

Armaan looked at Ridz who was shocked as well as blushing......

N- yeh tumhara mangetar hai???

A- Usse kya puchte ho mujhse baat karo na....

Ri- Armaan....tum....

Ar- V need to talk..........

Armaan takes Ridz to the fire escape...Ridz didnt know what 2 say...she love d Armaan bt she never thought even armaan....NO ...He was just being a gud friend trying to help her with Nikhil who was irritating her.. so she decided to be normal....

Ri- Thanks Armaan....Nikhil kuch jyada hi irritate kar raha tha....

Ar- i know...koi meri finacee ko pareshaan kare toh main hu nauska jawab dene ke liye....

Ri(laughs)- AY rite!!! Ab bahar kisiko kehna mat warna sab ko shock lagega....

Ar- Kya kehna mat???

Ri- Armaan!!!!!!! U know....

Ar(goes closer)- No Ridhimaa..mujhe nahi pata.....

Ri(gets nervous as Armaan comes closer)- Abt the finaace stuff......

Ar- Lekin ek din toh sab ko pata chalega na????

Ri- What???

Armaan sits on his knees & gives her the ring........

Ri- ARman??????

Ar- What?? Tum nahi chahti ki yeh ho????

Ri- Woh..mian.....actuaaly....

Ar- Ridz..jaldi se haan ya naa bol do mere ghutno me dard hone laga hai.....

Ri(laughs & hugs him)- Haan........

Ar- Ridhimma.........i love u!!!!!!!

ridz smiles & then runs away............

Ar(looks at her running away)- Haiiiiiiii Main mar java!!!!!!

RM were coming up from the fire escape saw this & smiled.....Muskii went down stirs to meet Ridz & Rahul came up to meet Armaan...........

R- Hmmm...koi mera dialouge bol raha hai.........

Ar- Rahul tu????

R- Haan main........

Ar- Hi.......

R- AAge bolo main sunn raha hu.....

Ar- AAge kya???

R SAale chupe rustaam...mujhe toh kaha tha ki Ridz mere type ki nahi hai..kyun????

Ar- nahi...woh actuaaly..i mean..main ....

R(laughs)- I know....pyaar dewwana hota hai mastana hota hai...........

Ar- Rahul shut up....

R- OMG!!!!!!! Dekho toh Armaan MAllik is bushing.....

Rahul takes his cell from his pocket & clicks Armaan pic......

R- Yeh pic ab main Ridz ko dikhunga........'

Ar- No..........

R_ YESSSSSSS


Ar- kya yaar .......

R- Ok fine........

Ar- Rahul.....ek baat puchu...???

R- Haan bol.......

Ar- Ridimaa....bahut swwet hai na????

R- Armaan ab agar main Ridz ki tarif karrunga to Tujhe aur Muskii kop pasand nahio aayega....

Ar- RAhul!!!!!!!!

R- Armaan...Ridz bahut achi hai,..main usko school ke dino se jaanta hu...woh bahut sensitive hai...

Ar(lost in his world)- Haan bt dikhati nahi apni sensitivity...hamesha akkadu jaisa behave karti hai ,...bt pata hai..jab nervous hoti hai aur apne dupaate ke saath khelti hai bahut cute lagti hai.....aur soote hue uske chher pe ek cute si smile aati hai...uska woh shrma na aur phir...........

R- BACK 2 Earth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ar- huh????

R- My god!!!!!!!!Armaan...tu toh .......

Ar- I love her...........

R- Waise tera propse karne ka style bada hatke tha....

Ar- Kyun chida raah hai??? Meri koi plaaning nahi thi bt woh Nikhil sala kamina.....

R- CTRL...........

Ar- Haan..paitent hai....kuch jyada hi flrit kar raha tha meri Ridhimma ke saaath...

R- WOW.......MERI RIDHIMMA..i am impresseed...

Ar- Kya yaar........


Ridz in canteen sitting ...just thinking what happened few minutes ago...did he actuaaly propse her or was it a joke???


Muskii comes & sees her frind smiling.......

M- So...finaaly alls welll....

Ri- Hmm..........

M- So....

Ri- So....

M- So....

Ri- So..what???

M- TEll em..............sab kaise hua????

Ridz tells her.....

M- Haiiiiiiiiiii mujhe toh laag tha ki.......

Ri- Kya??? Woh safed ghode pe aayega aur -----

M(laughs)- Nahi...tum khush ho na???

Ri- Bahut bahut jyada.........

M- Bas...mujhe aur kuch nahi chiye.........

**RM**
two days later....

Its very imp day 4 Rahul....It was his presentation 2day.....

Rahul standing in front of the mirror...

R- Rahul...u r the best..tu kar sakta hai....yess...tune sab aache se prepare kia hai..u can do it...


Locker room:

Rahul is taking a final look at the files checking out all the details....

Muskaan enters & sees Rahul is nervous....

M- Rahul...all the very best,.....(hugs him)

Rahul was taken aback..he wasnt expecting Muskii 2 hug him bt he liked it anyways....

R- Thanks Muskii..i need it...

M- Rahul u dont need it ...tu khud par confidence rakh...maine pray kia tere liye..have this...(she gives him prashad 4rm the temple)

R- Muskii..tu......(gets senti)

M- Rahul..relax...

Muskii sees a red stain on Rhul's shirt....

M- Rahul..yeh kya hai??? O God!!! Sauce ka daag???

R- Haan woh subhe main sandwitch kha raha tha....

M- Rahul..teri  presentation hai aur yeh....ek min..(she takes a wet tissue & wipes the stain....While wiping she ws going on with her bak bak)Rahul..tujhe na jara bhi samj me nahi aata..tera impression kitna kharab hua hota ..u know,,,,

R(smiles..he loves the way Muskii take cares of his small things)- thnks Muskii....Bye ..Ab mujhe jaana hai....ok...

M- All the best!!!

R- hmm....(he kisses her cheek & leaves)

 
 
hope u like it.........do comment............


Edited by RM+PS - 10 June 2009 at 10:33pm

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Posted: 11 June 2009 at 12:10am | IP Logged
it was really cute....armaan k propose karne ka style hi different hai.... hayye...loved it yaar....plz update soon.....

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Posted: 11 June 2009 at 12:35am | IP Logged
hey really awesome oneClap

I loved it! loved armaan ka propose karne ka style, the friend talksEmbarrassedEmbarrassed reli sweet and RMEmbarrassedEmbarrassed the two cuties! but RM ka itna short part??? cant wait for the next oneTongue

Keep rocking!

Luv
NadzWink



Edited by nadz_J - 11 June 2009 at 12:45am

arvanu

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Posted: 11 June 2009 at 1:52am | IP Logged
hey Apoorva,
 
awwwwwwww.......it was damn cuteeeeee.......very sweeet..........AR wre sooo sweeet......Armaan ka propose karne ka andaaz hi hatke hai.......haaayyyyyeeeeee........and RM were as usual adorable.......Muski taking care of small small things for Rahul.......awww....the sweetest!!!!!!loved the friends talking too.......cant wait to read further....do continue soon and thanks alot for the PM!!!!!!!!
 
-surbhiSmile

AshiYuvi4life

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Posted: 11 June 2009 at 2:04am | IP Logged
heyy! thanks for the PM. Again i was hoping for more RM. AR pasand anhi hain naa issiliye but you write very well! Impressive yaar. Keep rocking!
 
komz

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Posted: 11 June 2009 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM and it was really good!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 June 2009 at 4:44am | IP Logged
Aww dat was so sweet. AR were so cute. Loved it. Thnks for the PM!!

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Posted: 11 June 2009 at 4:59am | IP Logged
really cute part thanks 4 the pm

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