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Hey jaan! It was lovely! How sweet! I think I know ke mandap pe kya hone waala hai. Wink Mann film ka end scene yes? So sweet! THis part was very cute! I'm so excited about their wedding!
 
 
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wonderful part!!
do continue soon!!

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Part 24:

RM wake up with a smile on thier face,.....it was their D-day..their shaadi....

Both pinched each other...YEh sapna hai ya haqeqat........

**Muskaan's place**

Muskaan was getting ready...Ridz Anje & all her cousins & relatives were laughing ..teasing her...she was blushing at the mention of Rahul's name...& all were teasing her all the more....
M.M- Aree kudiyo....Sirf mazaak masti chal r4ahi hai ya Muskaan ko taiyar bhi kar rahe ho??? Baraat aati hogi....

All laugh
An- Haan..baraat aatio hogui....Dulhe ko intezaar karana sahi nahi hoga kyun MUSkaan????

M- Shut up yaar...tum log na-----

Ri- haan..plzz..meri dost ko pareshaan mat karo...

M- O Ridzi tu hi meri sabse aachi dost hai....

Ri- USko sabse jyada pareshaan karne ka haq sirf Rahul ka hai..kyun mUKsaan???/

All laugh.....Muskaan blushes.....


**Rahul'sPlace**

R(looking in the mirror)- Yaar Armaan main kaisa lag raha hu???

Ar- Tu toh haad karta hai yaar..pichle aadhe ghante se mirror ke samne khada hai aur mujhse already 100 baar puch chuka hai ki main kaisa lag raha hu???

At- Rahul tune 100 baar kab pucha???

Ar- Atul..mere bhai..mere dost...yeh bolne ka tarika hota hai...

At-OOOOOOOOO.........

R- Chup karo dodno aur mujhe batao na???

At- Rahul tu ek dum chikna lag raha hai....

R- Thanks....

R.M- Rahul puttar taiyar hue ya nahi..baarat lekra jaan hai na????

R- Haan Mum bas..main...

R.M- Muskaan bhi itna taiyaar nahi hop rahi hogi jitna tu ho raha hai....

R- Mum!!!!!!! Waise main kaisa lag raha ahu???

Armaan & Atul laugh............


After 3 hrs............

There is a huge hall decorated with flowers....shehenai in the background....Muskii's relatives r on the door welcoming the guests......Muskii is sitting in her room looking in the mirror..Muskii is wearing red dulhan joda with lota of jewelarry..she is looking extremely beautiful....

An- Aaj Rahul ki toh kher nahi....

Ri- Haah Muskaan tu bahut jyada soni lag rahi hai...kisiki nazar na latge...

M(shy)- Main aachi lag rai hu na???

RIdz & Anje smile & nodd........

 

& then there is sound of firee crackers...Baaraat aaygayi............Muskii's Mum & Dad r on the door welcoming RAhul & his parents..RAhul is wearing a light blue colur sherwani & is looking exceptional hansdome ......Ridz Anje also go to welcome the baraatis....
.Armaan is looking hot in his white sherwani & ridz is wearing an green colur chainya choli......

Armaan looka ta her & winks at her...slowly comes near her & says -Bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho...

Ri(blushes)- Tum bhi kafi handsome lag rahe ho...

Ar- Really????

Ri(smiles)- Hmm..........


Rahul sits in the mandap & looks around....

At- Kisse dhund raha hai???

Ar- Obviously apni dulhan ko....

R- Muskii kahan hai???

At- Usee aane me time hai...pehle tumhare saath mantra honge...

R_acha??

Ar- Dont look so dissappointed Rahul....(laughs)


Ar- Rahul tujhe ek advice du??/

R- main maan karunga toh chup nahi rahega na??/

Ar(laughs)- Tujhe dekh ke na mujhe ek gaana yaad aar raha hai....

R- Kaunsa???

Ar- Ek kuwara phir gaya maara ..
phas gaya dekho yeh bechara
do din ki hai yeh channi phir kaali akali raat hai
 tu maan ja ddulhe rah=ja..
karke yeh shaadi tera baj gaya baaja.......(laughs)

Dekh Rahul tujhe ek baat bolu? Agar Tu shaadi se bhaagna chahata hai toh main help kar sakta hai...

R- very funny!!!!!!!!! jaake mar na kahin....

 


Ridz & Anje come in Muskaan's room....

An- Muskkaan baarat aagayi...

MUskii blushes....

Ri- Rahul bahut handsome lag raha hai...

M- Chup kar...jyada Rahul kio dekhne ki jarurat nahi hai....'

Ri- Par saali toh aadhi gharwali hoti hai na???

M- Shut up!!!!!! Waise Rahul bada sona lag raha tha kya???

Ridz & Anje laugh.....

**MAndap**'

Rahul is sitting waiting 4 MUskii....

Panditji- Dulhan ko bulaye.....

R(smiles)- Thank God!!!!!!!

Girls bring Muskii to the mandap....Rahul looks ta her & smiels....Muskii blushes....

She sits next to him....

R- Bahut soni lag rahi hai...

M- Tu bhi...

R- AAcha yeh toh tere pyaar ka asar hai...

M- really????

Panditji- Phero ke liye var-vadhu khade ho jayye....

Rahul gets up.....Bt Muskii is not able to get up quickly coz of her artifical limb she struggles bt in vain.....

All r concerned..Muskii looks ta Rahul...he smiles....bends & picks muskii in his arms & takes the saat pheras........


Muskii has her hands round his neck she looks at Rahul with tears in her eyes.........

Muskaan parents feel blessed to ahve Rahul as thier jamai........Rahul's parents r extremly proud of thier son...........

All the rasam riwaj r done & Rahul-Muskii r legally wedded.........


**Evening**

RM's friends have arranged 4 a reception party 4 RM..........

RM enter the party hand in ahnd.....Muskii looks preety in her yellow sari with mangalsutra & sindur & loads of red bangles in her hand.....Rahul looks equally handsome in White sherwani.......

As RM enter...all could see their love could feel it.....both were so truly deeply & madly in love with each oher............

Armaan takes the mike....

Ar- Ab Rahul...apni beautiful wife ke liye ek gaana pesh karnewala hai....

R- Main???

Ar- Haan...common Rahul....

Rahul looks at MUskii &smiles ....

R- This one 4 u Wifey........

Tu hai aasma me
teri yeh zamme hai tu jo hai toh sab kuch hai na koi kami hai
 tu hi dil hai tu jaan bhi hai...
tu khushi hai..aasra bhi hai...
teri chahhat zindagi hai...tu mohobaat ..tu aashiqui hai...

Muskii blushes.......
Rahul comes near her smiles....moves around her making her blush all the more..........


All clap...........

Ar- Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kya baat hai!!!!!! Rahul mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha ki tu itna acha gaata hai....

R(smiles & looks at Muskii)- Yeh credit mera nahi hai..jiske liye gaa raha tha ussi ki wajahse hai.....

Muskii blushes....

Ar- OOOOOOOOOO toh yeh baat hai........

Ri- Bas Armaan kitna pareshaan karoge meri dost ko....

Ar- Aree abhi maine kya kiya???

Ri- Armaan!!!!!!

At- Aree chup karo..tum toh kahin bhi shuru ho jate ho...Armaan aage ka bhul gaya kya???

Ri- Aage ke kya???

Ar- Hmm..........since mere dost ne apni pyaari wife ke liye ek pyaarasa gaana gaya..so its now Mukaan's turn to sing a song 4 Rahul.......

All clap........Muskii frowns....

M- Nahi..main nahi..main kaise?/ Mujhe koi gaana wanna nahi aata........

Ar- Aree ladkiwale toh daar gaye.......

Ri- hello...relax huh!!!!! Hum ladkiwale kabhi darte nahi..ok??? Chal Muskaan..chakde phaate!!!!!!!!

Ridz takes the mike 4rm Armaan & comes near Muskaan....

M- Ridz kyun mere sasuralwalo ke samne meri izzat ki band baja rahi hai??? Mujhe gaana wana nahi aata...

Ri- Muskaan?????? Plzz yaar ladkiwalon ki izzat ka sawal hai...

M- PAr main kya gau????????

Ri(smiles)- Rahul ki taraf dekh ...tu sab samj jayegi............

Ridz gives her the mike & goes.........

Muskaan looks ta Rahul ...he is smiling at her waiting 4 her to sing a song dedicated 4 him....

Muskii smiles & closes her eyes...all the memories 4rm childhood till 2day goes thru her mind & she slowly starts singing......

Na kuch pucha na kuch maanga (Rahul quickly looks at Muskii he wasnt expecting this song)
tune dil se diya jo diya
Na kuch bola na kuch tola..
muskurake diya jo diya
tu hi dhup tuhi chaya
tuhi apna paraya (Muskii has tears in her eyes...goes near rahul)
 aur kuch na jaanu bas itna hi jaanu main
tujhme rab dikhta hai yaara main kya karu
sajde sir jhukta hai yaara main kya karu...(Bows down to touch Rahul feet)

Rahul makes her get up & hugs her....& the voice echos
Rab ne bana di jodi....................

The whole room is full of darkness just a spot light on RM who have hugged each other & lost in their own world..........

Rahul mUskaan ek dusre ke liye hi bane hai....zindagi ne uhe dusra mauka diya yeh jaane ka woh ek dusre ke hai...Woh pehle bhi mile the par phir bichad gaye...woh unke milne ka waqt nahi tha....Sahi waqt aane pe hi unka milan hua....Duniya me har insaan ki jodi bani hai...uparwala hi yeh jodiya banata hai aur wohi unhe milata bhi hai.....


Sach kaha kissine -
Someone somewhere is made 4 u..... 

 
 
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Guys......
 
Thank u so much 4 reading & liking this ff.....
 
I am posting its last part hope u like it.....
 
Thank u all 4 ur wonderful & guidng comments..............
 
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Posted: 02 July 2009 at 4:38am | IP Logged
Shocked THE ENDCry

But seriously after reading it i was truly satisfied... seriously It was serene and Beautiful!!!! Loved every bit of it, when they were getting ready, then when he was waiting for her in the mandap, then when he carries her and takes pheras.... I mean just WOW yaar tooooo sweeetClap

This bit had tears in my eyesCryCry

Muskii smiles & closes her eyes...all the memories 4rm childhood till 2day goes thru her mind & she slowly starts singing......

Na kuch pucha na kuch maanga (Rahul quickly looks at Muskii he wasnt expecting this song)
tune dil se diya jo diya
Na kuch bola na kuch tola..
muskurake diya jo diya
tu hi dhup tuhi chaya
tuhi apna paraya (Muskii has tears in her eyes...goes near rahul)
 aur kuch na jaanu bas itna hi jaanu main
tujhme rab dikhta hai yaara main kya karu
sajde sir jhukta hai yaara main kya karu...(Bows down to touch Rahul feet)

Rahul makes her get up & hugs her....& the voice echos
Rab ne bana di jodi....................

Toooo sweeeeet yaar i just loved it! Bachpan ka pyar poora hogayaEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Rahul mUskaan ek dusre ke liye hi bane hai....zindagi ne uhe dusra mauka diya yeh jaane ka woh ek dusre ke hai...Woh pehle bhi mile the par phir bichad gaye...woh unke milne ka waqt nahi tha....Sahi waqt aane pe hi unka milan hua....Duniya me har insaan ki jodi bani hai...uparwala hi yeh jodiya banata hai aur wohi unhe milata bhi hai.....


Sach kaha kissine -
Someone somewhere is made 4 u..... 

I loved your FF, and i think i'm gonna read it all over again, it was just simply sweeeeeet, every bit of it was sweet and awesome! loved how you ended it with the explaination of the title... just simply beautifulEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

I loved it, simply loved itClap

Just one request could you post a small update of AR lovetsory as wellSmileSmile Please please, if you have the timeWink

You know what this FF is gonna stay in my heart for quite a long time, Love you for sharing this amazing RM FF with usEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Luv

NadzEmbarrassed




Edited by nadz_J - 02 July 2009 at 4:54am

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first 2 cmnt i was superb yaaaaaaaaaaaaaar
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will miss ur ff

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aww so beautiful!!! finally got married!lol

great ending! loved it!!!

dont forget to lemme know if u write another one:D


Edited by brainychild92 - 02 July 2009 at 10:52am

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