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Posted: 06 June 2009 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
hey guys i just made a new FF with all my fav couples, FF will come really soon
 
This story is about 12 different people all from different backgrounds, different lifestyles, rivalry and how it ends, and also different dreams all meet at the same college and how they all have different dreams and achievements that they all want to make in their lives, but at the moment all are the same juts don't know it, the same college life, parties, hangouts and school.
 
Characters:
 
Samrat: The head of the basketball team is a real stud, rivials with Abhi Modhi, but for a while as they become friends later on dream is to become the number one race car driver which is dad doesn't agree to it as he is a real business tycoon and never had the time for her comes from a hindu background, and is always trying to get a chance with Gunjan.

Prem: A real musician loves to play his guitar, is really good friends with samrat and preet, at the moment doesn't talk to mayank and ranvir or abhi as mayank has been his biggest rivary but slowly it changes dream is to become a politician so he always gets him self involved in school activity is a the oldest as to younger brother Harman who is in London and Preet who goes to school with comes from a Punjabi background.

Preet:prems younger brother a very naughty and joker type of guy, Loves to box and also is a athletic racer, dream is to become one of the best athletic racer, him and ranvir always have problems but the later realzies that they have a lot in common also comes from a Punjabi background loves to eat but stays fit .

Mayank: Is a real bookwarm, dream is to become number one architect and build his own dream building is loved by his mom alot tells her all his problems, prem and him always want to be right in which he always gets into fights with him but not for long and he comes from a Marathi backgound.

Ranvir:A very naughty fun guy, loves to cook, dream to become india's number one head chef has a olders brother Alekh who is in London to with his sister in law Sadhna also Ragni's older sister, he has a thing for Ragni but isn't reall able to say anything, maynk knows that and is always trying to help him woo her, at the moment he doesn't like preet, he is a Rajasthani.

Abhi: The head of the soccer and hockey team, wants to snatch samrat position, at the moment are rivals but then they become friends, dream it to become the best a number one business man, he is a hindu but he doesn't believe in god.

Gunjan: A real outging girl is the head cheerleading squad, is daddy only and little girl, thinks she can gets whatever she wants, at the moments hasn't really decided on what to do as she has everything she is the one among her crew who will tell a boy off no matter what it is for.

Heer: wants to become the top lawyer is the argument of the crew always wants to be right and always gets into fights with prem over school decisions, she lives with her older sister and jiju along with her two nephews and one neice kind of comes from a middle class background, is a real Punjabi kuri, who always speak in Punjabi most of the times.

Meher: a very bubbly, and up going girl, can say her and nupur are one as they do everything together, is in every school play dream to become an actress one day but does she know how hard that will be, nupur and the gang know everything about her but just that her aunt and uncle are very mean to her, she always can never wait to get out of the house will there be time where she will have to leave her house forever, but she always stands up to her aunt and uncle will be turning 19 in four months in which she will get all the property, she also comes from a sikh background.

Nupur: Nikki's younger sister, she has the luxury she needs but no parents her and her sister nikki are each other's family and also her gang, nikki is nupur's chacha and chachi's daughter but when her parents died in a car accident nupur's parents took her in but then they died to, she is a real speaker she loves to speak and talk about people's right, always jokes around, along with meher always do everything together, is a real school worker girl wants to become a real business women one comes from a gujrathi background always swears in gujrathi when she gets mad.

Ragni:a very shy girl,  with her nice figure and a lovely facial face her friends always tells her she can become a model and her dream is to become a model but is she able to enter the industry with her shyness and will her traditional family agree to it and comes from a middle class backgound, older sister sadhna is in London with her jiju Aalekh Ranvir's older brother, she is also a rajistani .

Nikki: The head of the dance team, her and Gunjan always agree on different things which always leads to fights and then has to be stopped by there gang, her parents died a long time ago she is nupur's adoptive older sister just by one year both have the luxury but no parents only each other's support, he dream is to open India's biggest dance institute, also is a gujrathi unlike her sister she she is more calm.



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Narrator: who says that opposite can never be friends for some its hard  but for some if you try anything can happen, everyone has a dream but can they all accomplish those dreams, the same for these 12 different people who all have different dreams and there lives from college to the real world.

 All 12 are introduced

 (No ones faces shown yet)

As the college is going on every one is getting ready for a soccer tournament while one guy is taking a shower another is playing his video games, and another who is playing his guitar, on the other side another is doing push ups, and another giving people his favourite cake that he has made, and another who is reading his favourite book. 

 There one girl who is calling all her servants asking for her tea, another pulling her nephew ears for not doing his homework, another doing yoga at the same time her aunt screaming on the top of her lungs but she is avoiding it as she has her ipod to listen to, there another is getting out of the shower thinking on what to wear, while another getting out of the swimming pool drying and getting ready, while another in her room trying on different clothes.

 (Faces finally shown)

The guy gets out of the shower and see's his team members are not ready dryes his hair and turns around and looks at them telling them to get out of there bums and gets ready we have to beat them and starts to put his showes on and throw his towel on someone, he gets mad and takes the towel off his head and tells him that what are you doing samrat i almost won, preet you will never learn "said samrat, bhai are you ready yet, the guy playing his guitar, preet i have been ready for a while just waiting for you to, of course said samrat" prem is always ready on time and they all smile.  Someone e falls on the guy doing pushups he gets mad gets up and asks him cant he see; where he is walking the guy says sorry and the guy says its okay and gives his hand, he turns around with his whole face dripping face and goes to wash it, he see's the guy readin his book and drops water on him and he turns around telling him abhi what are you doing i was reading, mayank when aren't you not reading, when one is reading then the other is feeding people food, mayank looks at abhi and says sometimes i wonder if he really is a guy, the first guy who is really serious in cooking and they both laugh and abhi calls the guy to come with the cakes and the guy comes but he ends up falling and face lands on the cake, he looks up and they are all laughing, and the guy is telling them very funny laugh all you want, and abhi tells him that Ranvir will always be the clumsy one and he goes to wash his face.

 

On the other hand the girl who is wearing a pink mini skirt her hair down, with glasses on her face walks out tells the driver she will be riving as she has to go and pick up friends and she leaves, but the driver says that her dad will gets mad, she turns around and tells him not to worry as dad never gets mad at her baby girl Gunjan and smiles and leaves, another girl is trying to figure out what to wear, her older sister kulraaj comes and see's the room a mess and tells the girl what is this, the girl turns around and tells her sister she doesn't know what to wear and kulraaj looks around and tells her then what is all this then she hears the noise of a honk and realizes that Gunjan is here to pick her up and she leaves without eating anything. On the other hand two girls are picking up her bag one wearing shorts and her hair in a pony tail, on the otehr hand the other wearing black pants and a tank stop with her hair all curled up, Di said the girl lets go we have to pick meher up the girl turns around saying i am ready hum lets go, and the other girl turns around and tells her that she is ready and to hold on, want to get there before her aunt starts it again, nikki is telling nupur that from all people we know how strong meher is she will give it to her aunt if she says something, nupur tells nikki that she knows that but no one knows how much she cries to i have seen it, and they leave, a girl getting out of the shower got ready tied her hair half way up, she is walking and is about to fall because of her hells but ends up stepping on her aunt who starts to yell at her , saying OUCH and saying some bad words, the girls turns around laughing and saying sorry to her did it hurt, and she is about to hit but she grabs her hand and tells her how many times have i told you don't you dare don't forget everything in this house belongs to me you guys are the caretaker, her uncles comes and tells her not to get to excited but meher tells him why shouldn't she be as she will be 19 in four months and that means everything will be mine and her aunt uncle panic she is about to leave but her aunt says something about her mom which makes her mad and she has tears in her eyes, just when she was about o say something nupur called her and she left, nupur saw her in tears again and got depressed but then she started to fix her makeup up.

On the other hand a girls mom is calling her to come down, the lady's nani came in the morning, the lady keeps on calling her down and she comes down in a long skirt, with a speggatti strapped top, her hair all jelled wearing big earing and a small scarf around her neck, she comes down and nani is kind of shocked not to see in her a suit but she leaves as she hears a honk, she is about to leave when her nani see's her going out and heer gunjan come out of the car and hugs her seeing gunjan's outfit she is shocked, she goes to her daughter saying you let ragni hang out with girls like that and kaushi tells her mother that all these girls are from good background and its this generation, our daughter doesn't wear clothes like that is all that matter and she leaves , heer is talking to gunjan and ragni is kind of in her own little world heer gets her out and aks her what happened but she doesn't say anything gunjan tells them she is late as she has a cheer leading tournament today, and heer says she has a school meeting and ragni smiles.

 

The guys all get ready and all are putting knee pads on and all go to the soccer field, abhi and samrat look at each other, while prem mayank look at each other and preet ranvir look at each other and they all start to play.

Nupur is kind of angry seeing meher sad but meher calms her down and they get to school the girls park by each other gets out and all hug each other, they see meher and see her depress and cheer her up and all leave walking together in the hallway, while everyone especially guys are staring at them.

The guys are playing soccer and it's a two on two at the moment while playing preet makes ranvir fall on purpose ranvir gets up and gets mad and pushes him, mayank is about to attack but prem stops him and they start to fight never thing you know samrat and abhi and everyone are getting at it, until the coach and principle come and breaks them apart telling them to stop this as its there final year and you guys don't want this to get into your records you 6 all belong to good families and i know your dads really well, i am fed up with these fights its your guys last chance i am warning you guys, the girls come and see them and heer says that they have started it again and they leave. Ranvir and Ragni look at each other and smiles and ragni waves at ranvir, mayank thinks there is something wrong with ranvir as there is no one there and he waving to the air and hits his head and they leave, the boys look at each other and they all leave.

 

Precap: heer prem are arguing about some school decisions, meher gets mad at preet and tells him to mind his own business, some girl is crying and she asks her what happened she told her and she asked who the guy was and she points and its shown to be mayank, nikki is practising but abhi comes in and tells her they need the gym, ragni is about to fall but is caught by someone, samrat is trying to get a chance with gunjan but gunjan blows him off.

 

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