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#3 kya Pyar Aisa Bhi Ho Skta Hai?(AR)note:151 (Page 39)

prety_cool93 Senior Member

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Posted: 08 July 2009 at 8:10am | IP Logged
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shonaveer IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 July 2009 at 10:51am | IP Logged

Hi Anku,

Oh my god... I am extremely sorry for such a late reply.

I have finished my exams, and got fever and again got busy with my school.. I would have left a short comment but I wanted to write a longer one.


So, here is the comment I wanted to give since ages..


1st of all, congratulations for the new thread. I wish that KPABHSH will have more than 10 threads with the story continuing showing the pure love between Armaan and Riddhima.


All the parts were amazing. I love your twists a lot and the way Armaan and Riddhima understand each other


I havent read some parts inbetween, like, i have read many parts at a time in a go... So, havent read one or two parts in the middle and was suddenly shocked to see that Riddhima was conceived, only to realize that you have taken a leap.. LOLLOL

The way you have put up everything was fabulous. Loved it a lot.
And the silly questions of Armaan make me read the lines again and again.
I always read through your lines :) You write amazingly..
Please do continue as soon as possible..
Unable to wait for the next part.
Loads of love
Your loyal reader
Deepu :)

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GoDsLoVe Senior Member

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Posted: 11 July 2009 at 6:29am | IP Logged

A: mujhe bhi baby ko dekhna hai..

R: kyaa???? (surprised)

A: mujhe bhi apne baby ko dekhna hai…

R: armaannn… (before she could think what to say, there's something that again hitted armaan's mind)

A: (jumped again) oe maine kissi ko bataya hi nahi ki mai papa ban ne waala hun…mai abhi sabko phone karta hun…

R: armaan raat ko 2:30 baje????

A: ohhh sorry… kal batayenge sabko okkk…(riddhima nodded)

R: haan filhaal hum log so jaate hai… (riddhima turned to switch off lights before he could ask some other question… armaan once again hugged her tightly and said I love you very excitedly… riddhima said me too…. Finally armaan was gone in his dream world..)

Next day:

Armaan invited his friends at their home at night, the whole day they remained cooking new dishes slowly slowly and at night when everyone came at their home, after dinner everyone was sitting in common room.. armaan pulled riddhima's hand and stood in front of everyone…

Ri: please hum without music dance dekhna pasand nahi karte, so kindly take ur seats back…

A: chipkalli itna extra mai dimag mat challaya kar, actually we want to share something...

Ri: ohhh hooo… aisi kaunsi baat hai jo tu baith kar nahi khada hokar hi kar sakta hai???

A: jab tak tu apna muh band nahi karegi tab tak kaise bolunga???? (before ritu could speak)

Ni: are yaar usse bolne de na tum dono baad mai continue karna apna jhagda… bol armaan..

A: thanks niki, seekh ritu kuch iss se… kitni pyari hai, kitni nyari hai aur tu kitni ajeeb naari hai… (looking at ritu, she makes a face) (riddhima slightly hitted him,ritu said 1 aur, riddhima again hitted him slightly, armaan looked him with the eyes koi na bachu tumne party badal li.. riddhima smiled and caressed his cheeks, he also smiled…)

Ri: ab bhonk le kuch, khada ho gaya khambe ki tarah… kuch hai bhi share karne ke liye..

A: haan to mai keh raha tha…. (he stopped when looked everyone's looking him constantly..) mai keh raha tha ki.. (everyone said with eyes what???) (he felt little shy thinking how he speak) mai keh raha tha ki… (riddhima smiled looking at his face)

Ri: aage kuch bolna aata hai????

A: haan..naa… I mean mai ye keh raha tha ki aage riddhima bolegi… (he looked at her)

R: mai??? (suddenly start coughing)

A: haan tum, bolo na please…. (ritu got up from her seat, armaan's head tightens, he mumbled in riddhima's ear ye khadi kyu ho gayi hai?? Iske iraade mujhe nek nahi lag rahe, riddhima mumbled mujhe bhi, iss se pehle ye tumhara khun kar de sabko bata do ki tum kya kehna chahte ho… armaan mumbled nahi mujhe sharam aa rahi hai, riddhima turned and mumbled kya??? Sharam aur tumhe??? Armaan mumbled haan.. mai kaise bolun ki mai p for papa ban ne waala hun… riddhima said muh se.. armaan said tum bolo na please…

riddhima mumbled aaah haa haa khud ko ladka hokar sharam aa rahi hai bolte hue, aur mujhse expect kar rahe ho ki mai bolun, maine to nahi kaha tha itni jald baaji karne ke liye, kal se sanjeevani jaa hi rahe the to mai niki ko bata deti, par sabke saamne.. no ways… tum jaano kaise bologe, mujhse bilkul mat expect karna…. And before armaan could said anything ritu knock on his shoulder from back… armaan hides behind riddhima…. Riddhima giggled…)

Ri: ab tu bol raha hai ya.. (she raised her leg)

A: haan to bol raha hun na…

Ri: bol….

A: baat ye hai ki… (he turned to riddhima ) oe tum iske kaan mai bata do… (ritu take out her sandal.. armaan from riddhima's back said) tu maami ban ne waali hai… (then came out from back and jumped) yuuuhhhuuuu maine bol diya… ab maarke dikha…(ritu stopped there, from her hand sandal dropped, armaan did kuchikuing on her face and mumbled gud girl… ritu turned to riddhima who was literally hiding behind armaan, looking down fiddling with her dupatta, her face was total red… ritu asked for confirmation with eyes, riddhima slightly nodded…. And she hugged her tightly… prachi, niki, chirag, rohit, abhi also jumped from their seats and rushed to armaan, hugged him tightly then riddhima… armaan stood widening his chest and acted like proudy) ohh thanku thanku thanku thanku…

Ni: (hitting him) thanku nahi, same to you keh.. mai bhi to masi ban ne waali hun..

Pr: mai tayiji…

Ab: aur mai mausa….

A: par jo bhi ho, meri post tum sabse bahut badi hai, after all mai papa banunga…

Ch: oeee.. meri post jayda badi hai, mai mama banunga… you know double mumma's to.

Ro: meri post jayda badi hai, mai tayaji banunga…

A: (jealoused) nahiji meri post sabse badi hai…(all laughed at his kiddish act)

Ri: (pinching his chin) don't worry teri post tujhse koi nahi cheen raha, aur hamesha teri post inn sabse badi rahegi… congratulations… finally tu papa ban ne jaa raha hai, ab tumhari life hamesha ke liye change hone waali hai, teesra jo aa jayega tumhare beech.. waise hamari pyari mumma kaha gayi.. (she pulled her hand) sabse badi post to aapki hai mumma…(pinching her cheeks) kitna time liya iss news ko sunane ke liye… prepared now, Wife se mother ki post sambhalne ke liye… 1 naye phase mai kadam rakhne ke liye???? Acha bata kya chahiye ladka ya ladki??? (riddhima's expression remained un noticed by everyone, face which was looking very excited and red a minute or 2 ago, now some nervous ness can also be noticed on that face…)

A: ofcourse sweet little princess like her…

Ri: nahi sweet little boy, but surely not like you, atleast usme thoda dimag ho, shakal surat chal tujhse milti ho, bas shakal hi milti ho, baaki sab meri nanad ki tarah ho…

A: teri nanad meri wife hai, mujhe jayda pata hai, ladki hi hogi… shakal se riddhima jaisi sweet aur akal se meri tarah tej…

Ri: hee hee haa haa… joke of the day, armaan ke pass akal hai… ladka hoga dekh liyo..

A: ladki hogi..

Ri: ladka…

A: ladki…

Pr: hold on… tumhe nahi lagta ye sawal riddhima se hi puchna chahiye…. (All looked at riddhima)

Ni: bolna tujhe kya chahiye???

R: abhi to maine socha hi nahi iss baare mai…

Ri: isme sochna kya hai?? tujhe nahi pata ki tujhe kya chahiye??? (armaan noticed the nervousness on her face..)

A: riddhima ice-cream nahi khillaogi???

R: ohh haan, mai to bhul hi gayi, ice-cream bahar hi rakhi hai, kahin melt hi na ho gayi ho… (she felt relieved in her heart and almost ran from there)

In kitchen she stood like a statue lost in her own thoughts, she couldn't deny that she's very excited as well as thrilled but nervousness also started making its way in her heart…this was their first experience, she's still thinking are they prepared for the 3rd member now, no doubt both love each other from the core of their heart… but abhi tak sirf hum dono the family mai, hamari har subah 1-2 se shuru hokar 1-2 par raat khatam ho jaati thi,

she looked at armaan from the serving window, pata nahi kya hoga… armaan aur mai 1 nanhi si jaan ko duniya mai to laa rahe hai, par pata nahi mummy papa ka role theek se play kar payienge ya nahi… their life is going to change totally in next few months, 3rd member in family… many questions was making their space in her heart, some questions that was unknown to her and some was known to her.. niki followed riddhima in kitchen… she came out of thoughts…

Ni: riddhima tabiyat kaisi rehti hai???

R: filhaal to theek hai, abhi to just starting hai, next week se actually pata challega…

Ni: haan.. waise kaisa feel ho raha hai???

R: bahut acha bhi aur nervousness bhi….

Ni: wo kyu??? (ritu also entered in kitchen)

Ri: mere bina mehfil jamai jaa rahi hai… kya baatein kar rahi thi tum dono????

Ni: kuch nahi hamari riddhimaji nervous hai thoda sa to mai puch rahi thi ki kyu nervous hai???

Ri: ohhh itna interesting topic aur wo bhi mere begair… (prachi also entered in)

Pr: mai bhi hun.. mujhe bhi batao….

Ri: mummy ko ghabrahat ho rahi hai…

Pr: teri mummy ko??? Kyu kya hua unhe???

Ri: nahi iss mummy ko.. (holding riddhima's shoulder)

Pr: aam ka aachar kha le saari ghabrahat dur ho jayegi… (she giggled, riddhima makes a

R: jab tum log expected thi tab kya mai tumhara aise majak banati thi??? (with a cute face she asked)

Ri: kya karein hum teri tarah sweet nahi haina… (pinching her chin)

R: mujhe itna darr lag raha hai aur tumhe majak sujh rahi hai…

Ri: kyunki starting mai sabko darr lagta hai, bahut saare questions hote hai dil mai, par unka jawab tujhe abhi nahi inn gujarte 9 mahino ke saath millega, jaise jaise waqt beetega tere mann ki saari ghabrahat dur hoti challi jayegi aur ending mai sirf mamta ka ehsas reh jayega tere saath… (riddhima was still lost in thoughts) riddhima don't worry…

R: bahut pain hota haina delivery ke waqt… (she asked her in a baby tone)

Ri: tujhe nahi pata??? Har roj kitne to bacho ko duniya mai laati hai… (she stopped when looked at armaan who's just entered in kitchen)

A: mil gaya anteena chaaron ka??? Bas baaton ke liye to aisi tuti rehti hai, jaha mauka mila shuru ho jayengi chak-chak chak-chak… ye to dhyan hi nahi rehta ki koi aur bhi hai tumhare aas pass, aur kitchen hi mili tumhe baatein karne ke liye, room mai aaram se baithkar baatein nahi kar sakti kya????

Ri: ahh haa haa, aawaj to dekho kitni buland ho gayi hai, baap hi ban raha hai, koi pahad nahi tod diya….

A: kisne kaha ki ye chotta kaam hai?? Mera teensy weensy baby aane waala hai, jo apni pyari si totli si language mai mujhe pa kahega aur riddhima ko ummy… m to bhul hi jayega… (riddhima smiled at his imagination…) I don't think iss se bada kaam aur koi ho sakta hai duniya mai… haina?? (he looked at riddhima, she nodded) challo phir issi baat par ice-cream ho jaaye… (he teased her..)

R: (remembering that she'd come here for ice-cream..) ohh haan mai to bhul hi gayi… (she turned towards fridge and took out brick, and then searched for bowls… and on the verge of putting her step on stool so that she could take out bowls from almirah but armaan stopped her saying let me get that, tum ruko… and he get down soon with bowls… looking at riddhima and while giving her bowls he slightly pinched on her hand, then blinked his eyes naughtily, she blushed, with in a second she was out with the question bank which was haunting her… his presence really do wonders always.. she thought and turned to cut the ice-cream… in between niki left when heard her baby's crying and abhi was shouting from outside oe apni beti ko sambhal le, chup nahi ho rahi.. baad mai baatein kar lena…. Prachi and ritu also left from there….)

Riddhima hardly had cut 1 slice when felt armaan's hand over her hand… that was passing from her waist..

R: armaan koi aa jayega…

A: to mai kya kar raha hun??? Tumhari help hi to kar raha hun, apni biwi ki help karna koi buri baat nahi hai… hai kya?????? (riddhima slightly shaked her head, after cutting 4-5 slices, armaan's hand slipped on her tummy, and started lightly caressing her tummy, she was feeling tickly all over her body, with one hand she holds his both hands and rests her head on his collar bone...)

A: hamara baby kya kar raha hoga iss waqt???

R: (slightly smiled at his question) apne ghar mai enter karne ki tayari kar raha hoga… (she replied very genuinely)

A: jahan ussne 9 months rehna hai, means approximately 40 weeks…(he asked her in the same tone with more excitement..)

R: approximately 37 weeks…

A: baaki ke 3 weeks???

R: baaki ke 3 weeks aapke baby ne ye confirm karne ke liye hai ki finally unhone iss duniya mai kadam rakh liya hai… papa mere welcome ke liye taiyar ho jao…

A: (smiled very sweetly) sachi baby aise keh raha hai… (riddhima don't know what to answer at his innocent question… he again caressed her tummy, then kissed on her neck, riddhima turned and looked him… ) bolo naa….

R: apni language mai wo yehi keh raha hai….

A: aur kya keh raha hai???

R: aur puch raha hai (ritu shouted from outside ice-cream kab aayegi, we're waiting… riddhima shaked her head) time to go… (armaan imitated her, riddhima slightly hitted him and moved out from kitchen..)

2 more hour they chatted, in between riddhima noticed armaan and found him gazing niki with her baby deeply, she asked with eyes what happened, he shaked his head and again lost in chatting, all left for their home, once again congratulating armaan and riddhima, ritu giving 1000's of instructions of care…

next day..

riddhima opened her eyes on the tone of alarm, she put of the alarm, armaan was still
sleeping with his arm on her tummy, she looked at him and then moved a bit and brushed her lips against his, then smiled and slightly removed his arm, got up slowly, felt her head slightly swaying, she holds the bed corner, then wearing her footwears she took 3-4 rounds in room to get normal and then came down, made coffee for herself and settled on swing, thinking about last night with their friends, unknowingly she started smiling, then thinks about armaan's attitude during the last hours, while they're chatting his gaze atlast stops sometimes on rishab, sometimes on ananya, sometimes on aakansha, it's not like that he's not seen them before but yesterday something was different in his eyes, which was hidden under his excitement….

(she came out of thoughts when felt his touch on her shoulder, she turned back.. and mumbled good morning.. armaan bends down and gave her quick kiss on lips and said now it's good morning, riddhima smiled) armaan came in front, then bents down and slightly kisses on her tummy and mumbled gud mrng baby… before riddhima could react he asked her to get up from swing and himself settled on swing, then pulled riddhima in his lap, riddhima wrapped herself like a baby in his lap and places her head on his collar bone, this's their favorite swing position, almost emerged in each other… armaan took coffee mug from her hand and sips coffee…

A: ridhima ek baat batao???

R: pucho…

A: 1 chotta sa bacha jo bahut ro raha hai wo kissi aur se chup nahi hota, par jaise hi apni maa ki godd mai jaata hai chup ho jaata hai kyu???

R: kyunki wo uski maa hai, isliye… ye bhi koi puchne question waala tha???

A: aise to usse apne papa ki goddi mai bhi chup ho jaana chahiye, kyunki wo uske papa hai, par wo unki godd mai bhi chup nahi hota, kyu???

R: kyunki bacha sabse jayda apni maa ko pehchanta hai, uske andar jo raha hota hai 9 mahine tak, jab se usne aankhein kholni seekhi hoti hai tab se sabse pehle maa ko apni aankhon mai basaya hota hai, jab se usne haath paer challane seekhe hote hai, sabse pehle usse apni maa ka sparsh mehsus hota hai uske baad uske papa ka aur uske baad kissi aur ka… 1 satisfaction, 1 vishwas ki dorr bandhi hoti hai bache ki apni maa ke saath, jaise hi apni maa ke pass jaata hai usse lagta hai ki ab puri tarah safe hai, usse kuch nahi ho sakta.. usse lagta hai uski maa uske rone ka matlab jarur samjhegi, aur hota bhi aise hi hai, jitna jayda maa apne bache ke rone ko samjhti hai utna koi nahi samajh sakta, usse pata hota hai ki uske bache ko kab kya chahiye… waise aaj aap subah subah ye question kyu puch rahe hai???

A: par bache ke papa bhi to bache se utna hi pyar karte hai jitna uski maa, phir bache ko
aise partiality thodi na karni chahiye, papa bechare kitna degrade ho jaate honge, ye bache kyu nahi sochte… (riddhima smiled at his sweet talk)

R: kyunki maa ke..

A: (cut her in between) ye mat kehna ki maa ke pyar ki umar 9 mahine jayda hoti hai.. (riddhima was surprised, though she's not saying the exact words but something like this) Kyunki bache ke liye excited utna hi uske papa hote hai jitna ki uski mumma, wo bhi 9 months ke har pal wait karte hai ki kab unka bacha unki goddi mai aayega aur wo uske saath khelenge….unhe bhi utni hi fikar hoti hai apne bache ki jitni maa ko hoti hai, phir bhi bacha partial hota hai…. Kyu????

R: bache ko thodi na pata hota ki uske papa bhi uss se utna hi pyar karte jitni uski mumma, jab dheere dheere wo apne papa ke contact mai aata hai to uska vishwas aur uska bond uske papa se bhi develop hota rehta hai aur phir ek din mumma ki tarah papa ke saath bhi strong bond ban jaata hai…

A: par bache ko pata hona chahiye na..

R: itni nanhi si jaan jo haatho mai bhi mushkil se aati hai janam ke baad, uss se itni saari expectations???

A: expectation ki baat nahi sahi galat ki baat ho rahi hai…

R: (suddenly remembering something) tum itna surety se kaise keh sakte ho aisa hi hota hai, vikas ka beta bhi to hai, wo 1 minute bhi apne papa ke bina nahi reh sakta…

A: jab bache ko palla hi usne hai to obviously wo usii ke saath rahega kyunki uske liye to uski mumma wohi haina, exceptional cases ki baat nahi kar raha hun mai, unn cases ki baat kar raha hun jaha mummy papa dono apne bache se equally pyar karte hai…

R: armaan phir waha dheere dheere bond develop ho jaata hai bache aur papa ke bech mai…

A: kitne dino mai develop ho jaata hai wo bond????

R: armaan kya tum mujhe bataoge ki aaj subah subah ye itne ajeeb ajeeb se questions kyu puch rahe ho??

A: kyunki mujhe ye baat pareshan kar rahi hai ki bacha apne pyar mai itna partial kyu hota hai???

R: tumne kiss bache ko dekha apni mummy ke saath partiality karte hue???

A: bahut cases hai… kal raat aakansha ko dekha tha abhi bechara usse kitna chup karwane ki koshish kar raha tha par wo chup hui??? Aur jaise hI niki ke haatho mai aayi wo chup ho gayi, rishab jo 3 saal ka hone waala hai chirag usse kitna khaana khillane ki koshish kar raha tha par usne khaya ritu ke haath se… bechare ko kitna pinch ho raha hoga… (riddhima started laughing)

R: tum itni der se iss baat ke liye mujse itne stupid questions puch rahe the???

A: ye stupid questions hai???

R: nahi bahut intelligent questions hai….

A: acha.. tumhe kya pata mujhe kaisa feel ho raha hai ye sochkar ki hamara baby bhi aise karega…kya mai tumhare andar nahi ghus sakta kissi tarah??? (riddhima looked him with widened eyes) aise kyu dekh rahi ho??? you know mai ye 9 months ka difference bilkul nahi rakhna chahta apne aur hamare bache ke beech mai.. usse abhi se batana chahta hun ki mai bhi uss se utna hi pyar karta hun jitna ki tum… nahi to baad mai hamare beech mai bhi problems ho jayengi… tumhe pata hai abhi ko lagta hai ki jab se aakansha iss duniya mai aayi hai niki usse itna time devote nahi karti jitna pehle karti thi, infact ab uske pass abhi ke liye bilkul time nahi hota…. Chirag aur ritu ke relation mai bhi ab wo baat nahi rahi jo pehle hoti thi, wo dono to kitna pyar karte the ek dusre se…. (riddhima was listening his words very carefully,understanding his instincts and the insecurity which's somewhere buried deep in his heart…)

R: armaan kya tum prepared nahi ho baby ke liye???? (she looked in his eyes)

A: (immediately) nahi riddhima… shayad mai bata nahi sakta ki mai kitna khush hun,tumhe pata hai jab mai Singapore gaya tha waha se aate hue maine yehi socha tha ki shayad ab hume apne pyar ko 1 anjaam aur de dena chahiye, usse baby ke saath bandh kar aur majboot bana dena chahiye, ye baby to hamare pyar ki nishani hai… iske liye mai prepared kaise nahi ho sakta??? Bas pata nahi kuch pareshani si ho rahi hai, shayad mai bewajah…(riddhima placed her hand on his mouth)

R: tum bewajah kuch nahi soch rahe ho armaan, shayad mai hi tumhe samajhne ki koshish nahi kar rahi hun…

A: aisa ho hi nahi sakta ki riddhima armaan ko na samajh paaye, agar wo nahi samjah paa rahi hai iska matlab hai ki armaan hi kuch galat soch raha hai, kuch jayda soch raha hai, shayad itna jayda jo unke relation se bilkul alag hai…

R: nahi, I mean mai samajh bhi rahi hun tum kya kehna chahte ho aur nahi bhi.. pata hai armaan normally bacha ussi ke pass jaakar shaant rehta hai jaha usse lagta hai wo safe hai, jaha usse apnepan ka ehsas hota hai… ab ye tumhare uppar depend karta hai ki tum ye yakeen bache ko kaise dillaoge aur kab tak dillwa paoge, tum chirag bhaiya, abhi ya rohit ka apne bacho ke saath relation dekhkar bilkul bhi nahi keh sakte ki tumhara bhi apne baby ke saath aise hi link hoga, kyunki obviously ye cheez tumhare pyar ke uppar depend karegi jo tum apne bache ko doge…

A: par wo log bhi to apne bache se pyar karte hai…

R: ofcourse karte hai, par pyar karne ke bhi alag-2 tareeke hote hai, ab wo kiss roop mai apne bache ko pyar karte hai ye to tum nahi keh sakte, unhe pehli baar hi to tumne note kiya hai, kya pata unke ghar par kya chal raha hai kya nahi… uske basis par tum apne bache ke baare mai socho ye to galat haina…sabke apne experience hote hai, apne bache ko duniya mai aane to do, phir tum apni thinking form karna…. Aur jaha tak rahi hamare relation ki baat.. to har moment par hamare relation mai pyar bhadega kam hone ka sawaal hi nahi uthta… ye bacha hamare pyar ke relation se bana hai naaki hamara relation iss bache ke aane ke baad banega…

A: unn sabka relation bhi to aisa hi hai…

R: armaan mai tumharii baat ko bilkul maanti hun, mai 1 gynac hun, achi tarah jaanti hun ki gaps aa jaate hai husbands wife mai unke baby ke baad par uska reason ya to ye hota hai ki husband-wife ka abhi tak relation khud ka hi theek se develop nahi hua tha aur wo 1 nayi jaan ko duniya mai le aate hai aur phir wo dono hi uski parvarish mai itna busy ho jaate hai ki unka personal relation kabhi aage nahi bhad paata unke beech wo understanding kabhi develop nahi hoti jo 1 relation ko phool ki tarah khilne par majboor kar deti hai.. unke beech ya to sirf 1 physical relation reh jaata hai ya phir bache ko paalne ki jimmedaari ka relation…. 1 case ye hai gaps aane ka main reason..

A: thank god hamare beech mai ye problem kabhi nahi aayegi, hamara relation puri tarah developed hai, I think aur to nahi kuch add ho sakta na… we're developed na???

R: (smiled ) haan…ye 4 saal isiliye to the..

A: we're in heaven na…

R: surely we're in heaven.. kyunki..

A: agar bhagwan ji bhi aa jaaye aur puche ki koi wish mango, mai puri karunga, aur hum 1 pal bhi bina gawaye ye keh dein ki hume kuch nahi chahiye, to iska matlab hum heaven mai hai… kyunki hamare pass mangne ke liye kuch nahi hai…aur hum dono ka answer yehi hoga…. Isn't it??? (riddhima nodded) to means chirag auro ka relation abhi puri tarah develop nahi tha???

R: develop tha armaan, par chotte bache ko paalna itna aasan nahi hota, usse har waqt 1 care taker ki jarurat hoti hai... ritu, chirag bhaiya ke case mai, abhi niki ke case mai gaps isliye aaye kyunki unhone saara bacha ka kaam khud karna hota hai, aur phir ghar ka bhi kaam ho jaata hai thoda bahut, bache saari saari raat jaagte hai, uske saath uski maa bhi jaagti hai, kitni thakawat ho jaati hai maa ko, ab ye expect karna ki wo saara din pehle ghar ka kaam kare, bache ko sambhale phir bhi tumhare saath pyar se bole, pehle jaisa behave kare ye to galat hoga na,

rest to uski body bhi mangti hai, hai to wo insaan hi machine to nahi hai… aise mai gaps aa jaate hai husband-wife mai… kyunki husband ko lagta hai bache ke aate hi unki wife ka pyar kam ho gaya hai unke liye… aur wife ko samajh nahi aata ki kaise time manage kare… jab tak samajh aata hai tab tak unke relation mai 1 ghanth bandh chukki hoti hai, jo saari jindagi saath chalti hai… wo ganth phir pyar se bhi nahi khul paati…

A: phir??? Ye problem to har relation mai hoti hogi.. isme galti kiski hai??? Husband ki, wife ki ya phir bache ki???

R: bache ki galti kaise ho sakti hai??? Wo to chotta sa hai duniyadaari se bilkul alag, galti husband-wife dono ki hoti hai…. Dono ko hi kuch baatein samajhne ki jarurat hoti hai…

A: wo kya??? (then thinking a bit) challo rehne do, I think wo baatein mujhe tumhare bina kahe samajhni chahiye, agar tumne bata diya to to obviously wo problems hamare relation mai nahi hongi, par mai tumhare bina kahe khud samajhna chahta hun.. 1 father ki responsibilities aur 1 husband ki bhi jab uski wife mother cum wife mai badal jaaye to… but promise me inn 9 months mai tum hamare beech mai koi bhi gap nahi aane dogi..

R: in the sense????

A: in the sense ki tum mujhe hamesha apne aap se aur hamare baby se jod kar rakhogi, mujhe kabhi bhi tum dono se alag nahi karogi, tumhare andar kya ho raha hai, tumhara kya mann kar raha hai, kya feel ho raha hai tumhe, hamare baby mai kab kya new progress hui har pal ki mujhe information dogi… mai hamesha ab tak jaise tumse juda raha hun waise hi ab tum dono se juda rehna chahta hun… tumhari har problem, har pain mujhe pata hona chahiye….mai tum me aisa involve rahun ki mujhe kabhi bhi na lage ki mai tumse alag hun, tumhare andar na hote hue bhi tumhare andar rahun, tumhare har pain ka dard khud feel kar sakun…bolo aisa karogi na… mujhe apne aap se alag to nahi karogi hamare baby ke aa jaane par???

R: (pinching his nose) apni saason ko apne aap se alag kaise kar sakti hun?? Huh…(she placed his hand on her tummy) I promise mai tumhe har moment se aise jod kar rakhhungi ki tumhare aur hamare baby ke beech ye 9 months ka difference nahi rahega.. tumhe kabhi nahi lagega ki tum mujhse alag ho, jo cheez mai feel karungi wohi tum bhi feel karoge…I promise armaan…

A: aise nahi…hamesha jaise promise karti ho waise karo…

Riddhima moved her face little closed to his, both were looking in each other's eyes, riddhima's eyes was giving it's promise note and armaan's eyes was taking that promise note… and with in a second their lips covered the distance in between them…and they were involved in their promise kiss like ever…soon they break as armaan felt riddhima is slightly distracted… riddhima placed her head on his shoulder… she closed her eyes as she felt her head heavy… armaan asked her is she's ok??? She nodded saying aisa hota hai… abhi theek ho jayega.. armaan slightly caresses her hair…

A: waise doctor ke pass kab jaana hai???

R: kyu???

A: wo kal raat niki kissi prenatal tests ke liye keh rahi thi…

R: haan par abhi mujhe bhuk lag rahi hai, iske baare mai hum baad mai baat kare…

A: bilkul nahi, hum abhi baat karenge uske baad kuch khayenge… batao tests kab karwane hai…

R: kal ya parso tak karwa lenge na…

A: maine abhi options nahi diye the… breakfast ke baad karwaane hai ya evening mai.. ye tumhari marji hai… par karwane aaj hi hai…(makes a face) acha batao kya khaana khaynge breakfast mai???

R: aaloo ke pranthe…

A: okk…(they got up from swing, riddhima moved in kitchen and washed her hands, took out necessary things from fridge and as soon as she lightened the gas…) bas bahut kaam kar liya, ab tum thak gayi hogi, challo aaram karo..

R: armaan…

A: aisi haalat mai jayda kaam nahi karte none…

R: (smiled) jaise tumhe bahut pata hai ki kya karte hai kya nahi karte…

A: nahi pata to pata kar lenge aap kab kaam aayengi, (he lifted her up and made her sit on shelf, holding her one plate and one bowl full of curd) ye line to hamare bade bujurg log keh gaye hai..ab wo to kabhi galat honge nahi na…. (he started making pranthas…) waise tumne bataya nahi tumhe ladka chahiye ya ladki???

R: (thought a bit) kuch bhi ho bas bilkul tumhari tarah ho…

A: na na… 1 choice ladka ya ladki????

R: kuch bhi…

A: okk, mere saath bhi aisa hi hai, waise mujhe lagta tha ki mujhe pehle ladki chahiye phir maine socha dhyan se to pata challa ki agar ladka bhi ho jaaye to bhi mai uss se utna hi pyar karunga.. kyunki hai to wo mera bacha hi na… (he's lost in his imagination and swings..) par haan ladki ho to wo bilkul tumhari tarah ho…. (he places prantha in her plate..)

R: aur ladka bilkul tumhari tarah…. jisse paakar koi bhi ladki apne aap ko most lucky samjhe..

A: abhi baby duniya mai aaya bhi nahi aur tumne uski shaadi ke sapne tak dekh liye, itne dur ke sapneee…(riddhima puts one bite in his mouth, while he's busy in making second prantha…) waise mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum apne bete ko flirty banana chahti hun.. (riddhima looked him confusingly) jaruri thodi na hai ki uski life mai bhi riddhima aayegi.. aur riddhima ke milne se pehle armaan kya tha ye to tum jaanti hi ho….(she thought a bit) riddhima theek se khao, chotti bites aur ache se chew karo…

R: to ab kya karein??? (while feeding him)

A: kya karna hai.. beta bhi bilkul tumhari tarah hi hoga… (placed prantha on her plate)

R: please mai nahi chahti ki hamare bache gusse waale aur nakchidchide ho… wo to bilkul tumhari tarah sweet aur cute se honge….

A: nahi tumhari tarah honge…

R: armaan maine kaha na tumhari tarah honge…

A: tumhari tarah…

R: mujhe pata hai tumhari tarah honge…(he placed prantha) bas armaan meri tummy full ho gayi prrantha tum khaoge..

A: oe half half prantha hai dono ka…

R: par mai 1 and a half se jayda nahi khaati tumhe pata to hai…

A: ye half prantha tumhare liye nahi mere baby ke liye hai…usse bhi to bhuk lagi hogi..

R: tumhare baby ne mere khaane mai se khaa liya hoga..

A: to ye half prantha tumhare liye hai… you know mai bilkul nahi chahta ki chuhe mere bache ke aas paas bhi bhatke… 9 mahine tak unki entry band hai, kahin mera baby darr na jaye.. to chup chap ye prantha kha lo, aur dudh thanda peena pasand karogi ya garam?

R: (coughed) armaan please mai ye prantha kha leti hun par dudh nahi…

A: tumhe lagta hai tumhare bolne ka kuch fayda hoga??? (riddhima makes a crying face, but armaan placed one glass full of milk near her…)

R: mai dudh nahi peeungi..

A: bottle mai daal kar dun, phir pee logi??? Ya chamach bhar-2 ke pillaun??? Achi baat hai mujhe bhi practice ho jayegi… (riddhima makes a face)

R: I hate you…

A: gud.. dudh…(he tried to hold her glass,but she didn't hold it, armaan moved glass near her mouth, she again pleaded, he asked her to open mouth, atlast…) that's like a good girl..

R: tum mujse baat mat karna…

A: okk… (he took his cell and type one message, then gave it to riddhima, riddhima read the message hum uppar challein taiyar hona hai, sanjeevani jaana hai…she get down from shelf and moved up…opened her almirah..)

R: koi mujhe batayega ki mai aaj kya dallun??? (he came from back and took out suit for her, she turned to go, he followed her, at the door of bathroom she turned) kya hai???

A: aisi haalat mai jayda kaam nahi karte, to mai soch raha tha ki aaj se mai hi tumhe nehla diya karunga, kahin tumhe thakawat na ho jaye…. (he said this with innocent face)

R: ji nahi thankyou… mai manage kar lungi… (and she closed the door on him..)

Okk that's it for today…

Reply needed…

With your comments please tell me do you want to read directly about their baby, aur you want to read first about their nine months, then baby…. what you actually want to read.... As you all suggest…

Sorry for the delay, soon I'll do next update, again I'll do pm to all of you, if you don't receive pm, please tell me…

Precap: according to your suggestion….


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Neha.K. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 July 2009 at 6:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ishanki

are wah meri candy ne aaj to kamaal kar diya, first reserve karke, sorry maine aaj comment ka reply nahi kiya, waoo teri 14th ki buking hai, kab aayegi aur ambala aayegi na mujhse milne??? kitne dino ke liye aa rahi hai india??? packing ho gayi kya??? tujhe pata hai mujhe tere last comment mai 1 line dil ko chuu gayi, ki tu comment karegi coz tu karna chahti hai, meri khushi ke liye tu comment nahi karegi.... seriously mai hamesha se aisa hi chahti thi, really loved your comment, ye phase sirf maine tere liye start kiya hia, tu chahti thi na jaldi se AR ke chunu munu ko dekhna, warna shayad abhi 20 parts tak meri koi bhi aisi planning nahi thi...par tu bahut wait kar rahi thi atlast maine apne dimag ke ghode dodayeLOL aur aise naya chapter start kiya... kaisa lag raha hai tujhe ye naya chapter??? kya mai theek likh rahi hun ya kuch aur padna chahte the tum log??? aur tu fikar mat kar, tujhe jab bhi time milega tab aaram se comment kar diyo, no boundation, par mai sachi bahut miss karungi tere comment ko, bahut adhura lagta hai part jisme tera, kshu, ritu, pooja, rucha, kiran ke comments nahi hote.... will really miss you... aa to india rahi hai, aur yun lag raha hai pata nahi kaunse des mai jaa rahi hai mujhe chodkar....luv you sooo much

welcome to india..SmileSmileSmile

teri anku

mujhe pata hai... afterall maine tujhe majboor kar hi diya chunu munu laane peLOL
aur wah wah kya ghode daudte hain tere dimaag k...tere ghodo k sath ammy ji k ghodo ki speed bhi kuch zyada hi tez hai
kya kya nahi sochta unka khurafaati dimaag...ROFL
aise questions;;jinka koi reply nahi
bechari ridhima fir bhi manage kar hi leti hai...aam insano ke bas ki baat nahi yehLOL
bilkul thik jaa rahi hai tu anku
i m loving this chunu munu chapter
dekh zyada jaldi nahi hai unhe bahar laane ki
9 mahine kaatne de unhe araam se ........ mujhe ab koi jaldi nahi haiBig smile

chal ab next update toh shayad pata nahi kab padh paungi... jabhi bhi padhne ka time mileha wahan aake.. fir tujhe ambala aane ka bhi bata dungi
chodungi nahi tujhe aise hi
aur haan abhi bata de tere liye kya leke aaunSmile list bata denaEmbarrassed
chal ab ambala mein milenge...
love yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa so very much
urs nehu

Edited by Neha_luvPRB - 11 July 2009 at 8:23am

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k_anjali12 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 July 2009 at 6:30am | IP Logged

hai dearSmile

                such a sweeet part yaarSmileI just wonders every time that how can u explain each situation very nicelySmilejust loved ur style of explaining the situationsSmileArmaan's cute doubts n Riddhima's sweet answers . simply amazingSmilen finally Armaaan's care for her is just mind-blowingSmileI love to read each stage of her pregancySmilecontinue soooooooooonSmile          

Edited by k_anjali12 - 12 July 2009 at 1:25pm
chahat_armaan IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10991

Posted: 11 July 2009 at 6:34am | IP Logged

haye ishu bahot bahot acha part tha Clap

yay u showed ammy n ritu wow just love their nok-jhok
how do u cum up with these Tongue
wo ajeeb naari wala to bahot hi mast thaLOLLOLLOL
armaan ko aise questions milte kaha se hai ??????Shocked
bt kitne cute the haye mein mar jawan Embarrassed
mein to yahi chahungi ki mere husband/bf bhi mujhe aise hi understand kare Day Dreaming
i loved how he said ki mein tumhse alag nahi honga jo tum feel karogi woo mein feel karoonga ClapClapClap
awwwwwwwwww how sweet can that guy get actually loved the whole AR convo Day Dreaming
aur ishu mujhe ek pyaare se ekdum armaan jaise ladke ki masi ban na hai  Tongue
i m just loving the chunu munu LOLWink
di very very well done for cuming up wid these brilliant scenes and dialouges ClapClapClap
aur haan pure 9 mahine dikhana
pehle mein bolti ki baby chahiye bt yeh part padne ke baad i can just imaginge how sweetly u will right these 9 months would be Day Dreaming to definately 9 months armaan riddzi ko pampar karte hue dikhana
aur ek sawaal kya aap shanky angi in sab ka regret dikhaoge i just hate them so they better say sorry to ARAngry
bt mein soch rahi thi ki ridzi kitni kuch hogi jab uske papa aur mama use mama bante hue dekhege
she would be soo happy Day Dreaming to i hope aisa hi kuch ho
udate very soon

Edited by chahat_armaan - 12 July 2009 at 1:55am
IsabellaCullen IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3948

Posted: 11 July 2009 at 6:46am | IP Logged
Hey Ishu!

Though I haven't yet read the part but read ur question and being a greedy reader, I'd love to see the nine months first!

Will edit the comment after reading!!

janu1610 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6544

Posted: 11 July 2009 at 7:11am | IP Logged
ishu  yaar sirf AR ka hi rishta nahin badla hum sab be to bade ho gaye hain .sacchi mein usko har pal Ridhima ke saath jeena hai wahi hum be to chahte hain vo sab mehsoos karna chahte hain .swear main har pal unke saath unka har dard,khushi ,pyaar,dar sab mehsos karna chahti hoon .

Asar hai ye unki adaao ka, jab wo itne pyaare lagte hai,
Jab wo kahte hai vadda hai mera, juthe waade bi sachee lagte hai.

Asar hai

mujhe be bata ye maa hi kyun pa kyun nahin.Armaan aur Ridzi ka rishta to pura hai to us bacche ki jubaan par MaPa hona chahiye .[new word  i know] LOL  LOL

Ritu ki aur uski ladai to hamesha cute hoti hai .love them.

Mujh ko to tune bataya nahin ki Armaan parantha be banata hai .ALL ROUNDER[ullu banata hai]
Yaar dhoodh se sab ko allergy kyun hai.mere ko to bahut pasand hai.

woh jante hai ki hum unke intezaar mein hai
isliye shayad woh der laga rahe hai
waqt kat-ta nahin unke bina hamara
yeh jante huve bhi hame sata rahe hai
na jane kya milta hai unhe hame yun sata kar
jo der se akar bhi woh muskara rahe hai
love u .
take care .


Edited by janu1610 - 13 July 2009 at 8:57am

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