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Posted: 27 May 2009 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
fantastic start
plz pm me when u continue

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Posted: 27 May 2009 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KaSh_4_eva

fantastic start
plz pm me when u continue


thx sure ill add ur name 2 da PM list

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hey anam!!!
it ws so nyc...
luvly!!!ClapClap
hey continue soon...n pm if u continue.......
really luvd it1!!
 
 

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thanx for appreciating and encouraging me to write on so here we go



Part 2

riddhima ran as she realized she was getting late
she ran to the nurse station bumped into ward boys and atlast when she arrived she bumped into armman and fell in his arms
they looked deeply into each others eyes for a few seconds

ridzi: tum? yaha?
         looking back at the door she cam e from
          tum to abhi waha the? waise bhi tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?
DR kirti: DR riddhima. pehle to aap late hai aur phir aise
ridzi: yes maam i mean sorry maam
Dr kirti: hello interns main aapki senior doctor huun dr kirti please introduce yourselves
ammy: armaan mallik
ridzi: staring in anger at ammy: riddhima gupta
anjy: anjali gupta
atul: atul joshi
rahul: rahul gareval
muskaan: muskaan chaddha (and does her weird laugh)
dr kirti : dr muskaan
muski: sorry maam
rahul whispering: isko chup karan mushkil hi nahi na munkin hai
muski: chup beth duffer kahin ka
dr kirti: interns! 1st mein appko locker room dikhatu hoon
 chalo
ridzi: maam can i go to the toliet first and ill meet you there
dr kirti: yeh aapka pehla din hai isliye ok otherwise no breaks in duty time samajhi
ridzi: yes maam
dr kirti: toliet us taraf hai

everyone leaves but anjy and ammy stay back with ridzi

anjy: tum itni late kyun ayi
ridzi: woh(lukin at ammy) traffic mumbai ka
anjy : o kk
then she leaves

ridzi lukin at ammy : tumm yaha kya kar rahe ho
                                 pehle din hi daat kawa dhi na
ammy : mene kya kiya
ridzi: tumne ummm tumne mujhe battaya kyun nahi
ammy: zarrori nahi samjha
walks off giving a flying kissand smiling

ridzi: urgh zarrori nahi samjha (mimicing him)
walks really fast in anger bumps into dr shashank

ridzi: papa aap oh im sorry
dr shanky; papa at home call me dr gupta
ridzi: yes papa i mean yes sir

and she rushes to leave

please comment and tell me what you did or did not like
mayb room for improvement thanku
will update 2mrw perhaps if liked


Edited by armaanno01fan - 28 May 2009 at 5:49am

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Posted: 28 May 2009 at 5:48am | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwww luved it sweets tooo goood thanks a ton for the Pm veryy well written awwww it was too short, i wish it was longer. it would have beeb much better anyway i just loved it. very nice swancy

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Posted: 28 May 2009 at 5:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swansea

awwwwwwwwww luved it sweets tooo goood thanks a ton for the Pm veryy well written awwww it was too short, i wish it was longer. it would have beeb much better anyway i just loved it. very nice swancy


thx will probably make it longer next time
thanxx a tonnBig smile
i feel so more encouaged 2 write on
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Posted: 28 May 2009 at 5:51am | IP Logged

hey dearSmile

          nice part.........           continue sooon............

Edited by k_anjali12 - 28 May 2009 at 5:56am

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Posted: 28 May 2009 at 6:29am | IP Logged
hey anam!!! nyc!!!
yh evni feel it ws longer....
bt reading dis shilpu n karan cum in my mind..seriously!!!
i cud imagine dis!! it ws lyk a vdo!! awesum yaar.......
hey well u 4gt niki....doesn't mater....deese r our real internz..............
luvd it...
n continue soon

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