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Posted: 27 May 2009 at 11:13am | IP Logged
helloo sorry i changed the title hope u guys dont get confuse

excetp of Love at 1st sight i thought PEHLE TAKRAAR PHIR PYAAR suits teh storyline better plz give opinions on this if u dnt like it plz feel welomed 2 criticize


hello evry
this is my first FF so hope you enjoy it

my charcters
sme as DMG

PART 1

riddhima : di chaloo late ho jayegi pehle din meh hi
anjali : aa rahi hoon
riddhima: acha me jaati huun tum papa ke saath aa jana
anjali: tikh hai

riddhima trying to stop a taxi
ridzi: taxi taxi
taxi doesnt stopp
ridzi: aaj kal ke logh bhi naa

a motorbike goes past her and stops
the man rides back
takes his helmet off and slides his hand through his lush hair

armaan: need a lift?
ridzi: no thanku (feeling awkward)
armaan: iill drop you me waise larko sa nahi huun so dont worry
ridzi: nah its ok
armaan : ok fine
ridzi: u can go now
armaan:u wont get a taxi aa jaoo(trying to force her)

ridzi ignores him and tries getting another taxi

ridzi: taxi taxi
no taxi stops

armaan: aaj kal ki ladiyan ziddi kahin ki
ridzi: kuch kaha aapne
armaan : nahi aapne kuch suna(cheekily)
ridzi: ab aap jao mujhe aapse lift anhi chahiye thanku
armaan: pakka ok mai jah raha hu

he starts the motorbike
riddhima still trying but no luck
so she thinks and then she goes

ridzi: acha suniye
armaan: kya
ridzi: aap mujhe sanjeevani hospital chod sakta hai please
armaan:(laughs)
ridzi: kyun hase?
armaan: aapkko pata chal jayega
               betiyen ji
               by the way aapka naam?

riddhima sits trying to keep her distance

ridzi: riddhima aur aap
armaan: aap mujhe nahi jaanti
               sari ladkiyan mujhe jaanti hai
               main mallik armaan mallik
ridzi: O K then (whispering)
armaan: kya
ridzi: nothing to aap jah kaha rahe the
armaan: dont worry mujhe paka pakro warna gir jaogi
ridzi: mujhe kuch nahi hoga

he starts the bike
rides it very fast

ridzi: dheere chaloa
armaan: maine kaha na mujhe pakar lo

ridzi slowly put her arm on hi shoulder very gently
armaan luks at his shoulder and smiles
ridzi sees this and removes her hand

armaan: pakar lo mein tumhe kha nahi jaaonga

ridzi puts her hand on again

armaan presses the brake
ridzi is pushed on his back and her hand is around his waist ?
she notices and removes very quickly
armaan just laughs

he stops the bike

ridzi : kya hua rukh kyu gaye
armaan: i dont mind taking you on a long drive as your veryyy beautiful par sanjeevani aa gaya
ridzi: blushes : thanku

ridzi starts going in the hostpital

armaan puts his helmet back on but waits for ridzi to trun

armaan: she will she will

and before closing the door she waves back luaghing

armaan:hasi to phasi
               yaar me to gaya

hope you guys like itt
this was my 1st FF
hope it wasnt boring
PLZZZ COMMENT
if u guyz like it then ill continue
plzz


pm list                                       index
1. angelic_swancy                      part 1- page 1
2. sanjana25                             part 2 - page 2
3.k_anjali12                             part 3- page 5
4.aliyaha                             part 4- page 9

5.KaSh_4_eva
                       part 5- page 13
6.sanisweetie                         part 6-page 17
7.sheel_dmgdiva                         part 7- page 20
8.ammy_furor                           part8-page 22
9.rinxkashsujen                      part 9-page 26
10.~sumedha~                           part 10-page 30
11.mkp1995                             part 11-page 35
12.panjwani                             part 12-page 39
13LIKEDMG                             part 13-page 44
14.jessica18                            IMP note-page 49
15.karan05                             part 14-page 53
16.cutie_yachu                         NOTE-page 62
17.karansharda_fan                    part 15- page 62
18.KaSu_foreva                        part 16-page 65
19.riddss                             part 17- page 70
20.ksg_sonia                            part 18-page 74
21.mithila2                             part 19-page 82
22.SuKash                             part 20-page 85
23.Kash4life                            part 21-page 89

24.lilsunshine_rav                PART 22-PAGE 93
25.xxxxminixxxx                    part 23-page 97
26.nidha1983                         part 24-page 100
27.dhruviarmaanfan
28.karans_angel
29.shalika
30.swamii92
31._MONU_

32.-neelam-
33.angel_riya
34.tamanna17
35.scorpio95
36.ibdt2004

37.aneeshadgr8
38.cutie_mahima
39. shayan90
40.cute_trisha
41.munomoni
42.dipu
43.AbhiNikiLuver


Edited by armaanno01fan - 22 January 2010 at 10:53am

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Posted: 27 May 2009 at 11:17am | IP Logged
OMGGGGGGGGGGG amzinggggg sweeets Pm me as soon as u update luved it jus adorable wowwww AR are soo cute Hmmm so armaan malik is fallin for her already??
do  continue soon k
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Posted: 27 May 2009 at 11:18am | IP Logged
thxxx
sure i will

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Posted: 27 May 2009 at 11:22am | IP Logged
it was really gud plz contd soon n pm me
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Posted: 27 May 2009 at 11:29am | IP Logged

hey dearSmile

                            first   of       all          a          hearty
                               CONGRATS
                                                     to   u
about ffHeart
             it's really really a very nice start... Heart
             Armaan's introduction just remaindes me the karan's intro in DMG.I simply loved it.Heart
             continue soon n plz pm me if u can.....
                                            
                                                 take care....
                                                 bye..bye.....


Edited by k_anjali12 - 27 May 2009 at 11:48am
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heyy dear,
nice
continue soon


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Posted: 27 May 2009 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Heyy please continue soon
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Posted: 27 May 2009 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
thx i was feeling really scred when i started that if ppl will like it or not but these comments enocuraged me alot
thx
will continue 2mrw mayb ok
if u wnat me 2 PM u juts say so
ill add a PM list at the top


Edited by armaanno01fan - 22 January 2010 at 10:53am

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