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Hey Deepu!!!!
That was a very nice intro..liked reading it...nice try.... continue soon and thanks for the PM!

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hi guys
i'll update the next part 2night or tommorow.
love u all




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Hey Deepu..
awesome start..
would love to read more of it..
plz PM me when you update..





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hey awesome part..nice work




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All the interns go 2 their respective duties.

Scene shiftes to Abhi-Niki

Abhi was checking nana.

Ab:-niki woh injection dene.

no reply

Abhi again said:-niki injection

no reply

abhi looks at Niki.she is lost in her own thougts.

Abhi shake her.

AB:-niki kya hua kaha koh gaye?

NI:-Woh main......woh......

Ab:-Haan Niki tum kya?

Niki is about say something but just then her pager was Dr. kirti.

Ni:-Woh abhi mujhe Dr. kirti ne bulaiya hain main tum se lunch time main baat karte hun.

Ab:-but Niki......

NI:-i have to go,warna Dr. Kirti gussa ho jayage.i'll talk 2 u later.Bye.

Niki go from there.

Abhi start doing his work again.

Now the scene shiftes 2 Rahul-Muskaan

Rahul is trying 2 give injection 2 gappu but he was not ready&Muskaan was laughing 2 see Rahul like this.

Rahul was irrrated now

Ra:-dekh gappu akhre baar bol raha hun chup-chap injection lagva le warna.........

Ga:-warna ka?hu warna kya kar loge app?

Ra:-to yeh baat hai?

Rahul 2 Muskaan

Ra:-Muskaan hum woh jo choclaaaatee injection ke baad Gappu ko dene wale the na woh tu phank de,kyonki Gappu ko to injection lagwana nahi hain.hain na Gappu?

Ga:-Nahi bhaiya appp itna keh rahe hain to main injection lagwa he leta hun.

Mu:-Par tumhe to injection nahi lagwana tha na to abh kya hua?

Ga:-nahi woh kuch nahi maine socha ke agar main injection lagwa lunga to jalde theek h jayonga bas isse liye aur woh appp ke choclate bhi

Both Rahul and Muskaan start laughing

Now lunch time.

All the interns went 2 the cafetaria except Armi-Ridz.

Both of them come out of the genaral ward go to the locker room.

Armaan put his labcoat in his locker just then he hear ridz 'payal' awaaz wich he gave her on Valentine Day.

Armaan looks at her beautiful face.he just stared at her fixdely.

Ridz notice that.

Ri:-Aise kya dekh rahe ho?


Ri:-Kyun?Phele to keh rahe the ke bhook lage hai.kya hua abh bhook nahi lage?

Ar:-Nahi.and go 2ward her.

Ri:-kya armaan tm bhi har waqt romance ke pade rahte hai tumhe.

Ar:-agar kise ke girlfriend itne sundar ho to koi kya kar sakta hai?

Armaan comes closer to her.but Riddhima pull her back and run to the cafetaria.

Armaan also go to the cafe.

Ri:-Hi guys and sit.


Muskaan:-itne dar kahan laga de hum kabse yaha tumha intzaar kar rahe the.

Ri:-woh actually main woh.......

Just then Armaan come and sit beside ridz.

Ar:-hi guys.

At:-lo abh bhi puchne ke zarurat hai.

All start to laugh and Ridz shy.

Niki stands and go from there.

Ar:-isse kya hua?

Ab:-Main dekhta hun?


Ridz:-Plz guys stop it.jab dekho shuru ho jate ho.

Armaan's pager rings.It was Dr.Kirti.

Ar:-Sorry guys but i have 2 leave.Gabbar ne bulaiya hai.yeh gabbar to lunch time main bhi picha nahi shodte.

All start to laugh.Armaan go from there.

In Dr. Kirti's cabin

Ar:-MAy i come in mam?

Ki:-Oh yeah Dr. Armaan come in.

Ar:-Woh mam app ne mujhe bulaya tha.

Ki:-Ha DR. Armaan woh actually baat yeh hai ke bahout dino se hospital se koi bhhi Lonavla orpanage nahi gaya so app ko AKALE waha jana hoga kyunki jaha sanjeevani main bahout kaam hai aur koi Dr. app ke saath nahi jaa sakta.Aur dusre baat orpanage ke bache app se or Dr. riddhima ke illava kise or se theek tarha se check up nahi karvate.
KI:-so ok Dr. armaan?

Ar:-(with a sad tone) yes Dr. Kirti.
KI:-Ok Dr. armaan u may go now,ajj raat se pehle app ko niklna hai.
Ar:-yes Dr. Kirti and go from there.

so wat will happen next?willl abhi-niki tell everything infornt os everyone.wat will armaan do now?
stay tuned 4 all the answers of the questions.

Pal-Pal ka wada hain aapse,

Apnapan kucch zayda hain aapse,

Naa sochna kabhii Bhool Jayenge apko,

Zindagii bhar satayenge Ye wada hain aapse.

That's 4 the day.sorry guys 4 the late update.
hope u'll like it.
love u all
Deepika Smile

Edited by karansharda_fan - 01 June 2009 at 10:39am

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 just read ur FF
gd job


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Posted: 01 June 2009 at 11:07am | IP Logged
thats so cute keep it up sweety Love AN ^^

Sweet baby


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waaaaaaaw it was amazing .. so cute .. i really  loved it Hug
Thank u ^_^

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