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Posted: 27 May 2009 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ArmaansGirl

Ahhh Chaiths! <3 That was sooo awsum swtheart! <3 I luved it...2 Gud Babez...I luv Mayu and Nupur...and the way he hugged her tighlt...That was soo Beautiful..Luv MayUr Soo much! <3 Also lyk the Freindship btween Sammi and Mayu..But its gonna tke a lil tym getting used 2 tehm calling each other "bestie"! :P Lolz.. LOL

Cnt w8 2 Read ur Nexx Update! :D <3
XOXO
SADI<3

aww thnqq soo much diya jaan 4 the reply ..Embarrassed..evn i cal one of my best fnd bestieEmbarrassed

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part 4
in music room
[nupur nd mayank tries to peek frm side window..nupur is standin in front nd mayank is holdin over her sholder ..]
[sammy is on his knees ..gunjan is shockedShocked

sammy :pata nahi tumne itna pyaar kaha chupake rakha tha ..?Embarrassed
meine tumhe itne dard pahuchaye ..aur tumne ek "uff "bhi nahi kaha..Ouch

gunjan :par samrat ...

sammy:mein jaan tha hu ki tum mujse pyar karti hai ..jab bhi mein sheena ke saath hota tha ..tumhe bura nahi lagtha.?

gunji:samrat:mein tumhare kushi mein khush hoon.

sammy:meri khushi tum ho !

gunji:samrat....

sammy:mein jab bhi tumhe dekhtha hu lagtha hai jaise saare gham bhool jaoo..

nupur:[thinks]mayank tum ho toh muje aur kuch nahi chahiye..

mayank:[thinks]nupur...tumhari boli aankhom ko dekho toh lagtha hai ..usme kho jaoo..

samrat [2 gunj]:tum mere jeene ki vajah ho ..

nupur:[thinks]jab bhi mein tumhare bahom mein aati hu ..lagtha hai jaise zindagi ki sari khushi meri kadmom mein hai

mayank:[thinks]tumhe na dekho toh din kharab ho jatha hai

samrat :haan !mein tumse pyar karta hu gunjan ...

nupur:[thinks]mujhe mayank se pyar ho chuka hai ..

samrat:agar mein tumhe abhi nahi bataya toh mein tumhe kho doonga..

[gunjan pulls samrat up nd hugs him]

[nups comes to senses ..nd she could feel mayanks hand on her sholders .she turns to face him.]

nupur:mayank,mein tumse kuch kehna chahthi hu.

mayu :nupur mujhe tumhari madath chahiye..[actually ithot this scene 4abi nikki ..bt nw am nt gettin ny othr way so am postinit 4 mayank nd nupur]

nupz:[a bit shocked]kisliye?

mayu:pehle chalo ..
nupz :kahan?

mayu:chalo toh sahi ..

[he holds her hand nd takes her to a near by clas room ]

nupz:baat kya hai?

mayu:abhi mujhe pata chala mein usse kitna pyar karta hu ..

[nupz bcomes all sad nd turns away]

mayu:madath karoge?

nupz:woh ...haan ..[tears runnin down her eyes..

mayu:i love u ..

[nupur turns in shock]

mayu:kya mein aise "usse "bolu toh woh mujse pyar karegi?

nupz:agar woh tumse sacha pyar karti hai toh usse tumhara ye "i luv u"h kaafi hoga ![she closes her eyes]

[mayu holds her hand frm back nd pulls her towards him]

[nupur was holdin on to mayu...she had her one hand in his hands ..nd othr hand tightly holdin to his unbutoned shirtEmbarrassed..mayu was holdin her by her waist ..]

mayu:i luv u nupur [he leavs her hand nd turns way smilin lyk a shy small boy]Embarrassed

nupz:mayank..

[mayu turns back all in smile...nd hugs her again ]

mayu:mein tumse pyar karta hu nupur

nupz:[she is sobbin ..nd shes nt able to speak ..aftr afew minutes ]mein bhi ...

[mayu ..kisses on her neck ]Embarrassed

gunjan:ahm ahm ...dii ..LOL

[mayu nd nupur seperate frm d hug..nd nupur makes her shawl right...as it had almost fallen down]

nupur:gun...gunjan tu..tum?Shocked

[samrat was havin one hand around gunji's waist]

mayu:woh kya hai na bestie..
sammy :hmmm batana ..kya hai ..?[laughin]

mayu:bestie..gunjan ko pakadkhe beita hai..aur mera taang keech rahe ho??
" bestie kaise bhi karke mere pyaar ko dosti main badaldo na plz...mein gunjan jaise dosth ko nahi kho saktha ..."[laughs]

nupz:ab tum dono baat karo ..
gunjan aana muje tumse kuch baat karni hai ...

gunjan:haan di chalo ...!par pehle mayank ka haath tho chodo LOL

[nupur leaves mayanks hand nd goes wit gunjan ].

precap 4 nxt episode:
mayank nd sammy hav a heartly talk ...[mayank is lying on sammy .]





Edited by daffodils.dudu - 04 June 2009 at 3:14am

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Posted: 28 May 2009 at 2:19am | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....tanu
it was sooo chweet yaar
i mean.........awesome re !!!
itna aacha update....muaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh
 
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Posted: 28 May 2009 at 2:28am | IP Logged
tannu dear....very nice script..n story is also gud...continue writtin.bt few corrections which i hav corrected js refer....Embarrassed
akir tumhari teacher hoon....correct karne ka hak bantha hai na...Wink.
 
sammy :pata nahi tum etne yar kahan chupake rakh li..?
I didn understand this...wat is it??
 
meine tumhe itne dard pahuchaya
its Phunchaye....!!
 
..jab bhi mein sheena ke saath hoti thi ..tumhe bura nahi lagthi..?

its hota tha....n lagtha....hez a boy sweetie

 khush hun

kush Hoon
mein jab bhi tumhe dekhthi hu lagtha hai jaise saare gham bhool jaoo..
dektha
]:tum mera jeene ki vajah ho ..
mere
mujhe mayank se pyar ho chuki hai
chuka
kaafi hogi
hoga
aur mera taank keech rahe ho??
taang
bestie kaise bhi mera pyar ko dosthi banado
it should be bestie kaise bhi karke mere pyaar ko dosti main badaldo na plz...
 
al d best dear....!!!
Daphne

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Posted: 28 May 2009 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruchimayur

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....tanu
it was sooo chweet yaar
i mean.........awesome re !!!
itna aacha update....muaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh
 
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aww thnqq ..soso muchh ...Embarrassed

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Posted: 28 May 2009 at 2:46am | IP Logged
aww thnqq daphz dii ..
aww thnqqq.......myaaoo*hug*

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Posted: 28 May 2009 at 2:51am | IP Logged
aww that waz such a sweet prt. Loved it. Do continue soon!!

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Posted: 28 May 2009 at 2:54am | IP Logged
hey chaiths....
congrats for ur try at FF....

good luck...

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