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Originally posted by ruchimayur

awwww...so sweet yaar

it was lovely..itna sweet update tha tanu

i was continuosly smiling reading it

awesoem job yaar...love u

aww thnq ruchi dii ...aww nw am blushin ..
luv ya too Embarrassed

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@ tanu i m not finding liitile mistakes this time just for u my jaana

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Originally posted by armaan_mine

@ tanu i m not finding liitile mistakes this time just for u my jaana

aww danku . LOL

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hey taniya this part is really sweet and loved this interrgoation between samrat and mayank and this time the sentences were much sweet and simple you are going great

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Originally posted by angel3142

hey taniya this part is really sweet and loved this interrgoation between samrat and mayank and this time the sentences were much sweet and simple you are going great

aww thnq dii ,....
i was tryin hard to simplify my sentences.... Tongue

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Posted: 26 May 2009 at 8:11am | IP Logged

hey tanu

mein ek acha dosth nahi hu ..aur mein koi ladki ko nahi sambal saktha hu

mein jaan puchkar nahi kiya tha

dont use hu and tha at end its already proper tense

and you have used karrongi and chuapungi for boys it should be chupaunga and karunga

Edited by angel3142 - 26 May 2009 at 8:17am

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Originally posted by angel3142

hey tanu

mein ek acha dosth nahi hu ..aur mein koi ladki ko nahi sambal saktha hu

mein jaan puchkar nahi kiya tha

dont use hu and tha at end its already proper tense

and you have used karrongi and chuapungi for boys it should be chupaunga and karunga

oopssry ..i typ it so fastly tht ..ladka ...things wer did unknowingly ..nd d othr thing i wil change

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Ahhh Chaiths! <3 That was sooo awsum swtheart! <3 I luved it...2 Gud Babez...I luv Mayu and Nupur...and the way he hugged her tighlt...That was soo Beautiful..Luv MayUr Soo much! <3 Also lyk the Freindship btween Sammi and Mayu..But its gonna tke a lil tym getting used 2 tehm calling each other "bestie"! :P Lolz.. LOL

Cnt w8 2 Read ur Nexx Update! :D <3

XOXO

SADI<3

Edited by ArmaansGirl - 27 May 2009 at 4:51pm

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