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Posted: 26 May 2009 at 6:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruchimayur

awwww...so sweet yaar
it was lovely..itna sweet update tha tanu
i was continuosly smiling reading it
awesoem job yaar...love u

aww thnq ruchi dii ...aww nw am blushin ..
luv ya tooEmbarrassed

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Posted: 26 May 2009 at 7:00am | IP Logged
@ tanu i m not finding liitile mistakes this time just for u my jaana

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Posted: 26 May 2009 at 7:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by armaan_mine

@ tanu i m not finding liitile mistakes this time just for u my jaana


aww danku .LOL..

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Posted: 26 May 2009 at 7:46am | IP Logged
hey taniya this part is really sweet and loved this interrgoation between samrat and mayank and this time the sentences were much sweet and simple you are going great

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Posted: 26 May 2009 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by angel3142

hey taniya this part is really sweet and loved this interrgoation between samrat and mayank and this time the sentences were much sweet and simple you are going great

aww thnq dii ,....
i was tryin hard to simplify my sentences....Tongue


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Posted: 26 May 2009 at 8:11am | IP Logged
hey tanu
 
mein ek acha dosth nahi hu ..aur mein koi ladki ko nahi sambal saktha hu
  
 mein jaan puchkar nahi kiya tha
 
dont use hu and tha at end  its already proper tense
and you have used karrongi and chuapungi for boys it should be chupaunga and karunga
 
 


Edited by angel3142 - 26 May 2009 at 8:17am

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Posted: 26 May 2009 at 8:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by angel3142

hey tanu
 
mein ek acha dosth nahi hu ..aur mein koi ladki ko nahi sambal saktha hu
 
 mein jaan puchkar nahi kiya tha
 
dont use hu and tha at end  its already proper tense
and you have used karrongi and chuapungi for boys it should be chupaunga and karunga
 
 

oopssry ..i typ it so fastly tht ..ladka ...things wer did unknowingly ..nd d othr thing i wil change

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Posted: 27 May 2009 at 4:47pm | IP Logged

Ahhh Chaiths! <3 That was sooo awsum swtheart! <3 I luved it...2 Gud Babez...I luv Mayu and Nupur...and the way he hugged her tighlt...That was soo Beautiful..Luv MayUr Soo much! <3 Also lyk the Freindship btween Sammi and Mayu..But its gonna tke a lil tym getting used 2 tehm calling each other "bestie"! :P Lolz.. LOL

Cnt w8 2 Read ur Nexx Update! :D <3
XOXO
SADI<3


Edited by ArmaansGirl - 27 May 2009 at 4:51pm

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