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~*mOrEnA xPpReS*~MN FF*part 7 updatd (Page 3)

BilliCat. Viewbie

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Posted: 25 May 2009 at 2:41am | IP Logged
part 2

mayu in library

mayu:[thinks]ab toh bestie ko uska pyar mil jayega....par pata nahi mein nupur ke baare mein eise kyu soch raha tha...
[thinks4 sum tym .nd himslef]uske pyaar bari bataom ki aadat pad gayi hogi..[smiles]
mein toh bhul hi gaya ..muje nupur ko canteen mein milna hai...woh mera intazaar kar rahi hogi...

in canteen
nupz:yeh mayank bhi na ...lekin nupur usse milne ke liye eti jaldi kyu hay tujje?ye kya ho raha hai muje..?

mayu:konsi soch mein doobi ho..nupur[coms nd sits near nupur]

nupz:kuch nahi ..bas tumhara intezaar kar rahi thi...

mayu:toh esliye ..tum cup mein chaay dalthe jaa rahi ho aur tumhe pata bhi nahi chal rahi hai ki tumhare kapde geele ho rahe hai..[pointin towars her lap]

[nupur shocked to see tht she was going on pouring tea to her cup tht it was overflowin on her dress nd floor]

nupz:ye mein kya kar rahi thiShocked

mayu:koi baath nahi mein help kar detha hu

[mayu takes som tissues and starts wiping tea from her lap]
[nupur is starin at last mayu finished wiping it ..and luks at her and he seee tht she is starin at her ...he feels awkward ...]

mayu:ehmm...nupur..ho gaya...

nupur:[stands up nd faces away to avoid eye contact]..mayank ..woh ..woh ..thnq..muje patahi nhai chala kab mere upar chay giri..she tries to take her bag frm the table ..suddenly she slips..]

mayu:nupur....Shocked[[he catches her ..he has his both hands on her hip ..holdin her ...nd hes starin at her..]

nupur:mayank ...[she luks back ..nd see ..she is in a slandin position ...nd at ny tym she can fall downShocked]..mayank mein gir jaongi... [mayu without sayin nythin holds her more close to him..nw nupur cud feel his heart beats ,,,,she also holds his tight if ..she nevr wants to let him go ...]Embarrassed

cantteen wala:arrey yeh kya ho raha hai?farsh sabhi geela ho gaya na..?yeh kisne chay giradii..?aur woh ladka kyun us ladki ko  pakadkey raka hay?

[tabi both of them cam eto sense..nd both of the wer embarrassed ..4 being this close infront of all people in canteen evryone's eyes wer nw on them ]

one boy in canteen:[shouts to canteen wala]arrey bhaiyya ..yeh aapne kya .karadia ..un donom ko alag kardia ..kitne der se ..chipke huve theLOLaur ek doosre ke aankhom mein khoye huve the....

mayu :[to break d silence btwn him nd nupur he hesitates nd says]..woh ..mein soch raha hu ki ham kahi aur jakar baat kare...

nupur:theek hai.

[they both go nd sit in the arts room all alone ..]
nups 7 mayu together:woh...[both smiles]
nups:tum bola,,,,

mayu ..:tum bolo..

nups:nahi pehle tum bolo..

mayu:teek hai!waise waise woh ek dusre ke saamne nahi bolenge ki woh ek dusre se kitna pyar kartha hai ...

nups:kon dono?[seein the confused luk in mayu's eyes]ooh samrat aur gunjan ...waise kisi ko bhi utni himmat nahi hogi..

mayu:kyu?tumhe kaisse pata?

nupz:pata nahi kyun ..par muje aise lag raha hay ..[thinks 4 sumtym nd says ..]mayank tumhe pyar hoga toh tum mujhe batage na?

mayu:[lookin into nupur's eyes]tumhe nahi bataonga toh kisse bataonga..?kyunki ...mein ....


mayu:[feeling awkward 4 wat he said]mein hamari dosthi ki kadar kartha hu...

nupz:haan toh teek hai ..ham gunjan aur samrat ke baare mein baat kar rahe the na??aur tum kya bol raha tha?....[thinks]..haan ....ek doosre se pyar..[she stops suddenly..shocked..]tho samrat bhi gunjan se pyar karta hai?

mayu:haan ..matlab ..nahi[thinkin of promise he gave to sammy tht he wont tell anyone abt his feelings]

nupz:ab chupao mat ...ab muje sab kuch pata chal gaya hai ...par tumne mujse ye kyun chupaya..?mein tumse har baat kehthi hu na/?mein barose layak nahi hu kya?[tears fillling her eyes]Cry

mayu:eisi baat nahi hai nupur..mein...

nupz:toh kaisi baat hai?[teras rolling down her cheeks]

mayu:nupur meri baat toh suno...[then he  see ..tht nupur is sobbin ..seein tht he cud feel his heart painin nd his eyes fillin wit tears nd he dint wish nupur c it he turned back nd]mein jaa rahi hu..[and he left]...

nupz:[to herself]eisa meri saath hi kyu hot hay ...hamesha ..muje hi sab log chodkar jate hayi.?

mayu :[thinks] while walkin bak]mein nupur ki aankhom mein aasoo nahi dekh saktha ...Cry

precap 4 next episode:
mayu hug sammy in tears...Cry
nd othr side ..nupur is cryin in arts room Cry..sammy enters d room ..Embarrassed

Edited by daffodils.dudu - 04 June 2009 at 3:09am

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angel3142 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 May 2009 at 3:44am | IP Logged
hey taniya its nice loved this interrogation
 loved the part where nupur asks him mayank tumhe kisise pyar hogayaWinkand mayanks reply was cute
i hope you wont mind me saying 
it would be nice if you simple sentence and use conversation type sentence like ending with kyun
samjeh bolo ok EmbarrassedTongue
  i would be waiting to see a nupurmayur fight scene i love it when they are angry and taunt each other specially nupurEmbarrassedEmbarrassedWink

Edited by angel3142 - 26 May 2009 at 8:30am
BilliCat. Viewbie

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Posted: 25 May 2009 at 4:04am | IP Logged
thnq dii 4 d response..Tongue.
u ned me to simple d sentences?i wil try frm next tym dii ..
nd fight scene ..yeah i wil ryt one especially 4 u .Embarrassed. bt nt 4 nest few episodes..bcos..i thot next few shud b romantic ...Tongue
aftr 2 episodes may b they wil reveal their luv 4 each othr .. :)
Daphz Goldie

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Posted: 25 May 2009 at 4:35am | IP Logged cute its nice....i agree wid angel3142.....tannu simplify ur sentences...!!!Thumbs Up n i wud luv 2 watch d romantic scenes of mayur n this epi there was no sajan so nxt epi i guess sajan wil b d best!!!Smile
26javey IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 May 2009 at 6:01am | IP Logged
really cute
i love when Nupur asks tumhe kisise pyar hogaya
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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BilliCat. Viewbie

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Posted: 25 May 2009 at 6:06am | IP Logged
u r welcum januSmile
.Supriya. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 May 2009 at 7:27am | IP Logged
lovely tanu jaan

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BilliCat. Viewbie

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Posted: 25 May 2009 at 7:31am | IP Logged
thnq 4 d help priyu jaan .. :)

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