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~*mOrEnA xPpReS*~MN FF*part 7 updatd (Page 2)

Daphz Goldie
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Posted: 24 May 2009 at 4:03am | IP Logged
awww...so cute tannu.....al d best 4 d future...!!!Thumbs Up

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thnqq daphz dii :)
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hey tanu di..its awesome......
Let-It-Go IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 24 May 2009 at 11:54am | IP Logged
awww...thanx a lot for starting one MN ff ..i was dying to read
it was awesoem yaar
plz pm me when u update nxt
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Tanu it's great
Love it
Cont soon
Can you pm me when you update
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Posted: 24 May 2009 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
Awwwwwwwwwwww !!

tanni partner
wow !!
u r a gud creative !!

adorable FF
rocking yaar !!
awesome
very nice sweet cute ...........

Keep writing LOL n rocking also Wink

Luv.........Angel...Noorin Star
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Posted: 24 May 2009 at 9:31pm | IP Logged
awwthnq 4 all d replies...
tears in my eyes.... :)..
i hv gt such a lot of frnds who support me n evrythin :)
thnq...
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Posted: 25 May 2009 at 2:41am | IP Logged
part 2

mayu in library

mayu:[thinks]ab toh bestie ko uska pyar mil jayega....par pata nahi mein nupur ke baare mein eise kyu soch raha tha...
[thinks4 sum tym .nd says..to himslef]uske pyaar bari bataom ki aadat pad gayi hogi..[smiles]
mein toh bhul hi gaya ..muje nupur ko canteen mein milna hai...woh mera intazaar kar rahi hogi...

in canteen
nupz:yeh mayank bhi na ...lekin nupur usse milne ke liye eti jaldi kyu hay tujje?ye kya ho raha hai muje..?

mayu:konsi soch mein doobi ho..nupur[coms nd sits near nupur]

nupz:kuch nahi ..bas tumhara intezaar kar rahi thi...

mayu:toh esliye ..tum cup mein chaay dalthe jaa rahi ho aur tumhe pata bhi nahi chal rahi hai ki tumhare kapde geele ho rahe hai..[pointin towars her lap]

[nupur shocked to see tht she was going on pouring tea to her cup tht it was overflowin on her dress nd floor]

nupz:ye mein kya kar rahi thiShocked

mayu:koi baath nahi mein help kar detha hu

[mayu takes som tissues and starts wiping tea from her lap]
[nupur is starin at mayu...at last mayu finished wiping it ..and luks at her and he seee tht she is starin at her ...he feels awkward ...]

mayu:ehmm...nupur..ho gaya...

nupur:[stands up nd faces away to avoid eye contact]..mayank ..woh ..woh ..thnq..muje patahi nhai chala kab mere upar chay giri..she tries to take her bag frm the table ..suddenly she slips..]

mayu:nupur....Shocked[[he catches her ..he has his both hands on her hip ..holdin her ...nd hes starin at her..]

nupur:mayank ...[she luks back ..nd see ..she is in a slandin position ...nd at ny tym she can fall downShocked]..mayank mein gir jaongi... [mayu without sayin nythin holds her more close to him..nw nupur cud feel his heart beats ,,,,she also holds his tight ..as if ..she nevr wants to let him go ...]Embarrassed

cantteen wala:arrey yeh kya ho raha hai?farsh sabhi geela ho gaya na..?yeh kisne chay giradii..?aur woh ladka kyun us ladki ko  pakadkey raka hay?

[tabi both of them cam eto sense..nd both of the wer embarrassed ..4 being this close infront of all people in canteen ...as evryone's eyes wer nw on them ]

one boy in canteen:[shouts to canteen wala]arrey bhaiyya ..yeh aapne kya .karadia ..un donom ko alag kardia ..kitne der se ..chipke huve theLOLaur ek doosre ke aankhom mein khoye huve the....

mayu :[to break d silence btwn him nd nupur he hesitates nd says]..woh ..mein soch raha hu ki ham kahi aur jakar baat kare...

nupur:theek hai.

[they both go nd sit in the arts room all alone ..]
nups 7 mayu together:woh...[both smiles]
nups:tum bola,,,,

mayu ..:tum bolo..

nups:nahi pehle tum bolo..

mayu:teek hai!waise waise woh ek dusre ke saamne nahi bolenge ki woh ek dusre se kitna pyar kartha hai ...

nups:kon dono?[seein the confused luk in mayu's eyes]ooh samrat aur gunjan ...waise kisi ko bhi utni himmat nahi hogi..

mayu:kyu?tumhe kaisse pata?

nupz:pata nahi kyun ..par muje aise lag raha hay ..[thinks 4 sumtym nd says ..]mayank tumhe pyar hoga toh tum mujhe batage na?

mayu:[lookin into nupur's eyes]tumhe nahi bataonga toh kisse bataonga..?kyunki ...mein ....

nupz:mein?

mayu:[feeling awkward 4 wat he said]mein hamari dosthi ki kadar kartha hu...

nupz:haan toh teek hai ..ham gunjan aur samrat ke baare mein baat kar rahe the na??aur tum kya bol raha tha?....[thinks]..haan ....ek doosre se pyar..[she stops suddenly..shocked..]tho samrat bhi gunjan se pyar karta hai?

mayu:haan ..matlab ..nahi[thinkin of promise he gave to sammy tht he wont tell anyone abt his feelings]

nupz:ab chupao mat ...ab muje sab kuch pata chal gaya hai ...par tumne mujse ye kyun chupaya..?mein tumse har baat kehthi hu na/?mein barose layak nahi hu kya?[tears fillling her eyes]Cry

mayu:eisi baat nahi hai nupur..mein...

nupz:toh kaisi baat hai?[teras rolling down her cheeks]

mayu:nupur meri baat toh suno...[then he  see ..tht nupur is sobbin ..seein tht he cud feel his heart painin nd his eyes fillin wit tears nd he dint wish nupur c it ..so he turned back nd]mein jaa rahi hu..[and he left]...

nupz:[to herself]eisa meri saath hi kyu hot hay ...hamesha ..muje hi sab log chodkar jate hayi.?

mayu :[thinks] while walkin bak]mein nupur ki aankhom mein aasoo nahi dekh saktha ...Cry

precap 4 next episode:
mayu hug sammy in tears...Cry
nd othr side ..nupur is cryin in arts room Cry..sammy enters d room ..Embarrassed





Edited by daffodils.dudu - 04 June 2009 at 3:09am

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