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Hey guys here is my first VM on mayur on page 8Embarrassedits nt gud ..bt stil do watch nd commentTongue


part one-page 1
part2-page 3
part three-page 4
part 4-page7
VM -page 8[mayur]
part five-page 10
VM-page 10[sayank]
part 6-page 13
part 7 -page 16









Edited by daffodils.dudu - 08 July 2009 at 6:05am

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Posted: 23 May 2009 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
Guys am goin to star my narration ....Tonguefirst tym so a bit tensed
readers pls bear wit my hindi .....LOL
u can comment ..i mean u can surely criticize ..Big smile
u can tell me if u want me to pm u wenvr i update ...
it wont b a gr8 one stil i wil try to improve
nd thnxs to all who r readin my posts...Tongue


credits:
[they correct all my mistakes i made in hindiEmbarrassed]
majnu[nisha dii]
priyu jaan[supriya]
daphz dii
sush dii
bestie Embarrassed



pm list:
RUCHI DII
JANU
NOOR JAAN
DIANA DII
LUPU DII
BESTIE
YASHIKA
XXXXLOL
DAPHZ DII
RUKY DII
JESSICA DII
PRIYU JAAN
SUSH DII



heres a siggy frm ma side[its my first siggy evr]do comment on tht too,giv me tips & critisize






Edited by daffodils.dudu - 27 June 2009 at 11:09pm

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Posted: 23 May 2009 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
character sketch:


hes d dashin dude of exel college,his best frnd is sammy ..sammy cals mayu "bestie"nd vice versa too..in gals the nly one he loves being wit is nupur ...
                                      


shes cute,simple nd gorgeous.. gunjan is her nly sister nd best frnd othr thn mayu[ya our mayu]
                              

samrat[sammy] aur gunjan[gunji][ps :can sumone create a banner in name "samrat aur gunjan" ...if yes pls PM me..]:both r in luv wit each othr ..bt unfortunately feels tht their partner luv sumone else...Confusedsammy hv told mayu abt his feelings[aftr all hes his bestie]more over he has askd mayu to hep him accept gunjan as his best frnd ..nly nothin more ...coz he feels gunjan wil nvr b able to luv a boy lik himwil evr our mayu allow his frds luv to fail evn b4r it start..?no he wont ..Embarrassed
                        


Edited by daffodils.dudu - 29 May 2009 at 8:46am

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[aftr so much of thinkin mayu thot of askin nupur abt gunjan's feelings ....]
[as usual nupur entered the college as late as evryday]


nupz[to herself]:pata nahi ye gunjan kaise har din itni jaldi uththi hay aur colege mein bhi jaldi pahunch jaathi hay ..pata nahi ye ladki kab sothi hay by god mujhe toh lagtha hay ki colege dopahar mein suru honi chahiye .lekin mein mein subah mayank ko miss.

mayu:nupur....[callls her frm back]

nupz:kon jay ...?[recoverin frm her self speech ..she turns back]..oh mayank tum..?

mayu:haan men ..!tum apne aap se kya baat kar rahi thi?aur mere bare meinkya bol rahi thi?

nupz:woh mein ..woh mein

mayu:kya mein mein ,,,bol rahi ho?bakri ban gayi ho kya?aage bhi bolna...!

nupz:woh mein ...yeh bol rehi thi ki tumhe miss tamanna bula rahi hay

mayu:toh mein chaltha hu baad mein milthey hein ...

nupz::nahi nahi ..mera  matlab hain ...tum abhi mat jao...tum tabi jana ..jab woh bulayengi...teek hay?

mayu:kya?tumhari tabyath toh teek hay ?[touches her forehead..nupur bcomes all dreamy]yeh subah subah kya bakwaas kar rahi ho?

nupz:woh..

mayu:chal chod ..mein tumse kuch baat karne aaya tha..gunjan ke baare mein ...

nupz:gunjna ke baare mein[shocked Shocked..nd wakin frm her dreamy worldLOL]

mayu:woh ..kuch khaaz nahi ..par aajkal gunjan kuch khoyi khoyi huvi si lagthi hayna?

nupz:woh...woh mein tumhe pehle se bata dena chahthi thi par bata nahi payi...
sunjan ko kisi se pyar hua hay...

mayu :kisse?"bestie" se?

nupz:haan samrat se..par tumhe kaise pata chala ?

mayu:saara din toh usi ke saath waqt bitathi hay na/.
ab hamme..hi kuch karna padega..un donnom ko milane keliye..!

[nupz kept a supportin hand on mayu's shoulders...mayu turned..both wer starin into each othrs eyes]

mayu: hamme kon milayega?

nupz:kya?
mayu:mera matlab hay gunjan yahi bolthi hogi na?

nupz[in mind]:kash ki tum ye mujse kaha hota..

mayu[in mind]:kehne keliye mera dil bettaab hay par jab bhi kehne ki koshish karu ..dil mein ajeeb sa dar aata hay..

nupz:na jaane tum kisse darthi ho ...
na jaane mujhe kyu lagtha hay ki mein tumhare liye bani hu ..aue tum mere liye...
Embarrassed

[both came to senses ..wen they heard  sum  sound]

nupz[in mind]yeh mein kya soch rahi thi..?
mayank mera dosth hay...
mein hamari dosthi tootne nahi de  sakthi..,,

mayu[inmind]kya hogaya hay muje..?

nupz:toh tum kya bol rahi thi..kher chodo...ham un donom ko ek kar denge Embarrassed

mayu:theek hai nupur..abhi mein library jaa rahi hu...uske bad mein tumhe canteen pe miloongi...

nupz:theek hai..

in next written episode:mayu is holding nupur .....both of his arms on her hipEmbarrassed


Edited by daffodils.dudu - 25 May 2009 at 1:13am

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tannuu its awesome but theek hai hota hai not teek hay but otherwise lovely

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thnq priyu jaan 4 d help ...thnq soo much ...agli baar jab mein post karoongi tab bhi meri madath karna :)
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hey nice one. hmmm all 4 in luv with each other!!! interesting so update next part soon.
all the best
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Originally posted by dazzlingstar

hey nice one. hmmm all 4 in luv with each other!!! interesting so update next part soon.
all the best

hey thnq so much yaar ...u gv me a lot of confidence in just one sentence .. :)Embarrassed
i wil update sooon .. :)

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