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gr8 part plz cont soon.

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great parts amna Clap Clap plz cont soon




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continue soon i like ur story really different Smile




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that was fabbbbbbbbbbb
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Angad again get busy into his work. A knock is on o the door.
A: please come in

Kripa come in with a bundles f files which she even can't handle.Naina see this and gets in hurry up. She help kripa angad was about to but naina helped kripa.

N: arey yeh kya hai beta ……….she keep files at angad's table who is still confused about kripa wt so many files.

Kripa: wo actually aunty sir nay kaha k important files bhejta hoon taki tum presentation bana sako ….but jab ye nahi aye to main khud hi ye sab files ley aai ye sooch ker k files to sari important hoti hein …..isliya!

Naina: good thinking …..hmmm tum kripa ho na ….surya ban bhi sahaib ki beti

Kripa: ji

Angad: lagta nahi hai na mom ….kripa app ko bachelors ki degree kis nay di hai …app ka graduation clear kesey ho gya ……I mean u ….GOD …..tum ko sikatey sikatey main khud bhool jaonga …..

Kripa: but sir main ney kya kia

Angad: kripa u just leave main app say baad main baat kerta hoon

Kripa has now teary eyes …she is about to cry …..

Angad: ab please rona maat …acha sorry ….tum chalo main aaker tum ko samjata hoon kya kerna hai

Kripa: app ksesy boss ho bhai nay to kaha tha k acheyho aur app pheley hi din apney employee ko daant rahey ho ………she makes cute face

Angad cant stop smiling when he looks at her cute face. Naina was again confused by angad's behaviour ….but she is happy for this . thenshe look at kripa realize the fact that kripa is on who can make any one smile …..even he or she is like tough stone.

Naina: angad main chalti hoon tum kripa ko acey say guide kero …after all tumharey uncle ki betihai or kripa betey main ajj tumharey ghar aaon gi apni mamma ko bol dena
Kripa: ji aunty sure.

Naina leaves……kripa and angad left.

Kripa: sir main bhi jaon
Angad who is busy wt his laptop ….

Angad: haan ……kya nahi nahi abhi nahi ..abhi ruko …ik min.

Kripa: ji sir

Angad: tum ko sikhaney ki ik achi opportunity hai ….ik project hai …hum loo tumharey dad yani merey uncle k sath mil ker ik product launch kerney waley hein to ….to ye ik faida hai tumharey liya time hai k tum kuch ssek lo!

Kripa: ji sir.

Angad: ok fine

Kripa: sir ik baat kahoon …… bhoot achey ho ….itney strict nahi ho jitney dektey ho ………

Angad smiles ….at her.

Angad: thanks

Kripa: sir mujh say doosti kerengey!

Angad is like what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




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wow, conitnue soon. please
i like Kripa's character. Smile


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i think u guys don like my partz so tell me shall i continue it or quit it here????????????????? Cry Cry

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