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Posted: 27 October 2005 at 10:42am | IP Logged
nice con soon
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Posted: 27 October 2005 at 10:50am | IP Logged
ok karipa i m not gonna make u wait more so here is next part!

Part 2:

naina try to calm down angad who is crying like a baby. Dilip come in his room become sad when he see his only son crying in such a manner.

Angad is only son of dilip and naina . he lives in mumbai.dilip is industrialist and a business tycon. Angad had complete his MBA a year before. he got married with mishty but destiny is not always good as u want , so mishty died after only three days of their marriage. angad broked after her death. it seems as live stops for him , days passed a year have gone now but angad is at same position a difference was now he is very good business man, a person who was fun loving a year before now sees like mature person. he is only of 25 but reacts like a person of 40 years. no fun remain in angads life.

now a camera is taken to an other end of mumbai.(sorry i don know places) a beautiful house is shown ....then we see it focused on a woman ...doing some thing in kitchen...then some one come and hugs her from behind.

woman: kripa mujey pata hai ye tu hai

kripa: mamma u r very smart

woman: yes

kripa: ya off course after all mamma kis ki ho

a guy come over there .....

guy: meri

woman: shut up both of u ...tum dono ko lagta hai main smart hoon kyun k tumhari maa hoon

another elder age person come over there ...

person: sahi to keh rahey hein bachy gayatry.

woman: surya app nay hi in dono ko bigara hai ....yeh JOSH .......or ...KRIPA.... itney barey ho ker bhi bachey baney howey hein.

Suryaban is also idustrialist but was settled in dubai , a month back he shifted in india. Josh is elder son helping his father in business and kripa is younger one had complete Bachelours of business communication a month before, now she is trying to convince his father nad brother to let her practice before masters. but they want her to do [practice in another firm. Kripa is fun loving girl ,the main thing about her that SHE ALWAYS MAKE MISTAKES IN HER WORK. surya is dilip's friends , but after coming india naina , gayatry , dilip, surya josh and angad met several time but kripa never got chance.

kripa at dinning table....

kripa: papa

s: kya beta bolo

j: papa wo h boley gi jo ik haftey say bol rahi hai

s: or humara jawab bhi wo hi hoga jo pechley ik week say tum ko mil raha hai.

k: but main kiya karoon papa

s: mera pass ik idea hai ager tum chao to ...dilip k pass kaam kersakti ho kyun k abhi kal hi wo bataraha tha k angad ki assistant job chor chuki hai or usey is waqt ik assistant ki sakt zaroorat hai

j: wow papa is say achi baat kya hogi.

k: papa lakin main ney suna hai k wo bhoot strict hai

j: tumharey liya acha kripa tumhari internship achey say ho jaye gi ....dubai mey rah nahi paye to complete nahi ho saki ab acha boss miley ga to definately achi ho gi dear!

k: hmmmmmmmmmmmmm

gayatry interupts

g: chaliya ab to beti ka problem solve ho gya na ...to breakfast kerya ....

every one now busy in break fast. surya ban make call to dilip.

surya and dilip on phone

s; dilip kesa hai yaar

d:thik hoon tum sunao

s: maina bilkul theek thak

d: or suna kesey phone kiya

s: wo tu nay kaha tha k angad ko ik...

d: haan haan ...kyun

s: kripa ko practice kerni hai to main nay soocha k ...

d: arey to is may ijazaat leney ki kya baat hai bas tu kal bhej deta kripa beti ko main bata deta angad ko acha chalo theek hai us ko kal subha 9:00 bajey office bhej dena.

s: theek hai.

d: or suna

s: baqi sab theek hai main rakhta hoon phone abhi deer ho ri hai office k liya

d: chalo theek hai

s:bye

d: bye.

dilip who is also at dinning table along wt his small family inform angad:

d: angad

a: ji dad

d: beta wo surya uncle ki beti hai na kripa, wo tum ko kal as a assistant join kerey gi!]

a: kripa! ok dad.

d: beta abhi age ki kafi choti hai to ....

a: main samhaal loongaa dad u dont worry.

angad take his coat and leave the table ...feeling relief that now his burden of work is decrease. Not knowing what TUFAAN is coming from ommorow in his life ....which will make him forget about mishty ....first time in his life!

ok friends this is for the day...will continue tommorow!
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Posted: 27 October 2005 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
o mi gosh des fan fic seemz soooooooooooo great Clap
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Posted: 27 October 2005 at 6:07pm | IP Logged
conntinue soon!!@!
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Posted: 27 October 2005 at 6:31pm | IP Logged
continue fasttttttttttttttttttttt, please. I love the story.
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Posted: 27 October 2005 at 6:42pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 27 October 2005 at 6:56pm | IP Logged
that was fabulousssssss
plz contttttt sooon LOL
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Posted: 28 October 2005 at 12:44am | IP Logged
thanks friends i will continue in half an hour!

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