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Posted: 14 years ago

Daya - hello! Shruti!!!

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sorryπŸ˜†

Edited by Panchi-fanRamya - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
why sorry... Daya was supposed to say Hello???


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Shruti - "DAYA... kahan ho tum?? Aur Abhijeet kahan hai?"

Shruti was so excited that she actually shouted Daya's name and ACP came out to listen... and so Shruti gave him the phone...


ACP - "Daya... tum aur Abhijeet ho kahan ?"

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Posted: 14 years ago

nai nai. actually first i typed "hello! Shruti" i didnt type that Daya's sayin that πŸ˜›

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Daya - uhm sir woo...wo..wo kya hai k...umm sir wo actually...

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arre kya boluun?

Posted: 14 years ago

Ramya and Ika, I had to add a little dialogue of Daya and Abhijit, I hope you both wouldn't mind 😳😳

Daya hurriedly transfered the cell to Abhi so that he could
continue the conversation while Richa told him to be seated
Abhijit went into the attached balcony to continue the
conversation while Daya sat in the couch. Richa still was
clasping Daya's two palms within her tightly.
Now she became a little embarrassed and left his palms and
herself took sit.
Daya didn't ask her anything , only waiting for Richa with
eager eyes.
Richa started telling with a slight tremor in her
voice---Dayaa...pichhle ek hafta se....mujhe koyi....pichha kar
raha hai..her face pervaded with fright.
she continued--mmain pehle ...utna importance nehi diya..aisa
laga ki..hoga koyi....lafanga..mmagar...
Daya frowned and asked--magar?..kya huya?
Richa: pichhle do din se.....mujhe lag raha hai..ki koyi...der
raat me....ake..meri...
she was panting in scare...
Richa: ake...meri......she came closer of Daya now..,her face
had been distorted,
Daya kept his palm over Richa's tangled hair and asked--pher?
Richa: ake meri..khirkiya...bahar se ..kholne ki koshish kar
rahe hai..
Daya frowned and lost into deep thought but soon looked upon
Richa to hear her frightened voice---Dayaa..woh log mujhe...mar
dalega....mar dalega Dayaaaa...
Daya:
kaun log?
Richa: pata nehi Dayaa..magar ....bees din pehle....mere ek
collegue ke sath bhi....aisa hi huya hai Dayaa..
Daya was surprised and gaped at Richa
Richa: woh bhi...mere hi tarha....University me....Criminology
parati thi.aur Dayaa..woh bhi mujhe kaha tha....ki....ki...uska
koyi pichha kar rahe the....
Daya bit his lips to concentrate but Richa now stared weeping
--jis din se koyi mera pichha kar rahe hai..usi din se...mujhe
ais ahi darr lag raha hai..magar..main...apne aapko....bohot
samhalne ki koshish kiya,par aab main aur samhal nehi pa rahi
hun Dayaaaa...
Daya kept staring at Richa's teaful eyes, and once patted her
hair to give her a little warmth and sense of security.
Meanwhile Abhijit finsihed talking with ACP sir..and entered
into the room to say--bureau jana parega Daaya,ACP sir is
calling.
Daya was confused and in dilemma,
Richa tightly clasped Daya's hand and nearly implored--mmujhe
bohot darr lag raha hai Dayaa..she slowly reclined her head
upon Daya's hand.
Daaya was embarrassed, once looked at Abhi with
bashfulness,Abhi chuckled lightly and then quickly changed his
mood to say---Daya, mujhe lagta hai Richa ko is waqt Shruti ke
pas rehna chaiye, waha pe woh ....he blushed a little
Daya sighed and jerked Richa'a hand
richa looked at him , daya gave her a rougish smile and then
said--chalo, hamare sath.
 
Posted: 14 years ago

haaayyy😳how sweet. ☺️ ok so umm Suchi Di n Ikra Dii i m sorry but I m addin some of ur dialouges. sorry!😳

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Richa - magar Daya (crying still. i will tell u wen she'll stop ok? πŸ˜† ) Dayaa hum kahaan ja rahe hain?

Daya - Richa mujhpe bharosa rakho aur chalo mere saath...😊

Richa gets a bit kool n stops cryin n they go to the car. n as Richa is still scared Daya asks her to sit in d bak seat n then comes to the drivin seat.

Abhi - Daya Richa bohot dari hui hai. tumhe ab uske saath rehena parega. main baithta tha lekiinn...he bcumsπŸ€” as daya stares him a😲 luk...mera matlab hai k wo Richa mujhpe nai balki tumpe zyaada bharosa karti hai. tum to collage se saath ho no uske...poori baat to suna karo yaar. pehele hi gussa ho gayye?πŸ˜› main drive karta hun tum jaao uske paa..a i mean uske saath baith.o.

now Abhi is drivin n Daya is sittin in d bak seat with Richa!😳 Richa is a bit shy while shez tensed also πŸ˜› bcoz as u no she felt like that with Daya since collage 😳then they reach the bureau...


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agar kuch zyaada hua to SORRY😳

Edited by Panchi-fanRamya - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
nahi... its perfectly k...
I got the best Daya - Richa possible... = good part

sad part = Abhi is so busy.. ab Shruti ka kya hoga :P :P

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At the bureau... ACP talks to Abhi... Abhi tells ACP that Daya's frnd called and there is something fishy so they were there... ACP asks them to be at the bureau very soon... then he puts down the phone...

ACP doesnt say anything bt returns the phone and goes back to his cabin...

....
Everyone is waiting.. and then Daya and Abhijeet walk in with a girl... The girl is scared.. no one knows her.. she is new to everyone and so a little afraid to come in too...

ACP comes out of his room and stares at his two officers asking for an explaination....

Daya leaves Richa a little behind and walks ahead to stand in front of ACP... Abhi signals Shruti to be with Richa...
while passing Abhi..

Shruti - "Kahan the?"

bt Abhi too was in a hurry to go to ACP for else ACP ka gussa...

Shruti gives Richa water and then asks her to sit.. and ACP awaits an explaination from Daya and Abhi...

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Oh I love being the ACP... all I gotta do is raise an eyebrow and everyone starts working :D :D
Posted: 14 years ago
Daya - sir woo .... sir m sorry main aapko bin bataaye chala gayya n Abhi ko b saath le gayya n aapko inform b nai kiya kya tha k wo Richa (he is talkin in a single breath n ghabraahat k maare he call Abhi as Abhi n not AbhiJEET like he calls outside the bureau so ACP cuts in middle n then Abhi pls defend Daya)πŸ˜†
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by Panchi-fanRamya


Daya - sir woo .... sir m sorry main aapko bin bataaye chala gayya n Abhi ko b saath le gayya n aapko inform b nai kiya kya tha k wo Richa (he is talkin in a single breath n ghabraahat k maare he call Abhi as Abhi n not AbhiJEET like he calls outside the bureau so ACP cuts in middle n then Abhi pls defend Daya)πŸ˜†

sorry anay mein late hogayi... and guys one more thing... from my side in whichever scene you need to add Abhijeet's dialogues in middle do write it, I have no objections what so ever. 😊

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Abhi: Sir woh, daya ka matlab hai ke emebergency thi es liye hum dono bina ....bataye...
He couldn't say more and ACP was eyeing him...πŸ˜†
Abhi: Sir, next time aisa nahi hoga, we are sorry.
Both look down at thier feeet like 2 students are being punished while ACP was looking at them angrily, but then smiled and said ok.
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Who's next?

Posted: 14 years ago
Ofcourse ACP... yo dude.. I love being ACP... I get u all so scared :P :P :P :P


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ACP - "theek hai theek hai..."

ACP looks at them...

ACP - "Abhijeet wohh nisha murder case ki file?"

Abhi nodds and leaves to get it.. Daya leaves too.. bt

ACP - "Daya..."

Daya stops and looks back at Daya...

ACP then eyes Richa and then Daya... and then very quietly...

ACP - "ye ladki kaun hai?"

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Posted: 14 years ago

oh yes u do scare all of us.

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Daya - Sir. wo ... wo R..Richa ... Richaa h.hai. m m meri ccol lagg e ki d dost s sir

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ACP sir maaf kar dijiye n aap b zaraa mood mein aa jaaiye n kuch shaitaani kariye naa πŸ˜†

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