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Posted: 01 September 2009 at 4:19am | IP Logged
okies... and I will take ACP?? theek hai??
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of course, U be the bossy ACPSmile
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Posted: 01 September 2009 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Okie guys.. lets start the story.. I will play ACP and Shruti (Abhi's wife)...
Richa is the girl whom Daya will fall in for...

IMPORTANT : ACP's character is FREE... I am doing it just so that play doesnt stop... I will play all characters which go empty or any of u can take 2 of them...

So well.. the story will be simple -

--> Richa is Daya's college frnd.. who ends up in trouble... there is a murder at her workplace.. she works as the manager at a Hotel.. now her 2 room - maters and co - managers are also in trouble.. one of them is dead and the other is on a run or dead (whatever u like)
Well.. so Richa calls for Daya.. and then whole of CID team disguises and stays at the Hotel to find out... the story will go more abt Abhi and Shruti in the beginning.. and then it so happens that Richa is also attacked and so Daya takes her along and is on run..
when later at a big party at the Hotel...

the mystery is solved that... the dude was one of the manager's bf.. he did the murder and his gf got scared.. so he killed her.. he thought that she must have told her frnds and so he was after their life... and he gets caught and all but Richa is hurt...

In the very end..
Daya is very upset for Richa is in the hospital.. and so Shruti and Abhi talk to him.. Abhi being the best friend knows that Daya likes Richa and Shruti has known Richa for sometime and knows that Richa wont mind it either... So they all talk to Daya and then to Richa... to Richa.. ACP talks that he want her to marry his son...

I want to write this scene... -----------------------------------------------------
LAST SCENE
Abhi and Shruti tell ACP about Daya liking Richa.. Daya stands at a corner with Freddie... and is looking down...

ACP - "Nahi nahi nahi... ye mujhse nahi hoga."
Abhi - "par sir.. Daya ke liye hum hi toh hain..."
ACP - "arre par.."
Shruti - "sir.. please."
Abhi - "please"

please.. please.. please...

ACP - "acha theek hai.."

then ACP is taken to Richa.. she is at Abhi's home sitting.. (Richa has her parents far away).. her parents are coming today and then she is going with them to her home for sometime..

ACP - "ab kaisi ho beta?"
Richa - "sir bas theek hoon."
ACP - "ghar jaane ke liye tyaar?"
Richa - "ji sir.."
ACP - "kab aa rahe hain tumhare mummy papa?"

Before Richa could answer.. SHruti comes with juice...

Shruti - "sir aapko Richa se kuch kehna tha na?"

saying so Shruti signals ACP to talk.. ACP is kind of nervous.. and then Shruti leaves..

Richa - "kahiye na sir.."
ACP - "Richa woh main soch raha tha.. woh .."
Richa - "ji"
ACP - "Richa tumhare liye main kisi ko soch raha tha.. matlab shaadi ke liye..."

Richa gets serious all of a sudden..

Richa - "kaun sir?"
ACP - "mera ladka hai.. mil lo.. phir bata dena.."
Richa - "par sir main toh aaj jaa rahi hoon.."
ACP - "nahi woh yahin hai.."

and ACP was looking for Shruti to call her but she was already there...
She took Richa to her bedroom... Richa entered in and then looked shocked.. and turned to Shruti..

Richa - "ye toh Abhijeet hain.."

Shruti looked taken aback too.. she went in and pulled Abhijeet out..

Shruti - "aap andar kya kar rahe ho?"
Abhi - "wo main.."
Shruti - "aapko shaadi karni hai?"
Abhi - "nahi - nahi... galti ek hi baar kafi hai.."

Shruti looks at him.. and then sees Richa..

Richa looks inside again... Daya was standing there...

Daya - "arre Richa tum..."

and Richa smiles...

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cut to after Daya and Richa's marriage...
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Okie well.. this is just outline.. all characters are free to add any detail they feel like... they write their own dialoges and expressions.. so lets get started.. Suchi its ur dialoge first..

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Posted: 01 September 2009 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Shockedmyyyyyyyyyy gaaaawwwwwwwd shrutiiiiiiiiiii, its tooooooooooo goodTongue
now I am being nervousOuch
 
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Posted: 02 September 2009 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Hey Shruti, wow this is FAB!! Approve
Amazing job. Clap

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Posted: 02 September 2009 at 9:05am | IP Logged
netime...

now can we start??

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