Posted: 14 years ago
lovely poem Debo dear.. I dint get bored.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

liked da fourth para most ๐Ÿ˜‰
Posted: 14 years ago
Oh My Roza
sop Talented u are..........lovely.....

I have no words at all to express how the poem touched me.........how cute...๐Ÿ‘

this is my fav

Thus love gives to each
The shit that we deserve,
There no tragedy in blood
And blood is sweet , to love....

Posted: 14 years ago
thanks a lotta  steffu 4 liking it๐Ÿค— btw  i m not talented ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by nisha80


lovely poem Debo dear.. I dint get bored.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

liked da fourth para most ๐Ÿ˜‰
Thank God my chandrazz like it thanku yaar...๐Ÿค—
Posted: 14 years ago
@skeptical-thanks a lot dear gr8 lines๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Posted: 14 years ago

this is was so well written๐Ÿ‘ very nice how you described love๐Ÿ˜ณ 

and yay DMG forum coming to the writers corner๐Ÿคฃ this place will be very active now๐Ÿ˜†
 
looking forward to more of your poems๐Ÿ˜‰
Posted: 14 years ago
@*Nishi*- thanks dear i ll try to write some more poems !!! hoping so all dmgian(KaShian) will join it soon  ๐Ÿ˜†
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by mysticwater24


Debo.......wonderful poem ๐Ÿค—......i can never write poems ๐Ÿ˜’

These are my fav lines from the poem ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


love toments itself..
This is love
Devious and divine
Such seditious love ,

Love is the hunter and the hunted
Love is the victim od its own crime
Dreamer and deceiver visionary
And eviel-eyed love fulfils


hey...same here lol..
Posted: 14 years ago
@ .x.Shilky.x.- thanks sorry donno u r name
Posted: 14 years ago
Hey i m back with my new poem (this time its short try to write long next time)
TEARS

It matters not how much
you weep or sigh,

the art of tears, lies
In the reason why.

And my eyes
are wellspring of reasons
for my sinful tears.

my tears betray
fates and tears , for every
season of heart,

Tears of joy ,and
every hardbound hurt ,
every lost love's
lingering pain,

these tears, i shed
like acid rain.

And love
is the toxic waste
of my distasteful
tears.



Hows it plzz do comment/criticize.๐Ÿ˜Š


Edited by lupin_roza - 14 years ago

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