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ff main hoon naa PART 14 PG 36 * PMS LATER* (Page 32)

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NEXT PART  :  mayank riddhima  encounter

                     and a shocking revelation...............
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NICE PART....
PERFECT SONG....
NICE UPDT
CNT SOON
TAKE UR TIME
SEE YAA
LOVE UU
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heyy
short and sweet part.
continue soon.
thnx for the pm.
 
luv
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wow! tht was lovely...too good...continue soon!....
nice plot line by the way...very interestingClapClapClap
Clapplzzz plzzz add me to the PM list when u update...thank you!Smile
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Posted: 11 June 2009 at 6:45am | IP Logged
lekha....were is my pm re ???
i almost missed this part
nupur ko kya hua???...mayank-very bad
 
awesome one !!
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Posted: 11 June 2009 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruchimayur

lekha....were is my pm re ???
i almost missed this part
nupur ko kya hua???...mayank-very bad
 
awesome one !!
 
 
 
 
Originally posted by _Monu_

NICE PART....
PERFECT SONG....
NICE UPDT
CNT SOON
TAKE UR TIME
SEE YAA
LOVE UU
 
 
Originally posted by komal793

heyy
short and sweet part.
continue soon.
thnx for the pm.
 
luv
     Komal.  
 
 
 
  thanks a ton  for commenting.....;.
 
 
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PART 12

 Mayank gaadi aise chala raha hai jaise k there is no tomorrow and he  drives and reaches the emergency  ward  of sanjeevani hospital 

 Mayank (patting Nupur's cheek) ? pls pls pls getup nupur  main mar jaaunga  tumhare  bina?..( Last bit says it very softly)

 

Riddhima ? please let me  check  her Maya?..  wait  a minute  r u d same Mayank who always used  to beat me in tennis  in college???

Mayank ? Ms Riddhima Gupta rite if m not mistaken?? Medical final year topper in 1997

Riddhima - that Ms is Dr .Now, If you let me   check Nupur   shall I ??..

Mayank ? ok sorry let me step outside  

After 2 hours  

Riddhima ? ok guys there is nothing serious but she has a severe case of hypoglycemia she is very weak at the moment but if this persists we can't help you ab aap use mil sakte hai

 Mayank ? nupur sorry jaan mai ghalat tha hai Na?? Please open your eyes

Nupur - mmaaayyyyaaannkkk (rather weakly) tum theek hhoo??

Mayank- shhh main hoon naa yehan fikar mat karo accha ab kuch kha lo

Nupur ? nahi  bhook nahi hai ?..

 

The Bitter Revelation

 Somehow Gunjan, Sammy &mom get 2 know mayank's truth

 Sammy enters angrily into the ward and takes mayank out of the ward

  Sammy ? kyun jhoot bola tune??

Mayank -  kya ???  kuch Samajh main nahi aa rahi  Sammy

Sammy ? mat bol Mujhe Sammy   you don't deserve to call me that

Gunjan -  Tum ne mujhse bhi   jhoot kaha  ????.  Chale jao yehan se 

 Mom ? kya bigaada  tha hum ne jo ki tum hum sab ko alagh karne chale aayee q nahi jaate apne baap k pass

 Mayank- vohi toh nahi kar sakta maa q k q k papa??.

Mom ? bolo jaldi

Mayank - papa ki hatya hui thi 2008 mein aur mai kuch nahi kar paaya

Mom- ?????? long silence ????????

Sammy- kkkyyyaa kkeehhrraheee (breaks down) Maine zindagi main kabhi papa ko nahi dekha

Mayank ? he wanted both his sons to always be together

Sammy ? bhai I am  sorry  aap k saath kitna  badtameezi se pesh  aaya hoon

Mom ? maa ko maaf nahi karega beta

Gunjan -  sorry mayank  main abhi chal kar  papa se baat karloongi

 They all hug. Armaan is seeing all this and unknowingly  hugs riddhima

 All  are happy  mom goes into the ward and looks at  nupur

Mom ? beti  tu bohot hi zyada lucky hai jo mera beta Tujhse pyaar  karta hai  god  bless you both

Sammy ? hi bhabhi  kaisa feel kar rahe ho aap????????

Mom- Samrat ( mock anger)

Sammy ? uff o mom aap jabhi  gussa joti ho naa toh  mera poor naam lete ho

 All chit chat  giggle and frolic but mom is a little sad

Mayank- maa kya hua???

Mom ? kuch nahi mayu aise hi soch rahi hoon k agar aaj tere papa zinda hote  toh woh aaj kitne  khush hote

Mayank ? aah ma  ab ghar chaltein zoron ki bhook lagi hai

Mom ?  chalo aur batao tum khane mei kya pasand karoge

Mayank ? shahi pualo dal makhani aur roti  aur haan maa main aaj Nupur k saath hi rahoonga

Mom ? zaroorat nahi hai  yeh ab tumhare  saath hi ghar aayergi  shaadi ke baad  samjhe

Mayank ? shaadi   kiski shaadi????

All ? uloo  tumhara aur Nupur bhabhi ki

Mayank goes shocked  he runs back into the  ward

Mayank ? nupur tum ne suna ??? hamari shaadi ho rahi hai

Nupur ? maa ne bataya abi abi Mujhe bataya  I' m so happy

Mayank ? yeah jaan me too

 Gaana time as always

 

i wish u could see urself the way i see ya

u shine juss like a star mahia

cuz ur my only pyar mahia

 

maine tujh ko he dil may basaya

tu hi mera pyar mahia X2

 

tu nay aisee adda say mujhay dekha

dil ho gya nisaar mahia

tu hi ha mera pyar mahia x2

 

tu nay aisee adda say mujhay dekha

dil ho gya nisaar mahia

tu hi ha mera pyar mahia x2

 

y dont u tell me mahi

ma mid at ease

how do u wish to see the loyalty in me

appnee wafa iqrar kya karoon

mar jaoon hudh ko jo tujh say juda karoon

 

tu nay aisee adda say mujhay dekha

dil ho gya nisaar mahia

tu hi ha mera pyaar mahia x2

 

mahai u r i set ma soul on fire

i felt juss like a rose mahia

when i was in ur arms mahia

 

I cant imagine that like without u where i'd be

im ur lady i'll go where ever u take me

terey beghair jeenay ki khaish nahin

main terey saath hoon lay chal mujh ko kahin

 

tu nay aisee adda say mujhay dekha

dil ho gya nisaar mahia

tu hi ha mera pyar mahia x2

 

mahia ur i set ma soul on fire

i felt juss like a rose mahia

when i was in ur arms mahia

 

i don't care where we go or stay or wut we do

ill take u r bain consider becuz i love u

jaisay bhi haal main rakhoo gay main rahoon

dukh bhi milay to pyar main haans kay sahoon

 

tu nay aisee adda say mujhay dekha

dil ho gya nisaar mahia

tu hi ha mera pyar mahia x2

 

i wish u could see urself the way i see ya

u shine juss like a tar mahia

ur my only pyar mahia

 

maine tujhh ko he dil may bhasaya

tu hi mera pyar mahia X2

 

mahai ur i set ma soul on fire

i felt juss like a rose mahia

when i was in ur arms mahia

 

 



Edited by ranbir_lekha - 12 June 2009 at 5:23am

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Posted: 11 June 2009 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
alle..its soo chweet yaar
loved it re!!!
and i recieved ur pm yesterday...soryy culdnt reply back...arre plz take care of urself and i was jst pullin ur leg...
loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed it

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